Originally posted by: Asthuox
Mimiii 😛
Asthuu!!!!!!!! 😃
Oh my FREAKING GoOSh! That was Wonderful + Brilliant + Grand + + Fantastic + Awesome + Outstanding + Cuteeeee + Beautiful + Quite emotional + Enjoyable = PERFECT UPDATEEE!!
I is loving your equations to the CORE! They make me happy+hyper+emotional (because I've found an equation buddy)+ crazy+laugh+cry while laughing! 😆 <<SEE!
It was way beyond words, seriously. Im blown away completely. What an update man! Wow, talk about being extra supercilious. 😳
Aweeh, thank you yaaar!!! 😳
Ok, I will start off with My baby. Samrat. AWEEEHH! He feels abandoned. I wonder if his parents have any idea what he is going through. It must be really hard. I guess he needs some emotional support😔. Gunjan?? Gunjan where are you?? HURRYYY😲!! Aw, looking into the year book. Landon! Eee; When he read Jamie's ambition quote. To see a miracle! 😳
YOUR Baby? LOL Since when sasuma? 😆
On a serious note, I agree. But you know, what's sad is that so many kids feel that way about their parents. I was actually inspired by a friend (won't say her name) whose parents were divorced since she was like 5. But now she's a total punk/druggie.. and you know, she opens up to me. And Im not a pychiatrist or anything ( i cant even spell it) but Im thinking her parents have a lot to do with what's going on in her life emotionally.
OMG I know! Totally inspired from that scene 😆 But since Im not planning on having a similar ending to AW2R, I changed her ambition to reaching goals. But I'm defo copying one of my favourite scenes. Im not gonna tell you yet, but I know ya'll will love it! 😃
Now..Gunpur😛. AWEEEHHH! The way you represented them. It's amazingly awesome. So realist. The way you portrayed their bond, it's so beautiful. I just LOVEED the whole act😃. That scene could be picture rise perfectly👏. The dialogues. Attitude. AWEEEHHH! PERFECT! Like I said before you are a FREAKING grand + suitable + bright = ideal WRITTER! 👏😳
AWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEH!!!!! Asthu, STOP IT!!! You're too freakin' sweet 😡😆 It's not HEALTHY to be so positive all the freakin' time!!
Im so happy you liked GunPur! XD
Nothing better than sisterly love 😳 (and OMG, I was like totally in love with SaNu in ur ff, so I wanted to add a sibling thing here too) 😆
MJHT team should seriously employee you BY GOD! Ideal expert. With dialogues (Love Dictionary, You define me🤣) + Majan moment. AWWEEEHHH! Adorable friendship! Traffic + Wonderful = Adorable + More Majan scenes! 😆
BY GOD! Are you feeling all right? 😆 If they hire me.. the show will make a downfall! 😆
YAY! You liked the MaJan moment? 😃
🤣 OMG you remember Mayu's famous dialogue? LOL 😆
Bejan. LOL! They will seriously share such a cute devar, bhabhi pair😳. Adorable much! And omg omg oh goshhh! 😲😲
"What's all this fate crap you're always talking about Gunjan? He's not right for you, and that's final!" Benji says, yawning.
Gunjan?? Khushi yaar. LOL😆. For a moment I thought he was warning Gunjan in advance. After Samrat's behaviour, im kinda disappointed. I will get back to that in a bit. Eheh. I loved the rehearsal scene between Bejan😛
Aweh thank you! Im sure my BenJan craziness if well known by the forum members 😆
Thanks for liking yaaar! 😃
Sajan. I was expecting something different and you gave me something even better! 😳⭐️
Arre, Im sorry if this part isn't what you expected. I know I dropped the bombshell. But this is a SFF (a short ff) and it needs to be going on major speed.. but dont worry, I wont keep them mad at each other for long. Next part, you'll love Sam 😉
First shot. Chashmish. AWEEEEEE! He called her Chashmish. XD!😳
Hehehhee!! I KNW! I was missing his "chashmish" talks 😆
Him asking for help! HAHA! Landon ghost hit him😆 his goofy smiles😆😆! I can sense parallels with the movie even more now. The Landon and Jamie magic😳 is what I can see in your FF!
OH MY GOD GET OUT! Noooo freakin' way! REALLY?! *on cloud 9* That's SUCH a huge huge HUGE compliment!!!! Hahah, Landon's spirit haunts all 😆
*sigh Shane West is like my Edward Cullen <3 He's PERFECT 😳
Beautiful. Its so cweetilicous to read Sajan moments that once were experienced by Landon and Jamie☺️.
...I think Imma go watch AW2R again. I watch it every single week so I can be inspired to write. 😆 It's the best movie in the entire universe- no lies
Breathtaking graceful + Grand = Brilliantly written. 👏😳
^^Aweeh, thank you!! *hugs*
OH GOSH😳! Give me a tissue😭. A walk to remember memories. I LOVE the movie to bits. The whole film was so beautiful, My gosh * tears * Im going to cry a river, Grab some buckets! The passion. The emotions.
And when Landon goes to Jamie.
"I love you" EEEEEEEEEEE i *deadd* ☺️ Then the kiss again😍
Also in the end. I had tears in my eyes again 😭
"Im sorry, I couldn't show Jamie a miracle" Landon, his face was low. 😒
"She did, it was you" * cry * Perfect! 😭😳
OH MY GOD I know!!! I cry every single time I watch it!!! My mum thinks I'm crazy, she's watched it with me, and she cried the first time, but then we watched it again.. and I cried the second time, and the third...and fourth, and 5 hundredth 😆
😲 OMG you know, Imma have a similar scene... (minus the kiss) I'll save the best for last. 😊 But the end.. OMG Im crying now. That line was like😲 NO FREAKING WAY! YOU Landon- YOU were her miracle! I was like aweeing and sobbing the whole time. 😭
The emotion volcano going to explore. I better calm myself! But seriously I like the idea how you bring your own magic and use your writing skills so cleverly. It makes the moments between sajan seem fresh and new! I know your inspired by AWTR but I don't know why, par the scenes in your FF do remind me of Landon and Jamie but when imagining sajan they seem new! 😳😳
Really? Whoaa, well you know... Im glad you think it's somewhat original. I try not to copy... but it's just too damn tempting 😆
And the fact that you all are able to imagine SaJan in J-Ls place makes it so much better! I'm glad you guys are liking it! Totally makes my day 😊
Its unbelievable😲 and honestly speaking its probably the way you write. You're a true rocking star in writing. 👏👏
Try telling my English teacher that. 😆 She'd lawl.
The story line is going to be like a roller coaster. So many twist and turn now after Sajan confrontation. And by god! What scene cut piece. 😆
LOL!! I promise, the only next few twists will be positive ones 😊
There's gonna be a new entry in the next part, but she'll be a good change 😊
@Samrat. Fine, you are over obsessed with your image but seriously dude how can you just hurt and insult a girl like this. YOU asked for her help. She never came to you for crying out loud! Collage studs *sigh *
*sigh x2. At least he feels bad, that's a start.
I LOVED gunjan in the whole scene. She is a strong girl. Im glad she gave samrat some attacking words, which felt like a SLAP across his face. He deserved it. I know he didn't mean it to go like this but he NEEDS to learn how to control his words. Im glad Samrat saw another different side of gunjan. WAY TO GO GIRL!
GOOOOO GUNJAN! Im SOOO happy to have Gunji supporters here 😊 I guess because of the current track, we have this dislike for Sam 😆 But he's sweet too, trust me. He'll leave you all 😲'd in the upcoming parts.
DAMMM😳! Ouch! I felt his pain there in the end. He feels abandoned again after Gunji went🥺. I just want to give him a tight bear hug and NOT let go🤗. I liked the way you portrayed his emotions. The pain could be felt😭. I really cant hate this guy. I LOVE the samrat in your FF! The real one! 😳😳
Aweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeh!!!! Sam says thank you for understanding him 😊
I liked that part too, I got so into his character at that moment. And yes, that's the real him. And he'll show everyone that soon, he just needs time. Because all his life, image was the only thing he had control over. He didnt really have parent figures, so he took care of himself (clearly in a not so good way) but Gunjan's the only one who can see past his charade, and it'll be elabourated more in the next 1-2 parts.
You ended it really fine girl. Samrat seeing his reflection in the puddle. He was trying to find the real samrat. The when who was reflecting wasn't him. Very Natural. LOVED the way you penned down the whole scene. 😛😃
Dudee, you're like a total analyser. Do you know that? Because that is EXACTLY what I was trying to say in a metaphorical context. 😊 Im glad someone understood it! 😆 I confused myself when I wrote it. But that is exactly what that scene was for.
"SPLASH!" A car rides over the reflection. The FAKE one is gone! Gone
Cant wait for Mimi's roller coaster ride to part 7. It's going to be quite emotional still😳. The confrontations between Sajan. There feelings. Samrat putting his image issues in the DUSTBIN! If his brain is not frozen and focuses on gunjan. Its going to be a interesting ride. Im so FREAKING excited😆
You got me super excited to write the part yaar!! 😆
"Roller coaster ride onto part 7" haha, you're so cute!
Okay. Another equation before I finish off. <<YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😃
Outstanding + Out of the world + Fabulous + Rocking = A perfect update like always. Im jelling as in jealous again.😆😳
LOL Asthu, please don't be jelling with jelousy. I'm the jealous one here. YOU CAN WRITE BETTER THAN ANYONE I KNOW and you still read this crap and write me essays. *nods head*
Cant wait for the Sajan magic again Mimi XD!😛
Update soon! 😉
Loveee youuu 🤗
Love you too babes! I'll updt asap 😊
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