Sajan+Mayur FF *part9-page11*

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Posted: 16 years ago
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hi ... i really wanted to make a ff ... so here ih goes.... and yeah this is my first ff on this forum ... so do help and comment ... :)
so here the intro of the characters
* the characters are a bih diffo from the actuall serial*
Sammy - he is the * padaku* boy of the school😆 ... loves to be in the library and loves his mom dearly... his best buddy is gunnnjannnn...!!!! he is tooo hot and the girls go fida on him ...
Mayuuu - he is the cool *dude* of the school... all the girls go fidaaaa on him tooooo ... and he loves baaskkeet ball... * dont know bout his parents* buh he hates them....
Nupzzz - she is exactly like sammmy... !!! totall padaku girl... and is very very shy ... wel she willlll proggresss dhere dhere when she meets mayuuu ...!!! * college stud* .. she is about to arrive mumbai from morena ... to her cousin's place ...
Gunnnjan - she is a total bindaaas girlll and is nupzzz cousin who already lives in mumbai and know both sammy and mayuuu very welll ... !!!!! her and sammy geh along really well. .. she is really good in studdiesss tooo just like sammmy..!!!!!!!!
dia - she is mayank's sister 😛 ... and loves her bruvah....she is airit in studies and is quite pretty ..
uday - he is the aan baan and shaan of my FF ... LMAO... he is mayank's best buddy and is also close to dia....
benji - he is the cutest in the FF and is sammy's best buddy and also is close to gunjan ...
there are gonna be other charac.. introduced later ...
i'll come up wiv ma first part ASAP
till then ... do comment
if yu like the intro
thnks
ox
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow niceeeeeee plzzzz contuied i love your new ff
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Posted: 16 years ago
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it was really interesting
want to see nupur as padaku
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awesome nice intro............plz rite soon im waiting!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey nice!!!!!!! and hoping to see Sammy paddaku and Gunjan total bindaas......and Nupur ke liye sirf itna keh sakti hon "tum sharma bhi sakti ho!" BY GOD.......continue soon........
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thankyuh so much for all the replies
So here is the first part
ENJOY
Ok.. so its the first day of college after the summer break. Gunjan is waiting for Nupur on the station as she is cumin from Morena
.... the train cums .... and nupur comes outta the train .... with her music which goes sumfink like this ... (8) lalalala.... la ...la...la .... !! oooohh..!! ohoh ... nana .. nana ... nanaaaaa!! (8)
😆
sumfink like tht ...
ON THE STATION
G - Nupurrr!!!!
N - Gunjan ... .!!! (🤗) .... hi gunjan ... tu kaise haan ...?
G - Mast hu nupur ... tu battaann.. ? seing ya after ages man!!
N - Kya karu Gunjan ... ab tu to morena aane se rahi to maine socha kyun na main hi aajau .... kya bolti
G - Bilkul thik khe rahi .... chall .. ab jaldi ghar chal aur phir college bhi to jaan hain
N - aab!!... haan ... ( * feeling a lille bih shy when she hears the name of college * ) ,,, to challee
* them both leave from the station to go home *
NEXT SCENE AT MAYANK AND DIA'S HOUSE
D - mayuuu.... oh! mayuuuu!!!!!
M - kya hua dia ... main yahin hooon .... saat samunder paar nahin bathan jo itni tez chilla rahin ho ....
D - oofoo! mayank ... ek to tum hamesha apne baaloon ke saath khelte raheto ho ... upur mujhpe hi nakhre
M - WATEVER ! kya baat hain .. mujhe kyun bula rahi ho ???
D - yeh puchne ke liye .... ki aaj college jaana hai ... yah nahin ?
M - *smiles* ofcourse jaana hain ... mayank kabhi college naa jaye ... aisa ho hi nahin sakta
dia and mayank leave outaa their house together
SAMRAT'S HOUSE
samrat's mum is gonna be M
M - samrat!! utth mere baap .. college jaana hain
S - oops... sorry maan .. aaj aakh lagayi ... tum breakfast ready kardo ... main abhi aata hoon
M - ok ... baba ... jaldi karna
mum leaves and samrat get out of the bed to get ready
so tht was the first part ... do critisize and leave ur opinions ... !!
CUMIN UP NEXT IS NUPUR'S FIRST DAY AT SCHOOL ... MAYUR *LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT* AND MANY MORE SAJAN SCENES TOOO!!!!
😊
Edited by mjhtlover123 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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it was good
plz continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Really cool part
Just one question both Mayank and Samrat's mom
are 'M' right won't it be confusing.
Over to the fanfic
ITS GREAT JUST CONTINUE SOON😃

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Posted: 16 years ago
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luv the first pt!!!yhnx for a gr8 FF!do read mine"LUV IS IN THE AIR-FF"
please cont.soon!!!
ynaiita
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: TINAMALHONTRA



Really cool part
Just one question both Mayank and Samrat's mom
are 'M' right won't it be confusing.
Over to the fanfic
ITS GREAT JUST CONTINUE SOON😃

thnx for pointin out ... lol
i'll cum up wiv another name for samrat's mum in my next part
ox

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