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Posted: 16 years ago
that was good
but why Naina is dead
i hope vo jinda ho aur vaapas aa jaaye Raj ke saath
plz continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
cool n sad ud.
Raj ko Naina aur Alekh k saath gumnaam hona pada.
Jaldi se laao na story me Raj ko vapas. I know ki us ko kuch nahi hua hai.
Edited by varshita - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Yaar bahut senti ud tha.😭
Naina aur Raj kahan gayab ho gaye achanak Alekh k saath.😲 Mujhe to lag raha hai ye teeno kahin na kahin chipe hain aur saboot collect kar rahe hain.πŸ˜•
well jaldi se aage to post karo.
Edited by desaiprachi07 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!

The cadets are not ready to believe it but Shalini said she wishes yeh true na hota but this is true!!!!

Shalini ne kaha ke Naina aur Aalekh ko arrest kar liya gaya because intelligence had proofs showing that they are traitors!!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”

Shalini said Aalekh aur Naina ko encounter mein maar diya gaya!!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲All the cadets were shocked and were in tears now!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Shalini said ke koi nahi janta ke Raj kaha hai!!!!!πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜•

A voice said from behind ke matlab yeh ke he never returned after that day!!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

Shalini went to him and hugged him and he comforted her!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ€— πŸ€— πŸ€— πŸ€—I knew it would be Navin!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Navin explained to them ke Rajveer aata bhi toh uss dukh hi milta kyunki unlogo ne usse bhi fasaya tha!!!!!

Navin explained to them about army operations and how they framed Naina and Raj!!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”

Navin told Shalini ke jis kaam ko Raj adhura chhod gaya tha usse woh pura karega aur Naina, Raj aur Aalekh ka badla bhi lega!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ

He is completely determined that he will no matter what punish the person responsible for all this!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

In the mess no one was having his dinner and they were just playing with it!!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”

Nicky almost crying asked Suriji about Raj and Naina and he understood everything!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

He comforted them and gave them hope!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj ko Naina aur Aalekh ke saath gumnam hona pada!!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”Magar teeno kaha gayab ho gaye achanak??😲 😲 😲 😲

I am sure the three are alive and hiding somewhere and are trying to find the proofs!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

At midnight all are awake aur aisa lag raha hai mano aaj kuch honewaala hai!!!!!πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜•

Shayad kal ek aisa savera aane waala hai jo kayi zindagiyan badal degi!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊


Edited by Shaina_b - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
thanx frnds for ur comments.
here is the next ud.....

CHAPTER 17

Ek nayi subah

Ek naya din

Some thing is special today. But what no body knows.

But yes today many lives are going to be changed in kma as well as outside kma.

From today a new story is going to begin in kma.

The famous seven are standing near amar jyoti.

They are not the same cadets. They are changed.

Ashi- aaj tak ye zindagi bina maksad k jee rhi thi.

Nick- aaj tak is zindagi me aisa kuch nahi kiya jisse hume apni zindagi pr garv ho.

Sam- pr aaj aisa lagta h mano sab alag h.

Vik- aaj humari zindagi me hume ek maksad mil gaya h.

Nicky- aaj is zindagi ka asli matlab hume samajh aa gaya h.

Yuvi- aaj hum wada krte h ki hum vo krenge jisse is zindagi ko bhi hum pr naaz hoga.

Rummy- we promise ki hum un dushmano ko na sirf dhundenge balki unhe aisi saza bhi denge ki aaj k bad koi bhi humare desh ki taraf aankh utha kar nahi dekhega.

All- we promise ki hum captain alekh, captain naina aur captain rajveer ko unka samman lautayenge.

We promise ki ek bar fir unka naam is kma me hi nahi balki pure desh me badi shan se liya jayega.

They all are determined to do so. Their determination is clearly visible in their eyes.

Dr shalini's room

KMA

Ashi- mam hume apse kuch puchna h.

Shalini- kya bat h cadets. Aap sab log thik to h na.

Nick- aaj se pehle hum itna thik kabhi nahi the mam.

Shalini- tum kehna kya chahte ho.

Nicky- mam hum kuch kehna nahi…..

Vik- puchna chahte h.

Naveen- kya puchhna chahte ho tum log.

Yuvi- sir jab naina mam n alekh sir ko arrest kiya gaya tab unke frnds ka kya reaction tha?

Naveen- mujhe aisa kyun lag rha h cadets that u guys r hiding something.

Rummy- hum kuch nahi chupa rhe h sir.

Nicky- hum to bas janna chahte h ki kya unke dosto ne kuch bhi nahi kiya unke liye.

Naveen- cadets in sab bato se dur rehna hi tumhare liye acha h.

Vik- but sir…….

Naveen- cadets plsss. Wase bhi aaj tumhari chutti nahi h. n u guys have a class. So I think u should move now.

All with a disappointment come out of the room n move towards their class room.

Ashi- guys ab kya karenge?

Vik- filhal academy routine follow karenge

Rummy- baki sab game room me.ok

FEW DAYS AGO

Somewhere in skirts of kurukshetra

A guy- doctor ab inki tabiyat kaisi h.

Doc- cant say anything. Khoon kafi jyada beh jane ki wajah se inki halat kafi najuk h.

Guy- but what are the chances doctor?

Doc- main apse jhuth nahi kahunga. Chances are very low ya ye kahiye ki chances h hi nahi.

Guy- thanx doc.

Doctor went .

Guy to him self: kaun hai ye insaan aur iske jeb se kma ka batch. Zaroor ye kma se connected h. lagta h mujhe kma jana hoga.

PRESENT

Captain randhawa is searching something in the records room . he checks each file in the room but finds nothing . he turns and finds captain naveen there.

Naveen- aap yahan kya kr rhe h captain.

Gunny- well nothing imp captain. Bus chk kar rha tha ki sab thik h ya nahi.

Naveen – ok. To sab thik h na captain.

Gunny- yes absolutely.

And gunny comes out of the room.

Naveen thinks: I know captain something is fishy and I hav to find it very soon.

In the game room

Rummy- guys agar hume kuch karna h to sabse pehle hume puri story ka pta karna hoga.

Nicky- wo to hume bhi pta h but

Vik- but wo hoga kaise.

Ashi- its simple guys. Puri story ya to naveen sir n shalini mam jante h ya fir…….

Yuvi- captain naina I mean cadet naina k batchmates.

Sam- so that means……

Nick- yes sam. Hum unke batchmates se bat krenge.

Vik- bt kaise guys.

Nicky- its simple. Hum unhe contact krenge.

Sam- but humare pas unki contact info kahan h.

Rummy- but wo academy k computers me to h.

Vik- kahin tum log

Nicky- yes u r rite.

Yuvi- hum log computers se info nikalenge n fir unhe contact karenge.

Ashi- but ye kaam karega kaun?

Rummy- aur kaun the one n only

Nicky- nick.

All turns to see nick who is busy with his gadgets. Then he notices that everyone is looking at him…

Nick- mujhe aisa kyun lag rha ki koi musibat aane wali h.

Ashi- aane wali nahi

Sam- aa chuki h.

Nick- no

All- o yes.

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Posted: 16 years ago

Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!!!

Something is special today and many lives are going to be changed!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

The cadets are now changed and they swear to bring back Naina, Raj and Aalekh's honour back!!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ

The cadets have found their goal in life!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊They have realised that life is too short and it should be taken seriously!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

The patriotism in them would make anyone proud!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Thats really nice of them!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊But its really going to be very tough!!!!!

They asked Shalini ke Naina aur Aalekh ke friends ka kya reaction tha when they were arrested!!!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Shalini and Navin samajh gaye ke cadets ke dimag mein kuch chal raha hai!!!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

Navin knows how dangerous this task is so he warns the cadets to stay out of it!!!!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”

Yeh kaun hai jo zindagi aur maut se lad raha hai??πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜•I hope he is not Raj and Raj is with Naina!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Gunny record room mein kya dhundh raha tha??πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜•Navin thinks something is fishy!!!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”

Gunny aur Navin alag alag kaam kar rahe hai!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›Thats sad!!!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”It would be more helpful if they worked together!!!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

The cadets decide to contact Naina's batchmates to find out the whole story!!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ

Academy ke computers se info nikalna hai aur ish kaam ke liye sabne bechare Nick ko pakda!!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†


Edited by Shaina_b - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
that was really great
plz continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
So these guys r thinking to help Naina n rest to prove them honourable in country nice but it's really tuff. Gunny bhi hai is me g8 par vo aur Naveen alag alag kaam kar rahe hain tat's sad. Shalu bhi samajh gayi ki cadets k dimaag me kuch chal raha hai. Vaise naveen ne apni taraf se in ko warn kar k accha hi kiya.
Par ye kaun hai jo zindagi aur maut se lad raha hai? I hope he is Raj.
continue soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
Great part..
The cadets have found their goal in life..they have realised that life is too short and it should be taken serious. The patriotism in them would make anyone feel proud.
They want to help find alekh, naina and raj and restore their honor...but naveen knows how dangerous this task is and so he warns the cadets to stay out of it..He knows that they are good soldiers but they still need to be trained properly.
Why are gunny and naveen on different sides...it would be good if they worked together, I am sure that they both want the same thing. Where is abhi?
I hope that the man struggling for his life is raj...bring him back soon.
Cadets have decided to contact naina's friends...it will be good to have our old gang back again.
Please continue soon...and sorry for replying so late.
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Posted: 16 years ago
Nice part. Glad dat the cadets hav chnaged n now they wanna help to return Raj, Naina n Aalekh their honour.
I'm happy dat Gunny is also here to help but wud be happier if He n navin wud be 2gether. That wud be much helpful.
I hope that wounded person is Raj only. Uski zinda rehne ki khabar is the most imp 4 me.
Anyways, pls continue soon.

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