FF DV-FANNAH(VEER PRIYA)Part 26 updated

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Nima

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Posted: 16 years ago

#141

lovely update yaar....
veer priya's confession... dharam found abt them..n he tried to tell the truth to priya's father..thankg god he didnt believe him..but woh kaise react karega jab unhe sachhai pata chalegi?? Poor priya... she is right... they will have to face her father's anger as well as dharam's... 😡
waiting for the next update .... its getting more interesting..wanna know what wud be veer's next step.... 🤔

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priya

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Posted: 16 years ago

#142

iu cant wait dear

plz do update soon

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maheen malik

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Posted: 16 years ago

#143

DHARAMVEER

Fan-Fiction DV- FANNAH

Veer and Priya

PRIYA VISITS HER PARENTS:

Dharam and Priya were sitting at the dining table, having breakfast. She knew that Dharam will not give her the permission. She was about to say something, just then Dharam speaks;

Dharam: I was thinking that you haven't visited your home since both of us got engaged. I think you should visit them for your mind refreshment. You miss them,don't you? (Priya looks at him with stunt expression)

Priya in her mind: Why is he being so generous with me & the thing I was about to ask from him, he already said it. I hope nothing evil is going on in his mind this time.

Dharam: Infact I have arranged a vehicle for your departure.( Priya remains quiet) I know that I behaved rudely with you but I am ready to pacify it.

Priya: I'll go right now. (She leaves)

Dharam: Poor girl, you are so innocent. I know that you have gone to your parents to tell them each & everything about Veer. But you don't know that I have already told your father about this, he was'nt believing me. Now I am waiting for that moment when your father will come to know about your affair from you & his trust on you will be shattered like a glass.Good luck.

Priya reaches her home. Someshwar was glad as well as worried to see her;

Someshwar: Priya, you & here, I mean is everything ok? (Priya, without noticing her father, goes to her mother)

Priya: Mother, I need to talk to you in private. (Both of them go inside a room, leaving Someshwar puzzled.)

Nivriti: Yes, tell me, what is the matter?

Priya: First, you have to promise me that, you will not get angry on me.

Nivriti: Just tell me sweetheart.

Priya: Mother, do you remember that once I told you that I'll find my prince-charming.

Nivriti: You already have prince-charming as Dharam. Don't you?

Priya: No mother.

Nivriti: What do you mean?

Priya: I asked you that if I fall in love with a slave, then will you accept it.

Nivriti: So?

Priya: It is true, I am in love with a Veer leader of slaves.

Nivriti: WHATT!!!! this means Dharam was right.

Priya: Dharam? what do you mean?

Nivriti: Dharam has told us eveything about this,but we were not ready to believe his words. Because we had a blind trust on you. But today our trust has been shattered.

Priya: Your trust? no mother, my trust has been shattered. You promised me,that if you found anything against Dharam you will break my engagement. But you did nothing...NOTHING..don't I have the right to life my life,in my own way.If Veer loves me what is wrong in that..oh.... I forgot that there is a law that a princess can only marry a prince. I forgot that the royals only follow their kingdom's rules, whether their children are being tortured. But you don't bother. You people treat daughters as a burden and throw them out when you are unable to bear them.

Nivriti: No, it is not like that.

Priya: It is like that. I am telling you only one thing, I belong only to Veer, my soul, my life belongs to Veer & will remain like this.

(Priya leaves &Someshwar listens to all conversation)

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KrishnaSourav

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Posted: 16 years ago

#144

Wonderful update.It's superb.I like it very much.Post next part soon dear.

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priya

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Posted: 16 years ago

#145

wow dear

lovely update

do cont soon

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Megha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#146

Thanks for the update buddy!😳😃 😉 😆 👏⭐️

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Nima

@nims23

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Posted: 16 years ago

#147

ohh no..priya told everything to her mom... n her dad heard their convo..
nice update..
waiting for the next update..

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maheen malik

@sweet_1

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Posted: 16 years ago

#148

DHARAMVEER

Fan-Fiction DV-FANNAH

Veer & Priya

VEER PRIYA MEET AGAIN:

Priya returns to Arya kingdom. She goes in her room without even looking at Dharam. Priya recalls what Veer told her when she met him last night. She writes a letter to her beloved that she wants to meet him.When Veer gets the letter, without wasting a single minute, he responds her that he will meet Priya at the same place, where they met before.

It was late night when Veer & Priya met. Veer sees Priya coming towards her & smiles. But Priya was very tense.

Veer: What is the matter Priya, why are you tense? did you talk to your parents?

Priya: Yes.

Veer: So, what did they say?

Priya: They refused to listen to me. It was of no use. I did'nt get any benefit instead now we are in big trouble because Dharam told my parents everything before I went to meet them. No choice is left it is too late now. We have to run away.( replies in anxiety)

Veer: Priya no. I don't want to take you by unfair means, it is not a good thing. Your parents love you more than me. They care for you & so they refused my proposal as they want to give you comforts. And to betray your parents is more than a sin.

Priya: But Veer....

Veer: For example, we run away. What will the society think, that the only daughter of the most powerful king ran away with a slave. Your father will be embarrased & ashamed infront of his people. He will not be able to have an eye-contact with anyone. His honour, his respect will be ruined in no time. Do you want that your parents should get this disgrace?

Priya: Veer, I love them, but I also love you. My father is thinking as a king not as a father I don't want to get separated from you.

Veer: If we run away, then we'll be divided forever. Just remember one thing Priya that the course of true love is never smooth. We will have to face many difficulties, hardships & worst situations then this. You have got to be strong & you got to have faith in God & me. Ok. (She nods)

She hugs Veer & he kisses on her forehead. Someshwar sees both of them;

Someshwar: Priya. (Veer & Priya move apart, both of them are stunt) Don't be afraid my child. I have not come here to take you away from Veer, infact I am in favour of Veer & your relation. I have understood that your happiness is only with Veer he will keep you happy. I am going to break your engagement with that crook person Dharam,I promise you that. At first I was against Veer, but when Nivriti told me all what you said to her, It really shook me up from inside. I also don't care about the law. I have decided that you'll marry Veer & he will be my son-in-law.(Priya smiles & hugs her father)

Come on now my child. We have to make arrangements for your engagement ceremony with Veer.

Someshwar and Priya leave.Veer was really delighted & excited.

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KrishnaSourav

@KrishnaRukmini

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Posted: 16 years ago

#149

Wonderful update, but, I guess ki someshwar change nehi hua hain, may be this is his one of the plan to priya take away from veer.

Anyway, superb part.

Post next part soon dear.

Edited by veersherafan1 - 16 years ago

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Megha

@meghaparti

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Posted: 16 years ago

#150

Thanks for the lovely update dear.....Someshwar changed well I guess he played another trick on priya to take her away & now he will kill veer or play a dirty trick like dharam does to remove veer from priya's life!😳😃 😉 👏⭐️