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Posted: 15 years ago
*reserved for the pending updates and the new one .... i will definitely add it up before your next update ..... definitely definitely ..... ari*
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Love_RM_MAYUR

AWESUM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! U rock yaar Mansi...u updated after sooooooooooo long......Bt u made my day!

Aww..thanks Apoorva!😃
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hey really nice ff about rahul muskaan plz add me to ur pm list

Thanks Sanju!:) Sure!😃
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Posted: 15 years ago

Aww mansi.. ur mood totally reflected in this part..😃 it was one of ur cutest update... loved it from d beginning to d end..

their convo on d stuck door reminded me of a RM scene, guess which.. 😉

"Rahul ye darwaze ko kya hua hai? Khul hi nahin raha?" She said pulling it.

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"Kya karenge? So jayenge aur kya?"

so it has to be my favorite in this update.. 😛 and candlelight dinner.. 😆

"Thank god Atul ko mujhse koi problem nahin hai..varna mere peeche bhi gunde laga deta..tumhare peeche aane ke liye.." so has he been following her? 😉

muskaan's morning routine is becoming a favorite of mine too.. 😍 finally she began to notice how much he cares abt her.. from dinner to their candle-light talk to calling sonia and radhika for her.. evident in every little gesture of him.. hope d awkwardness between them goes away soon..

waiting for d next part.. thnx for d PM.. 😳

Edited by rapi_c - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Muski_Aly

First of all, I'm glad u updated

Completely loved the part Mansi.😳 It was amazing as usual 👏

Sabse pehle toh I found Rahul's plan of being locked in the bedroom with Muskaan very very naughty😉 😉 😉 😉

Rahul calling her Barbie Doll was soooooooooooooo cuteeeeeeeeee.!!!!!!!😍 😍 😍 😍 😍 😍 😍 😍 😍.

And the way they stared at each other when Rahul said hes glad that Atul is his friend so he doesnt have to worry about wat wud happen to him agar woh Muski ke peeche pad gaya toh.😆

Also, i jus love the way Muskaan ends up sooooooo close to him in the mornings.😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Thanks a lot for the PM. 😊 And do update asap. Thanx.!!!

That was such a nice comment Aly so sweet..Thanku so much & Keep reading😃
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: muskaan_ankita

aww.. I am coming online after ages and I am so glad to see this part of yours... its so sweet really... awesome one mansi!! I am so proud of you!! 😊

Ankita!!! 😛 OMG! Missed you!! I jus PM'ed u by chance..and then u replied. Thanku so much sweetheart. That was really sweet😊 Love you,.😃
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Originally posted by: rapi_c

Aww mansi.. ur mood totally reflected in this part..😃 it was one of ur cutest update... loved it from d beginning to d end..

their convo on d stuck door reminded me of a RM scene, guess which.. 😉

"Rahul ye darwaze ko kya hua hai? Khul hi nahin raha?" She said pulling it.

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"Kya karenge? So jayenge aur kya?"

so it has to be my favorite in this update.. 😛 and candlelight dinner.. 😆

"Thank god Atul ko mujhse koi problem nahin hai..varna mere peeche bhi gunde laga deta..tumhare peeche aane ke liye.." so has he been following her? 😉

muskaan's morning routine is becoming a favorite of mine too.. 😍 finally she began to notice how much he cares abt her.. from dinner to their candle-light talk to calling sonia and radhika for her.. evident in every little gesture of him.. hope d awkwardness between them goes away soon..

waiting for d next part.. thnx for d PM.. 😳

So finally you commented Rapi! Phew!😆 Been waiting since ever..Thanks so muchhhh!! I hope you like the next chapter even more better...😃 And hey I replied to ur comment!😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
Maaansiiiiiiiiiiii firstly im Soooooooooooooooo Sorrrry for the late comment...Hope u r not mad at me?😛
k just catch up withit man it was sucha a Sweeet update Loved it.
Esp this line...
"Tum to already barbie doll lagti ho..phir kyun itni koshish?"
😍 😍 😍
Thanks alot for the PM Waiting for the next Part!....😳
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Posted: 15 years ago

IMPORTANT NOTE- Firstly thanku so much for the encouragement u guys have given me..This is a note to inform that..Radika and Sonia my two best friends whose name I added as Muskaan's friends..well Im changing Sonia back to Anjali..their characters are just the same..but im just changing the name..It just doesnt feel right..AA are too eternal😳 This is also due to some personal reasons. But Radhika will remain the same. Thank Youuuu😉

Re-Cap:-Rahul and Muskaan stood alone at the door. There was an awkward silence.
"Thanks Rahul..tumne mere liye itna kiya. Thanks a lot."

He crossed his arms , leaning back he faced her. "Ab to tum khush ho na?"

She smiled. "Bahut."

They wanted to say so much more to each other..but they were tongue-tied, unable to express their feelings.

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PART 13

Muskaan helped Anjali and Radhika unpack. They sat on the bed chatting about the minute things..the things that they always made a point to share with each other. Some
girlie talks started followed by giggles and hifies. Rahul and Atul gave them suspicious looks.

'Tum hamare baat kar rahe ho??' Atul asked entering inside with Rahul.

'Thats a secret baby..' Anjali replied with a wink.

'Muskaan pe to main bilkul trust nahin karta..but cmon Anjali , Radhika you guys are my friends also..batao na kya baat ho rahe hai?' Rahul asked in a sweet way sitting with them.


'Rahul you are a sweetheart..' Radhika exclaimed dreamily.

Muskaan shot her an angry stare while Anjali giggled. Radhika was a total romantic. A sweet gesture and she was gone....fallen in to that pit.

'Thank You. Ab ye batao tum 3 best-friends main kya baatien ho rahe hai?' Rahul said.

'Nothin ya..hume bhuk lagi thi..so we were just discussing break-fast.' Anjali said.

'Anjali agar tumhe bhuk lagi thi to mujhse kehte..bolo tum kya khaogi..main abhi tumhe le chalta hun..hum dono ek romantic break-fast karenege..' He said dreamily
blushing the Atul way.

'Abbe Oye koi kisi ko break-fast date pe le jata hai kya?' Rahul said rolling his eyes.

'Tum to chup hi karo..tum to kabhi mujhe lunch ya dinner date pe bhi nahin lekar gaye..Hmph!'Muskaan replied angrily getting up from there.

Atul Anjali and Radhika burst out laughing.

'Hello excuse me..Hum gaye nahin the uss raat dinner pe..tumne sara khana khatam kar diya..bechari baaki log bhuke reh gaye the..' Rahul said.

Again they all laughed.

'Hello..Excuse me Dr. Rahul.' She said sternly 'Date matlab ladka jab ladka ladki ko romantic treat deta hai..uss din bill maine diya tha..so shut upp.' She said opening the
secret.

'Woh..uss din ma..main apna wallet bhul gaya tha..big deal. Anyways ye zaroori nahin hai ke hamesha ladka hi bill pay karen..ladkiyan bhi itna khati hai..I mean sara
khalete aur behchare ladke bhukte uss ki wajah se? Batao Radhika.' Rahul said .

'Absolutely Rahul. Tum ne bilkul sahi kaha.' Joining him.

'Radhika!' Muskaan shot her a glare.

'And btw..bhul gaye kal raat ka candle-lite dinner?' Rahul asked with an evil smile as he went and stood in front of her face to face.

It was as if Muskaan lost all her confidence and looked down. 'Woh..woh..to..'

'Tum dono kal candle-lite dinner pe gaye the??' Anjali asked.

'Arre..tum dono aise kaise ja sakte ho..maine to..tum...' Atul answered.

Rahul cut him. 'Woh hamare secret hai.' he said stressing on secret to make Atul shut up.

'Oh..' Radhika smiled. 'Guys agar ye sab khatam huya to kya hum break-fast karlen? Im famished.'

'Sure Radhika..chalo tum mere saath..waise bhi hume yahan ko nahin samajhta.' Rahul put an arm around her and they walked out of the room together.

Muskaan was fuming. 'Mere dost ke saath milke..hi..gadha..ull da patha..man karta hai apne jooti leke sar pe mar dun..Anjali.....................' She stormed next to her.

Atul and Anjali were talking. 'Anjali aaj hum lunch pe bhar chalege please?'' He said with a cute smile.

'Anjali..ye Radhika Rahul ke saath kyun flirt kar rahe hai? Delhi main ladkon ki kami hai kya?' Muskaan replied angry.

'Arre Muskaan yaar..hume disturb mat kar..bhar jaana..' Atul said irritated.

Muskaan felt so hurt. Everyone was ditching her. She started her dramatic 'Muskaan' crying. 'Koi bhi mujhse pyaar nahin karta..' (sniffling) 'Nobody loves me!!' (Tears
starting) And she sat down on the bed.

'Muskaan..arre..Im sorry..tu ro mat. Please.' Atul said sitting next to her and patting her.

She pushed away his hand. 'Kisi ko mere parvah nahin hai..mummyji.......' (crying aloud)

'Ssssh Muskaan..itna zor se nahin..neeche tak sunaye dega..' Anjali said consoling her.

(Crying becoming louder) 'Bhaiya..dekho mujhe chup karane ki chinta nahin hai..neeche waalon ki chinta hai..Nobody loves me.' (crying)

'Anjali..tumne kya kaha mere behen se..very bad..ver..very ba..bad' He said stammering.

'Atul.....how dare you..I..I dont wanna speak to you.' She stormed off angrily. Atul slapped his for-head.

On the door Rahul and Radhika stood. 'Phir se chalu ho gaye drama queen..' Rahul mumbled.

'Heehee. I know..shes a perfect drama queen.' Radhika laughed and they hi-fied.

(Screaming) 'Dekho bahiya..yeh dono has rahe hai mujhpe.' (Pointing to Rahul n Radhika.) 'Everybody hates me!' (crying again) and hugging Atul.

'No..Muskaan..koi tumhe hate nahin karta..ab tum chup ho jao..please. Tumhe Anjali ke liye nashta banana tha na..jao banao..phir hum Anjali ko suprise denge..'

'Sach?'

'Pakka..ab jake muh dholo..'

'Bhaiya..ek aap hi hai..aur woh kaan khajura kahin hai main usse ek thapad mar ke aate hun pehle aap yahin ruko...' (Gearing up to give him a slap.)

Pulling her down. 'Abhi nahin Muskaan..pura din hai..baad main mar dena..please.' (begging)

'Okay bhaiya..jaise aap kahenge main waisa hi karungi..' Wiping her tears. ' Aap nashte main kya khayenge? Aloo de parathe?'

'Changa hai.' He smiled to her.

'Okay..main aapke liye abhi banati hun..' And she left for the kitchen.

In the kitchen-

Muskaan was searching for ingredients to make food, when Anjali came to her.

'Muskaan.' (Pulled her by her hand) 'Sorry baby..I was rude na.'

She remained quite.

'Im really sorry..please forgive me. ' She said smiling.

'Okay..Im sorry too..maine kuch zyada hi keh diya..' And they hugged.

Atul was relived to see this sight. He smiled at Anjali..but she frowned and left.

After Anjali went..Rahul came inside the kitchen. 'Oyye Ms. drama queen..please bhar jao..mujhe nashta banana hai.'

'Main bhi nashta hi bana rahe hun.'

'Koi zaroorat nahin hai..mujhe apna ghar jalana nahin hai.'

'Oyye..Apna muh na band rakh..janta nahin hai mujhe abhi tak..sikhni hun..sab kaam yun chutki main kar sakti hun..' clicking her fingers in front of him.

'Obviously..mera ghar to tum chutki baja ke jala sakte ho.' clicking his fingers and then going to the fridge.

'Rahul tere problem kya hai..tu bhar ja..aur uss..uss..Radhika ke saath flirt kar..tum sab ladke isi layak ho..loyalty to rahe nahin hai is duniya main..pata nahin ye duniya ke
saare ladke kab sudhrenege??? Babaji...' She said shouting.

'Tumhe koi problem hai kya Radhika se?? And one more thing..sirf ladke hi aise nahin karte..main to bahut si ladkiyon ko bhi jaanta ho. ' Rolling his eyes.

Banging a spoon on the table. 'Kiski baat kar raha tu??? Bata???' She replied angrily.

Closing his ears. 'Muskaan. Bas kar!!!'

'Rahul tujhe andaza bhi nahin ke mujhe tujhpe kitna gussa aa raha hai!!!"

'Gussa mujhe bhi aa sakta hai..' (louder tone)

'Mujhe koi paravh nahin..jo karna hai karle..darte nahin main..' she said while cooking her food.

'Haha.' Giving a sacarstic laugh. 'Shakal dekh aaine main..phir bol.' switching on the gas.

'Tujhse to bahut achi hai..bandar kahin ka..aab tu yahan se ja....varna gusse main na main..'

'Oyye ab tu had se aage bad rahe hai! Kya karlegi haan bata to sahi?' Moving closer.

She pushed him and started hitting him. 'Itna marungi..ke Sanjeevani ke bistaar main zindagi bhar pada rahega....Kamina.' Fuming angrily.

He caught both her hands in a tight grip. 'Muskaan mujhe ladna nahin hai.'

'Leken mujhe ladna hai..' She somehow tried to hit him.

'Musk-aaaaan' Holding her hands again. 'Ekdum jungli janwar hai tu..zoo main band kar dena chaiye tujhe to.'

'Band kare mere patiala ki shahi jutti.'

They started their hand fights..after minutes later, they smelt something burning..

'Kyun Rahul..ladaye har kar dil jal raha hai?'

Rahul looked around..'Dil nahin khana jal raha hai..Shit!' He ran to the gas.

'Haiyyo Rabba!! Mere parathe jal gayen....' She was about to start crying.

'Muskaan pleaseeeee...rona mat. Its ok.'

'What its okay..mere saare mehant waste kar di..i hate you!' She hit him a couple of times and went outside.

'God..ab hum kya karen?'

Rahul spoke to Atul , and he then went out to get something to eat.

Anjali and Radhika were sitting in Atul's room so Muskaan decided to go for a bath to reduce the heights of angriness that she had reached. She was looking down and
walking muttering to herself when she dashed Rahul. Her atta filled hands made a mark on Rahul's black t-shirt.

'Eeeyuck Muskaan..ye kya kiya tumne?'

But Muskaan found it rather funny and she started laughing.

'Gross. ' Looking at her laughing. 'What is so funny?' He asked sternly.

'Tum aur kaun..joker.'

'You clown'

'Bandar'

'Hathi'

Now Muskaan was damn irritated. 'Idiot.'

'Stupid' He said with equal anger.

'Fool'

'Bhootni' Her mouth was wide open.

Anjali came out hearing them fight. 'Rahul....!!'

'Tumhari himat kaise huye...tum...'

'Muskaan no galiyaan..you promised!' Anjali warned.

Muskaan was taking deep breaths. 'Beep beep beep' With that she slammed the door.

'What?' Rahul looked confused.

'Usse galiyan censored hai..dont worry.' Anjali laughed. 'She does this to reduce her anger.'

'Shes so wierd..chipkali kahin ki..' Rahul said just as Muskaan came out of the room to pick up a towel.

'Oops..' Anjali mumbled.

She gave him angry looks and again slammed the door.

'Tum dono roz aise hi ladte ho?' Radhika said coming out with all the noises.

'Naaa...aaj Muskaan kuch zyada hi khush hai..isliye itna josh aa gaya..' He chuckled.

'Rahul!' Anjali playfully hit him.

'Anjali i was thinking Atul ko aane main time hai..lets go for a walk and look around.'

'Ya..I dont mind..lets go. Hum jaye Rahul?'

'Sure carry on..Ill get ready for Sanjeevani..'

'Great..well be bak in 15 mins.' Radhika said while leaving.

Rahul then put on his Ipod and went to clear the kitchen..coz he knew Muskaan wouldnt do anything. After clearing up a bit, he decided to get ready as he was already late..he went in to his room to pick up his clothes.

Muskaan took a cold shower unlike her daily warm one. She was already so hot that she needed to cool off really soon..She washed her hair..which had become white with the little fight with flour. Closing her eyes..she couldnt help wonder what was happenning? Till last night she was in his arms..(courtesy Rahul again. *sighing*) and then they fight again. Uggh. It got on her nerves. She had to make it clear to him wether he really liked her or he wanted Radhika. OMG. R-for Rahul and R-for Radhika..RR together..no..she was just over-reacting. They are married and Radhika is her friend. She just stop being so possesive coz she knew all this was just a joke to irritate her.

Sighing she wrapped her strawberry coloured towel around her and another one on her hair. She walked out of the bathroom and locked the room door. Rahul stood on the opposite side of the room between his cupboard doors with music in his ears..unable to hear anything.

She stood in front of the mirror admiring herself. She dried her hair with the spare towel , and went to take her clothes.

'Yeh Rahul bhi na..hamesha almera ka door khula chod deta hai..idiot.' Unknowingly she went to close the door when one dashed him on his head.

'Ouch.'

Muskaan got numb in shock. 'Rahul........tum yahan kya kar rahe ho??' She screamed.

Rahul was in an even more shock. He just kept looking at her not knowing what to do.

'Rahul...idiot..ghoorna band kar..' She said as she put the spare towel over her.

He quickly turned around and closed his eyes. 'Shit..Im sorry..'

'What sorry? Sharam nahin aati ladki ke kamre main bina knock kiye aate huye?' (shouting)

He turned back again. 'Hello..to kamra lock karna chaiye ..' With this the spare towel started falling.

'Rahul!!!!! Aankhen band karo!!!!!!'

'Shit. Shit . Shit.' He muttered and closed his eyes with his fingers.

Muskaan rushed to the door and started opening it. 'Niklo bahar...Yeh kambhakt darwaza kyun nahin khul raha?'

'Maine kuch nahin kiya is baar!' (Defending tone)

'Kya?'

'Woh..woh..okay wait..main bathroom main jaata hun..' He started walking. 'Nahin actually tum jao...' he turned back. 'Actually...'

Muskaan walked to him. 'Rahul tera fuse udd gaya hai kya?'

'Main..main..' (turning his head)

Again Muskaan's spare towel fell ..this time completely giving a good view of her bare shoulders. 'Haiyyo Rabba yeh kya ho raha hai mere saath?'

She bent to pick it up.

Rahul was completely mesmerized. She was looking so fresh and beautiful ..her body dripping with water..her hair dripping with water..her face all tensed up..the way she tried to hide from him..the co-incidence that the door actually got locked on its own..her breathing so hard..but he had no right to see her. like this. He should go. He promised himself that he wouldnt do anything until Muskaan is okay with her feelings for him. (Closing his eyes.)

'Muskaan main balcony main jaata hun..call me when you are done.' He went outside and locked the door.

Muskaan was suprised. He didnt even look at her. If any other guy would have been in this place..she was scared to even imagine what would happenned. Sighing , she took her clothes and changed quickly in to jeans and a kurti...after changing she called Rahul.

'Umm..Rahul tumne subah darwaza kaise khola tha?'

'Woh..let me try..'

Rahul tried to do what he did in the morning and it actually opened. Thank Godness Muskaan didnt ask any more questions. He would have got caught. But Muskaan was relieved and went outside. Whatever happened was so unexpected..there was enough awkwardness that more came..It wasnt of any use.

They had a quite breakfast which Atul brought. Anjali still seemed upset with him and Atul was sad throughout. Rahul Muskaan didnt see eye to eye..confusing all the others after their erratic behaviour. Rahul and Atul then went for work while Muskaan stayed back with her friends..to accompany them on their shopping trip.

At Sanjeevani:-

Atul was very sad. Anjali was not talking to him even after he apoligised a couple of times.

He hummed sadly. ' Anjali..o meri Anjali..Kahan Ud Chali ..Mere Armaanon Ke Pankh Laga Ke Kahan Ud Chali..Anjali..o..meri Anjali..'

Armaan passed by..'Abey Atul yaar..chup kar na yaar...tu yeh kya gata rehta hai?'

'Armaan mere bhai..tu nahin samjhega..ye pyaar hai..'

'Kyun nahin samjhunga..main bhi to Riddhima se pyaar karta hun..'

'Arre..haan bhul gaya..' He said hand over his cheek leaning on the table at the nurse station.

Armaan was about to punch him when Rahul came and stopped him. 'Ab kya hua?'

Armaan in sign language showed actions of pressing Atul's neck.

'Woh to main roz karta hun..' Rahul mumbled.

(Pity look) He patted his shoulder.

'Abey Champ kya hua? Tu itna udaas kyun hai?' Rahul asked.

'Yaar..Anjali mujhse gussa ho gaye hai..woh bhi teri Muskaan ki wajah se..'

'Muskaan ko beech main na la..'

'Ohhh..kyun Rahooool?' (teasing tone) Armaan said in thinking position.

'Armaan yaar..ye to kuch bhi bolta hai..' (covering up)

' Anjali..o meri Anjali..Kahan Ud Chali...' Atul started singing again...

'Champ bas yaar..yeh gaana band kar.' Rahul shouted.

'Acha? Phir dusra waala gaun? Ek second..' (clears throat)

'Nahin champ..mere dost mere bhai..koi zaroorat nahin hai..tu mujhe bata problem kya hai?' Armaan said patting his head. 'Main solve karunga teri problem.'

'Woh ..Armaan maine na Anjali ko thoda sa daant diya..isliye woh gussa ho gaye..' Atul said sadly shaking his head.

'Yeh to achi baat hai yaar..your a man..hume ladkiyon ko control main rakhna chaiye. Man power!' Armaan said with actions closing his fist.

Rahul started laughing. 'Look whos talking? Riddhima ke peeche love sick puppy ki tarah pada rehta hai aur bolta hai be a man!.'

Atul laughed and they hified.

'Oyye Rahul..teri problem kya hai?' Armaan said angrily.

Ignoring him. 'Atul dekh Anjali aur Radhika sirf ek din ke liye aayen hai..aur tune ladai bhi chalu kar di..kya yaar?'

'Kya kaha? Kya kaha? Kya kaha?' (excited) Armaan said.

'Behra hai kya?' Rahul mumbled.

'Radhika....hmmm....kab tak hai yahan par?'

'Kal subah tak..' (realising) 'Kyun?'

Thinking of a plan. ' Rahul..hume Atul ki help karni chaiye..'

'Oh really..' Rahul rolled his eyes.

'Main ek kaam karta hun..aaj tumhare yahan akar ruk jata hun..' In a serious face.

'Wow yaar Armaan! Tu mera sabse acha bhai hai.' (kissing him)

'Kyun?????' Rahul asked.

'Arre yaar..friend ki help karni hai..' (Patting Atul) 'Aur Radhika se bhi milna hai' (Whispering to Rahul)

'Armaan! Riddhima ko kahun?'

'Rahul yaar chillax..Radhika is my friend..friend se milne me kya problem hai? Kyun champ?'

'No problem mere bahi.'

'Done then..see you tonight.' Armaan said.

'Haan..phir hum teeno saath main soyenge...'

Rahul and Armaan looking at each other. 'Eeew'

'Arre mere bhaiyon mera matlab hai..hume ek kamre main rehna padega na?'

'Hmm..yes..he has a point..' Armaan said. 'See you tonight then..'

'Armaan tum....' But he was gone. 'Sab problems mere sar hi aane hai.' Muttering he went for his duty.

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I changed my style of writing..I hope its clearer now😃 This chap became too long..good..coz I wont update until 18th of this month. Im sure many of you'll must have got an attack seeing the update so soon!😆 TC. Looking forward to comments!😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey mansi, today only i watched d first fight b'n RM in repeat telecast.. and then ur FF just recreated d magic.. just loved this part..🤗 full of little cute and funny bits..

'Oyye Ms. drama queen..please bhar jao..mujhe nashta banana hai.'
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'Dil nahin khana jal raha hai..Shit!'
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'Maine kuch nahin kiya is baar!' (Defending tone)
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'What sorry? Sharam nahin aati ladki ke kamre main bina knock kiye aate huye?' (ain't it poor rahul's room too? 😆)

that ping-pong of gaalis on both sides was hilarious.. 😆 and muskaan's censoring 'Beep beep beep' .. 🤣

muskaan got so possesive that she's not trusting even her friend..!! 😛 and atul's song haha that's one of my favorite actually in kishore kumar's voice.. but guess atul's would suit that perfectly.. 😆 what does armaan have in his mind?😲 me have to pity rahul too..

muskaan's drama and RM awkwardness in bedroom were very well-done.. awesome update.. so sad that we won't be getting it for 2 weeks.. but plz plz do update regularly after that.. 😳
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Kassir Extremes Intro 9pm - London Airport - Christmas Day It was a cold chilly night in the beautiful city of London. We arrive at Heathrow...

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