MY INTERPRETATION OF A FAIRYTALE-UPDT-PG 99-3/3/10 - Page 4

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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow lovely poem! u made me cry. I jst luv armaan's character. Hw can sumone be so selfless? i luv the way u describe ridzy's feelings. and btw ur dialogues are just 2 gud. bt plz dnt separate them. continue soon and ya write longer parts. pleeeeeeeease.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey dmg fanatic.i really likead ur style of wrtng alot.its awsome nd ll b waitng 2 c da next part..son...nd wsh u a vry happy holi.........
-luv anu
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Posted: 16 years ago
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HEY TOMORROW IS HOI SO I MAY NOT BE ABE TO UPDATE SO I WROTE A LONGER PART AND AM UPDATING IT NOW

PART 6

Part 6

She was lost in her thoughts till the extent that she did not even hear her mom's voice calling her. She kept crying until when muskaa entered the room to call her because others were all very busy in attending the guests. Muskaan who knew little about all that was taking place because the gupta family wanted to be a bit too personal was shocked to see the show stopper of the day crying her heart out on the grief of she doesn't know what

Muskaan: kya hua ridzi? Tu ro kyun rahi hai?

Ridhima: kuch nahi muskaan I just wasn't feeling too well

Muskaan: oye tu is shaadi se khush nahi hai kya?

Ridhima: ek baat puchun muskaan?

Muskaan: ridzi tu ek nahi do baat puch lekin roti kyun hai?

Ridhima: muskaan tumhe rahul se pyaar kaise hua aur tum kitna pyaar karti hai?

Muskaan: ridzi is samay ye question ?

Ridhima: muskaan tune kaha tha ki tu sach batayegi

Muskaan: ridzi keh to aise rahi ho jaise kabhi bataya na ho ye to main tujhe fursat se baith ke bataungi

Ridhima: muskaan main abhi jaana chahati hun

Muskaan: ridhima dekh main aur rahul jabse mile the tabhi se ek dusre se itna ladte the ki ek dusre ke saamne aa jaayen tabhi sabko ye darr satata tha ki kahin hum ek dusre ka khun na kar dein (muskaan slightly smiled and was lost in her own words there were flashes of their past in front of her eyes) main use kankhajoora bulati thi. Usse itni nafrat karti thi kiram ki ravana ke liya nafrat phiki par jaaye uske saamne. Phir hum saath mein sanjeevani mein interns ban ke aaye uske aage to tumne dekha hi hai. Halke halke mujhe uski logical baatein aur usse mere nakhron mein sense dikhne laga. Ek din vo nahi hota to jaan nikal jaati. Lagta tha kisse ladoon, kisse dil ki baat kahun, aur kaun mujhe aakar chede (tears sweeled in her eyes) lekin by the time humne apni feelings realize ki bahut der ho chuki thi,pehle hum pyaar se bhaag rahe the aur phir pyaar humse. Rahul ko jaana pada aur main bhi tanha ho gayi lekin phir vo kankhajura ek din bina bataye hi chala aaya, tabse maine usse jaise dor se baandh liya ho, apne se door jaane hi nahi deti, ise mera pyaar keh le ya darr, aur aaj dekh hum apne chote se parivaar mein kitne khush hain, rahul main aur (she blushed and slightly caressed here stomach which looked like an inflated baloon as she was 5 months pregnant.

Finally a smile played on ridhima's lips but went unnoticed by muskaan

Muskaan: acha chod tu bata tu kyun puch rahi thi , kahin tune bhi to kahin dil vil nahin laga liya(she slightly shrugged ridhima's shoulder and ridhima went all red not because of blushing but in pain)

Ridhima: muskaan chod na

Muskaan: ridzi ab main vo purani vaali muskaan nahi rahi jo teri baat palatna na samjhe chal bol

Ridhima first said to herself:ab ye ridhima bhi pehle vali ridhima nahi rahi

Then to muskaan: nahi muskaan aisa kuch nahi hai

Muskaan :ridzi tu is shaadi se khush nahi hai na?

(muskaan said this not questioningly but with seriousness in her tone)

Ridhima looked up alarmed as if caught red handed

Muskaan: arrey tu aise dar kyun gayi main to mazaak kar rahi thi main jaanti hun ki tu sahil se bahut khush

Ridhima inspite of herself nodded in a yes

Muskaan: dekh baaton baaton mein main ye bataana bhul hi gayi ki ladke vaale aa chuke hai jaldi chal

Just then a man who was eavesdropping them since the time they were talking came to break the seriousness

Man: muskaan yaar tujhse chota sa kaam nahi hota hai tu itni der se ridz ko niche nahi laa paayi

Muskaan: rahul tu bhi naa aate hi gala phad phad ke dahadna shuru kar diya kuch to sharam kar baap banne vaala hai

(muskaan realized what she just said and bit her lower lip and blushed rahul was lost in her)

Ridhima: vo rahul main tayyar ho rahi thi . I am sorry maine tumhe muskaan se itni der dur rakha

(she said in a teasing tone but was not her jovial self anyway the good point was she smiled throughout the incident, she didn't know why but seeing this couple makes her feel that there is a lot of resemblance of her and armaan in them)

Muskaan blushed a bit and then continued: chal ridhima ye to yahi duniya se anjaan khada rahega.

Returning to her serious self ridhima got up did the last touch ups to her make up when finally a question entangled her mind. Finally she decided to seek the answer

Ridhima:muskaan niche kaun kaun aaya hai

Muskaan: niche kaun kaun aaya hai se kya matlab saahil aaya hai tu tension mat le

Ridhima: muskaan please

Muskaan : ridhima kaun kaun se kya matlab yaar humara intern gang hai i mean atul anji main rahul ,dr keerti, dr shubhankar, dr shashank, padma aunty, nani aur saahil kekuch relatives

Ridhima: aur armaan ?

Muskaan ; ridhima hum jaante hain ki vo tera best friend hailekin yaar vo nahi aa paaya vo kya hai na usse kasauli jaana pad gaya bi ki tabiyat achanak kharaab ho gayi

Ridhima knew he lied to them

Muskaan: humne usse kaha bhi ki function ki zimmedaari hum sab interns ko mili hai lekin tune apni seniors ki daant tak kha ke tayyari mein koi kasar nahi chodi aur ab tu ridzi ko wish kiye bina hi chala jaayega usne kaha ki uska is duniya mein bi ke alava koi nahi hai so usse jaana hoga

Another tear trickled down her eye yet she wiped it and left with muskaan leaving rahul behind

Rahul muttered to himself: kyun apne aap ko aur usko itni badi saza de rahi ho ridhima,

Vo nahi jee paayega, aaj to hum sab se jhooth bol kar apne aap ko akele sambhal raha hai kyunki vo jaanta hai ki uski ridhima uska dukh samajhti hai lekin ghut jaayega vo, ridhima main jaanta hun ki usne hi aapse mana kiya hai ki vo aapko bhaga kar nahi le jaayega lekin vo isliyakyunki vo nahi chahta ki aap itne saare rishte khoye. Uske pyaar mein to itna dum hai ki saare purane rishtey bhulakar vo aapko naye rangon mein lapet de lekin shayad use yeh darr hai ki kahin vo apne maa, baap aur behen ko na kho de

THAT WAS IT

I HOPE YOU PEOPE LIKE IT AND MORE THAN THAT I HOPE I AM IVING UPTO UR EXPECTATIONS PS REPY BECAUSE IT IS A BECAUSE OF THESE REPIES THAT I AM ENCOURAGED TO WRITE
HAPPY HOLI GUYS
ENJOY
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Posted: 16 years ago
#34
no kavya that was a really nice update
You are a fantastic writer
please make armaan-ridz meet soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#35

woooooooooooo

dat was an awesome part👏👏👏
u wrote it really well
thanks for da pm
update soon
sanaya😊😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#36
Kavya... that was fantastic dear... you are such a good writer.. continue soon with the next part... we would love to immerse ourselves in the different colours of your fabulous writing.. Happy Holi!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey that was really awesome.loved it.
thanx for the pm.
update soon plzz
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Posted: 16 years ago
#38
hey dear, that was a sad part. so armaan left huh, lets see if she can go through the engagement! continue soon!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#39
Hey
i just started reading ur ff
its GREAT u can eally wite well
can't wait to read more do conirnue
and a Happy Holi😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#40
armaan is shoooo cute!!!
loved the update
HAPPY HOLI!!!!!!!
~anjie

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