FF DV-FANNAH(VEER PRIYA)Part 26 updated - Page 13

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Posted: 16 years ago
nice part...but dharam ko pata veer ke baare mai pata chal gaya n veer ko dharam ke baare mai..
hope veer jaldi se priya ko bachaaye dharam ke chngul se...
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Posted: 16 years ago
Thanks for the update dear its lovely..Oh wow next part mein Veer hero banega aur dharam ko marega priya ko bachane ke liye!
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Posted: 16 years ago
lovly update waiting for next part
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Posted: 16 years ago
Pls post next part dear.Cannot wait more.
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Posted: 16 years ago
lovely FF dear.... *claps
i had been silent reader... but could never comment due to busy schedule...
but i loved the FF for sure keep posting next updates..... 🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago

DHARAMVEER

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Veer Priya
SLAVES GET PUNISHED:

Dharam realizes that someone was listening the conversation, standing behind the window. He goes out to see, Veer sees this and decides to run away, but he get caught by Dharam;

Dharam: What are you doing here, in my kingdom?

Veer: That is none of your concern.

Dharam: Now these are called GUTS. You are standing inside my territory at this hour, secretly listening to my conversation & say that it is none of my bloody concern. (Veer hides the anklet behind & Dharam notices that) what are you hiding in your hand? show it to me.

Veer: No. I will not. (Dharam snatches the anklet from Veer)

Dharam: Oh...so this is the case, you stole the anklet of my fiance.

Veer: I came here to give it back to her, you s***e.

Dharam: HOW DARE YOU ABUSE ME LIKE THAT?

Veer: Because you are a s***e, you have destroyed lives of many girls like you did to my sister & now you are destroying the life of Princess Priya.

(Dharam gets furious & cruelly beats him. Priya sees the whole scene from her rooms balcony & tears come into her eyes, Veer was badly injured and falls unconscious)

Dharam goes inside the palace ordering his guards to through Veer away from his premises. On the other hand Rahul was worried about Veer. He goes with his two companions in his friend's search.
Rahul: Veeeeeeeerrrrrrr....veeeeeeeerrrrr ( He was about to call the name once more, untill he finds a person lying at a distance on the ground, who was badly injured. Rahul recognized that the wounded person was none other than his best friend Veer) Oh my God! this is Veer, who did this to him. Veer wake up........... wake up Veer.
Companion: He is unconscious Rahul. We better take him back & call a doctor.( Rahul with the help of his companions managed to take Veer back to the village, safely)
In the palace, Dharam was sitting on his royal seat, furious about Veer & the abusive word, which Veer used for him. Suddenly, an idea clicks his mind. He calls his minister;
Dharam: Minister, no food & no water for the shramiks for 3 days. This is my order.
Minister: But Dharam...... ( He was shocked & speechless)
Dharam: Any problem minister?
Minister: No but...........
Dharam: DO WHATEVER I SAY! NOW GET LOST! ( The minister obeys his order & leaves.) now Veer, i'll teach you a lesson, you abused me. You will have to pay a heavy cost for it.
The next day in the slaves village, the doctor covers the wounds of Veer from crip bandages, on his head, left hand & elbow.The doctor gives advice to Rahul to take care of Veer, as Veer was still unconscious. After many hours Veer came into conscious, he asked for water;
Veer: I want water..(says in a weak voice,lying on the bed)
Rahul: I am sorry to say Veer, but there is no food & water. Dharam has given his order to cut off all the food supplies for 3 days which come to us.
Veer: WHAT!!! DHARAM - THAT SON OF A ------( He tries to get up from his place)
Rahul: Calm down Veer, I will arrange food & water for you, don't worry.
Veer: I AM NOT WORRIED ABOUT MYSELF. I AM WORRIED ABOUT MY PEOPLE. WHAT WILL THEY HAVE TO EAT FOR 3 DAYS??
Rahul: Don't worry, relax I'll go & get the food.
Veer: I'll go with you.
Rahul: Certainly not. Look at your condition, doctor has adviced you to take rest. Leave this matter on me.
Veer: I hope that you succeed in getting the eatables.
Edited by sweet_1 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
wow beautiful part dear
hope veer saves priya soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
Wow,wonderful update dear👏.Waiting for next part😃😳.
Edited by veersherafan1 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
lovely update.....
poor priya... n poor veer...😒
waiting for the next update...😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
lovly update cant see veer and priya like this update soon

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