MJHT Ka Safar continues...(FF) part 9 page 55. - Page 9

hey pallavi...i totallllllly love ur ff so far
the way u write with so much details is truly awesome n its all so true to characters n the story....i can totally imagine all of these scenes
awww mayur fight was soooo cute n sajan are friends again yay....waiting to c more of their scenes
update soon...if possible this weekend plzz....n o ya PM me too thnx
keep it up 👏

Hey pallavi wat a awesome part gal ...........luved Sajan & Mayur scene.. & by god aapka precap toh bahut mazedar......... Can't wait for the V-day ball............plz continue soon & thnxs for d pm............ & my name is Samira......u can call me Sam or Sammy;)

Hey Pallavi,

hey pallavi...

Originally posted by: shrishti gupta

Best of luck!

And loved the update! Your ff descriptions are really vivid! Enjoy reading them!

Hope to read update ASAP!

Thanksss Shrishti!! And thanks for the luck too!! You're so sweet! Ya I get really carried away when I'm writing...I have this need to write every single thing in great detail...so I'm so glad to hear that you liked the descriptions!! I will def. try to update ASAP. Thanks yaar! 🤗

Originally posted by: trouble_maker

hey pallavi...i totallllllly love ur ff so far
the way u write with so much details is truly awesome n its all so true to characters n the story....i can totally imagine all of these scenes
awww mayur fight was soooo cute n sajan are friends again yay....waiting to c more of their scenes
update soon...if possible this weekend plzz....n o ya PM me too thnx
keep it up 👏

Hi trouble maker! 😆 What's your name yaar? Thanks so much ya I do get carried away with the details...I can't help writing everything in detail so glad to hear that you liked it. And ya my goal when writing this is to keep it real to the characters so I'm glad to hear that I've succeeded!! Yay!! And ya sajan are friends and mayur are getting there. I'll try my best to update this weekend and ya for sure I'll pm you when I do. Thanks a bunch yaar really appreciate your comment! 🤗

Originally posted by: KaSh_Monaya

Hey pallavi wat a awesome part gal ...........luved Sajan & Mayur scene.. & by god aapka precap toh bahut mazedar......... Can't wait for the V-day ball............plz continue soon & thnxs for d pm............ & my name is Samira......u can call me Sam or Sammy;)

Hi Sam!! Thanks so much yaar! So glad you liked it!! Will try to update ASAP. Thanks a million!! 🤗

hey pallavi behana tera kya hai kehana............

Originally posted by: Kiran1018

Hey Pallavi,

Yes!...Finally you updated...but before i comment, i want to say Good Luck for your 2 dance performance and your assignments.

Wow, i dont even know where to start....the whole part was written with such great detail.....details are great b/c i can actually imagine each expression of every scene.....i guess thats one of the many reasons i m really addicted to your fan fic....must give you your props for that.

awww...sajan scenes were so cute....i can imagine samrat constantly giving his signature smile at gunjan and gunjan getting intimidated and nervous by his presence....i loved the way samrat just takes all his compliments and is not modest...(bikul hum dono ki tarah...lols)...their jodi is too cute.

hmmm...what can i say about mayur...their nok-jhoks get cuter by the scene....i m still amazed that mayank and nupur in your fan fic are totally like the way they are in the show....i mean the dialouges you wrote suits their characters so perfectly.

the small mayank-nupur dialouge was so cute....i hope that in the future we will get to see more romantic and longer eye-locks and scenes...finally mayank is beginning to get attract to nupur's personality...i just cant wait till the fall in love....i m sure you have some great scenes in store for us.

overall, i think this part was very nicely written......i enjoyed every bit of it....while reading i kept looking at the scroll bar to see how much closer to the end it was because i was upset it was ending soon...lols...i know that sounds really stupid.......and by the way, i think this part wasnt long at all....lols....though since i m addicted to your fan fic, this is probably a biased comment.

anyways, i just cant wait till the next part...cant wait till the romance blooms b/w mayur.....is most fan fics, i just read the mayur scenes....your fan fic is one of the few ones that i actually read the whole part....i guess its b/c you write really very well....you know pretty soon i m going to run out of adjectives to describe how awesome your fan fic is.......lols....now this is a very long comment...i will shut up now.

keep writing!

Yay Kiran!! Tere lambe comment ka besabhri se intezaar tha mujhe!! 😆 That's so sweet yaar...the scroll thing I mean. Aur main bhi tere comment ko padte scroll ko dekh rahi thi ki kahin khatam na hojaye 😆😆
Thanks for the luck yaar. And ya I get so carried away with the details...I just have this big need to describe everything in as much detail as possible. I even do that when I'm talking and more so when I'm writing! Lekin yeh sunke khushi hui ke you didn't mind my details. And really tujhe long nahin laga? 🤗 You just made my day by saying that!! And haan Samrat ki modesty bilkul humare jaisi hai. Uska character humise toh inspired hua hai MJHT mein! 😆😆 And don't worry yaar meri taareef mein you will never run out of adjectives!! How's that for modesty again? But really yaar thanks so much for your comment even if you use the same adjectives over and over again I will never get tired of reading them!! And no don't shut up I absolutely loveee your long comments!! They make my day!! Tunne ek baar phir mera dil khush kardiya! 🤗

Originally posted by: sanah tendulkar

hey pallavi...

by god..tum bhi na..lamba part..!!! huh..!! i luv it whn u gt carried away..!!😆

amazing part yaar...

nxt tym thoda zyada carry away ho jana ...samjhi...!!!!😆😉

xxx

sanah..!!

ps- all d bst fr ur dance yaar..!!👍🏼

pps- Thanx fr s pm yaar..!!

😆😆 You are so sweet Sanahji!! So glad you didn't mind my getting carried away. Chal tune parmishan dedi to ab har baar main carried away ho jaungi! Phir mujhe joote mat maariyu theekhai? Sirf tere liye main har baar isi tarah carried away hoti rahungi!! 😆😆 Thanks so muchhh yaar!! 🤗
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