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Posted: 16 years ago
#41

Gr8 Update
lagta hai Mayank is really
set to get Nupur's stage fright
removed.
UPDATE SOON
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Posted: 16 years ago
#42
hey wat happened.....why no update yet????
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Posted: 16 years ago
#43
soz for the delay
goh busy in ma exams ... lol
well here's the next part
mayank is at home talkin 2 himself
M - main aesa kya karun jizse nupur pat jayeen !?
dia enters in
D - mayank ... kisse baat kar rahe ho?
M - yahan aur koi dikh raha hain .... obviously apne aap se baat karha hoon
D - lekin kya
M - choro phir kabhi bataugaan
scene shifts to nupur&gunjan's house
they are watchin tele .... just then the phone rings
gunjan goes to pick the phone up
G - hello
its samrat
S - hi gunjan
G - oh hi samrat
S - acha suno kal main apne ghar me party rakh rahaan hoon ... and yu and nupur have to come
G - party .... kis khushi mein ?
S - arre yaaaaar... tum to jaanti ho ki samrat ke paas koi wajah nahin hoti party rakhne ke liye... wo to bus jab man karta party rakh leta hain ... right ?
G - watever samrat ... main to tumhe aaj tak samajh nahin payin
S - jaanta hoon
Gunjan gives an innocent smile
G - tikhe we'll be there
S - thnks babes ... cyu in the party
next day in the college
mayank and samrat meet in the corridors
S - oh ! mayank .. main tujhe hi dhond raha tha
M - kyun ? kya huan ?
S - maine aaj raat party rakhi hain ... to tujhe bhi aana hain
M - erm .... kya gunjan bhi aa rahin hain
* mayank asks this to know if nupur will be there or not buh he cant say nupur so he says gunjan *
S - haan ! kyun?
M - bas yuhin
S - ok dude ... cyu later
M - so mayank aaj raat tera pehla step hoga nupur ko patane ka
geh ready !
college is over .... scene shifts to samrat's house
benji is also there
B - hey dude ... tu yeh party waise kis khushi mein de rahan hain yaar
S - kyunki aaj kisi ke liye surprise hain ...
B - achcha kiske liye ?
S - wo tujhe khud pata chal jaegaa
B - lekin
S - benjii kaam kar ... bate nahin
B - ok
scene shifts to mayank&dia's house
M - arre diya .... yeh shirt pehnu ya phir yeh
D - mayank ... tumhe ho kya gaya hain ... pehle to jo man me aata tha ... wo pehan lete thhee
M - arre yaar... tab to ...
D - tab to
M - tab to kuch nahin ... jaldi karo ... warna late ho jaegen
they leave the house ....
scene shifts to nupur&gunjan's house
nupur is wearin a suit that she wore in the new year's party
and gunjan is wearing a lovely black dress
both have their hair down
N - gunjan .... main thik to lag rahin hu na ?
G - nupur ... yeh tumne paachvi baar sawaal pocha hain ... abki pucha na ...
N - ok ok ... nahin puchu gi ! sorry
they laugh and leave the house
samrat's house
the house is now fully decorated
people have started cumin
uday and dia are also there together
U - dia .. tum kuch piyo gi ?
D - ermm .. red wine chale ga
U - achcha .... kyaan ?
dia laughs ... uday tum bhi naa
she fuffles his hair .... 😛
* mjht music is played *
he cant geh his eyes off from her
just then mayank comes
uday gets a bih scared
M - kya huan dodo
maine to kuch kahan bhi nahin
U - haha ... kamaal hain . maine bhi kuch nahin kahan
he laughs buh then notice's his silly humor
and stops laughin
M - chill dude .... have fun
he leaves dia and uday alone
gunjan and nupur enter in
both samrat and mayank cant geh their eyes off from their ladies
* mjht violen music is played *
they start walkin towards them ....
mayank looks at nupur
she looks at him
samrat looks at gunjan
she looks at him
the scene ends ...
i hope yu guys like this part
plz do leave comments
and lemme know if i culd improve the storyline
comin up next - entry of armaan malik as a old frend of gunjan ... samrat being jealous and the lovely romantic dance of mayank and nupur on the song khuda jaane ki
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Posted: 16 years ago
#44
awww such a nice update sammy jealous!! cant wait update soon!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#45
wowowowow tht was coollllllllll i love it plzzz contuied soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#46
oh really nice. But the mayur part was really short. please make the mayur part a little longer, but still very good.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#47
nice update!!! But pliz can u make ur parts longer .thanx.bye
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Posted: 16 years ago
#48
Great ff! Pllzzzzzzzzz continue soon!
Eagerly awaiting Sajan scenes!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#49
hey nice ff yaar!!!!!!!!eagerly waiting 4 d next epi!!!!!👏👏😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Senny

oh really nice. But the mayur part was really short. please make the mayur part a little longer, but still very good.

yu gonna see mayur parts during the party
so dont worry
😊
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