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Ok so first of all thanks SO much guys for reading and commenting!! I love you all sooo much!! 🤗 You guys are the besttt!! Tum sab meri jaan ho!!....Acha teekhai ab makhan lagana band karti hoon aur point pe aati hoon...ahem....so sorryyyyy guys please mujhe belan se mat marna!! 😳 i said i would update friday aur ab yahan 1:30 am ho chuka hai to i won't be able to update today but tomorrow is a pakka sachi muchi ka promise (ie saturday) This week was just busy for me as I had a dance performance tonight for which i had practice everyday and I thought I would get time to update today but after my classes I had to straighten my hair (which takes me forever!!) and get ready and stuff toh I had no time!! so sorry guys!! Toh kal pakka wada hai aap sab se!! Aur phir yeh weekend main bilkul free hoon toh iss baar sunday ko bhi update kardoongi. Phir toh chalega na? I hope so...
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Ok so first of all thanks SO much guys for reading and commenting!! I love you all sooo much!! 🤗 You guys are the besttt!! Tum sab meri jaan ho!!....Acha teekhai ab makhan lagana band karti hoon aur point pe aati hoon...ahem....so sorryyyyy guys please mujhe belan se mat marna!! 😳 i said i would update friday aur ab yahan 1:30 am ho chuka hai to i won't be able to update today but tomorrow is a pakka sachi muchi ka promise (ie saturday) This week was just busy for me as I had a dance performance tonight for which i had practice everyday and I thought I would get time to update today but after my classes I had to straighten my hair (which takes me forever!!) and get ready and stuff toh I had no time!! so sorry guys!! Toh kal pakka wada hai aap sab se!! Aur phir yeh weekend main bilkul free hoon toh iss baar sunday ko bhi update kardoongi. Phir toh chalega na? I hope so...

Thanks guys tum sab great ho! 🤗
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bach gayii tu......otherwise belan was coming right on ur head😆😆
chal aachi tarah dance karna.............nups aur mayank se training lena ..ok😆
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bach gayii tu......otherwise belan was coming right on ur head😆😆
chal aachi tarah dance karna.............nups aur mayank se training lena ..ok😆

😆😆 thanks yaar! you are soo sweet! mujhe pata tha tu sabse pehle belan leke khadi hogi isiliye to itna makhan laga rahin ho tujhe main. shukar hai tu ice cream ki tarah pigal gayi warna aaj to meri band baj jaati. haan haan of course yaar teri behena ne bahaut acha dance kiya...aisa main nahin baaki sab log keh rahe the mujhe 😆 and haan yaar i had to watch the khuda jaane promo sau baar to get training...that was my excuse to watching it over and over again 😳
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Hey People, sorry for the delay...here is Part 5 finally:

Part 5:

Recap: Samrat and Gunjan become friends and spend time in the canteen. Mayank and Nupur spend time with the kids in the gaon and then finally catch their bus to go to Ahmadabad. On the bus they fall asleep on each other's shoulders.

Mayank wakes up from his sleep with a smile. Just then he sees Nupur's still asleep head resting on his shoulder. Without moving he carefully glances at Nupur sleeping. He can't help but notice how innocent and beautiful she looks in her sleep. Her head rests on her hand which is on Mayank's shoulder. She has a faint smile on her lips and she looks so peaceful and serene as though she does not have a worry in the world. She shifts a little in her sleeping position and her smile grows bigger. Mayank notices this and thinks to himself:

Mayank: Zaroor maharani saiba koi sapna dekh rahin hongi. I bet mujhe phir tang karne ki koi nai tarqeeb sochli hogi inhone apne sapne mein. Tabhi toh itni kush hain.

Mayank again looks at Nupur and sees that her smile is still intact. He nods his head as if he has just confirmed his Nupur ke dream ki theory. He smiles to himself as he thinks this:

Mayank: Waah Waah Mayank, tujhe to Nupur pe PhD karni chahiye. By god kitni achi tarah jaanta hai tu usse.

And then Mayank smacks himself on the head as he realizes what he has just said:

Mayank: Nupur pe PhD? Yeh kya bol raha hai Mayank…Focus, Focus. Lagta hai Nupur ke saat rehte rehte mera bhi dimaag kharaab ho gaya hai.

And then he again looks over at Nupur as if he fears she might've heard his thought. Seeing her still in deep sleep he feels relieved. Just then Mayank feels his shoulder going sore. But seeing Nupur so happy in her sleep, he can't risk waking her up. Despite his sore shoulder he let's Nupur sleep and tries not to move too much to risk walking Nupur up.

Back to the canteen where Samrat and Gunjan are sitting.

Samrat: Toh Chashmish, kaisi lagi meri treat?

Gunjan: (smiles) Bahaut achi…thanks Samrat.

Samrat: kisliye chashmish? Treat ke liye?

Gunjan: Nahi…haan..woh bhi…par…mera matlab…mera dil behelane ke liye…aur ek acha dost banne ke liye bhi.

Samrat: Hmm…not again chashmish, lagta hai tum kuch bhool rahi ho.

Gunjan: (looks up worriedly) Kya?

Samrat: (smiles) Yehi…ki humari dosti mein no sorry and no thank you ka ek rule hai.

Gunjan: (relaxes and smiles) O…haan…mein bhool gayi thi…sorry.

And then realizing she did it again she bites her tongue between her teeth and looks at Samrat who is laughing. This makes her relax and she also starts laughing.

Samrat: (still smiling) Chashmish, tum bhi na, kabhi nahin sudhrogi.

Gunjan: (shoked that Samrat used her dialogue) Samratt…mera dialogue kyun chura rahe ho?

Samrat: (laughs) Achaa…chashmish ab humari dosti mein yeh mera tumhara kya laga rakha hai? Ab se yeh humara dialogue hai jo hum mein se kisi par bhi applicable ho sakta hai. Right? (Samrat points his finger)

Gunjan : (smiles and points back) Right.

Back to the bus scene with Mayank and Nupur. Now, Nupur wakes up and seeing her head on Mayank's shoulder jumps up quickly and shouts at Mayank:

Nupur: By god Mayank! Kabse main tumhare khande pe so rahi hoon tum mujhe utha nahin sakte the kya?

Mayank: (surprised) Tum…tum uth gayi?

Nupur: Nahin…mujhe na neend mein tumpe chilaane ki aadat hai.

Mayank: Woh to mujhe pata hai...sapne mein bhi mujhe hi gaaliyan de rahi thi na?

Nupur: Kya??

Mayank: Uh...kuch nahi.

Nupur: (getting angry again) Mayank! Tum mujhe utha nahin sakte the kya?

Mayank: (now is in his senses) Jee nahi. Main aisa katharnak risk kaise le sakta tha. Itni mushkil se to thodi der shaanti mili thi. Par ufsos ab woh bhi challi jaygi.

Nupur: (shouting) Mayank tum toh…

Mayank: (holds his ears) Dekha tumhare uthte hi mujhe earplugs ki zarurat pad gayi.

Nupur: (is now really mad and shouts really loud) Mayank ke bache!!! (she points her finger at him)

Mayank: (puts her finger down) Chilao matt Nupur. Mera nahin to kum se kum bus mein bathey bakki logon ka to khayal karo.

Just then Nupur looks around the bus to see everyone staring at her. She gives them a sheepish smile and realizes Mayank is right so she shuts up but gives Mayank an angry look and then crosses her arms and looks the other way. Mayank looks at her, then he too looks the other way.

Just then the bus conductor announces Ahmadabad station. Hearing this both Mayank and Nupur forget their anger, jump up and shout:

Both Mayank and Nupur: Humara station!!

Both Mayank and Nupur look at each other as they say this and smile. And then they notice everyone else on the bus staring at them. Mayank and Nupur again look at each other and quickly head out of the bus as the fold hands and say sorry to the passengers. As soon as the get out of the bus the rest of the passengers cheer and celebrate that those two are gone!

Back to the college scene. Uday is wondering how to impress CJ at the valentine's ball and decides to ask Benji for help.

Uday: (hugs Benji excitedly) Yaar Benji ab tu hi meri dukh bhari kahani suljha sakta hai.

Benji: (trying hard to free himself but not succeeding) Dekh dude jab tak tu mujhe chodta nahi hai main tere liye kuch nahin kar sakta.

Uday: (releasing Benji) O…sorry dude. Lekin please meri help karna. (he goes down on his knees as if proposing and folds his hands) Pleassee dude mana matt karna.

Benji feels awkward as he notices everyone in the college staring at them. He gets fed up and just starts to walk away from there. Noticing this Uday goes up to him and holds his hand.

Uday: Nahinn dude please meri madat karde.

Benji: (frees his hand) Ek shart pe. Agar tu iske baad mujhe kabhi touch nahin karega to hi main teri help karunga.

Uday: (puts his hand on Benji's shoulder) Done dude. Tu kitna…

Benji: (gives Uday a look about his hand on his shoulder) Dude….maine abhi kya kaha tha? Apne haath apne paas rakh!

Uday: O haan…sorry dude. (takes his hand off)

Benji: Dekh dude…CJ bahaut alag ladki hai. Toh usse impress karne ke liye tu kuch romantic matt kariyo.

Uday: Haan…KYA??

Benji: Haan dude agar tu usse impress karna chahta hai to kuch aisa kar jo woh kabhi tujhse expect nahin karegi. Chal tu iske baare mein soch main canteen chala.

While Uday is busy scratching his head at what he just said, Benji quikly makes his escape to the canteen.

Uday: Ab aisa kya karna hoga mujhe? Koi baat nahin...pyar mein aksar logon ko bahaut kuch karna padta hai. Lekin ab main karunga kya?? (Uday scratches his head)

....

Back to canteen with Samrat and Gunjan.

Samrat: Chalo chashmish bahaut ho gaye tumhari masti…ab hai kaam ki baari.

Gunjan: Kya?

Samrat: (winks) Main dance ki baat kar rahan hoon chashmish. Tumhe Guru Samrat ke saat practice karni haina takki tum kal valentine's ball mein sabse acha dance kar sako.

Gunjan: O…haan…par.

Samrat: Par war kuch nahin chashmish ab chalo reahersal room chalte hain.

Gunjan: Theekhai

They both go to the dance room to practice where Samrat holds out his hand to Gunjan:

Samrat: So chashmish…kya ap apne Guru Samrat ke saat dance karengi?

Gunjan: (smiles and gives her hand to him) Haan.

Samrat: To phir theekhai.

Just as he says this Samrat pulls Gunjan towards him really close when their eyes meet. Gunjan surprised by this closeness looks down and feels shy.

Samrat: To dance ka pehla step chashmish apne partner ki ankhon mein dekho.

Gunjan: (can't help but look up at Samrat)

Samrat: Good. Ab main jahan lead karun tum wahin follow karna ok?

Gunjan: ...Haan…

They try some simple waltz steps as Samrat leads and Gunjan follows. Gunjan and Samrat both enjoy themselves as Gunjan finally gets the hang of it.

Samrat: Very good chashmish dekha tum aisi hi gabhra rahin thi. Jab tak tumhare saat Guru Samrat hai tumhe kabhi kissi bhi baat ki chinta karne ki zaroorat nahin.

Gunjan looks up at Samrat and realizes the seriousness of his words in his eyes. She feels grateful for having a friend like him and looks up at him and smiles. Samrat in turn senses what she feels and smiles back at her. Here they both stand in each other's arms looking at each other when Dia passes by and notices them:

Dia: (shocked and says to herself) Sammy!!! Aur woh bhi uss Morena behenji ke saat!!! Agar maine apni aankhon se nahin dekha hota to main kabhi believe nahin karti!!! Iss morena behenji ka kuch to karna hi padega. Mere Sammy ko!!!

And Dia fumes as she walks away from there.

….

Scene is back to Mayank and Nupur. They have just reached Ahmadabad and now reach their hotel where they are supposed to stay at. There the hotel manager tells them that since they came late the hotel only has one more room available for them and they would have to share it.

Mayank and Nupur both: KYA???

The manager gets taken aback by their sudden burst and feels a little scared but says:

Manager: Uh….I am very sorry madamji…(looking at Nupur and then)..sirji (looking at Mayank). Par agar aap dono ne yeh room nahin liya to aur kahin rehne ki jaga nahin milege. Woh academic competition ki wajah se sab bookings full hain.

Mayank: Nahi nahi hum woh room lelenge.

Mayank gives Nupur a "jo mila lelo warna phasenge" look. Nupur gives in.

Nupur: Theekhai Chalo.

Mayank and Nupur enter their room and see two beds in the room. This makes them relieved and Nupur says:

Nupur: Chalo…kam se kam bed to do hain. Waise kitna sundar kamra haina Mayank. Aur yahan iss window se view to dekho. By god maza aa gaya!! Pata hai Mayank itni sundar jaga aur hotel to maine sirf filmon mein hi dekha tha. Aur ab mujhe lagta hai ki main bhi kisi film me khadi hoon. (Nupur claps her hands excitedly)

Mayank: Haan…hogaya tumhara? Ab suno…kal humari academic meet mein presentation hai. To mujhe lagta hai ki humme thodi preparation kar leni chahiye. Tum yahin ruko main apni books leke aata hoon.

Mayank goes to get his books and comes back reading them.

Mayank: Haan Nupur to sabse pehle humain global media pe dhyaan dena chahiye aur phir specifically hum India par focus karenge. Uske baad hum chote aur bade shehron ko compare kar sakte hain aur…

Then Mayank looks up from his books and sees Nupur sound asleep on one of the beds. Mayank sighs and says:

Mayank: Yeh ladki bhi na…academic meet ka naam sunte hi isse neend aa jaati hai. Chal Mayank tu hi thodi padayi karle.

Mayank again goes into his books but his eyes keep looking back at the sleeping Nupur. He can't seem to take her eyes off her as she looks so pure, innocent and beautiful in her sleep. Mayank rests his chin on his hand as he looks at Nupur dreamily. He smiles and sighs. Just then the window opens slightly and a wind blows in and Mayank comes back to reality as he realizes that the pages of his books have turned way ahead and he hadn't noticed. He shakes his head and tells himself to "Focus". Just then he notices Nupur shivering a bit from the wind coming in. He goes and closes the window and then puts the covers on Nupur. Feeling the covers on her Nupur stops shivering and rests peacefully. Mayank smiles as he sees Nupur warm and safe and in her dreamworld.

Mayank: (to himself) Mujhe nahin lagta main aaj raat kuch accomplish kar paunga. Main bhi so jaata hoon. Kal subha dekhenge. Jo hoga acha hi hoga.

With this Mayank also goes to sleep.

The next morning Nupur wakes up to a bright and sunny morning and stretches herself happily. She jumps out of bed and looks outside to a beautiful morning. She opens up the window curtains to let the sun in and smiles at the beauty outside. She then glances at Mayank sleeping and notices his eyes squinted and a slight frown on his face. Looking at this Nupur says to herself:

Nupur: By god!! Yeh monkey Mayank to sote hue bhi khadoos hi rehta hai.

And then she looks out at the window and sees Mayank again and realizes he is squinting because of the sun.

Nupur: O to yeh baat hai. Sorry haan Mayank. Mujhe laga tumhari shakal mujhpe gussa karte karte aisi hi hogayi hai. Wsah Nupur kya chutkula mara hai tune. (And then she laughs at her own joke). Kash Mayank ne mera yeh mazedar chutkula sunna hota. (She rubs her hands together excitedly feeling very pleased with herself).

Just then she notices Mayank still scowling from the sun so she closes the window curtains. As soon as she does this, Mayank's frown turns into a relaxed smile. Nupur smiles as she sees this and then again draws the window curtains up again. Again she sees Mayank squinting. Laughing at this Nupur again closes the curtains obviously finding Mayank's changing facial expressions to the sunlight very amusing. She finally opens the curtains and says:

Nupur: Mayank ke baccha uthne ka naam hi nahin le raha. Kabse time pass karke bore ho gayi hoon. Ab to usse uthana hi padega.

Just then Nupur graps a pillow and starts hitting Mayank with it while shouting:

Nupur: Uth Mayank ke bache!! Uth abhi!!! By god kitna sota hai yeh ladka!! Uth!! Abbee khumbhkaran ki aulaadd!!! Uth be!!!

Mayank hearing the shouting and pillow beating on him, finally wakes up:

Mayank: Kaun hai?? (And then seeing Nupur) Nupur tum?? Yeh koi tareeka hai kisi ko uthane ka?

Nupur: Ab mere itna chilane ke baad bhi tum nahin uthoge to main aur kya karoon. Khumbhkaran kahin ke!! By god chila chila ke mera gala paadh diya. Aur maar maar ke mera haath bhi takha diya.

Saying this Nupur gets her breath back as she sits down on the bed beside Mayank.

Mayank: Par ufsoos tumhara moon nahin thakaya.

Mayank and Nupur both stare at each other as they sit beside each other on the bed.

Mayank: Chalo main ready ho ke aata hoon warna competition ke liye late ho jaynge.

Nupur: Haan kyun nahi. Tum araam se ready ho aur main kya karoon. Mere pass to koyi kapde bhi nahin hain change karne ke liye. Ab main kya karoongi.

Mayank: Woh to tumhe bus se uttarne se pehle sochna chahiye tha. Bye!

Saying this Mayank runs to the bathroom while Nupur makes a fist at him.

After getting ready, Mayank comes out of the bathroom and notices Nupur sitting on the bed with her chin between her elbows and looking sad. Mayank smiles as he goes up to Nupur with a surprise.

Mayank: Yeh lo. Ab jaldi se ready ho jao.

Nupur: Mera bag!!! Arreyy waah Mayank par tumhe kaise mila? (saying this she hugs her bag tightly)

Mayank: (smiles at her childlike ways) Woh…kal raat jab tum so gayi thi to maine manager se bus ke saaman ke baare mein pucha aur usne bataya ki tumhara bag bus stand pe rakhwaya gaya hai…to phir main tumhara bag bus stand se tumhara bag leaya. Bas ab to kush ho na tum?

Nupur: (is shocked to see that Mayank went through all this trouble for her bag and has slight tears in her eyes which she quickly blinks away) Mayank…tumne…mere liye…woh bhi…yeh bag.

Mayank: Ab zyada socho mat aur ready ho jayo warna late ho jaynge.

Nupur: (happily) Haan. Bas yun gayi aur yun aayi.

And saying this Nupur runs to the bathroom but halfway there she runs back and quickly gives Mayank a bear hug leaving Mayank surprised.

Nupur: Thanks Mayank. Tum sach mein bahaut ache ho.

Mayank: (shyly) Haan…theekhai.

And then Nupur smiles and runs back to the bathroom while Mayank looks down, blushes and smiles to himself. He then looks back at the bathroom door, ruffles his hair and smiles to himself. Then quickly running to the nearest mirror checks himself to make sure his hair still looks perfect.

After Mayank and Nupur get ready they are both about to go down to the competiion when Nupur says:

Nupur: Ek minute Mayank tum chalo main abhi aati hoon

Mayank: Nupur ab tum kya karne wali ho? Agar phir koi gadbad hui to…

Nupur: Arrey kuch nahi hoga tum jao na main bas abhi aati hoon.

Mayank gives in and starts to walk away but as if he doesn't believe that nothing will go wrong comes back to check on Nupur and finds her kneeling down with her eyes closed, praying.

Nupur: Aye Bajrang Bali, please meri aur Mayank ki team ko jita dena. Waise main to haarna phir bhi sehlungi. Par woh kya haina woh akdoo Mayank harna bilkul bardash nahin kar payga. Woh bilkul toot jayga. Aur waise bhi usne bahaut mehnat ki hai iss competition ke liye to please bhagwan haan? Humein pakka jita dena? Theekhai? Thank you thank you very much.

Meanwhile Gunjan also wakes up and is praying to God much like Nupur:

Gunjan: Please bhagwan ji. Aaj valentines ball mein sab kuch teekh kar dena. Samrat ne meri itni madat ki hai. Please uski mehnat bekar matt jane dena. Please mera confidence matt todna taki main sabki umeedon ko niraash na karun. Mujhe hosla do bhagwan ke main sabki expectations puri kar sakoon….aur khaas karke Samrat ki.

End.

Precap: Mayank and Nupur go for their academic meet. Uday surprises CJ on Valentine's Ball. Samrat and Gunjan surprise everyone by their dance and Gunjan once again shines like a star. A new twist in Dia's character as she learns about Gunjan.

That's it guys. I really hope I didn't let you guys down this time. Phirse I got carried away aur kuch zyada hi lamba ho gaya I hope you guys don't mind 😳 Sorry for getting so late with this...I'll try to be on time next time onwards. Aur haan this weekend I'm free so I will update tomorrow (ie Sunday as well). So please read and comment. I love you all. 🤗
Edited by cute2stay - 16 years ago
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Hey!!! Don't apolagize! I like it when it's longer! lol, Great update, really liked it! Waiting for your next update!!!

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