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Posted: 16 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: Senny

your welcome imran, it was just awesome, how could anyone not love it.



I dunno i still thin something is Missing from this FF, My first time writing so Yea No Idea but Yea ..
Anywaii Thanks ..

I am Glad you like it ..
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Posted: 16 years ago
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HEY!!
WHT HAPPENED SWEETY???! R U OK??
GET WELL SOON... AND WE WILL BE WAITING.. 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey Guyz, How are you all,
i am really sorry for Keeping You all Wait for an Update for Nearly Two Months, But it was all Due to My operations, Exams , School and More,

But anywaii, I will be Soon Writing this Up Again ..
From July the First You May All Expect an Update,

Now that Summer Holiday is about to start
I will Start Writing the FF Again !

Thank you all for being So Co-Operative with me

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 9/ Update 9
  • Part 8 Continues

As it is 8PM, Nupur is coming towards the Mandir, Mayank too approaching the same way, they both did not see each other, Nupur looks at the time in her watch and suddenly she runs inside Mandir, Mayank did not see her, He Keeps on Walking ,

Nupur doing the veneration on Mandir,
Nupur : Hey Maa, Tum to Jaanti ho na, You Know I always ask for one thing aur bhi mere Mamma Ki Khushi, She quickly does the pooja and turns back and starts to Run Home, Hardly there are any taxi's around this area but today all of sudden a taxi appeared out of nowhere, Nupur thought she would walk but then she changed her mind and thought she'd get home quicker with the taxi,

Nupur : Taxi ??? She shouts
Taxi stops, the Driver looks Up, He seems very suspicious, He smiles but eyes were telling something else ..
Nupur, Walks front of the taxi driver, She tells him the place and he says, Hmmm as a reply, she sits down.

The driver starts driving, The telly news is on, as we all know Nupur is very much excited about television she gets a bit excited and tells the driver to turn on the volume even louder , Driver do so, the radio is currently talking about a new show replacing a Show from Star Plus and it's current shows fans are going crazy,
Nupur : Fan hot to aisa ! Kyun Bhaiiya ?? *grinds*
Driver : Sach Kaha Aap Ne !
All of a sudden the driver starts to drive a bit faster, nupur is stunned but she isn't worried, but after a while the driver goes in another direction where as Nupur's house is in opposite direction, Nupur screams and tells the driver to stop, He does so, He gets out and tries to pull nupur out, She screams and shouts,
Nupur : Chodo Mujhe , Warna mein Chillaungii
he doesnt let go off her, the road is all quiet and not even single sound can be heard not even birds or any kind of animal...
The driver tries to tie Nupur with the Ropes, meanwhile Nupur decides to stay quiet and see what the driver ( kidnapper) tries to do, She plays safe ..
After sometime, a car light can be seen, The driver notices the car coming forward and Nupur decides to Scream out loud, Inside the car there are two People, A Guy and a Girl !
Gunjan and Samrat ( Mohit Sehgal and Sanaya Irani),
Gunjan : Samrat ?? Yeh to Kisi Ladki Ki Awaz Hain Na ?
Samrat : Haa Paar Yeh Aya Kaha Se
Gunjan notices the guy trying to kidnap Nupur,
Gunjan : Samrat she screams, and Points towards Nupur,
Car Stops !! Samrat comes out of the car in a Filmy hero style,
Oyee ! He says to that Kidnapper, the Kidnapper pushes Nupur aside and Comes forward Samrat,
Driver : Tumhare liya Yahi Better Hoga, Agar tum Choop Chap Yaha Se Dafa Ho Jaye,
Samrat : Kyun ?? Mujhse Darte Ho ?? Are you scared ??
Driver : Get lost !
with all his strength, Samrat Punches the guy, At one go He faints *Bravo Samrat* 😆😆 👏
Gunjan Goes to Nupur and Releases her,
Nupur : thank God aaj aap Log ne mujhe bachaya warna toh aaj mein gayii, Thank You Soo Much
Gunjan : Let us drop we you off at your House !
Nupur : Naahin, I'll Manage, i don't wanna hassle you two anymore
Samrat : it's absoultly nothing, we'll drop you off !
All three gets inside the car.
At Prem's House !
Prem thinking about Heer!, *FlashBack*
He has a flash back of the day where he met Heer, the first time their eyes met, their hands met
All of a sudde, Someone knocks, Prem comes back to reality
It's His Brother, Manpreet ..
Prem : Manpreet ?? You need anything ??
Manpreet : I Just saw you wondering something, thought of asking you if anything is wrong
Prem : Nothing actually, Just wondering ..
Manpreet : Flirty type TALK, Kyun Bhai, Kuch Chakkar Wakkar chal Raha Hai Kya ??
Prem : *raises hand* Tujhe Tooo ..
Manpreet runs, Prem gets up and closes the door, he turns back and Notices the window is open,
He goes towards the window, He is about to close it, he sees heer sitting in garden bench, He quickly runs downstairs and then to the garden ...
He comes front of heer, He then says "Heer" ??
Heer : Haa Mein, Kyun ?
Prem : Tum Yaha ?
Heer : Haa Mujhe Kuch Kehna Hai !
Prem : Kya ?? Kaho Na !
Heer : Kuch dino se mujhe pata Nahiin Kya Hogaya Hai , Haar Jaga mein sirf tumhe dekti hoon , Aisa Kyun Ho raha hai prem ??
Prem : Tumhe Kya Baatoo, the same is happening to me, mein tumhe Har Jaga dekti hoon par mujhe yeh ehsaas ka naam pata hai
Heer : Aur who hai ?
Prem : Pyaar, Ishq, Mohabbat !
Heer : Kya ??
Prem : Haa, Heer Humko Tumse Pyaar Hai
Heer : Haa Mein Bhi Pyaar Kya Hai, Tumse !
Heer sits down and So does prem, Heer is all Shy'ed Up, she looks at the otherside,
Prem puts his fingers on Heer's face and slowly turns her face towards his, it's almost like he is about to kiss her , he slowly gets closer but all of sudden, he hears a gate moving, Heer Dissapearas, Prem shocked and starts looking everywhere for heer !
Prem : Oh Shit !!, Aaj To Laga Tha mein use Bata Diya,
Prem looks towards the gate and he sees, Samrat and Gunjan and He runs towards them ..
Prem : Gunzy, Sammy,
Gunjan : Prem Bhaiyya !! They Hug,
Samrat : Prem they too manly embrace each other,
Prem Is all Happy and exicted, he takes Gunjan's luggage from her and they all starts walking and comes inside ...
Prem shouts, Maa, Manpreet , Dekho Kaun Aya Hai !
Gayatri : Kaun Prem ?? She comes forward, she sees Samrat and Gunjan, She starts smiling, and Comes downstair all rushingly ..
Samrat?? Gunjan ???, Agaye tum dono, Kyaa bato tum dono Ko, Kitna Betaab thi mein tum dono ko dekne ke liye....
Manpreet ?? Asks Gunjan ,
Gayatri : He Must be sleeping peacefully in his room ,
Gunjan : Hmm , Unko toh mein Kaal Shubha dekloongi ..
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Samrat : Gunjan he says angrily,
Gunjan : Kya ?? Woh meraa Bacchpan Ke Dost Hain, Haq Mera, Tum isshe Door Raho ..
Prem : Hand over the bags to me, i'll take them to your rooms, samrat Gunjan and Gayatri sits down on the sofa/Couch, they start talking ..
Prem takes the bags Upstairs ..
To be Continued !!
Hey Guyz, Very Short Part ?? I Know, But as You see when i update i couldn't my Laptop is broken, I hardly come to I-F nowadays, I am at my cousins house today therefore I Updated a bit for today .. I will be Updating more as soon as My Lappy is fixed, i might do short updates from my Sisters Latop if i get my hands on it,

Also whoever reads this FF can you all please, Add me as Your Buddy, So I can send you all a PM on My Update, Thanks a lot,
Hope ypou all like this Update ..
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Posted: 16 years ago
#65
wow... just read all the partz in one go..!!
they r really good..!! 👏
good job ji..!!
preemer r great asusaul..!
n mayur... un ka tou kia kaho.. waitin for their confession...
update ur ff soon plsh..!!

well problem iz i cant add u as ma buddy...!!
not active enough i think..!!
😕
Edited by robinblue91 - 16 years ago

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