~Dil Dosti Etc..AR...UPD! Part 32 and 33 Pg70 5/4

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Hey!...I have been on this forum for quite sometime...and I have read some AWESOME fanfics here....I started writing this fanfic in Star Forum Indya...and I thought of posting this story here as well😳😃....anyway, my story is called Dil Dosti Etc....and it is based on AR....it starts off from where Ridhima played that prank, in which she pretends that Vivek had raped her....anyway....I hope you like it😃
Dil Dosti Etc...
He stared at her, after everything that had happened he wasn't so sure if they could even breathe the same air as each other, let alone be in the same room together.

He knew that whatever he had said to her had been hurtful but that didn't mean that whatever she did was acceptable.

Shaking his head he got back to reality, taking all his things from his locker he went out making sure he bumped his shoulders with her in the way.

Giving a brief glance back he was amused to see how she stopped dead in her tracks and turned around to glare at him.


********


Opening her eyes, she looked at the clock, 5:00 am.

Groaning she rolled over and tried to go back to sleep for half an hour but it was no use, she was wide awake.

Getting up, she decided to get ready and be early at Sanjeevani today.


She reached Sanjeevani around 6:30 am when she saw his bike. Hatred filled her as she remembered everything he had said to her.

She didn't think it was right the way he treated her despite her constant apologizing.

In her daze she started walking towards the locker area when suddenly something hard bumped against her shoulder almost making her lose her balance.

After she regained it she turned around to see the most annoying man on earth.

Glaring she turned around and walked back into the locker room. Grabbing her things from her locker she waited around the locker area for everyone else to arrive.

There was no way she was going to be outside with him.

She couldn't even breathe the same air as him, let alone be in the same room together.
Hope you all like it!!...please comment! 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey,
Really nice start,plzz continue it soon and pm me if possible when you update.

love,
sameera😊

Edited by sameera_12 - 16 years ago
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alright...so I am posting another chapter...please do comment and let me know if I should continue.

This chapter introduces another character into the story.....I tried making this chapter longer
Dil Dosti Etc...

Recap

Grabbing her things from her locker she waited around the locker area for everyone else to arrive. There was no way she was going to be outside with him.
She couldn't even breather the same air as him let alone be in the same room together.



Part 2


Rain, unexpected rain in the streets of Mumbai. People immediately opened their umberellas to shield themselves against it, and the people who didn't have any umbrellas ran for cover.

One of those people happened to be Rajeev Singh. Trying to reach work on time, he ended up forgetting his umbrella at his house.

Walking on the main road, he prayed to god that it wont rain today, but god wasn't exactly going to listen to his wishes.

********

Mr. Malhotra was again late to office. It was after all his fault he could never get up on time to get ready, and if he did get ready on time, he could never find his things.

Quickly glancing at the watch he cursed. He was supposed to reach his office in 5 minutes.

Closing his eyes he prayed to god, that today he could reach office on time.

Cursing again he honked at the car in front of him.

It wasn't really the car's fault that he was stuck in this traffic but it felt good to release a bit of his frustration.

Massaging his head he started up making excuses in his head to tell his manager why he was late for work...

just then he was startled out of his thoughts by his phone ringing. Lowering the volume of the car stereo, he picked up his phone.

"haan jaan, just stuck in traffic'.yeah I'll get the milk on my way back" Mr. Malhotra said.

The traffic started moving slowly and soon, the cars started moving a bit faster, allowing Mr. Malhotra to go on his way to his office. Sighing he looked at the clock.....he was 5 minutes late'

"what? No'no'I am driving now, Jaan. I should put down the phone In case I am caught. Ha ha, I doubt he would accept just 10 bucks. Accha now'.what who's coming?" Mr. Malhotra asked, as he switched on the wipers of his car. He was glad that it was raining, now at least he had an excuse to be late.

'Sir, it was raining, and you know how the traffic gets when it rains.'

Smirking he turned a corner, and speeded a bit.

"Yaar, I hate them! So what if they are in our building'so what if they helped us once...I don't care, no we are not having them over for'OH SHIT!"

Mr. Malhotra tried to turn his car from banging into a man, crossing the road. But, the wet roads were slippery and his car skidded, making the car slam into the man sideways.


********


Dum Dum Dum

Rajeev opened his eyes,

'Where is this noise from? What am I doing on the floor'wait it is a road'what the hell am I doing lying down in the middle of a road?!?"

trying to move his hands or anything, he felt as though there was a weight on him, which was not allowing him to move any part of his body.

Slowly he closed his eyes, and opened them again....his eyes came back in focus. There were lots of people surrounding him.

They were all looking down on him with concern and some would turn and talk to the person standing next to them.
But all he could hear was, 'dum dum dum.'

Closing his eyes again, he tried to make the sound go away, slowly he could start hearing the sound of cars, rain and someone shouting at someone.

He opened his eyes again and he could feel the rain fall on his face.....he turned his head on the side and saw red.

He could see something very dark, seeping from very near his head, and when it mixed with water, it turned to light red.

"Listen I am not drunk it is 8:30 in the morning! Do you actually think I would drink so early in the morning?"

Rajeev tried to look at the person shouting, but the people surrounding him blocked the view.

He tried to move his legs, but a sharp pain shot through him, making him shout out.

Suddenly everyone around him went quiet and looked at him as though he was an alien from outer space'too afraid to touch but determined not to let it out of their site.

The last thing he heard before darkness took over was the distant sound of an ambulance coming.
********


All interns report to the nurse station please.

Armaan, who was already standing at the nurse station, gave a look around.

No one was there yet. Closing his eyes he rested his head against the wall.

The memories came flooding back to him.....

Armaan was running around scared. There was a desperate feeling in his stomach. Looking into the fire escape, he didn't see anyone. Hope was fading fast, his breath was becoming short and his heart was beating fast with worry.

"Hey, Armaan! Where are you lost yaar?"


Opening his eyes, he saw Atul's smiling face. Next to him were Muskaan and Rahul.

Smiling at all three of them he said, "hey guys, just tired, so thought of closing my eyes for awhile."


"just don't let Hitler see you, otherwise she might just end up cracking it at you. Also yaar, I need your help with something." Atul said.


"Let me guess the problem is Anjie?" Armaan said rolling his eyes.


"Haan yaar! How did you know? Anyways I was thinking of surprising Anjali with something'any suggestions?" Atul asked putting his arms around Armaan's shoulder.

However Armaan didn't get to reply because at that very moment, doctor Keerti came along with everyone else.

"Doctor Atul and Doctor Muskaan, you are in the Path lab today. Doctor Rahul and Doctor Anjali, you are in the general ward. Doctor Ridhima and Doctor Armaan, you two have a new case today'.Rajeev Singh. Oh and Doctor Rahul and Doctor Muskaan, after you have finished your respective duties, you both go to the Children's ward. Dr. Atul and Dr. Anjali, you two will handle the path lab after Dr. Muskaan and Dr. Rahul leave for the children's ward. Any problems?"

Everyone shook their heads.

"Good now get to work." Dr. Keerti said.
So here is the part...please comment and let me know if I should continue! 😳😃
Edited by sweetdamage - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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i like the beginnin plz jaldi se continue!!!!!
oo and can u plz pm me ven u do
Krani thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: sameera_12

Hey,
Really nice start,plzz continue it soon and pm me if possible when you update.

love,
sameera😊

Hey!!...thanks for liking my story!
and you have been added to my pm list! :D
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: dmgaddict

i like the beginnin plz jaldi se continue!!!!!

oo and can u plz pm me ven u do

Hey thanks so much!!
I will pm you when I update next!😃😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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waohšŸ¤— its really an awesome oneā­ļø superbšŸ˜›šŸ˜Š plz continue it soonšŸ˜› & plz pmšŸ˜‰ me when u update it😳


"Yaadon Ki Duniya Ho,
Mohabbat Ka Mahal Ho,
DiL Ka Darwaza Ho,
Khuloos Ki Dastak Ho,
To 1 Pyara Sa Rishta Banta Hai,
DOSTI KA!!!"


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Originally posted by: kvn1983

waohšŸ¤— its really an awesome oneā­ļø superbšŸ˜›šŸ˜Š plz continue it soonšŸ˜› & plz pmšŸ˜‰ me when u update it😳


"Yaadon Ki Duniya Ho,
Mohabbat Ka Mahal Ho,
DiL Ka Darwaza Ho,
Khuloos Ki Dastak Ho,
To 1 Pyara Sa Rishta Banta Hai,
DOSTI KA!!!"


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awww thanks for the comment!!!.....I'll pm you!!😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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plzz pm me too
I loved it
continue soon
Krani thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: nikitapatel_94

plzz pm me too

I loved it
continue soon

Hey!!...thanks!...I will pm you when I update...it will be tomorrow! 😃

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