MY INTERPRETATION OF A FAIRYTALE-UPDT-PG 99-3/3/10 - Page 2

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Posted: 16 years ago
#11
Loved the part..
plz post a bit longer part..

thanx for the PM..

-Rucha

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Posted: 16 years ago
#12
Hey kavya... saw this one just now... u write so well dear.... keep going... count me in for the PM.. and please continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow that was a very good part👏.u wrote it well,the words and everything were soo good.shashank is getting her married for money??that 's very bad.
i hope he will understand and ridhima will be married to armaan.i hope ridhima will not try to die.continue soon....
Edited by sasya - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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HERE IS PART 3, I KNOW IT IS SHORT AND BORING BUT SORRY THIS IS ALL I COULD MANAGE SINCE MY EXAMS WERE ON
Episode 1
Part 3
Padma: tu kya keh rahi hai ridhima tu kya kar ke aayi hai sach sach bata.

Now it was time for her to confront her mom and sister who were sitting quiet throughout. She definitely was in no mood to fight with her parents but she knew that she had to be strong not for herself but for her love. She had to be strong for the person who changed the meaning of love. Love till now to the maximum meant crazinessfor a person but it was never modified in way it was modified by him. The way he made her people his was unimaginable. he tried to see a father in shashank and he seekeda mother in padma. What was more was anjali was treated like a sister as well as a kid whose demands were always fulfilled. He used to pamper her to this extent that often ridhima felt

Ridhima:maine kya kiya

Padma: ridhima sach sach bata tune koi galat kaam to nahi kiya hai

Ridhima: main to uski baahon ki panaahon mein doob jaati maa vo jo karna chahta karta main use na rokti lekin usne to mujhe chua bhi nahi lekin main hi apna zehen,apne jeene ka maksad apne marne ki vajah yahan tak ki ruh luta kar chali aayi

Padma:matlab

Anjali:ridz what do u mean

Ridhima:matlab ye ki main khud hi apni nahi rahi

Padma:par tujhe kaise pata ki vo tujhse itna pyaar karta hai

Ridhima:yahi to nahin pata ki vo mujhse kitna pyaar karta hai, kaash ye pata hota lekin hota bhi to kaiseuske pyaar ko to zameen se jannat tak ki duri bhi nahi naap sakti

Padma:ridhima tu…

Ridhima: maa main kuch nahin sunna chahti,kaash uski pyaar ki gehrai aap ko bhi samajh aati

Padma:par…

Ridhima: uske pyaar ke kitne intehaan logi maa, kya itne kaafi nahi the

Padma: ridhima mujhe kuch samajh nahi aa raha

Ridhima: vo mere liye apni khushiyan lutata ja raha hai lekin main to usko gham ki bhaith bhi theek se nahi de paa rahi lekin vo khushi khushi mere hisse ke aansoon pee raha hai isse bada intehaan mere hisaab se to kuch nahin

Padma:beta…

Ridhima:maa kya aap papa ke liye apni jaan de sakti hain

Padma:ye kya keh rahi hai tu

Ridhima :maa ye chodiye aap yeh bataiye ki god forbid par kabhi papa ko aapke liye jaan deni pade to kya vo khushi khushi denge

Padma : tu pagal ho gai hai kya

Padma was getting up

Ridhima : yaad rakhna ridhima is duniya mein ek aisa insaan bhi hai jo tumhari ek khushi ke liye apni marzi se apni jaan gava de. Tumahare liye nahi jiyunga to duniya ka sabse bada paap karunga varna mera bas chalta to tumhari inhi baahon mein aakhiri saans leke apne nasseb mein jannat likh leta. Tumhare liye marne se to bhagwan bhi mujhe nahi rok sakte kyunki vo khud hi tumhari hothon ki muskurahat lauta kar usme kho jana chahenge

Padma turned

Ridhima :ye kaha tha usne mujhse abhi aap kahengi ki vo mere liye theek nahi hai

Padma was left speechless

IT WOULD BE BETTER NEXT TIME I PROMISE I AM SRRY FOR THE DELAY N EXTREMELY SHORT PART PLS REPLY AND FEEL FREE TO CRITICIZE IF U DONT LIKE IT
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Nice update dont say its boring
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Posted: 16 years ago
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nice update👏👏👏
continue soon n pm me plz
sanaya😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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nice updates..plzzz PM me whnvr u update..
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey kavya...
fab part...loved it..thanks 4 the pm...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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NOTE
GUYS I WONT BE ABLE TO UPDATE TOMORROW OR MAY BE MORE SO I THOUGHT TO UPDATE ANOTHER PART TODAY I AM SO SORRY THAT IT IS A VERY SMALL ONE BUT I WASN'T ABLE TO WRITE ANYMORE
Edited by dmg_fanatic - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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GUYS HERE IS PART 4

Part 4

This confrontation led the others out of the room leaving ridhima alone. Crying to herself she slid down the bed railing and supported herself on the marble floor

She slowly held her knees with her mehendi adorned palms and looking at it she cried without a breathe.

Ridhima: armaan in haathon mein mehendi bhala hi kisi gair ke naam ki lagi holekin meri lakeerein bhi uska saath nahi de rahi kyunki vo bhi jaanti hai ki mere naseeb mein tumhaare siva koi nahi hai.

She sniffed a bit

Ridhima:in haathon mein mehendi to tumhaare naam ki hi rachegi chahe kuch bhi ho jaayekyunki meri ek ek rag mein behta khoon tumhaare ehsaas ko jaanta hai

She opened her palms

The mehendi applied had a beautiful design but the colour wasn't dark

She picked up the cone kept beside her and filled the little empty space in between with his name. She then wiped the name.

This name though rubbed off quickly had such a dark colour that the rest of the palm looked dull. The name armaan which was stuffed in this negligible space could now be easily read from a distance

Ridhima:itna pyyar kyun karte ho mujhse armaan kyun

She saw his reflection sitting beside her

Armaan:kyunki pyaar ki koi had nahi hoti basket, usko jitna dogi usse kahin jyaada tumhaare paas aa jaayega

A tear dropped from her eye

Armaan quickly brushed hislips against her cheek and sucked that tear

Armaan-agar kabhi khuda aapko galti se rullaye

Aur aapki palkon pe ak aansoo thehar jaaye

Sambhal kar rakhna use apni aankhon ki seep mein

Kya pata kal us aansoo ko koi khushiyon ka moti bana jaye

She raised her hand to caress his cheek but then she realizede that she was seeing dreams with open eyes

Ridhima: armaan main tumhe kaise samjhau ki ye aansoo khushi ke moti sirf tum bana sakte ho sirf tum, dekho tum to khuli aankhon mein bhi mere sapnon mein aa rahe ho

Again tears started leaving her eyesand she supported her weak body to get up and lie on the bed

SORRY I KNOW THIS IS NOT VERY SIGNIFICANT BUT THIS IS ALL I COULD WRITE

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