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Posted: 16 years ago

Sweety...i hope thats what you go by...that doesnt strike me to be your real one...! Just got done reading the last part....it took me two days....mostly to search through the pages cuz your fic is missin an index...but aah i cudnt laze back and quit on it....this one recommended(in a confessed written)....rather delayed since i should have known about this long back...owing to numberable reasons...but finally..sum way...it reached my eyes...and i agree with all the accolades nj gives you for this one...surely it was a great read!! and i agree with her completely.....you have a way of putting your AR in those situations...its differnet...interseting and enjoying...kudos! :)

ill be keepin a watch on this one..though i am sucker for comments...so dont be wasting your time PMing me :S

good going...and now that ive read tons of them updates in a go...i am greedy for fore...hoping you'd update super soon!

cheers!

nijaL

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Posted: 16 years ago
Just over two weeks and I already have a part ready! woohoo! lol, but guys, school has started and this term is all about assessments...I haven't been able to reply to any comments, and this part is really short. I apologise for that, but school is seriously taking over my life at the moment. Please try and understand guys. anyway, I will have the next part up by tonight (Australian time) cause first I have to finish off notes on a chapter...but the next part will be up soon.
I am really sorry guys!
PS: could the people on my PM list add me to their buddy list so the PM sending is easier? thanks a ton guys! :D:D
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Posted: 16 years ago

Oh and I don't know if I mentioned it in my previous note...but I will be replying to all the wonderful comments real soon, once I get my head around this Psych chapter...argh! hate studies! wish they could cut off the schooling at 7th standard, don't they realise that stretching the schooling to 12th standard is a bit too much? anyway, enough of my rambling, like promised the next part will be up soon! ;D

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Posted: 16 years ago
yayyyy! you be posting soon :) and yeh, them school folks do go too far! whoever on this planet came up with the idea of 12 whole grades of school, must have been a loser in his head :D

oh well!... im not cribbing at all, a real part and soon! :)
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Posted: 16 years ago

@nj: Thanks for the analysis on all the parts!😃 First of all a happy belated birthday! I am so sorry, I didn't know! I could have dedicated those parts to you! But I will dedicate the next part to you!😃 anyway, I hope you had fun on your birthday!😃......I love the friendhsip that Armaan and Nikki share, and I really wanted to emphasize on it, so I am glad you like their friendship! hahaha, yeah I love that song too, and I wanted to briefly show that the friendship b/w all the characters is there, but it is overshadowed by the everyone's pairings with each other. So I wanted to show that Atul considers her to be a good friend just like everyone else considers each other to be good friends. 😊 lol yes, I love writing bits in which either Armaan or Ridhima are jealous, and I always try to portray that feeling across as much as I can...I really wanted to show a bit of medical aspect to the story, and I was on google trying to research on pregnancy problems and all that, so I was a bit hesitant in posting that part. But I am so glad you liked all the parts!😃

@Prasanthi : Hey! thanks for commenting! yup, the turmoil has started, however they still don't know what to name it. For Ridhima it's mostly fear though. Fear of being rejected, which is why she is refusing to accept these feelings. But dont worry, there will be a point real soon in the story where they both will realise their feelings, and will be forced to accept it!😃 Glad you liked the medical case, I was on google trying to research on pregnancy problems and all, though I was a bit hesitant in posting the part cause I wasn't sure how it will go down with my readers, though I appreciate getting such a positive response!😃 The next part will be up soon! thanks for commenting, and I am glad you liked then!😊
@Anjie: 😆 lol, that had me laughing out loud! hehe...still waiting for you comment!😊😳
@Nidha: Thank you soo much! I am glad you liked those parts! yup, I will update in a bit! thanks for commenting!
@Tamanna: Thanks hun! glad you liked the parts! I will update soon! thanks for commenting!
@Robin: Thank you soo much!😃....I am glad you liked the delivery! I will update real soon, but thanks a lot for commenting!😃
@Yachna: Hey! yeah, DMG breifly touched on that topic, and I really wanted for them to concentrate a bit more on that, but they didn't so I decided to put it in my story!😆 Yup, Ridzi was feeling insecure and jealous...the fact that Armaan is such good friends with Nikki really unnerves her, which is why she is having such conflicting thoughts😳 lol yeah, I wanted them to get closer through the proffessional sides of their lives as well😃 I will continue real soon! thanks for the great comment Yachna!
@habs: first of all...welcome to the fanfic!😆 lol, glad to know that I have a deewana of my fanfic..lol 😛 thank you soo much! I am glad you liked their friendship, cause I absolutely love writing about them, it reminds me somewhat of my friends!😆 I am really trying to build up their chemistry, and I hope I am successful at it😳 but thanks for the comment habs, and I look forward to reading more from you...I will surely add you to my PM list! 😃
@ridhima: aww thanks! I am glad you liked them!😃 yeah, I wanted to show a bit mroe of responsible and caring side of Armaan😳 I am glad you liked the operation bit, I was dying to insert something medical-related into the story😃 hmm about confession, that I think is still a bit far off, but there are going to be loads of exciting bits that are going to get them to realise their feelings!😉 I will continue soon! thanks for commenting!😃
@Nijal: yeah, that's not my real name, but everyone here calls me sweety, and that's the name I have adopted here 😊 I still need to work on adding an index, but everytime I get round to doing it, something else comes up😳, hopefully it wasn't too much of a trouble!😳 lol, thank you! 😃 aww I have to thank nj for this too! I am glad you found this to be a good read, and I am still working on putting AR in different situations to get them to realise their feelings, while still trying to remain realistic. But I am so glad you enjoyed this fanfic, and I look forward to reading your comments! 😊
Thanks for all the wonderful commented guys! the next part will be up in a bit!
~Sweety~
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Posted: 16 years ago
Here is the part guys! Sorry but it's a bit short😳
This part is dedicated to nj...happy belated birthday!😳😛
Part 26

"Armaan! Armaan!"

Armaan turned around to see Nikki jogging towards him. He smiled his acknowledgement, and waited for her to catch up.

"Hey Niks" He said, once she had caught up and was walking beside him.

"WOW yaar, that surgery both you and Ridhima did was freakin' awesome! No words! I would have absolutely freaked out and ran out running, but you looked so calm, there was hardly any blunder on your part, and you also managed to calm Ridhima down!" Nikki went on, using her hands to express some of her excitement.

Armaan chuckled and wrapped his arm around her, to give her a side-hug.

"aw thanks Nikki. What can I say, I am too good" Armaan said with a smirk, and waited for her to punch him for being so conceited.

"Whatever Armaan, I'll let you pass on that one. You kind of deserve some of the smugness, but not for too long. You say such a conceited remark again, and trust me you will get a punch"

Armaan laughed as he made his way towards Rajeev's room.

The talk with Rajeev was still pending, and he would make sure that by today Rajeev would have the message crystal and clear in his head that he would never mess with Ridhima again.

"so what do you have now?" Armaan asked.

"break, I am going to go to the caf. See you there?" Nikki said, as she turned towards him. He nodded and raised his hand to wave her goodbye.

He knocked on Rajeev's room for a brief second and then opened the door.

Looking inside he saw him sitting on the bed, and Armaan felt his muscles tense slightly, and took a deep breath to keep his anger in check.

Rajeev looked up, and give him a smirk. Armaan didn't return it, and went and sat down in the stool next to his bed.

Putting the file on the side table, Armaan looked at Rajeev in the eye, trying to form the words in his mind to get his message across crystal clear.

"Isn't Ridhima here today?" Rajeev asked him, as he raised an eyebrow.

"Dr. Ridhima" Armaan snapped, his eyes narrowed slightly, and the muscle in his hand twitched.

Remember Armaan, keep calm. He is a patient and you promised Ridhima that you will not get physical

"Alright, DR. Ridhima is not here today?" Rajeev asked again, and rolled his eyes slightly as he emphasized on the 'Dr.'

"Dekh Rajeev, you are a patient, and there are certain rules and regulations that everyone know about. Everyone knows that it is wrong to flirt with your doctors, let alone hold on to their hand and not let go" Armaan said, and his mouth curled into a snarl by the end of that sentence.

The muscles in his hand tightened as he saw Rajeev look at him with a blank face.

Remember Armaan, you are just supposed to talk, not use fists.

"Do you understand me?" Armaan asked, almost daring him to say no.

"What I don't understand is why she is getting you to do her dirty work. She could have told me herself" Rajeev said, still expressionless.

Armaan's bewildered face soon turned into one of anger, and he had to fist his hands to stop grabbing Rajeev by the neck and punching the crap out of him.

How in the world had Ridhima managed to stay strong and not get away from this case?

"look Rajeev, we all have been very patient with you, par agar tune usse phirse haath lagaya ya battameezi kari toh-"

"Toh kya?" Rajeev cut him off.

Control Armaan

"Dekh Rajeev, I-"

"abbey toh tu kya karega?" Rajeev cut him off again

Stuff the promise I made….

Armaan scowled and grabbed the front of Rajeev's shirt and pulled him towards him, so that Armaan's face was right in front of his, and his glare intensified.

For the first time since he had been in the room, he saw the bank mask of Rajeev slip away and another one replaced it, fear.

"Toh phir mujhse bura koi nahin hoga. You. Will. Regret. Ever. Laying. A. Hand. On. Her" Armaan spoke out every word slowly, each word laced with fury and protectiveness, as his eyes narrowed and the hand tightened on Rajeev's shirt.

Rajeev continued to stare at him, and soon his face turned to one of disgust.

"Are you threatening me Mr. Malik?" Rajeev asked through clenched teeth.

Armaan's hand tightened even more and his glare intensified, "It's a f****** promise, you b******"

He heard the door open, and his eyes momentarily slipped to the figure standing at the door.

His hand immediately dropped from Rajeev's collar as he saw Ridhima standing there, an unreadable expression on her face as her eyes continuously darted from Armaan and Rajeev, who was by now faking being hurt and rubbing his neck.

Armaan once again felt the anger returning, and wanted to grab Rajeev and punch him for as long as he wanted.

Though Ridhima's presence caused him to stop himself, and he let out a heavy sigh.

He stood up, and looked at her warily. Her eyes were now fixed on him, and there was a tiny layer of tears in them.

"I am sorry Ridhima. I know I promised, but…." He trailed off as he saw Ridhima march off from there.

Cursing out loud, he ran a hand through his hair and ran after her, praying to god that she wasn't too angry at him.
I have realised that a lot of the people on my PM list are no longer commenting. Around 8/9 people commented out of 20 people. If you no longer want to be on my PM list, then please let me know, I can assure you I would not offended in any way😆 But please let me know because it will make it loads easier to know who doesn't read my ff anymore!😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
my updated PM list...
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People will be taken off my PM list if they haven't commented for 2 parts or more...Could the people who want me to send them a PM add me to their buddy list so sending PM's is a whole lot easier? thanks!

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Posted: 16 years ago
hi,
well i'm one of ur ff's silent reader n have read all the 26 parts everytym u posted it. i rlly like ur writing skills. u bring out scenes very beautifully. i'll be gr8ful if u could send a pm to me also whenever u update n i'll add u to my buddy list to make things easier. as for being regular, well right now i'm not as busy as compared to the weeks before so whenever u update i'll leave my views 4 sure n i'll leave u a note if i'll not be able to do so, so that you don't stop sending me pms.
keep rocking n continue soon........................
Janvi
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Posted: 16 years ago
heya sweety.. I wish Riddhima did not come around in the last part... Rajeev would have got all the required lessons correctly.. but still it has to go with the flow of the story rite.. so agreed..eagerly waiting to read how will he convince her... thanks for the pm and do not remove me.. um always here :D.. continue soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey loved the update honey..amazing as always..rajeev is still a mystery..really wanted armaan to teach rajeev a lesson..but now he has to convince riddhima n make her understand that whatever he was doing was right..hope riddhima ll understand him..continue soon..cant wait to read more..
thanks for PM..
love ya..

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