Sajan+Mayur FF *part9-page11* - Page 3

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Posted: 16 years ago
#21
Ooh, Mayank in an all new avatar.. 😆 everyone for that matter..
Dia and Mayu are siblings.. that's a nice twist ;)
Its interesting.. do go on!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#22

Really great 😃
And Mayank's jealousy was great. It was amazing watching Samrat telling
Mayank ki library jaane ka raasta pata hai kya. coz in the show its opposite.
Update soon

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Posted: 16 years ago
#23
wah!!tusi chaaa gayi yaar!!!wat a solid storyline and usi bhi badiya starcast..i loved all the updates...nice thougts of putting sammy and nups in study shoes but at the same time mayu and sammy being cool..gunjan for a change wud look good being cool and bindass....go on and update next very soon,,,waiting impatiently!hats off to u ...😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: ynaiita

tussi gr8 ho!!that was seriosly awesome!!!i really loved the holding pt!!!!u r th best!!plz plz plz plzzzzzzzz continue soooon!!!bye!!!

ynaiita

thankyou so much
lol
and yeah am gonna come up wiv ma next part soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: rosette80

wah!!tusi chaaa gayi yaar!!!wat a solid storyline and usi bhi badiya starcast..i loved all the updates...nice thougts of putting sammy and nups in study shoes but at the same time mayu and sammy being cool..gunjan for a change wud look good being cool and bindass....go on and update next very soon,,,waiting impatiently!hats off to u ...😉

* haha *
thanks for appreciating
and yeah am gonna cum up wiv next part soon
ox
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Posted: 16 years ago
#26

@ ananya_s = thankyou so much

@ TINAMALHONTR = :D ... thnks for appreciating
@ debby = i know nice twis t ennit ... ;)
@ simranruchi = thanks... :)
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Posted: 16 years ago
#27
OK
GUYS SO HERE'S THE FOURTH PART :-)
RECAP - SAJAN AND MAYUR HAVE A FALLING - HOLDING SCENE ;)
SAJAN -
S - gunjan ... tum thik to ho ?
G - totally lost in her sammy
S - gunjan !!!
G - haan ... * coming out of day dreaming 😆 *
S - tum thik to ho ?
G - han! am fine ... thnks ... tumne bacha liya
S - oh! to ab tum mujhe thnks bolo gi ... i gootaa see this one ... 😛
G - samrat ... * gives him a smile *
aur tum yahaan kya kar rahe ho ... mujhe to laga ki tum nupur ko library dikha rahe the
S - wahin jaa raha tha ... par then mayank ne kaha ki miss. aha mujhe bula rahin hain
G - miss aha! lekin wo to aaj college mein aayin hi nahin
S - kinda suprised .. * what !! *
G - haan ...!
MAYUR -
M - hmmm... miss nupur ... aap zara sambhal ke chali gi ... kyunki main hamesha aapko bachane nahin aaunga ... 😉
N - wo ! main .. ! sorry ... !
M - hmm... WO ... MAIN ... SORRY .. ! aap kehna kya charahin hain
N - mera matlab hain ... sorry aur thankyou
M - sorry ya thankyou ...
N - sorry
nahin
thankyou
nahin
M - haha
ok ... ok ... ! main samjh gaya
this point dia sees mayank and call out to him
D - mayank!
M - oh ... hi dia ... ! wassup?
D - tum yahaan ... aur hi nupur ... tum thik ho
N - haan ! main thik hun...
D - mayank ... tum nupur se mile naa ..?
M - haan dia ... main nupur se mil chuka hoon
N - erm ... mujhe chalna chahiye ... gunjan wait kar rahin hogi
D - ok ... bye babes... see yuh tmrw
N - bye ... looks at mayank and he looks at her
then she leaves
AT GUNUR'S HOUSE -
Nupur and Gunjan both are sitting on the bed ... thinking what happened
gunjan comes out of ih ... and sees nupur still thinking
G - nupur !!....?
N - no reaction
G - nupurr!!
N - haan! kya hua?
G - are yuh alrit babes?
N - haan. .. main thik hun?
wiase tumse ek baat pochu ?
G - haan ... pochon?
N - wo kya naam hain tumhari dost kya
ermm.. d se shuru hota hain
G - oh! dia ... !
N - haan .... dia
G - yah ...wt bout her?
N - uska aur mayank ka kya rishta ... mera matlab
.... ki .... * finds ih hard to say *
G - yuh mean dia ... mayank ki kya lagti hain
.... simple ... wo uski behan hain
N - looks at gunjan ... * she feels so much better now*
G - kyun?
N - nahin ! bas yuhin
G - ok... abhi chalo ... hum sojate hain ... kal college bhi to jaana hain
N - haan ... gudnight
G - gudnight babes
*they go off to bed*
scene shifts to MaYaNk
he thinks how nupur fell on his arms and how he catched her
same is with SaMrAt
he thinks how gunajn fell on his arms and how he catched her
the scene is divided between four of them with mjht violen music at the back
COMING UP NEXT - Sajan decide to participate in the Talent Show ... mayank sees nupur dancing very well and wants her to dance for the talent show buh will nupur dance ... ?
do leave your thoughts bout this part
plz
ox
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Posted: 16 years ago
#28
i jus read part 3&4 n dey r jus awsum...............
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Posted: 16 years ago
#29
wow.....awesome update!!!!i luved d mayur parts!!!nd d way nupz was jealous of dia.....
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Posted: 16 years ago
#30
that was sooooooooooo cute!!i cud just imagine my Sajan!!!well done!!!do continue soon!!!
ynaiita

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