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Posted: 16 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: cute mayur

ohhh nooo😭
i am sad now but u still take ur time and write then....
i totally understand.😊



Hey, Sorry will try 2moro If i get time after work ..
But If i get more time, i Will get More Nice Scenes to Put in Nah,
I feel so sorry , That I am Dissapointing You, Will try tonight and 2moro,

Thanks for Understanding me ..
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Posted: 16 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: Imran94



Hey, Sorry will try 2moro If i get time after work ..
But If i get more time, i Will get More Nice Scenes to Put in Nah,
I feel so sorry , That I am Dissapointing You, Will try tonight and 2moro,

Thanks for Understanding me ..

oh no no!!!!!!
dont hurry cuz of me!!!take ur time imran!!
no worries😃
chill......i'll be patient and i am sure i'll get an awesome result for it😊
and plz dont feel bad...and dont even think that i am disappointed now ... i mean after reading all ur parts!!!
Edited by cute mayur - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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heyy i love your all parts plz contuied soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#34

Imran waiting for nxt part

plz update soon yaar
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Posted: 16 years ago
#35
lovely ff....pls update soon...waiting 4 mayur part....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 8/ Update 8

Brief Description
  • New Cameos - Karan Shubhangi
  • Samrat & Gunjan
  • Mayank's Confession

Mayank Knocks on someone's door, Knock ! Knock !
Someone from Inside "Coming " - Someone Opens the door

It is a Lady, Mayank sees her and Smiles and then says "Shubhangi"
Shubhangi : Mayank ??
Mayank walks inside the House and Then starts to talk with Shubhangi

Mayank : Kaise Ho Shubhangi
Shubhangi : Main Teek Hoon, Tum Kaise Ho Mayank Waise Tumhe Kaise Pata Hum Mumbai Aye Hai ??
Mayank : pata Chal Gaya, betne Ke Liye Nahiin Kahoge ??
Shubhangi : Ohh Sorry, Sure sit Down, Tumhara Hi Ghar Hai, Kehna Parega Kya ??
Mayank : Phir Bhi, " He sits down on the Sofa"

Karan comes out of his Bedroom and comes down to the Drawing room Whilst saying
Kaun Hai Shubhangi ??

He Notices Mayank Sat Down, He Stands still and says Mayank ?? *smiles*
Mayank Stands Up and Says Karan, They both smiles at each other and walks towards each other too,

Mayank : Kaisa Hai Meraa Dost ??
Karan : Kaisa Hai Meraa Bhai ??

They both are stood front of each other and Then Shares a Handshake and a Hug !
Then After hugging, Mayank in Dissapointed Voice

Tum Dono Ne Mujhe Bataya Kyun Nahiin Ke Tum Dono Goa Se Wo Paas Agaye Ho ??
Kyun Nahiin Bataya ?? Aur Tu Mujhe Apna Bhai Kehta Hai, Shame on You "

Angry Mood 😡😡
He sits back down on Sofa, Karan too follows him and then Sits Near Him and Apologises for his deed,

Karan : I am sorry yaar, Main Parso Aya, Aur Busy Ho Gaya, Hum Yahaan Sirf 1 Week ke Liye Hai ?
Mayank : 1 Week ??
Karan : Yes We are Moving to Goa permanently because I got an Offer from this Company and I couldn't really Decline the Offer

Mayank : Waise Job Ka Role ?
Karan : Are Manager
Mayank : "Smiles" Good For you Buddy, Wasie Is Ke Liye Main Tujhe Maaf Karta Hoon,
Shubhangi stands Up and says, Main Aap Dono Le Liye Chaiyee Banakar Lati Hoon, Ha ?? "Smiles"
She Leaves from the Room and Goes to Kitchen,

Karan : Toh Bata Na, Where has Your Love Story Reached So far
Mayank : Wahii, Ke Wahii Hai, Aaaj Taak Use Pata Nahiin Chala Main Use Pyaar Karte Hoon,
10th Standard se aaj Tak Use Main Pyaar Karta Aya Main, Kash Usse Main Bata Pata Ke Main Usse Beh Imthiyaan Pyaar Karta Hoon,

Karan : So, Just go and Tell her , You Love her Damn it "energetic Mood"
Mayank : But Itna Assan Nahiin Yahi,
Karan : What is she going to Say ?? Zaada Se Zaada "NO" So it doesnt Matter Right, Because I think it will Lighter Your Burden in Your Heart

Shubhangi Comes with Tea, They both stops chatting and Gets back to General Chat

Shubhangi : Kya Baate Chal Rahe Hain, Dono Dost Ke Bich ??
Karan: Kuch Nahiin Aise Hi

Other side at Garewal House

There is a Preparation Going on at Prem's House, Prem Comes in from College
He Notices all this Preparation Going on at their House, Well it is not So Grand But Normal, Decorating and a Pooja Prepartion too
Prem comes up to His Mom Gayatri and Asks her, Maa Yeh Saab ??

Gayatri : Tujhe Nahiin Pata ??
Prem : Kya ??

Gayatri : Aaaj Sammy aur Humare Gunjan Aa Rahe Hain
Prem : Kya ?? Sammy Or Gunzy Wo Paas Aa Rahe Hain ?

Gayatri : Humesha Ke Liye Nahiin Bal Ki 2 Month Ke Liye, Sammy To USA Sift Ho Raha Hai Na ?
Prem : Haa, But Saamy, *Smiles* Maa Main Bohot Kush Hoon, Barso Baad Mein Sammy or Gunzy Ko Milunga, Kitani Kushi Ke Baat Hain Na ?

Gayatri : Haa, Waise Ja Tu Jakar Todhe der Rest Karle, Tired Lag Raha Hai Tu !
Prem : Tik Hai Maa, Waise Bhi Main Bohot Sleepy Feeling Kar Raha hoon
Gayatri : Tik Hai Betaa ..

At Sharma House
Nupur is about to leave, She comes downs the Stairs, She sees Heer's Dad Just Came in,
She Touches Rishabs Feet, She stands back up, Rishab Kisses on Nupur's Forehead

Rishab : Kaise Ho Beti, Aaj Bohot Hi Jaldi Ghar Wo Paas Ja Rahi Ho
Nupur : Uncle Mujhe Durga Maa Ke Mandir Jana Hai, Issiliye Warna Toh Main Yahiin So Jaati *smiles*
Rishab : Okaii Betaa, Tumhari Maa Ko Mera Namashkar Dena
Nupur : Sure Uncle I will ..


She Leaves, Rishab Puts Down his all stuff and Coat along with Suitcase and Sits down on the Sofa
Parvati brings Tea for Rishab and Goes back to Kitchen to tidy up,

Shahid Comes inside the House whilst Whistling 😆😆
He Notices His dad sitting down on the Couch/Sofa, He is Kinda shocked to See His Dad coming Early from work today

Shahid : Dad ?? Papa ?? at once 😆😆
Rishab : Shahid ?? it is only 8 now and You returned Home already ??
Shahid : Aabhi to Papa, 8 aur Already Home ??

Rishaba and Shahid at same time, Naah, there was No work .. Same style and Same Accent 😆😆
Shahid : Main Fresh Ho Kar Ata Hoon
Rishab : Tik Hai Betaa,

Heer Staring at the stars, looking at the City, from her Balconey, She is Enoying the Fresh air Looking at how Night is getting Darker and Darker,

She is walking around here to here, She sees a Shooting Star
She quickly Closes her Eyes and Makes a Wish !

"Hey Bhagwan Meri Zindagi Main Saab Kuch Achhse Jar Raha Hain, Aur Ise Humesha Accha Hi Rakhna"
She Opens and Smiles, She turns Back and Sees Prem

Heer : Prem ??
Prem : Haa Main ? Kyun Pechaana Nahiin ??
Heer : Prem, Tum Yahaan ??
Prem : Haa, Tumhara Ghar Ki Balconey Main, Toh Kya Hua ??
Prem with a little Cute expression " am i not allowed "

Heer : Haa, But Is waqt Aise ?? "Confused Xpression"
Prem : Kya Hua, Main Tumhara Dost Hoon, He Starts to walk from here to there, He Goes Behind Heer She turns Back and says Prem Tum Yaah Se Jaoo, Koi Dek Lega Tumhe

Parvati Calls heer from Behind
Heer shocked ! Hey Bhagwan Aab Maa Bhi Bula Rahi Hai She Turns Back and runs towards the Door and sees Parvati is coming Up to the Balconey, She turns back and sees Prem Disappeared

Heer looks around and Calls Prem ?? Prem ??
Hey Bhagwan Was this another Misconception Of mine ??

Mujhe Har Jaga Prem Hi Kyun Nazaar Ata Hai,
Parvati : Heer Beta, Tu Yahaan Itni Der Kya Kar Rahi Hai ??
Heer : Aise Fresh Air Ke Liye

Parvati : Tik Hai, Teri Papa Agaye, Woh tujhe Bula Rahe Hai
Heer : Papa, Ghar ALready ??

Parvati : Yes, they both goes back downstair .

To Be Continued -
Sorry for Being So Late
I was Busy with Work, Request and Then I had another FF Launch and Along with that, I was Planning the future track of this FF too

Hopefully You all Like it
Do Leave Your comment !

Regards
Imran
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Posted: 16 years ago
#37

gr8 update imran

jst loved it.....too gud
my morning is now gud morning
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Posted: 16 years ago
#38
Hey Imran!!

I knew you were talented as a siggy maker, but you write FFs too!!

Whatever I've read till now is amazing!!

Just love the characters!!

Do continue soon!!

Janhvi = )
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Posted: 16 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: Shafoo

wowowow tht was cool



Thank yu soo Much for Reading it Means a lot ..x'
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Posted: 16 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: ruchimayur

gr8 update imran

jst loved it.....too gud
my morning is now gud morning



Hey Ruchi, Thanks for reading
I am Glad you Liked it and I Made Your Morning a Good Morning ..

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