new lrl fic updated pg 19

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Posted: 16 years ago
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hi frnds
i m not new in India forums
but i always was a silent member.
i m posting a fic .
hope u like it.
pls comment on this
whether gud or bad.

Chapter 1

Clock on the wall struck five of the morning. Number of boys and girls gathered in the ground. Every one was waiting for a single person. But till 5.30 no body was there.

This made them to think if everything is ok . then there was an announcement "your drills for today are cancelled and you all are given holiday for two days".

Smiles appeared on everybody face. Everyone was planning how to spend their holiday. But all were clueless why they have been given off for two days in the end of june.

This was the scenario of the best military academy of India- kanchanjunga military academy , Ambala.

All cadets went to the mess for breakfast. But few of them stopped in front of a room.

They saw a man crying in front of a wall . they were shocked to see this. They went in and saw some photographs hanging on the wall.

One of them asked- is everything ok sir?

Man who was not aware of their arrival turned back. Everybody noticed a teardrop in his eyes. He asked- what are you doing here cadets? Its your breakfast time. You all should be in mess. So go there.

All replied-yes sir.

And all went towards the mess but no one of them wanted to . they all have the same question in their minds.

"jo unhone dekha kya vo sach tha? Aisa kya ho gaya jo sir ki aankhon me ansu aa gaye?"

But no one had the answer. But they knew that there was a man who can give answers of all of their questions. So all of them moved towards his room.

But they were shocked to see the man . they ran inside the room .

one of them asked- kya hua suri ji. Aap thik to h. aap ki aankhon me ye ansu.

Before he could get an answer another guy asked looking towards the wall having same photographs- ye sab kaun hai suri ji ? aur inki photos to humne brigadier sir k room me bhi thi. Aakhir funda kya h?

Suri ji(with a smile)- oye khotyo ye is academy k vo students h jinhone is academy ka naksha hi badal diya. Ye sab ab tak k humare best cadets h aur inka batch best batch. Oye Rummy tu puch rha than a aap ki ankhon me ye ansu kyun to bas inki yad aa gayi thi n ye ansu to apne aap aa gaye. In sabse mujhe bada pyar h. ye bharat maa k sache sipahi h.

Rummy - iska matlab brigadier chandok bhi inhe itna hi pyar karte h that's y he was crying.

Suriji- are brigadier hi nahi inko to puri academy hi bahut pyar karti h. yahan ke chappe chappe me inki yade h.

All- suri ji hume bataye na inke bare me. Hume sab janna h inke bare me.

Suriji- thik h khotyo main tvanu sab dussanga. Pr pehle tum sab mess me jayo aur apna nashta khatam karo varna main tumhare kano vich sar kar dunga.

All laugh.

All- thik h suriji pr hum nashta karke zaroor ayenge.

All returned after completing their breakfast with a one more friend.

Suriji- aao khotyo. Sabne nashta kar liya na.

Rummy ? ha suriji hum sab nashta karke aye h.

But pls ab hume un sabke bare me btao na.

Suri ji- thik h. ye sab 2006 batch k cadets the. Sab ek dusre se bilkul alag. Pr fir bhi sabse ache dost. Inki dosti ek missal h. ek dusre k liye jaan bhi de sakte the.

Rummy ? that means they were friends forever. Right.

Suri ji-haan bilkul thik. (slapped peter with love) pr khote hunt u bich me bola na to main nahi dasni inandi kahani. Samajh ayi he.

Rummy ? ji suriji.

Suriji- mujhe aaj bhi yaad h vo din jab in logo ne is academy me pehla kadam rakha tha.

Seven cadets(present)-

Rummy gaur

Sameera shroff(sam)

Yuvraj rathore(yuvi)

Anwesha malhotra(ashi)

Niketa chaudhary(nicky)

Nikhil arora(nick)

Vikas kapoor(vik)

Chapter 2

Flashback

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This was a bright sunny day.. cadets were doing their normal daily drills in the ground.

Inside one room one man was dressing himself . then there was a knock on the door.

Come in.

An orderly came in and said- aapko brigadier chandok ne apne office me bulaya h.

Man nodded and orderly went back.he came out of his room and moved towards brigadier office.

"good morning major" he turned.

Good morning doctor shalini-he replied.

She asked-are you ready for the meeting?

Major- what do you think.

Shalini- you are looking like??

Both of them" good morning sir"

Brigadier-good morning officers. Come in.

All of them entered the room.

Officers who were already in the room stood up.

Brigadier-goodmorning faculty. You may sit down.

He continued-as all of you know today new batch is coming . here is the list of duties assigned to all of you. Go through it and sign it.

And one more announcement. Two more officers are coming to join our faculty. You will find their details also in the same file. There will be an introductionceremony at 1800 hours. Regarding your duties there is not so much changes.so I don't think that there will be any problem for you. thats it for now. You may leave.

List was like this------

Major nair- physical drills

Doctor captain shalini singhal- medical drills and infirmary incharge

Subedar suri- warden and mess incharge.

Subedar Lolita sen- warden and clothing incharge.

Doctor ritu mishra- psychological warfare training.

New faculty members---

Captain abhimanyu rai chauhan- weaponary training.

Captain rajveer singh shekhawat- communication and strategy.

Sam-iska matlab humari faculty kafi change hui h.

Yuvi- you r right sam. Bt shalini mam tab bhi yahi thi. Iska matlab vo bhi ?..

"Yes cadet yuvi you r absolutely right." Voice came from behind. All turned to see the source. A lady was standing at the door.

I know everything about the 2006 batch. That was the best batch of kma.- shalini told.

Ashi- but mam agar aisi bat h to humme se koi unke bare me janta kyun nahi.

Nick- yes mam. Why we were not told about them before?

This question left a silent in the room. Shalini and suriji both were quiet . they didn't know how to answer this question as they also didn't know the answer.

Suddenly there was an announcement- all cadets are required to report in assembly hall.

Rummy- what is this yar. Jab bhi hum koi imp discussion kar rhe hote h naye bc ka mike baj padta h.

Vk-chal dekhte h. kisliye bulaya h.

Yuvi- but this doesn't mean that hum ye story adhuri chod denge. We will come back mam.

Shalini- ok. But please first go to the hall otherwise you all will be punished.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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god evrything sounds sooooooo sad....just like when d caders left d academy in d show...but still i luv d concept and i think dis is d only fic which is starting like dis....i mean in flashbk style....so plzzzzzzzz cont sooon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Wow
amazing start......this FF starts from where the actual story had stoped.....giving a tribute to the best batches of KMA.....
Waiying to know more.....what is it that has bought tears to BC's eyes.....
waiting for your update....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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g8 work. 👏👏👏
Aaj kal humare RN club k saare members bahut hard working hote jaa rahe hain.😉😉😉
Sab k sab new fics start kar rahein hain jo dekh kar bahut accha lag raha hai.😃😃😃 Keep writing more n more.😊😊😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow nice start ...... and welcome to the LRL gang of writers 😃

take care

yasmin
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Good start. I'm really happy to hav another LRL fic. Looking 4ward to the next part eagerly. Its really interesting. PLS CONTINUE SOON.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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amazing yaar
i just loved the concept
and u mentioned it right that setion 1 bathch was the best batch of kma,
and i loved the read that bc also take it as the best batch ever.
keep it up and keep updating
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Posted: 16 years ago
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it is really gud plz contd soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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nice start...intro sounds too gud...!!

kya yeh fic RN par hai...????
plz cont soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thanks to all of u frnds for ur replies n support.
this is not only RN fic but all the characters are equally important.
i m posting the new chapter.
pls tell me whether u like it or not.
i hope ki tumhe ye bhi utna hi pasand aaye.....

Chapter 3

Rummy- kya kehte ho boss. Bc ne hume kyun bulaya hoga.

Yuvi- chal dekh lete h. waise kuch bhi bol inki timings badi perfect hoti h.

Nick- right bro. jab bhi koi imp bat ho rhi ho to …

Ashi- announcement ho jati h. we all know but be fast otherwise be prepared for punishment.

Sam- ashi sahi keh rahi h. wase bhi subah room me unka mood thik nahi lag raha tha.

Vik- guys stop. Nicky kahan h yar?

Ashi- ha yaar. Vo to subah se dikhai hi nahi di.

All look towards each other in a suspicious manner.

All(almost shouting)- nooooooooo.

Ashi- ye ladki marwayegi kisi din.

Yuvi- bt ab kya kare. Assembly hall jaye ya

Rummy- chill guys. Nothing is going to happen her. Uska roz ka kaam h.

Nick- rummy is right. Lets go . bc will be waiting for us.

Vik- bahut ho gaya yar. Hum kab tak use bachayenge yar. Vo koi choti bachi nahi h.

Sam- dekhlo kaun keh rha h. vik shayad tu bhul rha h jab bhi vo kisi problem me hoti h na to sabse pehle tu hi ….

Ashi- bas ab ye bahas band karo varna bc hume left right left kara dega.

Rummy- for the first tym ashi ne sahi bat ki h. lets go guys.

Ashi- rummy tujhe to na mai

Yuvi – stop it yar ashi. Abhi chalo. Hum wase hi late h.

And all went towards the assembly hall.

They reacheg there at time so they were relaxed that atleast today there will be no punishment for them. But they didn't know that there is more serious thing waiting for them.

Some time earlier…

In the city. A girl was roaming as if she was on a picnic. Then suddenly she got pale and yellow. She tried to move but her feet got freezed. She was sweating profoundly.

She slapped her self whether it was a dream or the reality.

But it was the reality. He came near her.

She saluted as she was in her uniform.

Man- so you are from KMA.

Girl- yes sir.

Man- but what are you doing here? You are supposed to be in academy. I think you should go back and attend your training. I m sure you don't knw who is coming to KMA bcoz if you, you didn't dare to come here.

Girl-yes sir.

Man- fresher.

Girl- yes sir.

Man-name?

Girl- cadet niketa choudhary sir.

He turned to go.

Nicky- excuseme sir. Can I know who are you.?

Man- we will meet again.and I think at that time you will not ask for my identity.

He went away.

Nicky to herself- oh god nicky agar isne bc se shikayat kar di to tu to gayi. Isse pehle ki kisi ko ye pta chale ki tu KMA me nahi h tu wahan pahuch ja. Yes yahi sahi h.

She stepped towards kma.

Now……

All cadets were in the hall.

Nicky-hi guys.wass up.

Vik- where the hell were you? What do you think of yourself? Kabhi bhi kahi bhi chali jati ho. Kam se kam bta to diya karo. Agar kisi ko pta chal jata to…….

Nicky(smiling)- that means kisi ko pta nahi chala. Thankgod I m safe.

Vik- pta nahi chala pr agar chal jata to

Nicky- to kya ? mujhe marching out k orders de diye jate. ki farak panda he .

Vik- ha tumhe kya farak padta h……

Yuvi – chill guys. Humesha bahas me ulajh jate ho.

Rummy- shshsh bc is here.

All went quiet. All faculty members were also there.

Bc- goodmorning cadets. Ye assembly aap sabko ye inform karne k liye bulayi gayi h ki apke exams jo next week hone wale the postpone kar diye gaye h.

The most imp information for u is that from next week onwards there will be a panel inspection for 10 days. Your each and every activity will be observed and grades will be given to you. These grades will be added in your final grades to determine the best cadet.

One more announcement. From today onwards a new officer will join our faculty. Please welcome captain gunraj singh randhawa. ( a handsome and well dressed officer enters the hall) he will take care of your gorilla warfare training. That's all for now. Dismiss.

All cadets were talking to each other except one. She was shocked. Yes she was none other than nicky.

Ashi saw nicky like this and waved her hands in font of her

Ashi- hey champ. Tujhe kya hua.

No reply.

Helloooooooooo

Nicky- ha. Kya hua.

Ashi- hey tujhe kya hua. Capt. Itna pasand aa gaya ki tu abi se uske sapne dekhne lagi.

Nicky- cut this crap . baat vo nahin h yar. Actually

And she narrated the whole incident of the market.

Yuvi- that means capt. Ko pehle hi pta h aaj ke karname ka. Soch agar usne bc ko report kar diya to.

Rummy- chill bro. agar use report karma hota to abhi tak nicky ko bulane koi na koi aa jata.

Vik- I think he is right.

Sam- guys kya hum kuch bhul nahi rhe. Hume suri ji k pass jana tha and.

Nicky- suri ji k pas pr kyun? Kya maine kuch miss kar diya.

Sam- ya champ. U miseed something but not so much. Don't worry I will tell you in the way.

All of them went to suriji room n on the way sam told every thing to nicky.

In the suriji's room all were ready to kow abt the 2006 batch.

Suriji instructed all- koi nahi bolega jab tak mai nahi kehta. Varna main tumhare..

Nick- dono kano me sir kar doge. Hume pta hain suri ji. Pls ab aap shuru karo na.

Suriji- thik h.

(all the story will be in flash back).

Chapter 4

Flashback

Time- 9 in the morning

Date- 10 july 2006

Place- KMA Ambala

A bus enters the academy. Some cadets get out of the bus. At last a girl come out with a hockey stick in her hand and bags on her shoulders. Girl was looking beautiful in her blue denim jeans and white top. Then suddenly she collided with a boy wearing a simple check shirt and black trouser.

Girl – sorry. It was my mistake. Mujhe dekh kar chalna chahiye tha. Pr mai bhi kya karu aap achanak aa gaye ki mujhe pta hi nahi chala.aap to dekh kar chal sakte the na.

Boy- its ok. Vase galti to humari bhi thi.

Girl- dekha maine kha than a ki galti akele meri nahi thi. Vase first year. Dekhne se to lagta h ha. Main bhi.

Boy(with a cute smile)- ali kanpur se.

Girl- hi main pooja chandigarh se. to tum yahan sipahi banne aye ho.

Ali- ji bilkul pr aapko dekh kar lagta h ki aap to kisi aur kam se ayi h( pointing towards her hockey stick).

Pooja- (haste hue)nahi nahi. Dar mat. Main kisi ko out of range karne nahi ayi hu. Vo kya h na ghar pr rehti to mummy papa meri shadi karwa dete. Pr main shadi sirf apne ranjhe se karungi. Isliye maine apna connection kma se jod liya.

Ali- pr ye hockey stick?

Pooja- are vo main hockey player hu na isliye. Wase tu dar mat main isse kisi ko marti nahi.

Both laughed and went towards brigadier office.

After some time a car stops in front of the gate. A cute boy steps out of the car and shouts " freedommmmmmmmmmm". That's cadet yaduwansh sahni (yudi).

Suddenly a girl comes out of the car and make a signal to his brother to keep quiet as all were looking towards them.

Girl- bro you are completely mad. Koi aise chillata h kya.

Yudi- u don't know neelu aaj main kitna khush hu mom dad ki us duniya se bahar aakar.

Now I can do whatever I want.

Neelu- bro tum n tumhare funde. Its just out of this world yar. Every one wants to go to abroad n tum itna acha offer chod ke yahan aa gaye. Is kma me.

Yudi- that's yudi. Now I can prove that I can do anything without dad.

Neelu- ok bro. aapko aapki ya academy ki life mubarak. Main chalti hu. Bye.

Yudi bid bye to neelu and went directly towards bc office.

There he met ali and pooja.

And another guy amardeep huda. He was his room partner.

But on the roads another show was going on. A car was running with full speed.

Two guys was sitting inside the car.

One to another- yar tu car ki speed kam nahi kar sakta. Hum ambala pahuchne wale hain. Yahan traffic hoga. And yahan pr koi tujhse race nahin laga rha h.

Driver- chill yar tension kyun leta hain. Hum hain na.

First- aap hain tabhi to tension h chauhan sahib.

Chauhan- kya kaha tumne raj. Academy pahucho tab btate h hum tumhe.

Then a black pulsar crossed their car.

Chauhan became furious. He raised the speed and reached near by the bike.

Chauhan(to biker)- what say. Ek race ho jaye. Kma tak.

Biker nodded in approval and raised the speed.

Chauhan too. Race get started.

For the first time chauhan met someone who was giving him challenge in the race.

They can see the gates of kma. Both of them raised their speed.

But biker won the race.

Chauhan got out of the car and moved towards the bike. Raj became nervous as this was the first time when chauhan got defeated in race. So he also came out.

Chauhan to the rider- congratulations. I must say you are fantastic.

Biker gotoff his helmet.

Chauhan and raj got shocked after seeing the biker.

She was a girl. She was looking awesome in her black skintight jeans and black t's.

Girl- thanx capt. Abhimanyu rai chauhan(pointing towards his batch).

Chauhan- interesting. And you?

Girl- cadet naina singh sir.

so frnds main characters ki entry ho gayi h. tell me u like it or not😊😊

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