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Posted: 16 years ago
that was great
but mystery ko thoda solve to karo na
plz continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
very nice part.
raj aur naina dono hi capt hain...!!! very nice...par kuch chakkar to hai...!!! par kya...???
aur ab alekh aur naina arrest ho rahe hain...kyoun...???
jaldi se is mystery ko solve karo yaar...!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey frnd..
i just read ur ff.......and i must say..it is
AWSOME!!!!! FANTASTIC!!!!! MINDBLOWING!!!! FANFIC........
i m speechless.........
i can just 👏 4 u............
u r a g8 writer....u write it very nicely........everything is just perfect....
this ff is very much different.....
thanks yaar
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Posted: 16 years ago

Fabulous update...

Raj finds out that naina is a captain in the army. They both decide that they will worl together so that they can catch the enemy red-handed.
Raj is going on a mission and naina is worried about his safety...loved the conversation between them.
Par end mein aisa kya ho gaya...naina aure alekh ko arrest kiya jata hai...
Yaar tumne story ko bahot hi interesting banaya hai...
Waiting for your next update.
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Posted: 16 years ago
wow fantastic part!!! I was afraid something like this would happen when i read of their parting. I just hope nothing happened to raj but somehow I'm afraid. All the best for your exams!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
hi frnds
sorry ki main aap logo ke comments ka reply nahi de pati.
its just bcoz i cm ol for a very short tym
but pls aap log apne comments dena band mat kijiye.
they are really imp 4 me.
here goes the next update........

CHAPTER 16

PRESENT

Ashi- no mam this cannot happen.

Vik- mam plz say this is not true.

Shalini(with tears in her eyes)- I wish ye true na hota but guys this is true.

Sam- mam iska matlab both

Shalini- yes cadet, naina n alekh ko arrest kar liya gaya.

Nick- but mam y?

Shalini- bcoz intelligence had proofs showing that they are traitors.

Rummy- wat? But mam u said that they were under cover officers.

Shalini- yes cadet but is bar wo har gaye apne dushmano se. unke dushman apne plan me successful ho gaye.

Nicky- mam fir kya hua?

Shalini- fir wo hua jo …………jo kisi ne nahi socha tha. Alekh n naina ko encounter me maar diya gaya.

All- wat?

All cadets are shocked to hear this. They couldn't believe that they heard correctly.

All cadets are in tears now.

Shalini- yes cadets . captain alekh n captain naina are not alive today.

Ashi-(with teary eyes) but mam captain rajveer. Wo kahan hai?

Shalini- koi nahi janta where is he?

Rummy- matlab?

"matlab ye ki he never returned after that day. " a voice came from behind.

All turned and find an officer standing at the door.

Shalini run to him n hugged him.

Shalini- I m sorry. Maine tumse promise kiya tha that I wl not cry but………

Officer- its ok shalu. I understand. Un dono ka naam hi humari ankhon me ansu le ata h.

Vik- aap?

Officer comes in.

"I m captain navin singh. Captain naina ka bada bhai aur rajveer singh shekhawat ka best friend".

Yuvi- sir aap rajveer sir k bare me kya keh rahe the.

Navin- yahi ki wo kabhi nahi lauta. Aur aata bhi to use dukh hi milta.

Nicky- hum kuch samjhe nahi sir.

Navin- alekh aur naina k sath un logo ne rajveer ko bhi fasaya tha.

Rummy- wat? But this cannot happen sir.

Navin- this happened cadet. Kai bar hum kuch nahi kar sakte aur sari duniya hume galat samajhti h.

Nick- but sir seniors ko to pta tha ki officers yaha kyun aye the?

Navin- unhe to pta tha but official kuch bhi nahi tha.

Yuvi- matlab ?

Navin- cadets army k kayi operations official nahi hote matlab apko unofficially ek mission pr bheja jata h n uska koi records nahi hote. Aur isi bat ka fayda un logo ne uthaya naina aur raj ko fasane me.

Shalini- bus yahi kahani h 2006 batch ki. Isliye aap logo ko unke bare me kuch nahi btaya jata tha.

Navin- cadets dinner ka tym hone wala h. aap sabko jana chahiye.

All cadets move out of the room.

Shalini- tum yahan kaise navin?

Navin- I m posted here. Mujhe yahan rajveer ki post di gayi h.

Shalini was watching navin questioningly.

Navin-matlab ki jis kam ko rajveer adhura chhod gaya tha use main pura karunga aur fir kuch hissab bhi pure karne h.

Shalini- main kuch samjhi nahi.

Navin- main naina alekh aur rajveer k badle ki bat kr rha hu. Is bar wo insaan bachega nahi. Ab use uske kamo ka hissab dena hi padega.

A fire can be seen in his eyes. He is completely determined that he will no matter how punish the person responsible for all this.

In the mess there is an awkward silence in between the most happening group of cadets.

No one is having his dinner. They are just playing with it.

Suri ji notices it and comes near them.

Suri ji- oye khotyo! Kya ho rha h ye? Ye tumhare khane ke liye h khelne k liye.

All look towards him n suriji feels that something is wrong.

Suriji(low voice)- ki gal . koi pareshani h?

Nicky- (almost crying)suri ji kya sach me naina n rajveer k sath aisa hua tha?

Suriji understands everything .

Suriji- bachho kahi bar aisa kuch hota jispe humara bus nahi hota. Pr bacho humesha yaad rakhna – jab rat jyada kali hone lage na to samjho ki din hone wala h.

Saying this suriji leaves.

At midnight.

All are awake but silent. Today no one is saying something.

Aisa lag rha tha mano aaj kuch hone wala h. samajh me nahi aa rha tha wo so rhe the ya jag rhe the.

Shayad aaj sab sach me jag rhe the.

Shayd kal ek aisa savera aane wala h jo kayi zindagiya badal dega.

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Posted: 16 years ago
and friends no pm service is available for some time.
but as soon as my exams get over i will be back on track.
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey...nice update yaar..
continue soon plz
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Posted: 16 years ago
Nice part. But Raj, Naina n Aalekh's disappearance is still a confusion. Well lets c if they r alive or not. And I really hope Navin succeeds in the mission.
PLS CONTINUE SOON.
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Posted: 16 years ago
fantastic update, but are you sure naina and alekh are really dead?!!! poor raj!!! but I wish navin is successful in his mission! btw is there going to be a romance track b/w gunny and nikki? I hope so! thanx for the update and I hope your preparations are going well

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