FF DV-FANNAH(VEER PRIYA)Part 26 updated

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maheen malik

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Posted: 16 years ago

#111

DHARAMVEER

Fan-Fiction DV

Veer & Priya

Veer Admits His Love For Priya:

NOTE: This PART is not as gud as others but still read n comment😊

Veer: I am sorry if you got depressed because of me, I shouldn't have talked to you so frankly about my past happenings.

Priya: No it is perfectly fine.

Veer: Actually I have never shared these things even with my closest ones, By seeing you I thought that I should tell you.(stares at her)by the way I am quite surprised by seeing you here.

Priya: What do you mean?

Veer: I mean that first time in history, a princess has visited slaves village.

Priya: It may be an unusual or surprising thing for you but not for me.

Actually I like visiting small places. (Veer smiles)

Just then the minister comes in b/w;

Minister: Madam, I think we should leave, it is getting late. You also have other things to do.

Priya: Ok wait. Veer I should go now actually I have to do some important work regarding my kingdom, so I will see you later. Bye.

Veer: No problem, I can wait. See you later bye. (Veer thinks in his mind) if she likes me, then she will stop & turn. Come on Priya stop'. stop. (Priya stops walking from a little distance and turns. Veer smiles)

Priya: Veer I was thinking that I should spend sometime away from kingdom for a couple of hours, so if you don't mind can I visit your place everyday?

Veer: Yes for sure. (replies promptly)

Priya: Ok then see you tomorrow.(she goes)

Just then Rahul comes;

Rahul: You are lucky, now she'll be coming everyday to meet you.

Veer: Yes.

The next day Priya gets ready to go & meet Veer. She reaches the village. Rahul sees her & runs to call Veer who was still sleeping;

Rahul: Abay oh sleeping beauty get up. Priya is here.

Veer jumps out of the bed and goes out & welcomes her;

Veer: Welcome madam.

Priya: Don't call me madam.(Veer looks confused)

Veer: Then what should I call you?

Priya: Just Priya.

Veer: But it looks odd to me to call out your name.

Priya: So now I am permitting you to call out my name.

Veer: Ok.... P..Priya.

They both walk & sit.

Veer: Priya you are really lucky to have a royal life with luxuries rooms and large no.of servants taking care of you.

Priya: No I am not,rather I feel so safocated & over- protected. I want to be free like you people.

Veer: People like us die to live a day like royals getting good food etc.

(Now guys im making this update cut short as I want to start the luv story as soon as possible.)

Days pass like this Veer and Priya both spend time with eachother talk and share things Veer and Priya walk through the village now as Veer is walking he gets tripped off the ground & hurts his hand by a large sharp piece of glass his hand starts bleeding heavily.

Priya sees this and ties a piece of her dupatta on his hand Veer stares at her and realizes that he is actually in love with Priya.

And the most shocking moment that Dharam sees all this & Priya is stunt.

Edited by sweet_1 - 16 years ago

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Posted: 16 years ago

#112

wowwwwwwww.......thank u sooo much dear for this amazing update.........cant wait for d next part

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KrishnaSourav

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Posted: 16 years ago

#113

Wow , wonderful part👏.Now, veer realise the fact that he loves priya😳.Oh, no, dharam see all this😲.Post next part soon dear😃.

Edited by veersherafan1 - 16 years ago

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Megha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#114

Thanks for the lovely update well would luv to see dharam's reaction in the next part towards priya & if Veer will stand up for priya against Dharam!👏

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maheen malik

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Posted: 16 years ago

#115

thanks alot all of u. Although it is not a gud update according to me but im glad that u all lykd it actually i wrote this short update bcoz i myself was tired 😆 and wanted to start the sizzling luv story of veer priya thnx once again

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KrishnaSourav

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Posted: 16 years ago

#116

Welcome dear😊. Waiting for the next part😳.

Edited by veersherafan1 - 16 years ago

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Posted: 16 years ago

#117

no dear...it was a lovely upd...thanx for starting their luv story

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maheen malik

@sweet_1

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Posted: 16 years ago

#118

DHARAMVEER

Fan-Fiction DV

Veer & Priya

Veer Finds Out Dharam-Priya's Relationship:

Dharam stares at Priya, Veer & then at the piece of Priya's dupatta that was wrapped on Veer's bleeding hand & leaves. Priya quickly leaves for the kingdom. Veer was standing unable to understand the situation. The whole day passed & it was night time. Priya reaches the palace with the minister. She sees Dharam, whose blood was boiling from inside & who was standing in the lounge with his hands folded at the back, his back was facing Priya.. Priya starts walking slowly towards her room, but suddenly;

Dharam: Stop Priya. ( Priya stops at once, Dharam turns facing her) I need to talk to you. It is important..

Priya: But I am not interested. (She starts to walk)

Dharam : When I said we need to talk that means we need to talk (says, by holding Priya's hand aggressively)

Priya: You are hurting me Dharam, leave me.

Dharam: NO! YOU ARE HURTING ME!!! WHAT THE HELL WERE YOU DOING IN SLAVES VILLAGE, A PIECE OF SHIT, IN MY ABSENCE?TELL ME!

Priya: I am not answerable to you Dharam. I am not bound to stay inside this den all the time, I am free to go anywhere I want. I am not a prisoner do you get that? (She was about to go but he again pulled her towards himself)

Dharam: I AM YOUR FIANCE, & IT IS YOUR UTMOST RESPONSIBILITY TO INFORM ME ABOUT EACH & EVERYTHING OF YOURS. NOW TELL ME WHAT WERE YOU DOING IN THE VILLAGE & MOST OF ALL WHAT WERE YOU DOING WITH VEER?

Priya: I like to help the poor people & as far as Veer is concerned, he is a servant, and I was talking to him generally..

Dharam: You were wiping his blood which was coming out from his hand, from your dupatta. (Priya looks down)

Both of them were continuously arguing.

On the other hand, Veer was thinking of Priya;

Veer in his mind: What was Dharam doing at my village today? Why was Priya scared & stunt to see him ? Why did she left the village as soon as Dharam went back? (As he was thinking, a hand touched his shoulder. It was Rahul)

Rahul: Veer, what happened? What are you thinking?

Veer: Rahul, I am thinking that what was Dharam doing in my village? & why was Priya shocked to see him? I don't think that she knows him. There isn't any chance.

Rahul: There is a chance, may be she is in relation with Dharam.

Veer: Shut up what are you saying? If there is something like that, then why didn't she tell me?

Rahul: She must be scared to tell you that, when you told her about your incident.. Oh…by the way I came to give you this anklet. I think that this belongs to Priya

Veer: From where did you get this?

Rahul: When she went from here, I guess she dropped it in a hurry.

Veer starts walking

Rahul: Where are you going by the way?

Veer: I am going to return this anklet to her.

Rahul: Its quite late, you can give it to her tomorrow.

Veer: No, I am going there for another purpose as well.

Rahul: What purpose?

Veer: I also want to know that weather Priya is in relation with Dharam or not?

Rahul: Don't be silly. You will be in trouble.

Veer: I don't care. I am going at Dharam's palace and thats final.

Veer after walking a long distance reaches the main enterance of Dharam's palace. The guard sees him;