FF: [SG] Dare You To Move- Last Part P.143 - Page 47

Originally posted by: shockalot

Oh GOSHH Mimz...you're AMAZING!

Hey Shaz!! Aweeh!! AM NOT! 😆

I swearr, i look forward to your updates like CRAZYYY!

Really? 😲 *hugs you* Shaz, you dunno how much that means to me. *sniffs*

I ADOREDD this chapterrr!

REEAALY?! Aweeeeeeeeeeh thanks babes!

Hahah i could def spot parallels with the movie but its just soooo much more beautiful reading about SaJan going through what Landon-Jamie went through...haiiiiiiiiii

Hayyeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee, thanks yaaaaar!!! I can never EVER create Jamie-Landon magic, and I guess my writing makes it more magical BECAUSE of SaJan only. It's just different imagining them as J-L 😳

i LOVE this! I cantttttttt wait for the next chapter!! Keeep up the AMAZINGG WORKK! And thankooo for the PM! This chapter madeeee my day!

Aweh Shaz, you're soo sweet yaar! 😳😆

Thank you bunches of tons, I'm glad it did 😊

No probs, thanks for reading/comment hun!

Originally posted by: sedna

What do I say?

Anything you wanna say! 😃😆

Cause beautiful is just to less for it!!

😲 Get out dudee! So not.

It was just PERFECT, I knew it would be amazing, but it was way beyond that!!

Oh Janu! You're just saying that because you're suffering from a serious case of sweet-a-vitus. 😆

Sammy has the initial sparks!!! Yayie!! 😍

hehe 😳

Awwies, MayUr!!!!! Mayank soooo likes her!!!

He sooo does! XD

I have something planned for them. But it's not gonna be put into action until later.

and humph, I didn't like Sammy saying those mean words! Go Gunjan, you're strong!!

She is! You know, I was listening to "Unwritten" by Natasha Bedingfield when I wrote that bit. Did you hear it before? It's lovely!

OH! And I need new songs, you have the same music taste as me... suggest some yaar!

I'm glad he's regretting, doesn't he realize that she's the only who sees the real Sam!!

^That line right there is just WOW! Imma use that as a dialogue. 😊

OMG, I'm still dreaming!!

OYE! When will you update? 😡

Love
Janu

Originally posted by: ashred12

wonderful.. u've combined both stories so well dat its impossible to seperate one fm d other.. i like ur idea of different pov for same scene..

Originally posted by: Anhdara13

Mimi! Wow, your story just keeps getting better and better with each part. It's hard keeping myself from spamming your thread with demands for more updates.

Aweee Radz, thank you babes!

WOW... my gosh, all you guys's comments keep getting sweeter and sweeter! It means so much to me, really. I've never gotten such a HUGE response for my writing 😆 Means a lot to me!

I loved the sisterly relationship between NuJan. It was realistic, sweet and simple. So effective in the straightforward way you'd represented them.

Aweeeh! 😳 Thank you yaar =)

I didnt know how else to elabourate GunPur's relationship, but Im glad you liked it! 😊

And Mayank's friendship with Gunjan was also wonderfully portrayed.

Really?! Aweh, thank you so much!! MaJan bit was entirely for my Arnaya fanatics 😛

And the hints and shades of MayUr that you give us are also wonderful. They've got such an interesting and dysfunctional type relationship, that makes so much sense.

I couldn't have summarized their relationship better myself. Bang on! I didn't want to write 2 love stories from scratch, so I decided to make MayUr have unintentional feelings for each other from the beginning. I'm kjust glad he MayUr fans are liking this 😊

Samrat, here I thought he could change, he had changed, but he's too caught up about his image. That confrontation was wonderfully expressed. Am so glad Gunjan blew up at him, at least now he should know better.

Oh Radz, thank you so much! The blow up was much needed to get the story going on. I don't want to drag the fic much longer. It'll be wrapping up in the next 5-6 parts, so Im in a hussle 😆

But here's a promise, Sam will shock everyone in the upcoming parts (in a GOOD way) 😉

Waiting for more!
Won't keep you waiting !
Love,
Radz

Originally posted by: sosweetsumi

defiantly improvement have read a walk to remember thats why know what is coming.but with sajan its really beautiful as i can feel it.

do continue dear
bye sumi

Originally posted by: mads

ok...I read all the 6 parts together...and I actually have no words to describe this....its FREAKIN AMAZING!!!! 👏👏👏I hav already saved the fic on my comp...so that I can read it wenever I want to!! 😳 😃

Mads!!!!!!! *hugs you* Aweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeh!!

Oh my gosh, no way yaar! That's sooo sweet of you! Thanks so much! I honestly dunno what to say... *emotional moment* I LOVE MY READERS! You guys are the cutest most amazing bunch of people ever!

u know..ur fic takes me into a totally different world....😍 its awesomeee!!! I seriously cannot hav imagined enjoying reading any other fic before...its truly amazing dear!!!

aweee..... I. am. honestly. out. of. words. And that's so hard for me, because im a nonstop chatterbox! It takes an army to shut me up 😆

You're so sweet, im touched. Really, I am. Thank you Mads!

and u kno wat...ur style of writing is jus amazing...the way its from ms tamana's point of view...n the way u alternate between their thoughts...its jus soo awesome!!!

Thank you yaar!! Im glad you all are liking the POV/third person technique. My English teacher would be so proud 😆 She thinks I need to take some writing courses to improve my lack of descriptive writing.

loved the way u hav marginally changed the story-line...its too good!!! seriously...u kno, ur style reminds me of chetan bhagat's style of writing.. its seems soo personal... all english wid some expressions n quotes in hindi.. its seems verry real..n natural...

😲 NO WAY! I don't know who he is, but I'm sure that he's a great writer... and there is no way I can be compared to him! That is too big of a compliment babes, I still plan on living a few more years 😉😆

About your hindi comment: The only reason why it's in English is because:

a) I suck as Hindi.

b)English is the only language im comfortable with

(Okay, that's 2 reasons.. I need to work on my math) 😆

oh wat can I say...I jus loved it totally...I hav no words to decribe how amazing this is....well, I cud do this a huge post wid every part that I liked n my analysis on it...but then, I dont think I hav the time rite now...so will jus end it wid one sentence - ur fic rocks dear...😳

AWEH! That's so sweet yaar! Thank you so much, that means the world to me! 😳 Im glad you're liking it. 😊

I love the marginally new samrat n gunjan in ur fic...they are soo adorable!!! esp sammy..!!!

LOL I get so many complaints about this Sammy 😆

and also love the way u hav included mayank and nupur in the fic.. mayank n nupur as the dialogue writers...so they will write those dialogues as if they are saying it to one another...😳 and SG will actually say them to one another....its all so dreamy n amazing...😍
Of course! I can't imagine SaJan without MayUr in the picture. I love them, originally, this FF was for them.. but then it seemed more of a SaJan-ish story. If I even finish this one, I'm defo writing one on MayUr 😳
ok..n one more thing, if that new lady in the car ( m guessing its a lady otherwise aisa end nahi karti tum 😉 )is gonna be sheena...then let gunjan spend more time wid purab...in ur fic atleast....😳 ok, now I sound like requesting scenes for PD...😆
😲 I never thought of it that way... but now that you mention it... That's actually a BRILLIANT way to introduce Sheena, I was gonna have her in the fic too. OMG I LOVE YOU! 😆

*runs to write down this idea* Uhmm, hmm... GunRab scenes! I'll defo think more into that. 😊
oh and one more thing...plz add me to the list of ppl whom u gonna PM wen u update a new part... sure wud not want to miss this at any cost!!! 😳

Of course! Aweh, thank you for the LOVELY comment yaar, made my day! 😳

Originally posted by: saylithegreat

hey congo on completing 50 pages🥳🥳

Sayli!! OMG thank you! Im actually sooo shocked that it crossed 50 SO fast!! *jumps for joy*

u knw i am so happy

gosh!!!!i am dancing!!!i am really very happy.ur ff completed 50 pages!!!!!!!!!

OMG Im happy toooooo!! Let's be happy together 😃😆

i want ma party huh😉

OMG you remind me of my bestie on I-F, Hummy. *cries* She's always asking for parties 😆

Uhmm, if it crosses 100- party for SURE! 😃

well cuming to this part

mimz tusi great ho!!!!!👍🏼

wht a update yaar!!!

Aweeeh, thank you ji! 😳

i really loved d gunjan-nupuz convo!!!!😳

Did you? YAY!!!! 😃

n yeah thanx for a MaJan convo!!!it was so sweet😳

typical jiju-saali!!!!!i really loved tht part so very much!!!!!d best way to express nupuz-gunjan relationship

Aweeh, thank you Sayli! I've got this sudden crave for Arnaya 😆 And I want MaJan to have similar jiju-saali scenes 😳 Im so glad you liked it! 😃

cuming to d next part!!!!!well d way u hav explained samrat's lonliness is awesome

i actually felt so bad for him!!!!!

Did you?! 😲😃 Thank you yaar! I hope ya'll like Sam more now 😊

n d rehersals part

hmm must say mayur's lines hav improved!!!!!!!🤣

LOL yuppp!!! 😃😆

n benji!!!!i was imagining him yawning!!!!!🤣

LOL OMG so was I! I started laughing out of the blues when I wrote the part 😆 That is soo Benji!

uday's TAM-MAM was cute!!!!😳

LOL !!!

n yeah tht dia is becum too rude!!!!😈

felt so bad for gunji!!!!!but i am happy becoz samrat too felt bad

everything is going in d correct way mimz

gosh!!!!!samrat is falling for her😍

Aweeeh! Well, Dia in this FF is how I pictured her before RV entered. 😆 But she isnt too bad now, so I might change her character up a bit in the future.

Im so glad you is liking the storyline Sayli!! Makes me happy 😃 << wide smile happy

n d last few lines of d update were awesome!!!!!👏

lookig forward for d next update now

n yeah loved d part when samrat's prepares his list of wrk

he is so cute!!!!!!!😍

Oh my gosh, I'm surprised how nobody's commented on that bit! 😆 Sam makes a list! Glad you pointed that out! 😃 It was kind of a hint that Gunjan's affecting his life in some way. 😳

n lastly off course d wrd ponytail brought tears to ma eyes!!!not actually ponytail but most of the things!!!!!now u knw why!!!!!

😲 Why yaar? I dunno.. honest! Do you want Gunji to wear her hair in ponytails in the show..OR did you think of Jamie? Because I thought of Jamie

thanx mimz for letting me re-live ma fav couple's story again n again😛

Aweh Sayli, I'm trying to put in some J-L spark. Im gad to know that it's working a tiny bit! XD

Please don't thank me, I should thank you for being such an amazing friend/supporter! 😃

lov ya.......................🤗🤗

update soon huh

bye!!!!!!!!!1