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Imran

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Posted: 16 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: ruchimayur

u forgot my name?????????????😲......itna bada gunaah........😆😆

Ruchi..

ya they are my fav. couple tooo........too cute yaar

jst like a cherry on cake...........hahahaaa

gr8......will be waiting😳

Sorry Yaar, Maaf Kardo Na ..
Yeah Ruchi,Wnt forget now ..
Oh That's cool They are in My Fav Jodi List but I am More Fan of Mayur than premeer lol ..
Will Surely Update Soon as Possible ..

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Let-It-Go

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Posted: 16 years ago

#12

maaf kiya yaar............par iski badle want update sooooooon

luv u

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Imran

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Posted: 16 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: ruchimayur
maaf kiya yaar............par iski badle want update sooooooon

luv u

Okaii, Next Update is Here Then ..
I will Update the Rest Now .. Wait ..

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Imran

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Posted: 16 years ago

#14

Part 3/Episode 3

Heer's Father Rishab is at Office, It's a Very Small Company, It is a Clothing Company, Where is a Managing Director, He is on the Phone to someone,
Someone Knocks on his Door and says, Sir May I Come in ??
Rishab : Yea Sure, It is one of his Employee, A Male Employee of his office,
He Asks Rishab to sign a paper, Rishab says leave it here i will look at it and sign it and then give you a call to collect it, Okaii ?
Employee Replies, Sure sir and then He leaves the Room, Whilst Rishab is continuing with his Call .....

Back at Sharma House, Parvati is about to go Upstair and she recieves a Call, She Picks it Up and Says Hello , She Keeps talking and then Suddenly says Kya ??... Saach ? Mayank, Really, Your Coming Back ??
Betaa, Tujhe Pata Nahiin, Tujhe Dekhne ke liye meri aankhen Taraas Rahi Hai ... Tu Jaldhi Aaaja...
Mayank : Maa, Aur Ek Din Ki Hi toh Baat Hai, Lot Raha Hoon Na Mein ..
Parvati : Mein Bohot Kush hoon, Tu lot raha hai ...

Back at College

Nupur,Prem, Heer comes out of Biology Class, It has ended and all three of them are in Deep discussion...

Prem : One Minute, If you are a Year Older than Nupur then ? Same Class ?
Heer : Actually, We Moved to this Place when i was about to start my Class, but Because of family i started a Year Later or mein iski saath End up ho gayi, Is Pagli Ke Saath ...
Nupur : Haa, Aur Tera Woh Arrogant Bhai, Mayank ??
Heer : Khabardaar ...
Prem : Mayank ??
Heer : Mera Chota Bhai, Ek Saal Ka Chota, Hum Dono Ne Ek Saath School Shuru Kya Tha ..
Aur Class 5th Standard mein Nupur Ayee, Aur Tab Se Lekaar, Mayank and this Pagli, Ek Dusrese Nafrat Kar te Hai ...
Prem : Woh Kyun ??
Nupur: Arre Yaar, Picture Ki Puri Climax abhi Janna hai, Lunch ka Waqt Hai, Khane Chalo Na (Angry Voice)

They all Walk forward to the Gate and came out, Prem is new to the City so therfore does not Know anything so therefore he stops and tell them that he needs to go and see Rajshri Ma'am
Heer and Nupur says, OKaii We both don't have anymore Lectures to attend so we are heading home, we will see you tomorrow,
Heer and Nupur says good bye to him and walks off, Prem goes back inside the college and to Principal's Office,

He Reches the office, She asks him, So How was your first day at college ??
Prem replies, It was Great, Specially i met two girl who are so nice and open minded Person's

Rajshri : Do Ladki ?
Prem : Nupur aur Heer

Rajshri : Oh I Remember, I am glad you made some friends already
Prem : Achaa, Mein Yahaan Kuch Janta To Nahiin, To Kya Mein Last Lecture Chor Kaar, Ghar Chala Jao, I am really Tired ...

Rajshri : Tik Hai, Because it is you first Day, I Give you half day but from Tomorrow No More
Prem : Jo Aap Ki Marzi ... *Smiles* and then he Leaves her office and then he comes out college and catches a Taxi .....

Otherside

Nupur and Heer, are walking to home today, They are having ice-cream and enjoying themselves, They reach near a Mandir and Pooja is going on ...
Heer then says Nupur, Hey Chal Na Mandir Ke Andaar Chalte Hai ...
Nupur : Kyun ??
Heer : Shut Up and Follow Me,
Nupur : Okaii, Meri Maa

They Both go in, Durga Pooja is going on ... Heer and Nupur walks in and then goes and stands front of the Pundit and then holds hand and then starts to Pray, Suddenly it gets Windy and all of sudden, Heer discovers a New Emotion Inside her ....
Heer : Hey Maa, Yeh Mujhe Kya Horaha Hai, Yeh Ehsaas aaj Se Pehle Nahiin Meine Mehsoos Kya aur nahiin mujhe Kabhi Hua, toh Phir Aaaj, .... People around her is all trying to keep their everything control,Where Nupur her Hair is messy and she is try to control and stop them being all messy, Heer Slowly Opens her eyes and sees the Lamp Placed on the table front of Durga is about to go off, She Runs and Puts her hands around it and at the Exact moment Sindoor falls on her Forehead from the Hand of Durga, Heer is Shocked ! and then she slowly touches her Forehead and then touches the sindoor and gets Up, The Winds are gone, Nupur is too shocked, Pundit comes Forward and then explains to Heer ...

Betaa,Ghabrane Ke Koi Baat Nahiin Hai, Samajh lo Ke Maa Ne Tumhe Unkaa Ashirwad Diya Hai aur is Ashirwad ke saath Shayad Yeh bhi Kehna Na Hai Ke, Tumhari Shaadi Jaldi Ho Jayga ..

Heer and Nupur is all Shocked, Heer then says to Nupur, Chale ??
They both walk, The come out of Mandir and then sees a Taxi, And Catches and Set off ....

Heer Reaches Home, Parvati is coming down from Upstair, she looks at Heer and She Notices the Sindoor on Her Forehead and she gets Worried asks her, Heer Betaa, Yeh Sindoor

Heer : Maa, Woh Mein Mandir ka Diya Bujh Ne Se Rauk Rahi thi aur Achaanak Maa Durga Ke Haath Se Yeh Sindoor Meri Saar Par Girgaya...

Parvati : Koi Baat Nahiin, Betaa Shayad Yeh Koi Maa Ka Ishara Hain Teri Liye .. Upaar Jakar Wash Karle Isye ...

Heer Goes Upstairs to her room, Puts her bags and her stuff on the bed and goes inside the Bathroom... She then Turns the sink tab and gets some water on her hands and tries to take off the Sindoor, She then remembers what the Pundit said ...
She Then says to herself ... Nahiin and Smiles ... She then Takes off the Sindoor Completely and comes out of the Bathroom, Then She Hears Rishab's Voice ...

Papa ?? She Runs out of her room and as she comes out she stands near the Stairs and Looks for her Papa, He has arrived ... She runs down the stairs and Says, Papa and then Hugs Him ..

Rishab : Kyaa Baat Hai, Aaj To Meri Rani Bohot Kush Lag Rahi Hain, Kya Baat Hai ... ??
Heer : Kuch Nahiin Papa, Aise ..

Parvati Comes out of her Bedroom and Says, Agaye Aap ??
Then Rishab Sits down on the Couch and So does Heer, Parvati Says, Tea ??
Rishab : Please ...
Heer : Maa Mein Banao ??
Parvati : It's Okaii, Tu Rest Le, Aabhi College Se Ayehi ..

Heer and Rishabs Chats, After 2 Mins Parvati reaches with the Tea and Then Says,
Pata Hai Kaal Kya Hai ??
Heer and Rishab :Kya ?

Parvati : Kaal Mayank, Austrailia Se Wopaas Araha Hai ..
Rishab : Kya ??
Heer : Saach *Smiles*
Parvati : Haa, Uska Graduation Complete Ho Gaya, Isiliye ...

The Mother, Father and the Daughter ... Enjoys their tea together ..

To Be Continued .........

Hope you Like it ..
Sorry for any Mistakes ..

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Let-It-Go

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Posted: 16 years ago

#15

awwwwwwwwwwww.....................luv u jaan

thanx a tonn..u really made me feel special..i am on cloud no9.

i have to read the update.....lol.mein padhkar comment karti hoon

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Imran

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Posted: 16 years ago

#16

Trust Me, I Suck at Writing, But Let's see MJHT Fans Accept this FF or Not, it has been Accepted by Premeer Fans but let's see !

It's Okaii !
More Updates will be done soon
Ryt Now working on Mayur Siggie ..

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Let-It-Go

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Posted: 16 years ago

#17

it was awesum yaar............finally mayank cuming back........woh

we'll get to see more of mayur then

really loved the frndship between prem-nupur and heer....it'll be interesting when mayank cums........

thanx a lot yaar..awesum job....HATTS OFF

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Imran

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Posted: 16 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: ruchimayur
it was awesum yaar............finally mayank cuming back........woh

we'll get to see more of mayur then

really loved the frndship between prem-nupur and heer....it'll be interesting when mayank cums........

thanx a lot yaar..awesum job....HATTS OFF

Aww I am Glad You Like it, Yeah Finally Mayank is Coming Back ..
Sure Mayur Will be seen same as Premeer, They are the Lead Yaar ..
I am Glad You Like the Portrays of the Friendship,
Next Update 2moro, thanks For Reading Yaar ..
Keep Reading xx