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Bonai

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Posted: 16 years ago

#101

Welcome back Ananya after a long time. I read the yeh zindagi till part 8 at one go, its awesome. Very nice enjoyable romantic love story. I find part 7 & 8 very cute in every way be it Raj trying to make Kranti jealous about Manpreet or the conversation between the newly weds and Raj's gesture to his new bride at the end. Described it brilliantly. This is the natural way of life. Waiting eagerly for next part. Through ur FF we are getting the apt dose of RK romance what the show supposed to give us but they never deliver.

I like ur another FF Sitam too, but like this one more. Please update as soon as possible for u.

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ANANYA ROY

@yakkudimag

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Posted: 16 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: aati1429
Hey well... Why couldn't she say anything and neither sleep.. hmmm 😆 ==Hmm..you know the reason..😉

Well in ur story it seems quite natural that a girl in arranged marriage tries to accomodate herself to new life..

==Hmm..kahani ghar ghar ki..

very well written.. I just loved it... ==Thanks..

Thanks for an update dear..

Also I hope sohan tauji is alive only... ==Yaa..hope so..

waitng for next part

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ANANYA ROY

@yakkudimag

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Posted: 16 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: pennu
First of all.. Thanks a lot for your lovely update Ananya.... Hope god bless you to solve all your pbms.... Now about your update....

Happy to know that Sohnam sighji felt that Kranti is having something special towards Raj... and he even happy for her marriage, to Rajveer.... ==Hmm..she is..happy indeed..

And I just loved the way how raj hold Kranti's hand and asked her about the last night.... Once gain a great work done by you ananya... Mee too waiting to see, what will happen next in Kranti's life....==Keep waiting..

Originally posted by: tetuty66
Ananya very nce update.......too natural I agree with Aati in arrianged mrg a girl tries to accomodate.... ==Har ladki k saath hota hai bhai..natural..
I really like ur dialogues..I mean u write too good... ==Thanks..
Waiting for next update!

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ANANYA ROY

@yakkudimag

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Posted: 16 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: Ocean_deep
gr8 update ananya.......
love ur FF..;) ==Thanks for loving it..keep loving,.

Originally posted by: sasha722
😳Wel Come Back
I really missed u & some time back i posted 2 u about ur whereabouts
Wow
I really love ur Yeh Zindagii & was missing so much ==Sorry..😕

U brought Kranti & Raj INNOCENCE ==Really??
A true life Partner where they do not Hide any
thing Between them ==Very true..
A very Good Sharing Bond is clearly shown
Even their Ideologies are different ==Life is all about co-ordination..and communication..
Raj in favor of Britisher & Kranti A Freedom fighter
But U hve shown Love is so blind even difference
does not effect thre relation
But so wel they understand each other
Best part Good communication bet them ==Thanks..

We have such good writers in FF
pari, Bonai, skepi Poetic & of course U
U all display the Emotion so wel
Hats Off
Pl update part 9 Sooooooooooooonnnnn

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ANANYA ROY

@yakkudimag

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Posted: 16 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: luv_guru
firstly thank you very much for your update ananaya.

it is too good . I speacially loved the part when kranti calls Raj by his name for the first time. 😳😳==I am so glad..

hmm pehli baar when a husband hears his name from his wife ,its is a nice feeling ,i mean abhi tak i have not expirenced it but I can imagine .==Even I am not married yet..ek bhi shaadi nahi hui..

very well written .👏👏

eagerly waiting for your next update .

Originally posted by: namita25
ananya thanks dear for the update........😳..😳
...........so shubhaankar seems to be jealous.............. ==Hota hai..insaan ki sulaghti hai..
I really liked the way Kranti tried to confuse Raj.......... ==Kranti never tried..Raj is inbuilt confused..
bechaara Raj .........................................
l had a hearty laugh reading this line:🤣🤣
Toh..kyaa chaahti ho..roz raat ko aise goad me utha kar bistar me sulana padega mujhe?

You are laughing?Strange..so romantic of Raj.

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ANANYA ROY

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Posted: 16 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: dinky_05
Hi Ananya
Although maine IF bahut late join kiya hai............but I've read all d parts of 'ye zindagi' n 'sitam'......both d FFs r marvellous n hv diff flavour...... ==Thanks..

let me tell u frankly..... I like "ye zindagi' more than 'sitam'😊==Me too..

ab mai 8th part pe aati hu..........its awesome......specially d conversation part., my fav lines r --

Toh..kyaa chaahti ho..roz raat ko aise goad me utha kar bistar me sulana padega mujhe?

Maine kab roka?So jaao na..(vo sone kaha de raha hai kranti ko😳)

Raj ko inta mature dekh k achha lag raha hai,d way he holds kranti's hand......i mean d gesture was very simple yet very sweet n romantic. ==Ohho...don't get so impressed..😉

I totally agree wid sasha tht we hv such gud writers in FF n u r one of them👍🏼==Thanks..

ab jaldi se nxt part update kar do...plzzzzzzzzzz

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ANANYA ROY

@yakkudimag

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Posted: 16 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: Bonai

Welcome back Ananya after a long time. ==Thanks..I read the yeh zindagi till part 8 at one go, its awesome. ==Thanks again..Very nice enjoyable romantic love story. I find part 7 & 8 very cute in every way be it Raj trying to make Kranti jealous about Manpreet or the conversation between the newly weds and Raj's gesture to his new bride at the end. Described it brilliantly.==I am flattered, This is the natural way of life. Waiting eagerly for next part. Through ur FF we are getting the apt dose of RK romance what the show supposed to give us but they never deliver. ==That is why I stepped forward..😉
I like ur another FF Sitam too, but like this one more. Please update as soon as possible for u.

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ANANYA ROY

@yakkudimag

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Posted: 16 years ago

#108

Well..thanks a lot..for giving such long comments..I will try to make the fic up to the mark..I promise.😃

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ANANYA ROY

@yakkudimag

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Posted: 16 years ago

#109

PART 9

Din humesha ek jaise nahi rahte.Kranti ki zindagi alag hi thi..aaj bhi alag hai.Shaadi k baad Kranti apni peechhli zindagi ko peechhe chhod nahi paai.Lahore k Krantikarion k saath abhi tak uska milna julna tha.Rajveer bhi soch raha tha..k kya usne Kranti k dil par puri tarha kabza kar lia hai yaa nahi.Ghar ki Bahu k taur pe Kranti apna farz bahut achhe se nibha rahi thi.Kisiko shikayat nahi thi.Par Raj k dil me ajeeb si hulchul ho rahi thi.Raj k andar ka premi adhoora reh gaya tha.Apni premika ko dhoondh raha tha..jo paas toh hai.. par dil k kareeb nahi.

Jab se yeh duniya bani hai..tab se mard aur aurat ka fark bhi bana hai.Par aaj k daur me yeh fark mit raha hai.Auraton k zimme yeh soch aati hai k ,"Mera Pati kitna pyaar karta hai mujhse.."..par aisa nahi ho raha hai..Raj yeh soch raha hai..k " Meri Patni mujhse vaakei me pyaar karti hai yaa nahi." Ghar ghriasthi ka yehi niyam hai k Pati apna kaam kare..aur Patni apna farz nibhaaye..par sirf farz nibhaane k lia Raj ne Kranti se shaadi toh nahi ki. Insaan ki yehi fitrat hai..jo chees haath me hai..woh nahi nazar aata..jo haath me nahi aaya ussike peechhe bhaagta hai insaan.Raj bhi aise hi bhaag raha hai.

Subha ki shuruat Kranti ki shakal dekh kar hoti hai..fir Raj court chala jaata hai..shaam ko aata hai..toh Kranti usske lia chai naashte k intezam me lag jaati hai.Ek raat Raj neend se jaag gaya tha..Kranti ko apne paas nahi paaya usne..pareshaan ho gaya.Par dekha Kranti Raj k study table par rakhi hui ek kitaab padh rahi hai.Aur kuchh likh bhi rahi hai.Raj samajh gaya k Kranti kyaa likh rahi hai.Uske kitaab ka doosra bhaag.Raj darr gaya.Pahle bhaag par se abhi tak British Government ki nazar nahi gayi hai.Ab yeh doosra bhaag. Mushkil me akeli Kranti nahi fansegi.Raj samajhta hai isse pura Laal Khandan mushkil me aa sakta hai.Raj uth kar Kranti k paas aaya.Kranti ne dekha Raj ko.

Raj--Neend nahi aa rahi hai?

Kranti--Nahi..issi lia socha 'YEH ZINDAGI' ka doosra bhaag likhna shuru kar doon.

Raj--Din me khaali waqt me likh lena..raaton ko jaagna theek baat nahi..chalo..so jaao.

Kranti--Kuchh nahi hoga..main zara likh loon..aap so jaaiye..main kuchh hi der me so jaaoongi..

Raj--Nahi..chalo..arre..tumhara badan garam hai..arre..

Raj ne Kranti k gale me haath rakha..vaakei me Kranti ko bukhaar hai.Raj ne kaha , "Doctor ko bulaya tha ghar par?"

Kranti--Theek ho jaayega..kuchh khaas nahi..do chaar din se aisa lagta hai..koi baat nahi.

Raj--Chalo so jaao..aao..

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Agle din subha Kranti uth kar neeche gayi..Buajee aur Chaijee baith kar baat kar rahi thi.. Baojee bhi the.Baojee k haath me kitaab thi,'YEH ZINDAGI'..Baojee bade khush hain.. kitaab padh kar unko badi achhi lagi.Kranti ko dekh kar Baojee ne kaha,"Puttar..tune yeh kahani padhi hai?Raunak Randhawa ki likhi hui..kyaa likha hai munde ne..teri Chaijee bata rahi thi iska doosra hissa bhi niklega toh kharidegi..mujhe bhi padhna hai...karobar k jhamele me yuh fansa tha k yeh sab padhne ka mauka nahi mila.Ab padhoonga..tu bhi padh..bahut achhi hai.."

Kranti--Jee..padh chuki hoon..mujhe bhi achhi lagi.

Chaijee--Mujhe toh iske doosre bhaag ka intezar hai..Raj Puttar ne laa kar di thi yeh kitaab..arre Raj..uth gaya Puttar?

Raj seedhi se utar raha tha..paas aaya..kaha ,"Jee Chaijee..aaj lautne me zara der hogi.. zaroori kaam hai..Giverner k Office jaana hai."

Buajee--Kranti..Puttar..Raj ko naashta de de..

Kranti--Jee..

Chaijee--Puttar..tere Baojee ko bhi yeh kitaab achhi lagi..

Raj--Kaun si?

Chaijee--Arre..Raunak Randhawa ki zindagi..wahi..tere Baojee bade utaavle ho rahe hain..aage padhne k lia..

Raj ka darr ab dheere dheere badhne laga..gharwalon se aisi baatein sun kar agar Kranti ne fir se likhna shuru kar dia..toh shaamat aayegi..shaamat kyaa..quayamat aayegi.

Raj--Baojee..Rai Bahaduri chahie toh aisi kitaabon se door hi rahe aap..lene k dene na pad jaaye.

Kul--Oyye..Rai Bahaduri k lia apne shaukh chhod doon kya?Tu bhi..khota hai pura..

Raj--Jee..

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Kul--Raj..main kal zara baahar jaaoonga..tera saath aana zaroori hai..kanooni karvaahi hai..

Raj--Kal..kahi naa jaaye aap..

Kul--Kyun?

Raj--Satnam Singh k aane ki khabar hai..Lahore me karfew bhi lag sakta hai..aise me kahi jaana yaa sadak par hi nikalna..khatre se khaali nahi,Baojee..

Kul--Jaisa tu kahe..par kal jaata..toh kaam jaldi nipat jaata..

Raj--Karobar aap ki zindagi se badh kar nahi Baojee..

Madhumati aai..boli ,"Devarjee..kal Devranijee ko zara Doctor ko dikhana laana aap..unka bukhaar utarta hi nahi.."

Raj--Abhi tak ghar par Doctor kyun nahi bulaya aap logone?Kal hungama hoga waise hi..Lahore me Police aur Millitary k log aa rahe hain..

Madhu--Aise gussa kyun karte hain aap?Tabiyat kharab kya din aur muhurat dekh kar honi hai?

Raj--Aisi baat nahi hai Parjaijee..bas kal ka din..uske baad main le chaloonga..yaa khud Doctor ko bula laaoonga..

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Kranti kuchh aur hi soch rahi thi..usko kisi bhi tarha Satnam Singh k juloos me shaamil hona hai.Kaise bhi kar k jaana hai..Raj jaane nahi dega.Par Kranti jaayegi zaroor.Shaadi k paanch maheeno me Kranti achhe se Raj ko pehchaan chuki hai.Jo woh keh deta hai.. uske upar aur kuchh sunna yaa samajhna nahi chaahta.Kai dino se Kranti ne ek line tak nahi likhi.Par paison ki zaroorat hai..apne saathion tak pahoochaane k lia..Kranti ne socha tha..baaki ka bhaag likh kar jo paise milenge..woh paisa woh apne saathion tak pahoochayegi.Shubhankar se baat ho chuki hai.Lahor me kitaab nahi chhapegi..toh Amritsar me chhapegi ..yaa fir Bhatinda..Punjab itni badi jagah hai..kahin na kahi toh Police nahi pahooch paayegi.Par Raj k rahte aisa hona mumkin nahi lag raha hai.

Agle din andhera rahte hi Kranti utha gayi..Raj so raha tha..Kranti puja ki thaali saja kar nikal gayi ghar se.

Satnam Singh ko dekhne bahut log aaye the..Police bhi thi wahan par..Kranti bheed k andar gayi..achanak bawal mach gaya..lathi charge hone lagi.Bachte bachaate Kranto bheed se nikli..Satnam Singh se woh khud milna chaahti thi..unhike haaton Sohan Taujee ne khat bheja hai..k aage kyaa karna hai.Aur kyaa bilkul hi nahi karna hai.Par Kranti un tak pahooch nahi paai.Aise me Rai Bahadur Heerachand Kapoor ki gaadi guzar rahi thi.. unhone Kranti ko pehchaan lia.Gaadi se utar kar woh Kranti ko khinchte hue le gaye gaadi k andar.

Udhar ghar me sab pareshaan..Chhoti Bahu kahan gayi..Jagat Kaka se pata chala k Kranti subha mandir jaane k lia nikli thi.

Chaijee--Lo..ab aaj hi mandir jaane ki kyun soojhi?

Buajee--Koi baat nahi ..abhi laut aayegi..fikar kyun karti hai Parjai?

Kul--Raj..tune mujhe kahi jaane se mana kia..Bahu ko kuchh nahi bataya tune?

Raj--Maine usse batana zaroori nahi samjha..mujhe kahan pata tha k woh subha uth kar mandir ki taraf jaayegi..main jaata hoon usse dhoondhne..

Madhu--Kaun se mandir gayi hai yeh bhi toh pata nahi..kisiko bata kar bhi toh nahi gayi..

Raj--Aas paas dhoondh loon..pahle..

Madhu--Bukhaar k beech kyun gayi Devranijee?Kamre se nikalte waqt aapko pata nahi chala?

Raj ko gussa aa raha hai Kranti par..Raj samajh raha hai k Kranti kahan gayi hai..upar se Madhumati k sawal..Raj chillana chaahta hai..par kuchh nahi keh paa raha hai.Aise me Doctor Verma aaye..har maheene aate hain..Lalajee ka check up karne.

Raj--Doctor Saab...aap kaise aaye..baahar jhamela nahi hai?

Verma--Jee.Satnam Singh aur uske saathion ko arrest kia hai Police ne..par kerfew nahi laga hai..aadha ghanta pahle sab normal ho gaya hai..

Sun kar Raj k sar par aasmaan toot pada.Arrest!Kranti agar wahan par hogi..toh usko bhi arrest kia hoga Police ne..Raj bhaaga baahar ki taraf..aur saamne Kranti ko dekha usne. Peechhe Rai Bahadur Kapoor ko dekha..Kranti k haath me puja ki thaali hai.Aur sar se khoon beh raha hai..Chaijee aur Madhumati daur k aai.."Arre..kyaa ho gaya..Doctor Saab.. dekhiye toh..Raj..Puttar khada kyun hai?"

Kapoor Saab Raj ko apne saath paas wale kamre me le gaye..unhone bataya ,"Kranti Satnam Singh k samaroh me gayi thi..Police ne laathi charge ki..ussime chot lagi.Shukar hai main wahi se guzar raha tha..varna aaj Kranti arrest ho sakti thi..tumhe bataya..kyunki Lalajee ko batana..unki sehat k lia theek nahi..aainda aisa naa ho..is baat ka dhyaan tumko hi rakhna hai.."

Raj ne ek shabd nahi kaha.

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Kranti k sar par patti bandh chuki thi...Doctor ne usko neend ka injection bhi dia hai.Ab do ghante aram se soyegi.Chot zyada gehri nahi hai.

"Dekhiye..aram karne dijiye..darrne ki baat nahi hai.Par aage se aisi chot naa lage toh behtar..bukhaar hai kai dino se..hota hai..unka khayaal rakhiyega..baaki ki baat..main Bahenjee aur Parjaijee se kar chuka hoon.."

Raj ne Dr.Verma ko baahar tak chhoda.

Kranti ki neend jab tooti tab..Chaijee aur Buajee ko saamne paaya..aur Madhumati bhi hans rahi thi..Karnti ne mann hi mann kaha ,"Mujhe chot lagi aur inko hansi kyun aa rahi hai?"

Raj apne study room me baitha tha..apne Baojee se baatein kar raha tha..Lalajee bahut khush hain...Kewal ki shaadi ko itne din hue..abhi tak aisi khabar nahi aai..aur Raj ki taraf se aisi khushkhabri..Lalajee Dada banne wale hain.Doctor Verma yehi khabar suna gaye.

Kranti uth kar baithi..aur Chaijee daantne lagi.."Mandir jaane ki kyun soojhi?Tujhe kuchh ho jaata toh?Bata kar jaana tha..yaa Raj ko saath le jaana tha..pata hai hum sab kitne pareshaan the"

Kranti--Chaijee..khana nahi banana hai kya?Chaliye...

Madhu--Arre tum baitho..ab tumhare aram karne k din hain..

Kranti--Mamuli si chot hai..theek ho jaayega..

Madhu--Nahi..itni jaldi nahi..kuchh maheene lagenge..

Kranti--Kyaa?

Buajee--Arre..baoli..tu Maa bannewali hai...tu abhi tak nahi samjhi?

Kranti--Main..?

Chaijee--Haan..Doctor Saab toh yehi bata kar gaye...

Kranti--Kaise?

Buajee--Arre..kyaa bol rhi hain..ab aram kar..chal..

Kranti--Nahi..main theek hoon..

Buajee--Aaj itni chot aai tujhe..kuchh dino tak leti reh..bistar par..baad ki baad me sochenge..

Buajee aur Chaijee chali gayi..Madhumati khadi rahi.

Madhu--Kyaa hua ..tum khush nahi?

Kranti--Kuchh samajh me nahi aa raha hai..

Madhu--Samajhna kyaa hai..aisa har ladki k saath hota hai..haan meri badkismati k ab tak meri goad nahi bhari..par tumko toh khush hona chahie..

Kranti--Aisa kaise?

Madhu--Kyun nahi?Aur tum kitni bhi padhi likhi ho..kitni bhi aaj ki ladki ho..ho toh issi khandan ki Bahu.Kuldevta itni aasaani se chhootkara denge nahi..unka dia ashirwad tumko apni goad me lena hi hoga..ab jo hua..khush ho jaao..ab toh tumhara raaj chalega is ghar par..ghar ko waaris jo dene wali ho..par Rani banne k baad..apni is gharib Jethani ko mat bhoolna..

Kranti--Mujhe Rani nahi banna...

Madhu--Aise kaise?Dekho na..saari mehnat mere Pati ne ki..karobar ko aage badhaya...aur Devarjee aa gaye..aur sab kuchh unhike kahe mutabik hota hai..ab unse ghar ko waaris mil raha hai..unka pura kabza hoga ghar par..tum toh Rani banogi hi..kuchh hi dino me Baojee Rai Bahadur banenge..aur tumhara bachcha is duniya me aayega..bas dekhti raho..tumhara chehra kyun utar gaya?Kaash ..main tumhari jagah par hoti..tum aram karo..

Kranti--Nahi..is tarha mujhe baandh nahi sakte sab..nahi..aisa nahi chaaha tha maine..yeh zanjeer..nahi..

Madhu--Yeh shaadi ka rishta hai..saans tootne k baad hi tootegi..aur zanjeer..woh toh pad hi chuki hai...khush raho..

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Lalajee ko lekar Rajveer baahar gaya tha..karobar k silsile me..ghar lauta toh Kranti nahi thi ghar par..Buajee k ghutno me dard hai..issi lia Chaijee unko chhod kar jaa nahi paai.. aur Madhumati ko ghar k kaam karne the.Kranti Saroj ko le kar kitaab kharidne gayi hai.

Lalajee--Aise waqt par..Bahu ko akela kyun chhoda?

Chaijee--Saroj hai..

Lalajee--Arre ,woh bachchi hai..

Raj--Saroj apne saare kaam ab tak khud hi karti aai hai..ab Kranti ki zaroorat bahut zyada pad rahi hai usko..kyaa baat hai Chaijee?

Chaijee--Tu itna kyun bigad raha hai?

Lalajee--Uske chot theek nahi hue..arre..Bahu aa gayi..tu akeli kyun gayi thi?

Kranti--Jee..Saroj thi..

Chaijee--Jaa...tu haath muh dho le..sab ko khana parosna hai..jaldi aa...

Raj ne sab k saamne kuchh nahi kaha.

Raat ko Kranti fir se likhne baithi..

Raj--Bahut der ho chuki hai..so jaao..

Kranti--Bas..kuchh der..

Raj--Manmaani karne k lia tumko biha kar nahi laaya..so jaao..

Raj k tewar badle hue the..Kranti ne kaha ,"Yeh kyaa tareeka hai?"

Raj--Achha?Aur woh kyaa tha?Sab se chhoop kar baahar kyun gayi?Satnam Singh k samaroh me?Kitna khatra tha..pata tha na tumko?Shukar hai..Sanjay k Dad ko tum mili.. aur kyaa hota tumhara?Doctor ne kyaa bataya ..pata hai na tumko?Aisi haalat me jail ki hawa khaana ..kyaa bolna chaahti ho?

Kranti--Tumse kuchh bhi nahi chhoopa hai...meri zindagi...k baare me..

Raj--Haan..par iska matlab yeh nahi k tum jaan boojh kar khatre me jaao..Kranti..ab tumhari shaadi ho chuki hai..ek Pati hai..Saas,Sasoor,Jeth,Jethani..sab ka matlab samjho.. ab tum akeli nahi ho..aur inki parvah naa sahi..ab toh tum Maa bhi bannewali ho.. is baat ka khayaal rakho..

Kranti--Meri Maa bhi jab Maa banne jaa rahi thi..tab unhone bhi samaroh me hissa lia..

Raj--Haan..kyunki tumhare Baojee ki ijazat thi..kyunki woh khud ek Krantikari the..par tumhara Pati..Krantikari nahi hai..issi lia apni pregnant wife ko aise jalso me jaane ki ijazat nahi doonga main...

Kranti--Tumhari ijazat ki zaroorat padegi mujhko?

Raj--Haan..leni padegi ijazat..ghar se akeli baahar nahi jaaogi..tum kahan jaa sakti ho..kahan nahi..ab se main tai karoonga.

Kranti--Main ..nahi..aisa nahi..kisine baandh k nahi rakha hai..tumhine kaha tha..muj par koi bandeesh nahi hai..

Raj--Ab tum par lagaam daalni padegi..bahut zaroori hai.

Kranti--Tumne kaha tha..k main yehan kaid nahi..

Raj--Jo jee me aaye woh karne k lia tum azad ho..maine yeh bhi nahi kaha tha..mere sabar ka imtehan mat lo.So jaao..mujhe bar bar ek hi baat samjhana pasand nahi...

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amazingneira

@amazingneira

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Posted: 16 years ago

#110

hah ha ha

Raj ke tevar badle huye hain.. Kranti mil gaye hai isliye!!!!!

Well I felt bad with raj's behaviour towards kranti but he was justified by being concerned about his family.....

Your Kranti is so active so bold... and I could actually feel the heat of talks between the two. really.. it was nice.. loved the part.... thanks a waiting for next what about Sitam.. I like that one also!!

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