Look Through my EYES last part+epilog pg 50 - Page 8

Originally posted by: kashishdabest

Hey meggs!!!! mindbloooowing part sweetehart loved it completely!!!! THANKYOU😃i read both chapters 9 and 10 and they are just perfect!! simply mindbloooowing!!!! i loved them from start to finish😊!!!! ure just amazing!! I THANKYOU FOR UR KIND PRAISEand dnt tell me u never tried ure hand at romance b4 bcoz wot u wrote was just perfect!!!! it was just amazing!!! i cant beleive they kissed THEY KISSED?THEY WERE GOING TO AT RESTAURENT BUT THE WIND BLEW AND HEY DIDNT.. AND S KISSED HER GUD NITE SHE DIDNT....!!!! it was just wowwwwwwwww i was like omg i never expected this!! but it was beautiful!!! simply amazing the whole scene was just mindbloowing! u described the dance scene so well, i could actuallt imagine it!! U MADE MY DAY BY SAYING THIS!!!😃😃and finally they are creating taht understanding between them!! him asking her why she became a doc and knowing it was bcoz of her mother it shws his concern and hw much notice he takes!! it was just beauiful and the ending could not be more perfect!!!!😆him expecting a kiss but getting a slight slap in return!! wowww😆😆......i am going gaga over that part and plzz don't stop writing!!!😆 II MOST DEFINATLEY WONT NOW AFTER SUCH WONDERFUL COMMENTS

ok about part 9!! loved hw he was lost in her wen he saw her and then the little arguments in the resteraunt!! my god do they ever stop😆 and him remmbering her fav shake!! if im not wrong didnt she tell him wen he took her out after her moms deathYESSSSSSSSSSSSSSS😊😊!! i think it was then!! anyways amazing part just loved it!!! u rock dear!! do update sooon!!!! and u are just brilliant in the romantic scenes so keep going!!!👏

Originally posted by: kashishdabest

ohhh trust me dear!!! we are certainly satisfied!! after all u were just brilliant!!! and i swear i dnt beleive u wen u sed its ure first time!! it was sooo good!!!😆

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Well this is the most wonderful part u hav written till now.Thankyou😊😊 How can it SUCK????? Nah..... thats not possible...... Coz it was simply brilliant.awwwww😳 I can very well understand how hard u must hav worked 4 giving us this beautiful UD n thnx a lot 4 dat. u are most welcome and more parts like this will come up to!!!😉😉

As always I hav luved the thoughts in brackets all the more. Specially when the duo was out of words. That was really very gud. 👏👏👏Never got so many praise in one day...😳

And at last they sorted out the SO CALLED probs n I am really very happy abt dat. 😃😃😃i an happy u liked it BUT the probs are not getting away soo easily...i know next pat may seem a bit stubborn and foolish but it i sneccessary for a deeper understanding and more intamacy....

BLV ME Dear, It was just WOW. ⭐️⭐️⭐️

Keep it up n continue soon. i'll post the next part as soon as its written maybe day after tommorow