FF: [SG] Dare You To Move- Last Part P.143 - Page 45

Originally posted by: SRK-Kads4ever

Oh my GOSH, Mims!!!

Bornaaaaaaaaaaaaa! 😃 How are ya?

That was freaking BRILLIANT! I LOVED the ending!

Oh my god, REALLY?! (I love it when someone starts off with this amazing comment!) 😆 Thanks so much yaar!

Aaaah, I'm so emotionally overwhelmed by the SaJan confrontation scene, hun...I think I'll have to come back and comment on everything else later when I'm not feeling completely zapped.

Aweeeeeeeeeeeh!!!!! Take your time babes... WOW! You liked it? 😃 That totally made my day! XD

Can't wait to see what happens next, yaar! This story is just TOO good!

Oh gosh, you're making me smile too wide. Ouch, there goes my jaw 😆

Thank you so much for reading this fic Borna, totally overwhelmed by your enthusiasm!

Originally posted by: blackdaughter

Ooooooh, that was quite touching and emotional!!!!! Loved the sequence between Gunur, written soooo well!!!!!!!! *thumbs up*

Hey Hun! Aweeeeh really? Thank you sooo much babes! 😳

Awwwww, Majan (is that what they are called =S) were really adorable!!!!! I love Mayank!!!!!!! =D

LOL Yeah, MaJan=Mayank and Gunjan 😳

Hehe, we all love Mayuu 😳

I don't quite get what to think about Samrat's parents though, with Gunjan they were so parently and then with Samrat they 'seem' to be neglecting him!!!!! A little confused =S

The thing is, they're really busy with business and what not. They've been away for most of Samrat's childhood, they missed out on so much. Therefore, Samrat's developed hate towards them, and his parents don't really get what's wrong.

Twists, ups and downs are always required to move a story forward, it can't just be all happy go luky, so i totally understand why you did that!!!!

Aweh, thanks for understanding! Don't worry, no more twists 😆 This was probably the biggest turning point in the story 😊

Samrat has to officially forget thinking about his 'image' and just focus on Gunjan and that transition will take time, so i'm willing to wait!!!!! =D

It'll take a while, but it will happen. And it'll happen soon. Don't worry 😉

Great update and i can't wait till the next one!!!!! *hug* =)

Thanks so much for your comments babes! *hugs back*

Originally posted by: jenny1000

Mims, It was superb👏

Love how the entire story went. You should suggest some scenes here like going over play lines with Gunjan to PD?😳

Originally posted by: sonali.19281

bloody brilliant..sorry watching too much of britain's got talent...

😆 lol Bloody thank you (?) LOL

i loved the dialogues...it's nice when one of your fav books is being written for 2 of yer current fav characters...or shld i say one coz i am not loving sam currently... 😆

I'll never be able to recreate AW2R! And since I didnt want to copy the story entirely, I made Sam more grey than Landon 😳

Hehe, But you'll love Sam soon! Promisee, he's gonna shock EVERYONE in the coming parts. 😉
adapted screenplay has worth rem simon bufoy...so great guns...

Was he the writer ? Because if he is, I'd like to give him a HUGE hug!

Originally posted by: mimi0295

Originally posted by: ilive2laugh

hi mimi

Hey Babes! How're you?

thanks for posting the next part

aweeh, no probs!

i desparately needed a break from

my studying 😊

LOL don't we all? 😆 *sigh School tomorrow. I think i'm gonna cry. 😭 (sorry, I had a rhyme time moment there.)

really love how your chapters are

progressing. the part where samrat

blew her off was total from A walk to remember

but it just show what kind of person he is

right now and what will he become in he

future due to gunjan's help and friendship

Aweeh, thank you so much hun!! Yep, that scene was totally inspired from AW2R, when Landon blows Jamie off when she asks if he's coming over to her house.

Totally, you've got it bang on! You'll see a huge change in Sam's charaacter in the next few parts.

loved the jiju-sali moment. they totally

understand each other

Aweeh, thank you!!! 😳

its cute to see mayank opening

up his feelings towards nupur yet

he doesnt want to let her know or else

he will never hear the end of it😆

LOL Nupur will never let him R.I.P if he told her what he really felt 😆

I'm loving Mayank's character in this FF, I dunno why. It's fun writing about him 😆

liked it when gunjan finally blows up.

shows her that even though she is

reserved and shy person she still got

feels just like anyone and can get hurt

easily (which samrat is finally trying to

understand)

Aweh, I'm glad you liked that part 😳

She just showed Sam that she has feelings. After all, she's human... she has a heart, and she feels sad/happy/mad too.

cant wait to see what happens next

thanks for the pm

No problem! Thanks for reading/comment babes 😉