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Posted: 16 years ago
no probs but ye abhi bhi confusion bana hua hai ki Raj k case ki Naveen n Abhi chaan been kyoun kar rahe hain?😕 😕 😕 Us ne aisa kya kiya hai? Naina bhi mujhe lagta hai secreatly kuch aisa kar rahi hai jo shayad mujhe bahut confuse kar raha hai yaar.
Tum jaldi se meri confusions clear karo yaar.😆 😆 😆
update soon.
Edited by Mahak Sinha - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
very nice ud yaar...!!!
par sach kahun...to baht cofused bhi hun...!!!
confusion sabhi ko le kar hai...!!! jaise raj, naina, abhi, naveen...sab k charachter ko le kar confused hun...!!!
hope ki next part me kuch confusions clear ho jaye. cont soon.
take care...!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago

NICE UPDATE

Col Wadhwa has shown his support to Abhi and Naveen for their efforts to prove raj and naina innocent....this is great...this will certainly boost abhi and navin's morale...he has also transferred navin to KMA...

Navin is excited about his transfer....he now knows that he will be able to find some clues which will prove raj innocent...

It is good that naveen has agreed to go and meet his mother...

What is naina upto...she is acting in a very weird manner....i think it is raj who has caught her....

waiting for your next update.

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Posted: 16 years ago
Nice part. I'm happy dat Naveen is going to KMA to prove Raj innocent. The flashback seems interesting. W8ing 4 the next part.
BTW Thnx to u dat at least u updated despite ur mom was not letting u use the PC.
Edited by sumaiya wahid - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Col Wadhwa is supporting Abhi and Naveen for their efforts to prove raj and naina innocent....this is great...this will certainly boost abhi and navin's morale...he has also transferred navin to KMA...

Navin is excited about his transfer....he now knows that he will be able to find some clues which will prove raj innocent...

It is good that naveen has agreed to go and meet his mother...

What is naina upto...she is acting in a very weird manner....i think it is raj who has caught her....

waiting for your next update. please update sooon

bye, take care jyothi
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Posted: 16 years ago
good yaar, sab k sab mil kar Raj ko innocent prove kar denge i am shure about it. Sach kaha Shalu ne Naina ne kaam hi aise kiye hain ki kisi ko bhi shak ho us par to vahi Raj ne bhi kiya.
update soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
here comes the next chapter......

CHAPTER 15

Flashback continues

" I never expected you to be here naina". What r u doing here?- person asked angrily.

Naina- I can explain alekh.

Alekh- really. Then I m waiting.

Naina- actually I got to know that the ………

Alekh- shhhhh. Someone is here.

They both got mute and felt that someone is in the room. They both sneaked through the windows.

Alekh- go to ur room. We will talk 2moro.

Naina- ok.

Both moved towards their hostel.

But they were unknown to the fact that someone was watching them.

He was none other than captain rajveer.

"something is fishy. Kahin ye dono hi to wo nahin jinki mujhe talash hai." He thought.

"I have to find their truth."

Next day-

Rajveer called choubey.

Raj- choubey mujhe cadet singh k bare me complete details chahiye.

Choubey- don't worry sir. Kal tak aapko sari details mil jayegi.

Raj- fine then. U can go.

In the mess-

Alekh- naina I hav to go to Delhi.

Naina- but why?

Alekh- neelu

Naina-ok. Did u get the permission? N when will u leave?

Alekh- I m gng rite nw. infact main tujhe bye bolne aya tha. I m gng for 5 days and pls koi aisa step mat uthaiyo jisse humara plan khatre me ho.

Naina - dnt worry. U just take care of u n neelu.

Alekh left the academy.

At night naina went to the nair's office but this time raj was following him. As soon as she entered the room raj entered too and closed the door.

Naina turned and found raj there. She went pale.

Naina- sir aap yahan.

Raj- yes cadet naina ah singh.wase ye sawal to mujhe apse karna chahiye.

Naina- sir wo ….mai…..

Raj- enough cadet. I know everything. Don't make excuse. Your game is over naina .

Naina- game? I m not getting it sir.

Raj- u will. Comeon tell me kya chahti ho tum.

Naina- what? Sir kaisi bat kr rhe h aap.

Raj(almost shouting)- enough naina. Agar tumhe lagta h kit um mujhe dhokha de sakti ho to bhul jao. Main tumhe aur tumhare un gaddar dosto ko kabhi bhi kamyab nahi hone dunga.

Naina- sir aap mujhe galat samajh rhe h.

Raj- tumhare sare irade janta hu main naina singh. Tum jaise chand gaddar logo ki wajah se aaj humare desh ki ye halat h. but not this time. I will not let you succeed in ur mission.(he took his gun out and pointed on naina) tell me . kahan h tumhare sathi. Maar to main tumhe wase bhi dunga bas jate hue koi nek kam kar jao . wase bhi gaddaro ko narak me bhi jagah nahi………

Naina(shouting)- enough captain shekhawat. Bahut hogaya. Bahut sunliya maine.

You wanna shoot me then go ahead. I m not afraid of dying. Marne ka dar to usi din chala gaya tha jis din is field me ayi thi. But main koi gaddar nahi hu. I m army officer.

Rajveer was shocked after hearing this.

Naina- yes captain shekhawat. I m captain naina singh ahluwalia. An army officer.

i know thoda short h. but I promise next tym long wala ud karungi.

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Posted: 16 years ago

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!

Woh Aalekh tha and he is angry at Naina for being there!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina batane hi waali thi ke waha koi aagaya and they sneaked through the windows!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj was watching them and he thought something is fishy aur kahi yeh woh toh nahi jinki usko talash hai!!!!!😕 😕 😕 😕

Raj Choubey se kehta hai Naina ki saari details nikalne ke liye!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛

Aalekh ko Delhi jaana hai Neelu ke liye!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊He is going to 5 days and tells Naina not to take any step which could endanger their plan!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Naina assured him and Aalekh went away but at night Naina went to Nair's office!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒

Raj followed her and closed the door!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲

Raj has caught Naina and he said her game is over!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Usse lagta hai Naina gaddar hai aur woh usse aur uske gaddar dosto ko kabhi kamyaad nahi hone dega!!!!!

Naina tried to explain but Raj takes out his gun and pointed it on Naina aur pucch raha hai uske saathi kaha hai!!!!!

Naina is shouting now and she said she is not afraid of dying marne ka darr toh usse din chala gaya tha jis din woh ish field mein aayi thi!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏

She is an army officer Captain Naina Singh Ahluwalia!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊Raj was shocked after hearing this!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲

Well I had suspected something of this sort and this surprise was pretty obvious!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊


Edited by Shaina_b - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
well that was certainly a shocker for raj though I had begun suspecting something of the sort
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Posted: 16 years ago
It was very nice...!!! This surpise was getting pretty obvious...!!! But it is still very interesting...pls update soon..!!!

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