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Posted: 16 years ago
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CHAPTER 11

Deliberating on D DATE IInd

Previously...

K-"Good nite to u too" then gently slaps his cheek and runs to her room at top speed.

While S is left standing their, at the bottom of the steps, holding his cheek, looking bewildered? This time a slow smirk creeping into his face....

Now...
"I must say this is the first time I am seeing a guy who is happy about getting slapped by woman?" a teasing voice said from behind, breaking into Sujal's thoughts....

S- "What?! Huh! Uh.. No. It's nothing like that Siddhart bhaiya..." Sujal says quickly taking his hand off his own cheek and wiping off the lost, happy, smug smile from his face...

Sid-"So tell me what are u so happy abt then? And when did u guys come in anyways? I don't think I heard a door bell..."

S-"Well.. It was quite late so Kashish decided to use the spare key which she always carries.. ,as we didn't wanna disturb any1... As far as my being happy is concerned.. Wellll.. Isn't it apparent? I am still in one piece with no hair or eye missing + I think we have finally sorted out all our differences.."(S looks again in the direction in which k had run away and smiles dreamily again...)

Sid to himself... I think u sorted out more than ur differences young man....

Sid (Grinning)-"Well I am happy for u.. And now tht ur differences are solved u won't have to even take her out for dinner or lunch again... thts great!!"

S- "What? Why not? ... Yah I mean.. Yes, u r right. Now... v wont have a reason to go out (frowning.. deep in thought)" Damn he is right.. Just when things are getting better, again I am faced with this obstacle.. Damn it all!!

Sid-"Yah but its not like u wanna go out with her or something right? ... I mean u solved ur differences but it doesn't mean u like each other?"

S-"Of course we don't like each other! U r right. We just talked and realized v don't have to fight all the time"

Sid-"Correct! Mission accomplished!!" and much more than tht too..

S-"Right, mission accomplished.. Well then I'll go now..(Looking at the stairs, remembering, once again..)...Goodnite(dreamy look again)"

Sid takes S by his shoulder and guides him out.. He might stand here for the whole night unless I throw him out? -"Gud nite Sujal see u at breakfast tomorrow."

******

S lay on his bed after reaching home. He replayed the whole date from the starting- when he saw her descending the stairs, till the end- when she went back to her room... He was one very happy man...

I just cant believe tht whatever has happened tonite is not a dream. It's all too good to be true... Right at the begining she shows up looking so..soo.. I don't know what to say!!!.. She has no idea what her dresses do to my adralin and other levels... Some1 ought to ban her clothes!they are outright indecent.. First the potato sack.. Then tht elegant dress in court.. Her night shirt and now Tonite.. She is intent on driving me crazy?

S sits up with a bolt.

Crazy!! Thts right! I already am crazy!! I told her I liked her!!.. My God!! I have never said tht on the first date to any girl, ever.. I am crazy! She Has made me crazy!!!

Lying down again calming himself..

Alrite it's O.K. It's a good crazy.. the non-harmful, nice crazy.. The type tht doesn't hurt any1... but I really have to look and see what I do around her from now on.. she has the power to make loose all my senses and blurt things I never dare say...(exhaling a long breadth...)

Well..... My princess kashish!... U r something! And I like u a lot!

******

K was in a land of bliss.. Can't remember the time when she had been so excited, happy, shy, anxious, springy and....so full of life... K skipped her way to her room smiling like a silly school girl, who just got kissed, by the most popular guy in school!...Oh Shit! I forgot to return his coat!.. Maybe his is still here..(Blushing)..I think I shud go and check... and return his coat....

K runs back to the stairs but stops at the top. She cud hear Sujal talking to Siddhart...

S- "Yes, u r right. Now?v wont have a reason to go out" WHAT! What does that mean!!

Sid-"Yah. But it's not like u wanna go out with her or something right? ... I mean u solved ur differences but it doesn't mean u like each other?" OH! Bhai common!!! It's nothing like that now....Noooo! U Don't Get It?

S-"Of course we don't like each other. (WHAT!!!!!!! NO! My ears are ringing he cudnt have said tht!!!!!) U r right. We just talked and realized v don't have to fight all the time" Why that bloody bas**** flirting loser jerk!!!! How? How? How cud I repeat my mistake again?????!!!!!!!!

Sid- "Correct! Mission accomplished!!"

S-"Right, mission accomplished.. Well then I'll go now.." all u hav accomplished is antagonizing me for rest of our lifes!!!!!!!!!!!! I HATE u Sujal Grewal! Absolutely, completely, forever and ever and EVER!!!!!!

Kashish ran back to her room in the most furious mood ever, this time her face red with anger and humiliation.

I cant believe he said all tht.. It's impossible.. After the time we had spent together today! The dinner -him remembering my fav. shake.. The dance - the almost kiss... NO! Don't think abt tht! Don't think how nice it all had been! Just remember one thing. It was all a Farce!.. He just wanted to get along with u from the beginning. So when I showed up looking good, he just decided to flirt too.. It didn't mean he actually feels something for me!! He doesn't!! Get tht in ur head, he never felt anything and he never will! I must have been going Crazy to believe even a word he said. How cud I act so stupidly again??!!.. Just forget tonite! Think of it as a dream... a beautiful dream and nothing more.....k thought as she lay on her bed curled up in a ball....

She fell asleep a while later.. a lone tear sparkling on her cheek...

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P.S. : don't worry this is not turning into a sob story... I don't like my characters moping around.. but every1 has to understand as to how hurt she felt...

Edited by meggs - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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O.K. ppl here's a very short part… But a very essential one too…

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Posted: 16 years ago
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nice part...sujal starts to lik her but poor kashish again startin to gate sujal thanks to this stupid sid...now again they both wil start fightin...hope sujal confesses first...cont soon.....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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nice part indeed.. the story is progressing too well.. keep up the good work going... yahaan sujal is in his dream word & kashish has become his princess tho dusari taraf kashish has misunderstood things again.. well at least kashish should have thought kii how is sujal suddenly supposed to say it to siddarth, that he [sujal] likes his [siddarth's] younger sister and wants to take her out again... well this makes sense... sujal surely cannot say it.... bechare ko ek protective bhai se thappad pad jaatha, agar siddarth would even get a direct hint kii sujal is trying to woo kashish.. so sujal is right at his place.. but kashish again has misunderstandings.... but i'am sure sujal will take away all her misunderstandings soon.. and in no time, sooner or later kashish will realize that her liking sujal, her falling for sujal is not mistake now, nor was it a mistake in the past.. anyway good going.... the story is getting very interesting.........👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 please do post the next part soon.. i'am waiting for the next part very eagerly..😊
Edited by sun_423 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey
Very nice part..............
I totally luved the way u show their perspective of the story.................
Sujal's view(perspective) was gud with his thoughts but why doesn't he suck up and tell every1 that they r friends now................
There is no reason to fight.......................
Kashish just had to cum at the same time.....................
She shud just buck up and don't try to be nice to him..................she shud now all of his ways by now.......................
I felt soo sad for K i mean its too gud that their not crying their hearts out.............................
That lone tear still meant alot.....................It really shows her feelings for him......................
Hope S realizez soon and tries to change his acts becoz everytime K thinks he's nice he turns out to be a BIG Flirt!
S will definately fall for K and tell her also ............while K knows what kind of guy he is and knows what to expect from him!
Hope they see the light in eachother soon...................
I'm waiting for the romantic scenes but i know that they don't feel nything fo eachother now and later the scenes will cum(romantic scenes)
Anyway really nice update................
Thanks for telling me ...................sorry for the late reply................i waz busy.............................
Hey a poem for S and K
Beautiful
My thoughts of you are like raindrops on flowers...
Beautiful.
My thoughts of you are like a rainbow at a splashing waterfall...
Beautiful.
My thoughts of you are like a full moon
shining through a cloudy night sky...
Beautiful.
No matter what wonders my eyes have seen,
Nothing compares to the beauty I see
when I look at you.
My love for you is beautiful
Both S and K feel this!
But don't know how to express it!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#86
Oh gawdd....! NOOOOO !!
Phir wahi Misunderstanding....Ufff !!!
I hope she gets to know the truth soon !!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey dear!!!!!! thank u sooo much 4 updating!!1 was waiting 4 this one!!!! but wot happened here!!!! sid!!!!😡wot wrong timing!! nw i really dnt knw if im feeling more bad 4 sujal or kashish!!!! one thing i knw Kashish will eat him alive nw!!!😆poor sujal he's in sum wonderland thinking about her and on the other side poor kashish she is heart broken!!!!!! i just hpe there misunderstandings get cleared real soon!!! i mean got 2 say wot timing 4 Kashish 2 return!! my god how i wished she came 5 mins later!!! but i really hpe that in the next part we get 2 see more romance and the misunderstandings are cleared!!!!....do update soon dear and keep up the fabulous work!!!👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
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It was a beautiful part wid a not so beautiful ending. But the best thing in this part was Sujal's thoughts. I luved when he actually classified CRAZY. Well that was crazy. But Luv him dat way too. 😉😉
I hope Kashish gets to realize the whole thing soon. BTW How can she expext dat Sujal wud actually tell her brother dat he actually likes her. I think that was also crazy. 😕😕
Well this whole crazy part is getting me crazy yet I luv it as well. 😃
PLS CONTINUE SOON.
Edited by sumaiya wahid - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: sun_423

please continue soon..😊

was this soon enough...?😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: sun_423

very nice part.. i liked sujal, kashish's chemistry.. it was just too good.... their dance.. unke beech ka conversation, all were totally superb.. i really enjoyed reading about their date.... and their dance was out of this world.. keep up the good work going....👏 please do post the next part soon.. i'am waiting for the next part very eagerly..😊

Thanku for ur kind comment😳
it makes me really happy to know tht u liked the convo b/w them.. it takes me a lot of time. just thinking what they'll say.. its kind of starnge though when u say the dialogs for two ppl😊😊
really happy u enjoyed it

Originally posted by: saga4eva

Hey

Dear sorry for the late reply...................
Iwas busy with exams..................
Luved the epi.......................
I don't hav much time now but i will give u a detail in a pm..........

read ur pm dear, really lovely😳😳... hope ur exams go well. reply whenever u have free time dont over look ur studies..i dont mind late replies as long as the keep coming...😃😃
QUOTE=togepe30]hey that was a cute part !
Continue soon....U have written it well...dont worry !
glad u found it cute😊.. i tried to keep it simple. thankyou for ur praise over my writting skills really😊

Originally posted by: saga4eva

Hey

Dear i sent u a pm .....about it.hope u like it....
Don't worry , e happy as this was 1 of the best epi's ever posted. U made my day by saying tht Thankyouuuuuu😳
I hav total faith that u will cum up with great epis in the near future....i hope i can live up to ever1's expectations..
Just work hard and u will achieve anything.
Keep it up and this epi was too gud..........
Continue soon.........
loved the poem you sent me in pm
yes dear got ur pm sorry cudnt reply to it earlier...

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