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Pyaar Ka Safar - Ek Rasta Aisa

Hey Guyz This Is Imran Me and My Production
Mohabbat Productions
Finally I got an Time to Write an FF For the Jodi Premeer & Mayur
So Hopefully You all Will Like it
It's a Love Story. And it is Titled Pyaar Ka Safar - Ek Rasta Aisa
Please Support me throughout the Journey of this FF,
Please Give me Your Point of Views
Wether it's Bad or Good Tell me
I need Bad Comments for Improvement and Good for Encouragement
if I don't get enough Comments/Views/Feed back's
I will be Forced Wrap the FF Up
So Please Do Support me

I Will Update Every Weekend Most of the Time,
Because I have School

Concept :

"Pyaar Ka Safar - Ek Rasta Aisa seeks to build the concept of love within the traditional setting of an love. It creates a quintessential contrast to the world around us where Love once considered sacrosanct in our society, are losing their sanctity and turning into relationships of convenience.
In this Story it Focuses on two Couple, Mayank & Nupur and Prem and Heer
In this story, Prem and Heer are two people both who believes in Love a lot,
They Both Meet in a College, Falls in Love and Nothing Comes in Between them
Later On they Get Married, This where Heer Faces Troubles in Her Marriage life

Here Nupur is a Very Lively Person, Out going and etc,
She looks towards to the Life in a Different Way, a Positive way, She is not bothered about the Past neither about the Future, She Lives in Present,
With Exact attitude she Meets Mayank, Heer's Brother
They both Knows each other since Childhood and doesnt Get along,
But when They grow Up, Mayank Starts Loving Her,
When they Confess, They Start A New Relationship,
Relationship of Marriage,

Throughout the story you will see comedy,Love,Romance, Emotions between Prem and Heer
and Between Mayank and Nupur


But Nowadays in this generations After Marriage does the love still exists?
this where the couple Experiences their Love Before and after marriage...

The story starts with Nupur Entering Heer's House!

For the Start The Story Focuses on Heer and Prem Most But Mayur is Given the Same Track As Premeer.

Title Montage will be Edited Soon with the Both of the Couple ..

Update Links :
Will be Updated Time to Time


Thank you
Imran & Mohabbat Productions

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Character Sketch :

Heer Sharma - Main Lead



Nupur Khandelwal : Heer's Best Friend , Second Lead




Parvati Sharma : Heer's Mother




Rishab Sharma : Heer's Father



Mayank Sharma : Heer's Brother - Second Lead





Shahid Khandelwal : Nupur's Brother





Vaishnabi Khandelwal - Nupur's Mum



Prem Garewal - Main Lead



Shubha Garewal : Preem's Sister



Manpreet Garewal - Prem's Brother Small



Note : Prem's Parents Will Stay The Same ..
As the Story Develops, Other Characters Introduction will be Done

Thank you
Edited by Imran94 - 16 years ago
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Part 1/Episode 1



It Is Now 10 am in Udaipur, the Sharma's are Having Breakfast, Only Rishab and Parvati eating
Nupur Heer's Best friend comes in and then shouts Heer, Heer Heer, then Parvati gets Up and then Tells Nupur, Betaa Woh toh College Ki Liye already chali Gayi, Aaj 8 Baje Chali Gayi,

Nupur : Kya Itni Jaldi, Woh bhala Kyun ? Hmm ?
Parvati : Mujhe Nahiin Pata, Woh Keh Rahi thi Ke Aaj Kuch Important Kaam Hai Isliye Jaldi Ja Rahi Hai..
Nupur : Aaj Toh Mein use Chor Ne Wali Nahiin Hoon ? *Angry*
Parvati : Tik Hai, Kuch Khayegi, Mein Aur teri Uncle Breakfast Kar Rahe Hai, Chal Tu Bhi Kuch Khale..
Nupur : Nahiin Aunty, Mujhe College Ke Liye Late Ho Rahi Hai, Kabhie Aur Haa ?
Parvati : Theek Hai Betaa, Samhal Kar Jana..
Nupur : Theek Hai Aunty,

Parvati Smiles and Says Paagal Ladki and then turns around goes back to Dining Table.

At College : -

In College Everything seems really Busy, the Lectures are about to start
Nupur Reaches at college, She looks for Heer Starightway ..
But heer is no where to be seen... Nupur goes forward to a Class Room, As she walks she asks Her Class Mate if they have seen Heer, Two of them says No we have not Yet Seen her..
Nupur Walks forward and Ask another two Girl, Tum Dono Ne Heer Ko Dekha,
They Replies - Haan Woh Mandir Mein Hai, Abhi Gayi Hai ..
Nupur : Thank you ... Nupur Walks Faster

She Reaches College Mandir, Pooja is going on then lot of People are seen but Nupur is finiding it difficult to Find Heer, Therefore she enters the Mandir and walks inside the Mandir Looking for Heer, She asks the Students if they hav seen Heer as she walks in...

Then She gets Tired and Stops at the Middle of the Mandir and then she joins her hand together and starts to Pray and she says This " Hey Bhagwan, Please Heer Ko Bhejdona , Please Mein Use Dhoonte Dhoonte Thak Gayie Hoon" Then the Pooja is Finished and Then Nupur is about to Turn back and then a Girl turns back after putting the Veneration Plate on tool, And then Nupur Says, Use Mein Class Mein Dekhlungi, Mujhe Kitna Nachaya, Mein Agar Use Nahiin Nachaya Mera Naam Bhi Nupur Khandelwal Nahiin.... hmmmphh
Then another Girls Shout Heer, Nupur - Heer ?? She turns back and Sees Heer ...
Heer Smiles and Waves Hi to Nupur .. And then Nupur Takes a Breath and Puts her hand on her Waist and says, Yahaan Hain Maharani ... Heer Runs up to her and Hugz Nupur ..
Nupur, Mein Nahiin Bat Karne wali Hoon Teri Saath .. Hmmphh ..
Heer : Aab Mein Ne Kya Kiya Bhen-jII ??
Nupur : Kya Kiya ?? Okaii - Pehli Toh Mujhe bina bataye College Chali Aye aur Call bhi Nahiin Kiya, Aur Mein Teri Ghar, Poora College Chakara Dekar Yeha Akaar Pochi, Ek Call Bhi Nahiin ??

Heer : Sorry Baba, Mein Na Bhool Gayi, *she Pulls her Ears*
Nupur : theek Hai, naatak Mat Kar *angry Expression*
Heer : Tujhe Toh Pata Hain Naa, Mein Har Mangal War Mandir Ati Hoon..
Nupur : Haa ?? Sorry Yaar Mein Bhool Gayi, Khama Ka Naraaz Ho Gayi Teri Upaar..
Heer : It's Okaii Yaar, ... Meri Sabse Favourite Month Hai, Celebrations toh Ho Ga ..
Nupur : Aww Haa, Februrary, Love Ka Month, Friendship Ka Month,
Heer : Haa Pyaar - Tujhe Toh Pata Hain Naa, Mein Pyaar Pe Andha Bishwash Bhi Karti Hoon
Pyaar hi toh Hota Hai Jo Hume Aise Raste Pe Le Chalti Hai, Ek Safar Jo Kabhie Na Socha Hoga Yeha Dekha Hoga, Pyaar Ke Liye, Do Insaan Kuch Bhi Karne Ke Liye Tayaar Ho Jate Hai Naa ?
She looks at a Couple who are romancing on the front of the College, Who too are Students and then Heer Points them Out too Nupur, She Says, Woh Dekh, Woh Dono shayad Is Waqt Apne Ane Jane Wale Ki, Koi Khabhar Bhi Nahiin Honge Shahed, Jab Pyaar Hote Hain, Duniya Alaag Si Lagti Hai ..
Mein Nahiin Janti Mujhe Kaisa Premi Milega, Aur Meraa Dil Kisi Chahega, Isliye toh Mein Haar Mangwal Yeha Akaar Bhagwan Se Yahi Chahti Hoon, Mujhe Koi Aisa Mile, Jo Mujhe Janaam Janaam Tak Apne Saath Rakhe, Take Mein Keh Sakti Hoon Pyaar Ka Safar - Ek Aisa Rasta Jo Janmo Ke Liye Bante hai,

Nupur : Heer Wakayeeme Aaj Tumne bhi Mujhe Pyaar ko Dusri Naaraz Mein Dekhne Ke Liye El Reason De Di, Pyaar Hote Hai Asa Jo Duniya Ko Duniya Nahiin Suwaarg bana Deta Hai ..
Heer And Nupur then Turns back towards Durga Maa, and then Both of then holds and Folds hands together and Worships Durgaa Maa, and Then the Bell Goes and Then Both of them Leaves from Mandir and then,
A Flower from Durgaa Maa's Hand Falls at the Veneration Plate Which was Brought by Heer ..


To Bo Continued ...
Please Keep in Mind, Hindi is Not My First Language
Sorry any Mistake
Hope you all Like it..
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey Imran.............remember me!!!!!..i thnk we met in paradise/..
i cant trust my memory though.!!!!!...hahahaaaa
awesum yaar too gud.......loved the begining ..it was bombastic....do continue soon
it will be gr8 to read abt my two fav. jodi together.but plz inc. mayur track too
continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Update 2/Episode 2

Heer and Nupur leaves the Mandir and heads towards the Class, The bell has gone they are 2 mins away from their class, Nupur is worried and therefore asks Heer, Are Yaar jaldi karna, Class ke Liye Der Ho rahi Hain..
Heer : Haa Meri Maa, Jaldi Chaal, They both reaches the class and then sees the teacher has not Yet arrived yet and takes a long deep breath, Nupur notices the Principal and then Pushes heer and herself inside the class room and Heer, Nupur Kya Kar Rahi Hai Tu,
Nupur : Principal , Is coming towards this class now shut up and sit down ..
Heer : Kya ??
Nupur : Haa Meri Maa, Sit Down .. They both sits and then Principal Arrives, and enters the class room.

Principal is a Lady, Her name is Rajshri Khandelwal ... She is the Head of the College everyone calls Her RK Ma'am



She enters, Everyone is Sat and Quiet..Then she starts to Speak.
Good Morning Everybody
Everyone Else Replies and Says Good Morning to you too RK Ma'am
RK : I have come here to inform you all that. You Teacher Mr.Bhattarcharya is off today because of His illness and I will be taking Up your class today.

She asks someone on the latest topic they are taking on the class, She Points out Nupur and asks her, what is the latest topic they are taking, she Gives her all the information
Then she turns back and then starts to write on the Board with a Chalk ..
After a Few Minutes, Rajshri Recieves a Text Message, She looks at it and then says .. Hey Bhagwan Mein toh bhool hi gaye .. Then she looks around the class and then she sees Heer .. and then calls her name out and says, Heer Beta, Can you Please do me a Favour ??
Heer : Yeah Sure Ma'am
R'K - Woh Kya Hena ke Aaj Yeha Ek Naya Student Araha Hai, Isi Class Mein Join Karega aur woh mein Usse lene Ke Liye Janewali thi, Toh Aab Mein Class Chorkar to nahiin Jasakta Na, Kya Tum ??
Heer : Sure Ma'am .. I Will go get him
Heer Leaves the Class and then R'K again says to herself, Hey Bhagwan Mein phir se bhool gayi, Mein heer ko toh Prem naam toh batana tha .. uff ... She then sits down in stress

Heer comes near the Reception and waits for a while, she looks around, She waits for like 5 Mins and then ask the Reception lady,
Excuse Me - Did anyone name .... Then she realises and says to herself, Ma'am Ne toh Mujhe Uska Naam Nahiin Bataya, Aab Mein Kya Karoo .. Then the Reception Lady asks her, Are you alright ??
Heer : Yes I am Fine

Heer then Decides to Go back to class, as she doesnt know the Name or ever saw his Face .
She is about to walk but the floor is Wet and there is No Sign ... She is about to Fall and She Screams !
But suddenly Someone stops her from falling and Heer Ends Up in Someone's Arm, Her Eyes are Closed, The Person who is Holding her is a Guy.. He Says, It's Okaii, I got you ! Heer then Slowly Opens her Eyes and Sees Prem Smiling, Prem and Heer's Stares at Each Other, Prem Looks at Heers Eyes and Heer Looks back, they both smiles and Suddenly it gets All Windy and the Windows around the College Opens and it gets all Windy, Heers Hair Moves here to there ... Suddnely the Bells goes on and Both comes back to reality, Heer shys and smiles and then she turns back to Prem and Says Thank you, Prem Replies, Your Welcome ..
Heer : I Must Leave Now, She says ... She is about walk forward her Dupatta Is Stuck in his Watch, She turns back and then he too tries to take it off , They both struggles and Finally They take it off,
Heer then Turns back and Prem stops her saying Xcuse Me ?? Heer Turns Back and says Jii
Kya Aap Mujhe, Principal Ke Office Mein Lekar Chalenge ??
Heer : Of Course, Meri Saath Chaliye ..

They both walks together .. Prem then Asks heer, as they both dnt Know each other
Prem : If you Don't Mind Me Asking, Aap Ka Naam Kya Hai ??
Heer : My Name is Heer ..
Prem : Heer, Acha Naam Hai
Heer : Aap Ka ??
Prem : Prem
Heer : Prem !! Unique Ha, Prem Ka Dusra Naam Pyaar !

They both keeps walking and Chats. Prem Realises that Heer is taking him to A Class room where he wanted to go to Principal's Office .. He then stops and Heer Turns back and asks him, What happend ??
Prem : Your taking me to a Classroom
Heer : Yes Because R'K madam Is taking the Class today ..
Prem : RK ??
Heer : The Principal ..
Prem : Oh Okaii ...
Then both of them Walks and Enters the Class Room ...

Then Rajshri Looks and Smiles and Says, Prem, You've Arrived, Thank God ! Then she is confused and looks at Heer and Asks her, I dint Tell you Prem's Name then how did you Find Him ??

Heer : Woh Actually Ma'am, Mein Girne Wali thi, Floor Wet thi, So Prem Usi Wqat Akaar Mujhe Girnese Bacha Liya ...

Rajshri : Okaii, Acha Hua, Unknowingly Hi Sahi, You actually Brought Him Here,
Heer : Ma'am Aab Mein ??
Rajshri : Sure, Thanks Once Again Heer
Heer : It's Okaii Ma'am

Then Heer sits down, Nupur Says to heer, Ladka Handsome hain Na, Pehli Mulaqaat Mein Hai Baho Mein,
Heer : Shut Up ! Ma'am is about to Speak,
Nupurs Grins and Heer Shys .. 😳😳

Rajshri Then Introduces Prem to Everyone ...
The Class bell is gone and they have to go for next lesson, Prem is confused and Therefore Heer asks him if he is unsure about anything, Prem Replies, I dnt Know where Biology Class is
Heer : Come Along with me, I have Biology Class too, Nupur Smiles and Comes forward and Says
Hello Ji-- My Name is Nupur, Nupur Khandelwal ..Nice to meet you Jii
Prem : Hey nupur Nice to Meet you Too.... Kaise Hoo ?? College Enjoying ??
Nupur : Nahiin, College Ek Dam Boring Hai,
Prem : Don't Say that .. College is cool, this is where Youngsters Like us Can Chill ..
nupur: Kya Baat Hai, Tum toh Cool Dude Nikle ..

Heer : Nupur tu Bhi Naa Bak Bak Karti Rehti Hai
prem : Koi Baat Nahiin, Mein Bhi Kuch Jada Bolta Hoon .. Prem Asks Nupur, Friends ?? And Forwards His hands towards her and then Nupur Says, Friends and Shakes Hand with him and She Smiles, Both Looks at Heer, She responses What ?? Kya ?? Nupur Points at the Hand Shake ..
Heer : Ohh, Teek Hai, Friends They smiles, Nupur and Prem Walks faster than Heer .. and Goes forward and Heer Slows Down ...
Heer thinks, Kaisa Insaan Hai, Aaj Hi Aya aur Aaj Hi Dosti Ka Rishta Jod Liya... Duniya Mein Naa Jane Kaise Kaise Log Hote Hai .. She smiles and Goes forward ..

They Reach Biology Class, ......


To Be Continued ...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: ruchimayur

hey Imran.............remember me!!!!!..i thnk we met in paradise/..

i cant trust my memory though.!!!!!...hahahaaaa
awesum yaar too gud.......loved the begining ..it was bombastic....do continue soon
it will be gr8 to read abt my two fav. jodi together.but plz inc. mayur track too
continue soon



Hey, Yes I remember Your ID but not Name lol 😆😆
Yeah Paradise it was, You should trust Your Memory because it is Good 😉

Aww, I am Glad You Like the Begining, More Update is Done I will be Adding them Shortly ..
Wow These two are Your Favorite ?? Cool ..
Mayur Track is Given more Importance lol, You will find out soon
Sure, I will continue as Much as Possible ..

Regards
Imran
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Posted: 16 years ago
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2 parts back to back/................kya baat hai yaar?
awesum yaar
loved prem's entry.....always in style
hey is RK...nup's relative...........coz of common sirnames....lol
gr8.........nxt update.plz pm me
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Imran94



Hey, Yes I remember Your ID but not Name lol 😆😆
Yeah Paradise it was, You should trust Your Memory because it is Good 😉

Aww, I am Glad You Like the Begining, More Update is Done I will be Adding them Shortly ..
Wow These two are Your Favorite ?? Cool ..
Mayur Track is Given more Importance lol, You will find out soon
Sure, I will continue as Much as Possible ..

Regards
Imran

u forgot my name?????????????😲......itna bada gunaah........😆😆
Ruchi..
ya they are my fav. couple tooo........too cute yaar
jst like a cherry on cake...........hahahaaa
gr8......will be waiting😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: ruchimayur

2 parts back to back/................kya baat hai yaar?

awesum yaar
loved prem's entry.....always in style
hey is RK...nup's relative...........coz of common sirnames....lol
gr8.........nxt update.plz pm me



They are More Updates Done, I will be Posting them Soon ..
Ryt Now Busy with something else lol, I have soo Many FF's goin on with Other forums ..
So I have to entertain people Nah 😆😆

Oh Cool,lol Yup My Jiju Is Very Stylish ..
Hehe ...
Nope R.K is Not Related Just Same Surnames ..
Sure, Will Add You on the PM List ..

Thanks for being the First Reader of My FF, Makes you Special lol 😳😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thanx ............i am touched jaani

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