~Dil Dosti Etc..AR...UPD! Part 32 and 33 Pg70 5/4 - Page 45

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Posted: 16 years ago
hey loved the part
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the hugg hmm i can imagine........kaaasshhhh i could even hug hm like this lolllzzzzzz alll i can do is dream hahahah

the part was amaing, fab
hope armaan reaches on tim n helps her......

plzz continuee soon n plzz do pm me
love habs
Edited by princess52 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
woah dear its really an awesome one mind blowingso cuteplz continue it soon & thanks for the pm

"You are my sunshine,
You are my shining star,
Everything I'm not,
You are.
You make me laugh,
You make my heart smile,
Everything you do,
Makes life worthwhile.
You are so sweet,
You are so very kind,
Everything I cherish,
In you I find.
You are a blessing,
You are an angel I see,
Everything about you,
Is Gods gift to me."






Nidha
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey aliya wowww yaar it ws amazing i cnt believe this she hug him omggg wowwwwwwww she felt so secure i wish i could also hehehe but never mind she did it vry gud yaar lvd it a lot he ws dying to apologize to her infact he also didn't listen ti nikki wowwwwwwwww yaar but actually she hug him i jst lv it yaar armaan also felt somthing hmmmmmmm cnt wait now how she wll goi to handle thse two guys hehehe cont soooon
thnksf r dpm
luv yachna
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Posted: 16 years ago
yayyy you updated!!!
sooo sorry i didnt comment on the last part but someone in my family died and so have been trying to deal with that 😔
as always this part was brilliant specially the terrace scene👍🏼
aww the hug was soo sweet even if it was a "friendly hug"!!
cant wait until ridhimma decides to face her feelings for armaan and tell him..but till then i am perfectly fine with scenes like these😉
it was shoooo cute how she felt all secure with him!!!
the best part was when THE armaan malik was nervous.. cant imagine that
thanks for such a awesome part !!!
~anjie
Edited by dmgaddict - 16 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

hey sweety....nice part dear👏

AR scene was so cute....frndly hug just luvd it😉😳
hope armaan reaches on time to help nikki
thx for the pm
cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
Thanks for the amazing comments guys! 😃
@Janvi: *reply to pt 26* alright, so I finally manged to squeeze out some time, and I apologise for the delay. First of all, thank you for commenting, 😃 Thank you so much for liking my story and the way I display my characters and all..I sure will add you to my PM list, I am sorry that I wasn't able to send you one before as life has been very hectic, but will do so from now on!😃
*reply to pt 27* Hey! I am glad you liked the part! hehe, yeah, I was dying to write a part in which Armaan turns all possessive and concerned for her, so I am gad you liked it!😃 I always thought that chemistry can be build better if both the POV's are shown, and so that is exactly what I wanted for my story...sure in some instances I show the same incident happening in different POV's, but I love writing how different or similar each are...Nikki is going to be stuck in this marriage mess for sometime...but don't worry everything will soon fall into place😊 thanks for the lovely comment!
@Habs: *reply to pt 26* How was your trip? hope you enjoyed!😊 hahaha, yeah, I know it was really small, but I really did not have any time😳 I am glad you enjoyed the concerned and protective side of Armaan, I certainly love to watch when Armaan turns all concerned and protective in DMG😆 anyway, glad you enjoyed the part, I surely will add you to my PM list if I haven't already, and will send you one really soon😃 thanks for commenting!
*reply for pt 27* glad you enjoyed the part...lol, I bet every girl in India and abroad, wishes she could hug him like that😆 sigh, I wish I could!😛 lol. you will only find that out in the next part... I will surely send you a PM...thanks for commenting!😃
@Tamanna: *reply to pt 26* Hey! glad you liked the part...I will continue really soon! thanks for commenting!😃
*reply to pt 27* Hey! glad you liked it, I will continue soon, thanks for commenting!
@Nidha: *reply to pt 26* hehe, better late than never😊 I am glad you liked the part! yup, Rajeev is pretty cheap and disgusting, but I am sure after the "Armaan dose" he won't be speaking like that about Ridhima😆...anyway, thanks for commenting Nidha!
*reply to pt 27* glad you liked it! I will continue soon, thanks for commenting!😃
@lovekaranmadly: sorry, I don't know your name, but thanks for commenting!😃 I am glad you liked it, I will continue soon!😃
@Yachna: *reply to pt 27* Hey! lol, everyone calls me Sweety not Aliya😆...anyway, thanks for commenting, I am glad you liked the hug! hehe, anyway, I will continue soon, glad you liked the part!😃
@Anjie: Omigosh! I am so sorry to hear that!, I hope you are doing fine😲...I am glad you liked the part, hehe, yeah the "friendly hug" will hopefully make them realise, though you will only see that in the next part!😃 hahaha, yeah, I was having so much fun writing that part, especially the bit where he started feeling nervous apologising to her!😆 anyway, I am glad you liked the part Anjie!😃
@Ridhima: *reply to pt 26* hahaha, yeah, timing is pretty bad...or is it?😛 You might be right, he might be just looking for a reaction out of Armaan...but those questions are something that will be answered as the time goes on and as the parts are posted😊 haha, about the punches, I am sure Armaan will find any excuse to punch him now...😆 but thanks for your comment, and I am glad you liked the part!😃
*reply for pt 27* glad you liked the AR scene...don't worry Armaan will get there on time...I am glad you liked this part...hopefully the next part won't be a disappointment😳
@Prasanthi: *reply to pt 26* Heya! hehe, a lot of people are wishing that, but as you saw in the next part, she was standing outside and only intervened when she knew it got too much...but knowing Rajeev, he might leave a lot of oppotunities for Armaan to beat the crap out of him...so don't worry about that😛 don't worry, I won't remove you...thanks for commenting, and I am glad you liked the part!😃
@Aarora: *reply to pt 26* Hey! I am glad you liked the part! yup, Rajeev will remain a mystery but some hints here and there will be dropped. Some people have made some close connections, but I am not revealing anything😳 I will continue on with Pt 28 really soon, thanks for commenting!😊
@Twinkle: *reply to pt 26* hahahahaha, yup, Armaan pissed off is damn sexy...which is why I absolutely loved writing it...and I am so glad you enjoyed it!😆 thanks for commenting!😃
@nj: *reply to pt 26* It's ok, I fiercely believe in the fact that it's better late than never....so I am glad you commented 😃 aww thank you! I don't think I could ever take you off my PM list....your comments are such a delight to read, that even if you stop commenting, you PM box is going to be full from my messages about updates!😆 Thanks for liking the part, and I was worried that the length might have an effect on the overall view of it, but I am so happy that you still found it enjoyable. ahaha, alright, I will take that punch as a compliment, though I think I am going to be receiving more than punches for the next part (part 28) that I am going to post...as it does end at a cliffhanger...but you know, being a writer, the evilness in me conquered and I felt that leaving it at a cliffhanger and seeing people's reaction is going to be fun...😆...anyway thanks for the lovely comment nj...and I hope you enjoy the coming parts!😃
@Aish: thank you!!😃😃
@loyalkashion: Thanks hon, I will update real soon, thanks for commenting!😃
@Deepu: Thanks for the lovely comment, I will add you to my PM list..glad to hear that you enjoyed the part!😃
Thanks for the lovely comments guys, the next part is coming in a bit!😃
~Sweety~
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Posted: 15 years ago
here is the next part guys...I hope you all enjoy! 😃


Part 28

Quickly parking the car into the driveway, Armaan undid the seatbelt, and bolted out of the car.

He wished he could go back in time, and change the way he had reacted with Nikki. He knew that there was no excuse for the rude way he had behaved with her, when all she wanted to do was discuss her problems. If she wasn't going to discuss the problems with him, then who else would she have to discuss them with?

Coming to the house, he turned the knob of the door, and opened it quickly.

He walked inside, and saw that Nikki was awkwardly sitting on the couch, opposite two men, who were glancing around the house, their eyes resting on him when they heard the door open.

Both of them stood up, and nodded with a smile in his direction. Armaan noticed that even though both were brothers, there were no common features that stood out. The shorter one had longish hair, while the taller one was dressed smartly in a suit, his hair short and slightly sticking up in spikes. The shorter one was fairer than the taller one, and was wearing a shirt with jeans, his shirt slightly tucked in. Armaan smiled back, and looked at Nikki who looked like she was about to cry.

Swallowing, Armaan turned back towards the two men, and said,

"Hi, I am Armaan. Nikki's-"

"very good friend" He was cut off by Nikki who had stood up and was looking at the two men, completely ignoring Armaan's confused look.

Very good friend? What are you playing at Nikki? Armaan thought, as he turned back to the two men, his smile deepening to confirm the words of Nikki.

The two men nodded and shook his hand.

"This is Raj" Nikki said, as she pointed to the shorter one "and this is Deepak" she said, as she pointed to the taller of the two.

Armaan led them to the couch, and sat opposite to them, putting his hands out in front of him, he was surprised however, when Nikki came and sat down next to him...very close to him.

He gave her another look, however she ignored that too. Clearing his throat slightly, Armaan turned to the two guys, and decided to get to know them.



*******


Ridhima walked into the bathroom, and turned the taps to fill the bathtub.

Grabbing her night clothes, she quickly got a towel, slipped out of her clothes, and got into the tub.

Giving a sigh of contentment, she laid her head back and closed her eyes.
She couldn't help but think about the whole day, about how both Armaan and Ridhima had managed to save the baby and the mother, how they had hugged twice in one day, how Armaan had been concerned for her…about everything.

Ridhima had a huge smile on her face, her eyes still closed. Ridhima had to admit, there was something. She knew that she…well, she liked him. She knew that, but to the extent to which she liked him, was unknown to her.

And it frightened her slightly, she wasn't sure if she was ready for a relationship.

But you don't even know if he is into you

Ridhima frowned as that thought came into her head. Of course! How could she be so foolish! She had no idea how he felt. He gave her two hugs, many dimpled smiles, a bit of concern and she was already planning their relationship.

He was far closer to Nikki than he was to her. Their hugs meant nothing, their interactions meant nothing and they meant nothing.

Stop being foolish Ridzi. Armaan and you are just friends. Just friends, nothing more.



********


Armaan noticed the odd stares he had been getting throughout the night from Raj, and it was starting to get to him. What was Nikki playing at? And why couldn't Raj stop staring, no rather, glaring at him?

"Anyway, it was nice meeting you, Armaan, and it was a pleasure getting to know you Nikita" Deepak said, as he got up and everyone followed suit.

"It was nice meeting you Deepak" Armaan said, while Nikki just smiled at him.

Armaan nudged her slightly and she finally said,

"It was nice meeting you too Deepak"

Armaan had to refrain from rolling his eyes at her monotonous tone. Armaan led the two to the front door, and held it open for them.

"See you Armaan, Nikita" Deepak said, as he walked out.

"Yeah man, See ya" Raj mumbled as he followed his brother.

Armaan gave them a polite smile, and waved goodbye at them as they sat down in their own car and drove away.

Armaan shut the door, and saw Nikki sitting on the couch, looking at the ceiling relieved.

"Well, that wasn't awkward at all" Nikki said sarcastically.

"Well, maybe if you had put in a bit of effort, it could have gone better!" Armaan chided her.

"Armaan! I don't even like him, and I don't want to get married to him, so this was my subtle way of letting him know that I hate him" Nikki said as she adjusted herself on the couch so she was facing him.

Armaan rolled his eyes as he sat on the couch opposite hers.

"Nikki, what's going on in that little head of yours?" Armaan asked her suspiciously as he remembered how oddly Nikki had behaved with him throughout the night.

Nikki immediately looked into his eyes, and looked away as quickly. Rolling her eyes she said,

"arrey woh chodo, you tell me. What was so important with Miss Ridhima Gupta that you had to leave your best friend alone in crisis?"

Armaan did not let his expression waver, however he did raise an eyebrow.

"Nikki, stop changing the subject and tell me exactly what have you got brewing in that non-existent mind of yours" Armaan said, and ducked to dodge the cushion that was thrown at him, followed by an indignant "hey!"

"Shut up Armaan, and it was nothing. Just harmless stuff, okay?" Nikki said
shrugging, not looking at him in the eye.

"Nikita" Armaan said warningly.

Nikki sighed and scowled up at him. "Don't use my full name like that"

"Nikita" Armaan said again.

"Alright, alright, jeez! I was wondering…er…woh…erm…Armaan, I am your best friend na?" Nikki asked as she fiddled with the cushion in her hand.

"Yeah…" Armaan said suspiciously.

"So, that means that you would do anything for me, right?" Nikki said, looking at him hopefully.

"Depends on what it is" Armaan said, leaning forward slightly.

"Armaan, will you be my boyfriend?" Nikki said in a rush.



Well...here is the part...I hope you all enjoyed it...I know it was really short, but I have an exam tomorrow, and this was all that I managed to finish..anyway, please don't forget to comment, they make my day! 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
woah dear its really an awesome one mind blowingso cuteur rockstar dear plz continue it soon thanks for the pm


"I never thought I would have seen someone like KASH,
Never in my dreams that I would have couple like
KASH,
But then, as I travel in my life's journey,
KASH walk into my life and I have a sweet couple like KASH.
KASH were always there for us through the sweet memories...

This Bond wouldn't end,
By
KASH sideKASHIAN would always stand,
KASH'll stand by KASHIAN too,
Coz that's what a bond,
In life through all of the wrongs & all of the rights,
KASHIAN'S r here for KASH to be a best friend that's true,
Always
KASH were there being our best couple."





Nidha

Edited by nidha1983 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
reserved!!!!
yayyy i am second but its to late and will comment later :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
my updated PM list...
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