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Posted: 16 years ago
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sorry sorry pallavi........mein tera update padhke itna carried away ho gayi ke meinne tera end wala note he nahin padha ...............
dance!!!!!!!! hmmmmmmmm.........kya baat hai pallu partner........all th very best jaan.......mujhe pata hai ke tu bahut aacha karege kyunji mayur aajkal har doosre din dance he karte hain........humme training dene ke liye..................
ALL THE BEST JAAN
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Posted: 16 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: ruchimayur

hey pallavi behana tera kya hai kehana............

awesome update yaar...........to be very honest meinne sirf mayur part aachi se padha hai.........so i hope tujhe ko problem nahin hai, aur agar hai toh bata dena, mein sajan part bhi padh lunge .....ok
actually i was imagining each and evry scene, the restless expressions on mayank's face, nupur's excitement and our very own bhains................evrythng fit perfectly to the scene
fnally mayoo understanding the other side of nupur and everythng....it was jst too perfect
awesome, gr8 , mindblowing update................loved it completely
update it soon



Yay!! Ruchi meri behena tujhe aaj koi belan nahi padna!! 😆😆 Lekin tunne sajan part nahin pada? Ab phir mujhe belan uthana padega!! 😆😆 Actually mujhe pata tha tu sirf mayur part hi padegi. Maine tujhe dhyaan mein rakh kar likha tha. And glad you like the bhains yaar...chalo kisine to bhains par comment kiya. Main to worried ho rahi thi 😆😆 Thank you yaar!! Tere liye ek jaadu ki jhappi!! 🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: cute2stay



Yay!! Ruchi meri behena tujhe aaj koi belan nahi padna!! 😆😆 Lekin tunne sajan part nahin pada? Ab phir mujhe belan uthana padega!! 😆😆 Actually mujhe pata tha tu sirf mayur part hi padegi. Maine tujhe dhyaan mein rakh kar likha tha. And glad you like the bhains yaar...chalo kisine to bhains par comment kiya. Main to worried ho rahi thi 😆😆 Thank you yaar!! Tere liye ek jaadu ki jhappi!! 🤗

yaar kya karun????????/mayur hai he aise ke unka part padhke kuch aur padhne ka dill he nahin karta.coz we are in mayurland........
tere bhains pe kaise na comment karte......its mayurians fav animal😆😆..
aur tu chinta mat liya kar.......''jab tak hum hain toh kya gham hai''
jaadu ke jhappi...........thanx a lot yaar.......mein emotional ho gayi....hum behano ka pyaar dekh kar😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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👏👏👏wow pallavi... its really awesome... specially sajan part.. the ever naughty samrat .... loved evry bit of it babes.... u r a star writer babes ⭐️😛
tumhara ff har friday ko release hota hai na .... film k tarah 😃😉
plz continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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I will echo what everyone else is feeling.. get more carried away next time. ;)
The game was so cutely written. I could see it happening.. Its always a lot of fun.. Loved Mayank and Nupur's dialogues and Mayank's realizations abt how Nups cudnt hurt anyone intentionally. Finally he gets to feel that way - better late than never Mayank!
I am eager to know what happens at the meet..

And yes, Samrat and Gunjan scene was A1. But I admit I read it later.. I relish and cherish all the Mayur pats first. Lol. Keep up the gud work Pallavi.. and gud luck wid ur things-to-do next week. 🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow yaar!!!!that was awesome!!!i'm glad Sajan r finally okay!!!thnx and do post asap!!!
ynaiita
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: sajanFan

👏👏👏wow pallavi... its really awesome... specially sajan part.. the ever naughty samrat .... loved evry bit of it babes.... u r a star writer babes ⭐️😛

tumhara ff har friday ko release hota hai na .... film k tarah 😃😉
plz continue soon



Thanks yaar!! Glad you liked it! Aur haan mera FF koi film se kam thodi hai isiliye friday ke friday release hota hai!! 😆😆 Just joking yaar but so touched that you liked it!! 🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: debby

I will echo what everyone else is feeling.. get more carried away next time. ;)
The game was so cutely written. I could see it happening.. Its always a lot of fun.. Loved Mayank and Nupur's dialogues and Mayank's realizations abt how Nups cudnt hurt anyone intentionally. Finally he gets to feel that way - better late than never Mayank!
I am eager to know what happens at the meet..

And yes, Samrat and Gunjan scene was A1. But I admit I read it later.. I relish and cherish all the Mayur pats first. Lol. Keep up the gud work Pallavi.. and gud luck wid ur things-to-do next week. 🤗



Thanks Debby!! Teri echo mujhe yahaan tak sunayi de rahi hai!! 😆😆 I'm so glad you guys don't mind my getting carried away yaar...I have a habit of going into too much detail. But since noone is complaining I'll be happy to get carried away. Carried hona meri speciality hai. Yeh to mere dayein haath ka khel hai😆😆 Glad you loved the game yaar!! Ya I thought it was about time for the attraction phase to develop...kuch kuch ho raha hai😆 And no worries for reading the Sajan parts later yaar...as long as you read it! As you yourself would say, 'better late than never' 😆 Thanks for the luck and encouragement yaar!! You made me happy! Will def. update soon now. 🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: ynaiita

wow yaar!!!!that was awesome!!!i'm glad Sajan r finally okay!!!thnx and do post asap!!!

ynaiita



Thanks so much yaar!! A big hug to you!! 🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey............
Sorry for the late reply.............
Luved the update...............
Samrat's dialogues were soo cute...finally i see sum confidence in Gunjan...............
Such a nice game.......i think Mayank is kinda turning into Nupur......thank god he kinda likes her...............
Very well written..........
Iam glad that Mayur finally catched a bus................
Waiting for the competition and v-day ball.............
Luved the descriptions and the extra effort u put in the thoughts....really gud.........
Update ASAP..........
Bye........

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