FF DV-FANNAH(VEER PRIYA)Part 26 updated

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maheen malik

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Posted: 16 years ago

#191

Originally posted by: ektay11
gr88 upd hun Ur welcum... just wait n watch the upcoming parts gonna be ahem*😳😳 understanding nah?

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Rashi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#192

aw lovely update der 😍
finally someshwar accepted yippeeeeeeee

love ya muah 🤗

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MannMeRamBasale

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Posted: 16 years ago

#193

wowwwwwww....wonderful update dear...its soooooooooo nice...luvd it...keep it up dear....

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Megha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#194

Originally posted by: sweet_1

ok sweetie will wait for the next part eagerly😉😳😃

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maheen malik

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Posted: 16 years ago

#195

DHARAMVEER

Fan-Fiction DV FANNAH

Veer & Priya

LOVE TEST:

The next morning Priya was eagerly waiting for her father's decision. She was constantly looking at the wall clock as when would the royals arrive. Time passes & there was no sign of the royals. By seeing Priya's anxiety Nivriti, who was sitting at the dining table sees her husband & goes to him;

Nivriti:
3 hours have passed & there is no sign of the royals. Are you really sure that they will come?
Someshwar:
They were coming but....
Nivriti:
But what?
Someshwar:
I decided to stop them.
Nivriti:
But why?
Someshwar:
Because, I want to see that whether Veer really deserves our daughter, her love or not.

Nivriti: He got a terrible beating from you.

Someshwar: That is not enough. By the way, you emphasized that I should take decisions very carefully as far as my daughter is concerned. So I am doing the same thing. I don't find anything wrong in this? do you?

Nivriti:
What else do you want?
Someshwar:
You will get to know about it, very soon. (He storms off leaving her confused)

In the slaves village, doctor comes again for Veer's check up. The doctor opens the bandages. Veer was completely recovered, he was able to walk by himself.There was only one injury left on his hand. Veer was finally feeling relieved. After a couple of minutes a person comes with a letter in his hand;

Man: Veer, there is a letter for you.

Veer quickly takes the letter from the man, thinking that the letter might be from Priya. But Veer's assumption was wrong, it was a letter from Priya's father; King Someshwar. The letter said;

Veer,

I want to meet you outside my kingdom, right now. And one more thing you have to come all alone. I will be waiting for you.

Someshwar Chauhan

Without wasting time Veer gets ready & decides meet King Someshwar.Veer was wearing maroon full sleeve shirt with a black trouser & a black half sleeve sweater over it(In SRK style in OSO)

As he was going he sees Rahul who was quite upset, sitting on a chair. Veer goes to him;

Veer: Rahul .... ..... Rahul .... (Veer puts his hand on Rahul's shoulder) I know that I should not have shouted at you yesterday, I know it was my fault. (Rahul was silent.) I ... I am sorry. Just forget about it. Will you not forgive me?

Rahul: (With a slight smile) It is perfectly fine. Don't irritate me by asking for forgiveness. The thing is that I never saw you in such a bad temper before so I was kind of shocked. And it was not just your fault, I am also to be blamed, I shouldnt have said such harsh things.(Both of them smile) By the way where are you going?

Veer: I am going to meet King Someshwar.

Rahul: Why, is everything okay?

Veer: I don't know what is the reason behind it, but I can bet that it is definitely something related to Priya & my relationship.

Rahul: Then I'll also come with you.

Veer: No Rahul, he wants to meet me alone. Just relax I'll be fine. See you later. (He leaves.)

Veer reaches the kingdom after sometime. He sees Someshwar standing with his hand folded at his back. Veer was standing on the ground while Someshwar was standing inside the roof of his kingdom.

Where as Priya was standing watching everything from behind the pillar;

Veer: Why did you call me here? (asks firmly)

Someshwar: My wife was showing alot of sympathies with you, that I have been torturing you, but you did'nt loose your hope to win Priya's love. And came to meet my daughter even in that severe condition. She said that I should approve your proposal without thinking more. But I refused.

Veer: What do you want to say? come to the point.

Someshwar: Do you love my daughter?

Veer: She is my life.

Someshwar: What can you do for her?

Veer: Anything.

Someshwar: No matter how brutal or harmful it can prove for you?

Veer: Yes. I don't care about myself.

Someshwar: Interesting. Now when it is clear, that you can go to any extend for Priya's love. I have some conditions, If you implemented on them, you will have the right to marry her, & if not then you go away from her life forever. Do you agree?

Veer looks at Priya who was gesturing him not to put his life in danger for her

Veer: .... I agree.

Someshwar: Think once again these conditions can prove to be tough for you.

Veer: I am not scared of them. I have made up my mind.

Someshwar: Then, you will have to stay here & do every work which I tell you to. No matter how difficult it is for you.

Veer: Alright.

Someshwar: Give me your sweater. (Veer takes it off & gives it to one of the guards standing beside) do you know that today it is one of the chilling days of the winter. Your first task is to tolerate this cold & you have to stay under that small wooden roof. You'll stay there.

(He points out a small empty place at a distance from the kingdom)

One of the guard takes Veer there.

Priya: Father why are you doing this to him?

Someshwar: If he loves you, he will have to prove it.( He goes inside)

On the other hand, Veer is inside the roof with the guard.The guard handcuffs Veer's hands with the pole;

Veer: What are you doing?

Guard: It is the King's order. So that you cannot run away.

Veer: But there is no place to sit?

Guard: You have not come on a dinner, according to the king's order, you are not allowed to sit. You will have to stand till morning.

Edited by sweet_1 - 16 years ago

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Posted: 16 years ago

#196

thankuuuuuuuuuuu 4 d lovely update

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KrishnaSourav

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Posted: 16 years ago

#197

Wonderful update👏.I just don't understand why is som is so cruel😭😲?

Wait for the next part😊.

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Megha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#198

Wow Lovely update ..Thanks a ton....No matter what circumstance Someshwar puts veer..he will emerge as a winner in the end...& Can't wait for teh next part dear..Pls. do post it as soon as possible & pls. make it a little lenghtier than this one!👏👏👏👏👏👏