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Mona Khan

@lalala10

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Posted: 16 years ago

#151

Hi,
awesome part!!! I loved it. Can't wait for the next part!!!!
Please do continue!
Mona.

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teri_susan

@teri_susan

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Posted: 16 years ago

#152

Awesome part.Eagerly waiting for the next part.Continue............

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aishu*7

@aishu*7

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Posted: 16 years ago

#153

Originally posted by: twinkle94
hey Aishu! i uved tha prt! poor Angu! Kripz is soooo heartless! lolz! cont soon n thnx 4 tha both updates/Pmz/link! cont soon!

thanks, n its all right, Kripa is right in her place, i mean after all, Angad was in the wrong at one point of time- how can she be sure he is not now?

Originally posted by: Angad-Kripa#1
Ohhhh.
I feel Kripa is in trubble.....Angad is badly in love with her and i have a feelin hes badly angry at her now. yep as u've seen

Angad isnt just called the short-tempered dude for nothing. nope lol

LOL

Plz cont soon and PM Aishu!! sure

Harji

thanks so much for ur comment

Originally posted by: sujalangad_rock
just loved the part... thanks
KRipa has surelly pissed off angad really bad... unknowingly yes

Angad surely has a lot of patiences... these many attempts... even though they failed... hatts off to him for trying.... he is not a quitter but can't say about his temper

good... going... wonder what will he do now.... the fire in angad... will love to see it....

continue soon will do

thanks for your comment

Originally posted by: lalala10
Hi!
Awesome part!! I love this love ff ! thanks Kripa sure knows to handle Angad and herself! yep she has experience Wonder what Angad will do?? u'll seeYou are a very good writer. aww thank you so much
Please do continue! have done
Mona.

thanks for your comment

Originally posted by: teri_susan
Hai,I am silent reader of ur fiction for a long time. hi.. is your name susan? I love to hear from silent readers, it really encourages me so thanks! I liked the fiction very much.It's interesting from the start.Awesome part👏. thanks for all of the above😳😳 Eagerly waiting for the next part. it's posted Continue............

thanks for the comment

Originally posted by: sameira-90
hey great part.. continue soon..

thank you for the comment, the part is posted

THANK YOU ALL FOR YOUR LOVELY COMMENTS 😳😳
AISHU

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love_KYPH

@love_KYPH

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Posted: 16 years ago

#154

both d parts wer awesum....

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wonder wat angad is gonna do 2 kripa....

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aishu*7

@aishu*7

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Posted: 16 years ago

#155

Here is a short but incredibly important part:
Part 13b:

The car's engine was growling as their fury was as well and soon after the zoom of a drive, they arrived at a peculiar place'

There were people crowded everywhere as it seemed to be an open air concert. A thousand questions ran trough Kripa's head about where and why but above all that, relief surged back at her. She knew that now she was with people, she would be safe, someone would save her. Before she could have a second thought Angad pulled her through the crowd by force, knocking over a fair few people. She had not noticed but Angad was baffled as to why these people were here as well, as it was an obstruction to his plans. She called for help but nobody seemed to notice, the band's music was booming and Kripa's voice was only a whisper in comparison. She was being reduced to tears and yet, Angad still pulled her through the crowd. Her pleading face was going unnoticed. They were almost at the front now. 10' And to think that Kripa thought she would have had a normal day today. 9' A ll her tears had now dried up. 8' After all, there was nothing to cry for. 7' Just her life. 6' A few people were turning around 5' Some had started whispering looking at the two 4' Life came back to Kripa's body that had resembled that of a rag doll a few moments ago! 3'They were almost at the front now' 2' Kripa had started praying for her life ' 1!!!! The whole of the crowd was now staring at them only, including the band. All music had stopped and even Kripa's hoarse whisper for help was audible. Yet nobody, not one came to help her. All they could see was the most eligible bachelor yet never been branded a cassanova: Angad Khanna was pulling his seemingly friendly arch rival, everyone knew that they did not get along but why was unknown, the most sought after girl Kripa Sharma. If anyone had recovered from this shock, maybe they would help her. So all there was was silence. Pin drop silence'

Angad had finally made his was through the crowd and now was dragging Kripa behind the stage, further, further still until a small building came into view. A mandir. A mandir? Kripa wondered, why on earth has he brought me to a mandir? Maybe he is letting me have one last prayer. One last prayer' for what?!? Her heart was now exploding inside of her, and this time, the feeling was nowhere near pleasurable.

People were following them now- what use is a concert when there is a bigger spectacle here to watch. Angad dragged Kripa in past the steps. There was a storm brewing, harder and harder, as if even nature is signifying that something major will happen here today. The wind was knocking the bells at the entrance constantly producing a ting, ting ,ting, ting' Finally, Angad stopped.

He paused to look at Kripa with her storm tossed hair, mascara running down her face due to tears and blood-shot eyes. Then he looked at the murti of God in front of him. The wind picked up a few notches. He leant formward. Even more, then he touched his head on the murti's feet. Kripa was going to run but yet again in front of Angad, she was almost paralyzed. So she too, prayed, that everyone remained happy, that this cruel evil torture should not be subjected to anyone else in this world, and that Angad got what he deserved. Angad had a circular box in his hand. Kripa was no longer crying. What use was crying? When she already knew that she would face death or worse. Lightning struck outside to witness the climax of this event along with about a thousand people that were watching open mouthed. So it came as a shock when' Angad put his hand in' pinched some sindoor' and in front of a huge audience in full senses (or so they thouht) put it along her maang with an expert stroke that came from his fury'

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Edited by aishu*7 - 16 years ago

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love_KYPH

@love_KYPH

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Posted: 16 years ago

#156

OMG!!!!!!!!

AWESUM PART!!!!!!!

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can't wait 2 know wat happens next?????

wat wil b kripa's reaction????

cont soon..........

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reet

@tommygirl

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Posted: 16 years ago

#157

wow! i don't believe it.
awesome part
cont. soon

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aishu*7

@aishu*7

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Posted: 16 years ago

#158

Originally posted by: sameira-90
Hey great part... thank you😳
Happy April fools day to all..
Continue soon.. have done

thanks 4 the comment

Originally posted by: Angad-Kripa#1
Hey great part Aishu!! Woah Angad.....forcefull mucH? LOL yea lol
Happy April Fool's Day to u 2!! thanks!

Yea me and my friend put a fake love letter in my other friends locker. omg!

And we wrote and signed it as the guy she hates the most and she was like going crazyyy, she was soo pissed and so disgusted until we told her at the end of the day that it was a joke. haha im sure she wasnt laughing thou

LOL

Her reaction was sooo funni.

Plz cont soon and PM me. sure

Harji

thanks so much for your comment Harji
I love April fool's day, but im not much of a pranksta, i remember once when we put a whoopee cushion under our teacher's chair lol! But that was ages ago.
I would hate to be your friend right now though, but that is pretty funny😆😆

Originally posted by: sujalangad_rock
nice part....thanks
but did Angad actually do it or v were fooloed by u???? hmmm, maybe, or maybe not lol, dw it wasn't a prank, just a coincidence

continue soon have done

thanks you for your comment

Originally posted by: lalala10
Hi,
awesome part!!! I loved it. Can't wait for the next part!!!! thank you!
Please do continue! have done
Mona.

thanks for the comment Mona