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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 4/Episode 4

Prem Comes to his House, He Comes inside and Shout for his Mum,
Maa, Maaa, Maaa........ He Looks around the House, No one is at a Sight ..

Prem : Saab Kaha Hai ??
His Mum Appears from Behind and Says, Prem ... He Turns around and sees His Mother Smiling ...
He then Says, Maa Inti Der se mein Apko Awaz Derihoon Aur Aap Hai Ki, Jawab Hi Nahiin Dete Hai .. Hmpmhhh ....

Gayatri ( His Mother ) - Sorry Beta, Mein Garden mein thi, Aur abhi Akaar Tujhe Yeha Dekha, Waise College Khatam Hone mein tho abhi Baki Hai toh Phri Tu Intna Zaldi Kaise Agaya

Prem : Woh Kya Hain Na, Maa Aaj Tumhare Haath Ka Khana Khane Ke Liye Bohot Mann Kar Raha Tha, To Mein Principal Ma'am Se Permission Lekaar Agaya ..

Gayatri : Pehle Dinhi Chooti, Prem Tu Kabhi Nahiin Badlega .. *Smiles* and Gives him a Small Slap on his Cheek..

Prem : After all Mein Aaap Ka Betaa Jo Hu .. *Smiles ..
Gayatri : Chaal Mein teri Liye Khana Lagi Ti Hoon.....

Prem Sits down, Gayatri goes inside to get Food, He then Asks Maa, Shubha Kaha Hai ?
Gayatri : Woh Teri Papa Ke Saath, Uske College Admission Ke Liye Gayie Hai ..

Prem : Achaa ?? Gayatri Brings the Food on the Table and set them up ..
She then Puts the Food on Prem's Plate and Says, Le Kha Le, Pett Bhar Kar Kha ...

Prem : Maa, Tum Khilakar Do Na ??
Gayatri : She Nods her Heads and Says Prem, Tu Kabhi Nahiin Sudrega ..
Prem : Woh to Sahi Hai - Smiles ..

His Mother Feeds Him, They smile at Each Other ...


Other Side
Nupur too Reaches Her House,
She comes inside and sits on the couch and Says, Maaa , Mujhe Khana Do ..
Her Mum, Appears and Pulls her ear, she stands up and Says, Oww Maa Mujhe Lagraha Hai na ?
Vaishnabi : Mein Kya Teri Naukraani Hoon, Jo Tu Mujhe Order Kar Rahi hai *Smiles*
Nupur : Maa Sorry,Aab Choro Naa ..

Shahid Comes down the Stairs, And Says Maa Meri Pari Ko Choro, .... She Runs and Hugs Her Brother Shahid,

Nupur : Bhaiyya Dekhno Maa, Mujhe Daat Rahi Hai Wo bhi Isliye Kyunki Mein unse Khaana Manga
Shahid : Maa *Angry Voice*
Vaishnabi : Tum Dono Se to Koi Kabhi Nahiin JeetSakta ..
She Goes towards the Kitchen, Shahid and Nupur Laughs ...
Then both of them goes and Sits on the Dinning Table Chair, Vaishnabi Brings the Food for them ..

She comes with the Food and Places them on the Table and Says .. Yeh Lo Aab Saab Ki Khana, She looks at Nupur and Says, Madam Ap Kaa Khana Tayaar Hain .. and then Smiles ..😆😆

Then They all sits down and Starts to Eat ..
Shahid then eats and ask Nupur about her college day..

Shahid : Nupur aaj Tera College Kaisa tha,
Nupur : Waise Kuch Special to Nahiin but aaj Ek Ladka Ke Saath Dosti Hua Hai ..

Shahid and Vaishanbi Both looks Up and at the same exact time Says "Ladka"

Shahid : Nupur Maine Tujhe Pehle Kya Kaha tha, Ladko Ke Saath Dosti Nahiin Karte Hai
Nupur : Main Janta Hoon Bhaiyya, But Prem Achaa Ladka Hai, Woh Bohot Sanskari or Woh Well Mannered bhi Hai, Woh Baaki Ladko Jaisa Nahiin Hai ..

Vaishabhi : Shahid, Gussa Hokar Kya Karega, agar Nupur Ke Rahi Hai, Woh Ladka Achaa Hai Toh Phir Woh Shayad Achaa Hi Hain.... tu Khana Khataam Khar ..

They all continue to eat... Nupur Smiles at her Brother ..

Back at Garewal House

Prem has just entered his room, he is unbutting his Shirt, Someone comes and Knocks on the Door, Prem Stops and Goes and opens the Door, His Small Brother Manpreet Appears,

Prem : Manpreet ??
Manpreet : Bhai, Bhai, Bhai ... He Pulls Prem around ...
Prem : Manpreet ?? Hua Kya Hai, Itna Kush Kyun Lagraha Hai ..
Manpreet : Bhai, I got Scholarship to the Best College in this City ... I am so HAPPY
Prem : Saach ??
Manpreet : Haa, He then gets on his Knees and Touches his Feet and Says Bless me Bhaiyya ..
Prem : Bhagwan Tujhe Hamesha Kushiya Hi Khusiya De ..

Manpreets Stands Up and Says, I have to Tell Mum, Meet You in a Few ..!
He then Runs, Prem From Behind - Be Careful !
then to Himself, Yeh Mera Bhai Bhi Naa, !
Then He Closes his room and heads towards the Bathroom .......


Sharma House :

Heer : Comes out of the Bathroom, She Looks at the Window, Which is Closed.. She walks up to it and Opens it Wide, it is Kinda Windy, She Closes her Eyes and Feels the the Wind
Suddenly She feels the Same Weird Feeling again which she felt today at Mandir.......

At Prem's House

Prem too Comes out of the Bathroom, Because it's Windy he too Goes front of the Window, He tries to Close the Window But he too feels the Same which is Heer Experiencing too at the same time, Prem Closes his Eyes, and Heer's Eyes and then Her Lips, Her Hair Appears ...

Heer to Sees the Moment again when she First saw Prem ..

They both at once opens their Eyes, Both Shocked !
Prem : Heer ?
Heer : Prem ??

They both at the same time, Nah !!




To Be Continued !
Hope you all Like it ..
Please Leave Your Comments !

Looking Forward to it
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Posted: 16 years ago
#22
awwwwwwwww..............Imran ur updates leave me speechless
u are an awesum writer yaar
loved it.....prem-gayatri, nupur-shahid-mom, heer
all were fabulous
loved the bro-sis bonding.......culd relate to it easily
plzzzz mere mayank ko bhhi aab australia se waapis le aao
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Posted: 16 years ago
#23
Part 5/Update 5

It is Now Morning, Prem wakes up, Whilst Heer is already Woken and doing Pooja at her House,
Prem Gets Up and heads towards the Bathroom, He Brushes his teeth, Washes his Face as he starts to Wipe his Face, As he takes the Towel off his Face, he looks up to the Mirror and he sees Heer Waving at Him, Prem is stunned ?? and Looks around and then Says Heer ?? Then he is about to touch the mirror someone comes and Knocks on his bathroom Door, He says Kaun ?? Then he looks up to the Miror and Heer is no longer appearing on the Mirror he then is Amazed then goes to open the door, He Opens it and Sees his Mother,

Gayatri : College Nahiin Jana Kya ??
Prem : Maa, Haa, I'll Get Ready Now
Gayatri : Tik Hai Betaa ..

Gayatri Leaves and Prem comes out of his bathroom and Then gets Ready, Downstair his Mum have got the breakfast ready downstair and Prem is getting Ready, Prem is all dressed Up and Ready for college, He is looking Very Stylish and Handsome 😳😳
He comes Downstair , Sits on the Dinning Table and starts to eat, His mum Notices his eating too fast and she asks him, Betaa Itni Jaldi Kya ?? Prem Replies, Maa Mein College Ke Liye Late Ho Raha Hoon,

Gayatri : Isiliye Mein Kehthi Hoon, Thoda Jaldi Sawyaa Kaar,
Prem Gets up and then touches his feet and Leaves, His Mum From Behind SamhalKar !
His Mum Smiles, Prem Comes out of his House then asks the driver to get the car, He Sits in ..
The Driver Started the Car, After Five Mins the car reaches at traffic Point, Car is stopped, Prem Looks Around, Then he notices Heer on someone's Bike, He smiles, Heer is Smiling and Waving at Him, Then suddenly a Car behind Horns their Car and Prem looks back and then He turns back at where was sitting but then Heer isnt there anymore, Prem Smiles and then Hits himself on the Head, Then Driver starts to drive again, After 10 Mins Prem Arrives at College, Heer is waiting for Nupur, Prem comes out of the Car and Straightaway he notices Heer then he again smiles and keeps walking,
Heer Notices Prem therefore she starts walking towards him and Prem again thinks Heer as His Imagination, Both of them faces each other, Heer is Smiling and Waves Hi to Him, Prem Ignores it and Keeps Walking, Heer is Shocked then Calls Him Prem ?? Mein Yahaan Tumhe Hi Keh Rahi Hoon Aur Tum Ho Ke, Just Walked Away..

Prem Thinks, Arre Yeh toh Haqeeqat Hai, Aur Mein ??
Then Prem makes a Excuse and tells Heer,
Prem : Sorry heer, I Just wanted to See, How You feel when i Ignore You !
Heer : Aww, Abhi Se Mazaak??
Prem : Sorry ??

Nupur Arrives, She gets out from a Cab and sees Prem and Heer together, She Shouts Heer, Heer Looks at her, Nupur Waves, Heer Waves Back and With her Prem does too,

Nupur Pays the Fare, Then she runs and Gives Heer a Hug,
Heer : Thank God, Aaaj Tu College Ayee, Warna Mein to Gaya ??
Nupur : But Here I am,
Prem : Hi Nupur, Kaise Ho Jii ?
Nupur : Mein Toh Tik Hoon Ji, Aaap?

Prem : Mein To Tik Hoon, Waise Class Ka Waqt Ho Raha Hai, Mujhe Chalna Chahiyee, I'll Catch Up with you Guyz Later .. Huh ??
Nupur and Heer, Okaii Prem, See You Later !
Prem then walks away from heer and Nupur as he walks he thinks, Yeh Mujhe Kya Ho Raha Hai, Jahaan Jaoo Wah Heer Diktha Hai, He Turns Back and Looks at Heer, She Laughing with Nupur, Prem Smiles and Tells Himself, Kya Mujhe Heer Se Pyaar Hai ?, He Smiles and Starts to Walk Again ...

He Arrives at His Class, He Bumps into a Guy Called Kunal Verma
( Kunal Verma Will Play the Role of Prem's Best Friend From Now On )


They both Bump into each other, Kunal Says Sorry Buddy, prem too Says Sorry to Him, Then Prem
It's Okaii, It was Unknowingly So Leave it,
Kunal : Okai' By the way, I am Kunal Verma , You ??
Prem : I am Prem, He Lends His Hands for a Shake, Both of them Shakes Hands together, Then Prem
Asks Kunal if he is in the Same Class as Prem,

Prem : Are You in this Class ?
Kunal : Yes, Frankly Speaking, I Hate it .. *Smiles*
Prem : Well From Now On, I will be Part of this Class, *Smiles*

They Both Goes inside the Class and Sits Down, The Teacher have not Arrived Yet,
They both sits next to each other and Starts to Chat, after 10 mins the Teach arrives ...


To Be Continued ....

Sorry for this Short Update, Next One .. It will be Very Long, thats a Promise !
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Update 6/Part 6


Kunal and Prem Kept on Chatting, Heer and Nupur is too Walking towards their Classroom,
R.K Madam Arrives to Prem's Class and Informs them that, Valentines Party Will Be Held Soon,

R.K : Valentine's Party Must be Done Very Well, It Must be Organised very well, So Therefore
I am going to Appoint some for this Organisation, She looks around, She notices Prem and Kunal
R.K Calls their names Out, Prem ? Kunal ??
Prem and Kunal Responds and Says Yes Ma'am ?

R.K - Kya Tum Dono, Yeh Responsibility Lena Chaho Ge ?
They Both Replies saying Yes, Ma'am We would Love to help,
R.K - Tik Haai, Tum Dono Lunch Ke Baad, Mere Cabin Mein Ajaana, Hum Discuss Kar Lenge ..
She Leaves the Room,

Kunal Speaks Up and Says, Yes we Will Have Fun Nah ??
Prem : Fun ?? Arre Yaar Karte Karte Hum Tired Ho Jayenge ??
Kunal : Dnt Worry My Dost, Main Hoon Na ! *Smiles*
Prem : Wait a Sec, Kya Tu Kuch Planning Kar Raha Hai *Scared*
Kunal : Tujhe Kaise Pata ??
Prem : Oh Noo *Crying Face*

OtherSide, Heer and Nupur is about to Go inside the Class,R.K notices them and Stops Them,
They both Stop and Stands and waits for R.K, She comes in front of them and Ask them if they are willing to Help Prem and Kunal with the preparation of Valentine's Party .. They Both Accepts
R.K Asks them to come to her Office after Lunch then She Leaves, Heer and Nupur Goes inside the Class,

*I am Just Skipping Lessons - After an Hour *

After an Hour, The Lesson Ends, Nupur Comes Outside the Class and Comes front of the Receptions
Someone Comes from Behind and Places their Hand Nupur's Shoulder ... Nupur Says, Arre Kaun Hai ?? She Moves her Shoulder Again Someone Some Touches her On Shoulder, She Turns back with angry Face, She raises her hand to Slap the Person, As she Turns Back, She sees Mayank Standing Behind Her,She is Shocked and Quickly Puts her Hands Down, Mayan *waves* and *Smiles* and says,Hi Nupur,

Nupur : Mayank Tum ?
Mayank : Haa Main
Nupur : Yehaa, *open Mouth, Confused Faces*
Mayank Teases her as he has always been Teasing Her,
Mayank : Haa Nupur Mein Yeha,Kyun ??
Nupur: Meraa Matlaab College Kya Kar Rahi Hon ?
Mayank : Heer Di Ko Pick Up Karne Ke Liye Aya Hoon, Kyun Koi Problem *Smiles Flirtish*

Nupur : Kyun Meraa Kya Problem Ho Sakti Hain ??
Mayank : Tik Haai, Agar Aap Ki Marzi Ho toh Kya Mein Apne Behen Se Milne Jaoo,
Nupur : Haa Kyun Nahiin ! Go Ahead,

Mayank is turns around and is about to Make a Move, At the time he Trips and is about to Fall, He Screams Nupur is aware of the Falling and She stops him from falling and there he Ends up in Nupur's Arm ..
They both stare at each other, Mayank and Nupur is Lost in Each others eye,
Suddenly the Receptionist Coughs and they both come back to reality, Nupur Smiles, Mayanak is Embarrased,

Mayank : Thanks Nupur, *Embarrased*
Nupur : Your Welcome * Grins*

Mayank walks away, Nupur Smiles and Looks Back and go and stands where she was standing before, She is continously looking at the college Gate,


Back at Kunal and Prem
Hey Prem Says Kunal, Hey Kunal says Prem

Kunal : So What's Up ??
Prem : The Ceilling ! *Smiles*
Kunal : What ? *Confused*
Prem : You Said What's Up ? I Said the Ceiling in Up !
Kunal : Oh I Get it, But I Meant .. Prem stops him and says, I Know what You Meant, I Was Just Joking With you, He Laughs ..

Kunal smiles back and then Asks Him for his Mobile Number so they can Keep in Contact, Prem Gives his Number to Him, The College Bell Goes, Because it is Friday it is Half day in college today
So therefore Everyone is leaving Now,

Mayank Reaches to Heer's Class, She comes out talking to her Friends, then she feels a Touch in her in her feet, then She Looks down and Sees Mayank ...
It brought a Smile in her Face, She Says Mayank , Tu Kaab Aya Re ??

Mayank : Abhi Didi .. Aap Kaise Ho ?
Heer : Main Teek Hoon, Maa Ko Bataya ??

Mayank : Nahii Didi, Abhi Taak Nahiin
Heer : Surprise ??
Mayank : Haa
Heer : Toh Phir tu Yaha Kya Kar raha Hai ??
Prem : Woh Aaj College Ka Half Day Hai Na, Toh Socha Mein Aap Ke Saath Ghar Jakaar Maa Surprise Du..
Heer : Let's Go * Smiling*

They both starts to Walk and then Suddenly Heer stops and Says, " Oh No, I need to Tell Nupur I am Leaving "
Mayank : She Knows , Use Pata Hai !

They Both Leaves, Front of the Reception Nupur is still waiting for someone
It's been 15 Mins she has been waiting for that Person,

Prem and Kunal talks to each other whilst talking to each other, Prem Notices Nupur and stops and Then Comes stands near Nupur, Ehmmhh ...

Prem : Nupur Tum Yaha ?
Nupur : Haa Intezaar Kar Karke Thak Chuki Hoon Mein * Depressed*
Prem : Intezaar Kiske Liye ??
Nupur : Meri Dost Pooja Ke Liye
Prem : POOJA ??
Nupur :Haa, Woh Rajasthan Gayi Thi, Aaj Wo Paas Aa Rahi Hai
Prem : Achaa, is Ka Matlaab Tumhara Aur Heer Ki Ek Aur Saheli Hain ??
Nupur : Haa Kyun ? *Smartly asked*
Prem : Kuch Nahiin, Aise Pucha,

Kunal Then Asks Prem, Prem Should we Leave ..
Prem : Oh Yes, Let's Go ..

They Both Leaves, After 2 Mins, Nupur Recieves a Call,

Nupur : Hello ??
Pooja : Hey Nupur I am So Sorry, I Could not make it to College Today,
Wo Meri Papa Hai Na, Unka Tabyaat Kuch Kharab Ho Gayi, Sorry Nupur *Sad Voice*

Nupur : Koi Baat Nahiin, Yaar ! Waise Kaal Toh Tu College Aa Rahi Hai Na ??
Pooja : Pakka *Smiles*

Nupur then too goes back towards her class to Heer, She stops and remembers that Mayank Came so she must have Left college with him, Then She Turns back and makes her Way out from the College,

Heer and Mayank Reaches Home, Heer's Dad and Her Mum are Sat Down on the Sofa and they are Drinking tea but Rishab is Reading the Newspapers too, Heer is Comes inside and then Stands still, Mayank is Behind Heer and is not Seen by his Parents.

Mayank : Maa,
Parvati : Mayank ?? She Looks Up to Heer and Asks Her, I Think I Just Heard Mayank's Voice
Rishab : Mujhe Bhi Aisa Laga, *Confused Look*

Heer : No, Kaha Mujhe Toh Kuch Sunaiyee Nahii Diya ! *Smiles*
Then Suddenly Mayanks appears from Behind and Shouts Maa !

Parvati : Mayank ?? *Smiles*
Mayank : Mayank walks up to his Mum and Then Touches her feet, His Mum Blesses Him ..
then the Maa Betaa, Hugs then He goes and Touches his Dad's Feet and then they Both Hugs too,

Parvati : Tu Kaab Ayaa ??
Mayank : Ek Ghante Pehle !
Parvati : Kyaa ? Phir Heer ?
Heer : Woh Mujhe College Se Pick Up Kar Ne Ke Liye Chala Gaya Tha, Hum Dono Ek Saath Aagaye !
Parvati : Mayank, Heer Tum Dono Behto Mein Chayee Banakar Lati Hoon !


To Be Continued !

Sorry for a Short Update, Long Update Will be Done Soon ..x
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 7 ll Update 7

Mayank Comes to His Bedroom, He Takes out his Belonging from Suitcase, He takes out his Clothes and other Belongings, Whilst taking out his Clothes and things a Photo Falls on the Floor, He Picks it Up and Looks at it .. After picking the Photo up it seems it is none other than Nupur's ...
He Looks at it and smiles, He then Starts talk ..

Aaj Bhi Main Mere Dil Ki Baat Tumhe Kehnahiin Saka, Yahii Ke Main Tumse Pyaar Karta Hu, Pehle Naazar Main Hi Mein Tumhara Dewaana Bangaya .. Paar Pata Nahiin Kya Is Pyaar Ko Milega Uska Manjil ..

He then Smiles again and Hides the Photo and Puts inside a Pocket of His Shirt and puts it inside His Cupboard ...
He Puts the other stuff on it's right Place...

Heer Comes inside her Bedroom, She Jumps on the Bed and Grabs a Pillow, She Closes her eyes,
She Sees Prem, She Opens her eyes *shocked expressions*

Prem ?? She Asks herself ! Ye Mujhe Kya Horaha Hai, Har Jaga Muhe Prem Nazaar Aata Hai,
She then Gets Up from her Bed and Goes near her window,She Opens the Window and lets the Wind In, She closes her eyes and Feels the Wind But yet Prem Still appears in her Thoughts, She opens her eyes again, Kya Mujhe ?? Nahiin, Aisa Nahiin Ho Sakta, Shayad Aise Hi... With a Confused Expression she Leaves from her Room and goes Downstair to Kitchen to help her Mum ..

At Nupur's House
Nupur Comes downstair after a Frehsing her self, She Sees her Mum going towards the Kitchen, She Calls her mum from behind

Nupur : Maa, Koi Help Chaiyee toh Mujhe Bolna Hai
Vaishanbi : Tik Haai, Waise Cha Chaiyee ??
Nupur with a Cute Xpression, Please Maa , She Smiles and then walks a bit and sits on the Sofa,
Her Mum goes inside the Kitchen,

Nupur Turns on the T.V, She turns on the Channel NDTV Imagine the Show Kitani Mohabbat Hai is Currently Airing , She Smiles and starts to Watch it, She is Watching it , the title Song is being Played, Her Mum Runs from the Kitchen to the Main room bringing a cup of tea with her,She sits down the Sofa, But she did not hand over the Cup of Tea to Nupur Instead She started drinking it, She Is not looking anything else, She staring at the T.V, she is in Deep Watching .. Nupur is looking at her Mum, She is observing How her mother is Crazy for this Show ... 😆😆

The show is on advertisement Break, Vaishnabi Looks at Nupur and Asks her what's wrong ?
Nupur : Where is My Tea ?? *smiles*
Vaishnabi : Hey Bhagwan, She Looks down and See the Cup is in her Hand and she already drank the Tea, The both Mother and Daughter Haves a Laugh,

Nupur: Maa Mujhe Pata Nahiin Tha Jo Aap Is Show Ke Liye Itna Deewani Hai ?
Vaishnabi : Haa, Yeh Show Bohot Achaa Hai Aur Bandini Bhi, Mein Kabhi Miss Nahiin Karti .. 😆

Vaishnabi Goes back to kitchen, Nupur gets the Phone and Starts to Press the Numbers, She Types in Heer's Landline Number,

OtherSide At Prem's House

Prem Comes in, See his Mum is cleaning and etc, He Secretly tries to go Upstair Without letting his Mum Knows that he has Arrived, He Slowly without making a Sound he walks .. He is Just about to Step on the Stairs so he can go Upstair but His Mum Realises he has Arrived,

Gayatri : Aaga Tu Prem ??
Prem : *Confused Expression* Haa Maa , Maa Tumhe Humesha Kaise Pata Chal Jata Hai Main Agaya Hoon
Gayatri : Pata Chal Jata Hai *Smiles*, Waise College Kaisa Tha,
Prem : Achaa, Poora Deen Kunal Ke Saath Bitaya,
Gayatri : Achaa, Hungry ??
Prem : Nahiin, He is just about to Turn around His Sister Shubha Comes running to him,
Shubha : Bhaiya , Bhaiya, Bhaiya ! She Hugs Him ..
Prem : Shubha *smiles* Tu Kaab Aaya, Papa Kaha Haiin ??
Shubha : PAPA Office Chalegaye .. Baas Tori Der Pehle Ayee
Prem : Chacha,Chachi Woh Saab ??
Shubha : Kaal Ayenge Wo Saab .. *smiles*

Gayatri Smiles, Then she Walks away and goes to the Kitchen ..
Prem and Shubha Sits on Sofa, Their Mother Brings them Tea, For all of them Including Gayatri Herself, They all Starts to Discuss,

Back at Heer's House
Heer Comes downstair and Walks inside the Kitchen, Her Mum Parvati is cooking,
Parvati Notices Heer's Confusion, Therefore she asks her if something is wrong,

Parvati : Heer, Kuch Pareshaan Lagrahi Hai Tu ?? Kyaa Baat Hai Betaa ??
Heer : Kucch Nahiin Maa, Baas Aise Hi College Ko Lekaar Kuch Worried Hoon ?
Parvati : Aisa Kya Hua College Main ??
Heer : Nothing Special Just a Preparation for the Valentine's Special ..
Parvati : Baas Don't Worry *smiles*

Heer is Just about to Leave she turns back to her Mum and Asks her,
Heer : Maa Mujhe Kuch Puch Na Hain Aap Se,
Parvati : Bol Betaa,

Heer : Agar Kiska Chehra Aap Ke Khayalon Mein Baar Baar Aaye Toh Iska Kya Maatlab Hai ?
Parvati : Aap Use Pasand Karne Lage Ho, Kyun ??
Heer: Aise Hi, Ek Newspaper Mein Para Tha, It was On Some Start of Something ..
Heer Leaves from the Kitchen whilst Holding a Cup of tea on her Hand, She starts too Think,
Kya Main Saach Mein Prem Ko Pasand Karne Lagi Hoon ? She is very Confused with this Situation,
Mayank Comes Downstair, He Notices Heer Lost in her thoughts, He then Plays a Prank on her, He gets a Toy Mouse, Which is Like a Rubber Mouse, He Places it on the Dinning table which Heer is Standing Next to, He Screams Mouse ! Mouse ! Mouse !, Heer Puts her Cup on the Dinning Table and Screams and then She runs near the Sofa, Mayank Smiles,
Heer : Tu Haas Kyun Raha Hain ??
Mayank : Yaha Ayee, She comes
Mayank Points out the Mouse is a Rubber Mouse a Fake one, Heer is annoyed, She Starts to Hit him with the Newspaper,

Mayank : Di, Mujhe Lag Raha Hai,
Heer : Lag Na Chahiyee, Humesha Meri Saath koi Na Koi Mazaak ! *Annoyed*
Then both of them Starts to Smile, Heer Pulls Mayank's Ear,
Mayank : Sorry Di, Maaf Kar Do No *Cute Expression*
Heer : Naahiin, Aaaj Nahiin ..

Then Heer Starts to Smile and then Says, Aagli Baar Agaar Aisa Kya Toh Mein Tujhe Chorne Waali Nahiin Hoon, Yaad Rakhna, Jaan Maaf Kya,

Mayank : Thank You Di, Waise Nupur Kaha Hain, Aaj Bhootni Nahiin Ayee
Heer : Tune Meri Dost Ko Bhootni Kaha ??
Mayank : Haa, Waise Saach Kehraha Hoon Main, Woh Bhootni Jaise Hi Lagti Hai
Heer : Kya ?? *Angry* Heer is just about to Hit Mayank Again, He Runs, He Runs towards the Door at that Moment, Nupur Comes In, They Both Bumps into each other and Nupur Falls in Mayank's Arm, They Both Stares at each other, Heer is shocked , She runs towards them and Sees Nupur,Mayank, They both comes to Reality, Mayank Smiles and Let go of Nupur,

Nupur : Owww, Mayank ?? *Pain*
Heer Gives Slaps him on His Hand and Says, Aisa Kyun Kya ??
Mayank : Waise Yeh Ek Number Ki Motti Hai Isliye , My hands are Paining a lot Now,
Oww he leaves ...
Heer Helps Nupur Getting Up, Nupur *sad*
Heer Tumhara Yeh Bhai Naa, Naa Jane Kaab Kya Karta Hai .. Hmmm

To Be Continued ...
Hope you all Like it,
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Posted: 16 years ago
#26

OMG!! i like ur ff!!!!!!!!

it is soooooo cute and completely different!!!!!and yrss!!!! the mayank falling in nupur's arms totally cracked me up😆u rock at writing!!!!!!omg omg omg!!!!!!
plz plzz plzzzzz continue soon and do long parts or the way u updated now!😊
i cant wait for mayur love to happen!!!!!! plzz continue soon!!!!!
xx zoe xx
Edited by cute mayur - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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it was really gud yaar.........loved it Imran
mayank's entry was dhaansu......first time the reverse happening......wow
it was gr8..fabulous ....loved it
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Posted: 16 years ago
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IMRAN!!!!!! WHEN WILL YOU UPDATE NEXT!!!!!!!
I WANT TO READ THE NEXT PART RIGHT NOW!!!!lol
i am going crazy after ur ff!!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: cute mayur

IMRAN!!!!!! WHEN WILL YOU UPDATE NEXT!!!!!!!

I WANT TO READ THE NEXT PART RIGHT NOW!!!!lol
i am going crazy after ur ff!!!!!!



Day After 2moro, For sure ..
Sorry You have to wait One More Day, then I will Update Soon x
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Imran94



Day After 2moro, For sure ..
Sorry You have to wait One More Day, then I will Update Soon x

ohhh nooo😭
i am sad now but u still take ur time and write then....
i totally understand.😊

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