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Posted: 16 years ago
#81
hey great part... continue soon..
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Posted: 16 years ago
#82
nice part
now that Angad Knows that Kripa still loves him wonder what will he do?????
continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#83
hey
just caught up with ur ff
its really cute continue soon😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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really nice ff...please add me to ur pm list...i really luv ur ff and looking fwd to read all the secrets and stuff...do continue soon :)

Heena

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Posted: 16 years ago
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qiuck part will edit and pm later
part6:

They had one day till the party (it lasted all day, more like an event than a party).The countdown had begun. Everything seemed to be done and yet there was much to be done still. This was going to be monumental for the charity and she hoped that it went perfectly. Unfortunately for Kripa it already seemed to be going terribly as you-know-who was going to be there. From the second she had waken, she was trying to be on the other side of him in the mansion that they had rented for it's big hall. She was momentarily trying to look over the whole house to check on things and her eyes all the while were flicking over in his direction with a hint of apprehension evident in them.

12:00pm there were 18 hours till the party day. The big banner with the charity's name spread across it still had to be hung up and now! Everyone had gone for lunch so it lay there on the table completely forgotten about. Kripa entered wondering why it was being ignored and stubbornly tried to lift the mammoth banner up towards the wall. Her breathing was already heavy and fast due to the effort of carrying it yet she still tried to lift it onto the wall. Angad was passing by the hall and almost passed it but something had caught his eye and he quickly backtracked till he could see the scene. He stood amused at the door watching her huff and puff as she stood on a stool trying to put the thing up. His guilty pleasure was in watching her but his motive was ignoring her so as much as he wanted to, he could not go over there to help her. However, he thought, I can atleast watch her for now as long as she does not notice. He had only managed to catch a few glimpses of her all day and his plan seemed to have worked but the other way around- he was missing her terribly. His phone beeped and he silently cursed it for doing so because her sharp ears did not miss the sound and she rapidly turned to glare at him. All he could think was: Aaah, the way her long black hair had sashayed it's way around her petite body was magnificent and the way her eyes pierce into me is to die for. Her eyes, those magnificent pools that stretch to be as large as the oceans that grace the earth just as her eyes grace her innocent face. Her eyes, the intense blacky brown solution stranded in the middle of pure white framed by thick long lashes. Her eyes' that read fear right now! In the process of turning around , she was loosing her balance and was about to fall! He ran like lightning towards her and caught her in his arms when she was just one foot off of the ground. Her eyes that he had so vividly described earlier were shut tight giving him another chance to gaze at her beautiful face. He could hear music ringing in his ears as he did so: hulchul hui, zara shor hua, dil chor hua, teri ore hua, aisi chali jab- someone cleared their throat and Kripa instantly opened her eyes with relief that she is not hurt that was soon dampened by the shock, gratefullness, anger, fury and something else that she felt on finding herself in his arms. the lyrics of the song were still continuing hawaa, ishq hua hi hua. They both realised that it was not in their brains (or hearts) but instead from the stereo that the music was coming from. And it was none other than the person who cleared their throat who had turned it on. Both of their attentions diverted and fixed on the beautiful girl standing by the door. "Angad!!"

Angad:"Baby!!"

Edited by aishu*7 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#86
hey nice part...but ite tooo short!!!!
i liked ur dis. of kripas eyes. it must have taken a lot of thinking to put it so beautifully and if it didnt take u much time then u are a genius
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But who the hell is this lady who angad just refered to as'baby'?????
please update soon and write a longer part, please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please
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Posted: 16 years ago
#87
great part
wonder who is this new girl
beautifully written
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Posted: 16 years ago
#88
Great Parttt
Can you post longer updates if you can? If not its okay
Who is that girl??
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey great part... well portrayed... i wonder who the girl is... continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 7a:
Angad walked over to the girl dropping Kripa on the floor. He went to hug the girl who was dressed in a shamelessly small black mini-dress whilst Kripa watched over to them and felt something inside her break in two. Her heart. Her eyes stung and for the first- no second time in her life she cursed herself for trusting him for even a second. It is only right she thought I did want to end it and he does have the right to move on, it's only that, I haven't moved on in three years and he seems to have done that so easily. She could not manage to stand there another second and walked- more like ran off into another room. The tears were flowing and her red-rimmed eyes were lowered in self-pity. She had felt guilty to even think of another man but he had managed to flirt with one right in front of her! After everything she had almost started to think that he had changed but heartbreakers will always remain heartbreakers. She had made it to her room and cried like there was no tomorrow till no more were willing to come out of her eyes.
Little did she know that Angad was planning this and it seemed to have worked- only Too well. It hurt him more that she had to suffer pain again and he could not look t her even once. So instead he went over to the girl who was one of his good friends as she knew Ridzy from when they were only two years old. Eventually though, her family had moved to NY when the girls were 10 and they almost forgot about each other as they were both busy in their own lives. Angad however, had not forgot as he had moved to NY soon after and they were great friends but unlike what Kripa thought, they were more like brother and sister than anything else. Now to introduce you to the girl: meet Miss Mishty Singh- she works as a journalist in the midst of NY and is at the moment struggling to make it big in life. Angad had recently invited her to the party on the basis that this party would attract a lot of people here and she may be able to get interviews of some important people or become social with the people higher up in her field. As any ambitious woman would, she instantly agreed. And as for the "baby" nickname, it was just what Angad had called her ever since she was a kid- he would never call Ridzy that as they were more like enemies but Angad-Mishty were the sweet type of brother and sister (probably because they weren't blood related). For Angad, it seemed to be his lucky day as he was succeeding in making Kripa jealous but without playing with sum1 else's feelings.
After that, Angad and Mishty went to chat and catch up while Kripa went back to organizing the party decorations in a lost and soulless manner. They did not see each other at all for the rest of the day as Kripa was careful not to bump into them and secretly Angad did not want to see her hurt either. All of the decorations were not done till 12:30 at night and despite the insisting of the workers to go and rest so that she would be well rested for the party tomorrow, she did not do so until everything was finished and the workers had left for their homes. She looked over the hall again with a satisfied smile that did not reach her eyes and looked at the banner again Oh- I almost forgot! I still have a challenge to win- Angad is going down!!! She thought of where he might be right now and then scowled thinking if the girl would be with him. She went over to her room and slept restlessly. Warm strobes of sunlight beamed down on everyone in the mansion and Kripa in particular woke up with an exited face like a child would on the day of her birthday. It was the day of the party/event and guests would be coming in an hour or so. All of the usual charity supporters would come at 9:00am and the real party would start with the coming of the invited celebrities at around about 7:00pm.
She dressed in a light pinky cotton dress and entered the hall that was decorated the day before. Mishty and Angad came soon after and all three admired the beautiful decorations unaware of each other's presence. Many of the walls were either mirrors or windows and a beautiful chandelier hung from the decorated ceiling. There were a few tables at the sides but most of the hall was made up of a huge dance floor. The banner hung at the front of the hall where it could be viewed from anywhere in the hall. Then Kripa went over to the decorations to have a look from nearby and Angad suddenly noticed her presence and started talking in a purposely loud voice to Mishty. "Yeah so Mish, do you remember the time when it snowed uptill knee-high and our tiny snowman got snowed over?" "Oh yeah, it took us such a long time to make that thing and the next day it got snowed over. The funny thing was that we found it after some of the softer snow melted around it and the nose had just totally disappeared!" "Ha, yes and'. Blah blah blah." Their convo continued but after initial anger, Kripa had resolved to not listen to them at all. Secretly though, a few buzzing parts of their conversation reached and stung her ears.
Soon, she went upstairs escaping Angads constant gaze that bore into her non-stop and then came down wearing this:, with this bracelet on: this necklace: and these shoes: and incredibly natural make-up on and her hair straight and down. Even without dressing up too much, she looked like an angel. Angad who was still talking to Mishty, glanced at her and instantly his eyes superglued to her as the rest of his body seemed to freeze in mid-convo. Mishty however kept talking and laughing totally unaware that her friend was occupied elsewhere. Angad regained a few of his senses and murmured to Mishty that he needed a sec and would be back soon. He started following Kripa around the hall with ishq hua playing in his ears (it was in his ears this time) totally oblivious to the curtains he was walking through. Finally, the bell rung and he came back to earth and quickly thundered up to his room so that Kripa wouldn't notice.
Kripa was attending to the guests that had started to arrive and soon enough the event was on it's way. Almost an hour later, Angad and Mishty came down the stairs; him in a light pink t-shirt to maintain the casual look with a suit on top and Mishty clad in an indecent looking dress that was not only short, but had 'fashiuonable' slits in it as well. Her make-up was over-the top (probably due to the thought to impress the celebs). Kripa felt instantly attracted to Angad the second he descended the stairs and she had goosebumps all over her body. Secretly, she stole glances of him. Although to everyone else it looked as if she was looking past him at the other guests but the two knew the truth more than anyone else. As this was the more boring part of the day, with plans for the charity being discussed, it went by verrryyy slowly. Especially for Kripa who was overly aware that Angad was introducing Mishty to the guests with an arm snugly around her waist and although it seemed like his constant attention was on Mishty, Kripa could have sworn that she felt the conscious feeling that she got when his eyes bore into her whenever she had her back to him. But surely enough, it time did pass, and soon' it was time for the real party to begin!

Guys I know that was a terrible part but it took me forever to write and I hope it was long enough for you coz that is probably the longest that I can manage. Hope you like it
p.s. im so so sooo sorry😳😳 that i cant reply to comments atm and i havent been for ages but please do reply as i read them but am too busy to reply to all of them. If you have a question that needs to be answered, please put it in bold and if you've asked and i havnt already added you to the om list, im soo sorry but can you post that in bold plzzzzzzz.
thanks for the lovely comments, they are really encouraging!!!😃😳😃
Aishu 😃
Edited by aishu*7 - 16 years ago

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