Look Through my EYES last part+epilog pg 50 - Page 10

Chapter 11

I read comments on chapter 11 and realized the common emotion was:-

1. K shud understand that s couldn't just blurt the whole truth to Sid

2. S shud have told the truth

3. Hope that their fight doesn't continue for long.

O.k. here are some things about the story, char. and chap. 11 that I'd like to clarify and specify...

i) This story is going to b long... no it wudnt contain just confusions and make ups... i intend to add some real good twists, turns, action and suspense... but all that is gonna come a lotttt later.. i.e. after s and k go out for 1 more date.

ii) 2. sujal isn't in love with kashish yet. At least he doesn't know if he is. And i don't think that any guy who just likes a girl, with whom he was fighting with till yesterday, can go and say to her family that he may like her and wud like to go out with her. especially if her family thinks of him as her step brother.

iii) 3. after such a long crush which k had had on s. tonight was like a dream come true for her... in heart she had always carried a secret desire of a meeting like this.. and her mind had always rejected it as stupid. but tonight for first time she let go of rationality and listened to her heart without any bounds. only to realize that the person whom she had made the mistake of falling for twice is still not worthy of her emotions. K is aware that when she was young it was a super crush (somthing u can get over). but this time it was much more and she isn't sure if she cud take his capricious attitude and bear it with a grin. she despises him for being the same weak person he was 7 yr.s ago and not confronting the truth. she hadn't expected an admission of love.. but he cud have at least said that yes they had a great time, they have a lot of things in common and he wud like to take her out for dinner sometime again. perhaps what angered her most was the fact that like earlier once again he cares more abt making the family happy and sacrificing her emotions in the way...

iv)alrite this is sort of a sneak peak in 13 chapter. k decides not to fight she has realized that any sort of contact and word exchange is harmful for her slippery, treacherous heart. so she gives him a full ignore treatment and actually starts acting complacent, agreeing whatever he says. so that they don't fight and hence reducing a 1hr argument to a 1 min. talk.... while s cant make out her behavior and thinks that she is playing hard to get... he tries to provoke her and get inside her head...

Originally posted by: meggs

Chapter 11

I read comments on chapter 11 and realized the common emotion was:-

1. K shud understand that s couldn't just blurt the whole truth to Sid

2. S shud have told the truth

3. Hope that their fight doesn't continue for long.

O.k. here are some things about the story, char. and chap. 11 that I'd like to clarify and specify...

i) This story is going to b long... no it wudnt contain just confusions and make ups... i intend to add some real good twists, turns, action and suspense... but all that is gonna come a lotttt later.. i.e. after s and k go out for 1 more date.

ii) 2. sujal isn't in love with kashish yet. At least he doesn't know if he is. And i don't think that any guy who just likes a girl, with whom he was fighting with till yesterday, can go and say to her family that he may like her and wud like to go out with her. especially if her family thinks of him as her step brother.

iii) 3. after such a long crush which k had had on s. tonight was like a dream come true for her... in heart she had always carried a secret desire of a meeting like this.. and her mind had always rejected it as stupid. but tonight for first time she let go of rationality and listened to her heart without any bounds. only to realize that the person whom she had made the mistake of falling for twice is still not worthy of her emotions. K is aware that when she was young it was a super crush (somthing u can get over). but this time it was much more and she isn't sure if she cud take his capricious attitude and bear it with a grin. she despises him for being the same weak person he was 7 yr.s ago and not confronting the truth. she hadn't expected an admission of love.. but he cud have at least said that yes they had a great time, they have a lot of things in common and he wud like to take her out for dinner sometime again. perhaps what angered her most was the fact that like earlier once again he cares more abt making the family happy and sacrificing her emotions in the way...

iv)alrite this is sort of a sneak peak in 13 chapter. k decides not to fight she has realized that any sort of contact and word exchange is harmful for her slippery, treacherous heart. so she gives him a full ignore treatment and actually starts acting complacent, agreeing whatever he says. so that they don't fight and hence reducing a 1hr argument to a 1 min. talk.... while s cant make out her behavior and thinks that she is playing hard to get... he tries to provoke her and get inside her head...

Originally posted by: saga4eva

Hey sweetie.............................

Plz post the updates soon..........

I've been waiting...........

I know u r busy but still plz post them!

And if its possible then plz when ur posting then plz paste sum pics of the scene.......................find pic of S and K that suits the chapter.....

Hope u like my suggestion.................

Try it ..........................it will be nice.........................

Gud luck on it!

Originally posted by: kashishdabest

hey dear thanx 4 the clarifications!! it is certainly much more clearer nw and we are understanding ure pov!!...andthank u dear 4 the preview of the next part!!! sounds interesting!!!! waiting to see hw she reacts 2 his words and hw he tries 2 provoke her!!!!...do update soon!!!!😳