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Isha

@Sidarth_lover1

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Posted: 16 years ago

#141

hey Aishu! i uved tha prt! poor Angu! Kripz is soooo heartless! lolz! cont soon n thnx 4 tha both updates/Pmz/link! cont soon!

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Harjot.

@Angel-Jot

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Posted: 16 years ago

#142

Ohhhh.

I feel Kripa is in trubble.....Angad is badly in love with her and i have a feelin hes badly angry at her now.

Angad isnt just called the short-tempered dude for nothing.

LOL

Plz cont soon and PM Aishu!!

Harji

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aditi

@AngelsHeaven

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+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#143

just loved the part...

KRipa has surelly pissed off angad really bad...

Angad surely has a lot of patiences... these many attempts... even though they failed... hatts off to him for trying....

good... going... wonder what will he do now.... the fire in angad... will love to see it....

continue soon

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Mona Khan

@lalala10

Navigator

Posted: 16 years ago

#144

Hi!
Awesome part!! I love this love ff ! Kripa sure knows to handle Angad and herself! Wonder what Angad will do?? You are a very good writer.
Please do continue!
Mona.

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teri_susan

@teri_susan

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#145

Hai,I am silent reader of ur fiction for a long time.I liked the fiction very much.It's interesting from the start.Awesome part👏.Eagerly waiting for the next part.Continue............

Edited by teri_susan - 16 years ago

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sameira

@AKForever

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#146

hey great part.. continue soon..

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aishu*7

@aishu*7

Explorer

Posted: 16 years ago

#147

Hope you guys like this part, it is short but it took me forever to do, it is not the whole part but I decided to post anyway.
Part 13a:

The next day was the week before the deadline given and Kripa's life continued on as normal. She seemed to have succesfully kept Angad away as she did not even come across him in the whole day to her relief. Or was it disappointment? After a long day at work, she made her way to her home. The sun was setting giving the sky a glorious pink tint. She loved this time of day, she could watch that scene for hours on end. Her high heels clacked against the hard floor. Wait- she was sure there was more noise that just her own footsteps. She suddenly stopped and so did the sound of other footsteps. She must have been going insane! So she continued. And so did the sound of unmistakable shuffling. Her heart beat had increased a few notches and even though she turned to see nothing, she could almost feel a presence somewhere near. The eerie thought gave her Goosebumps making the hairs on her arm stand on end. The sun had almost set now taking her comforting light with it as in the road she was in, no street lights stood, just an abandoned street of houses. Her pace quickened to match the pace of her heart and she could now see her misty breath in front of her. It was uncharacteristically cold that day. Kripa was sure the weatherman said it would be over 20 degrees Celsius today' She was nearing the end of the lonesome road and her heart gradually was relaxing. There was a school ahead where there would be some students still waiting to be collected to go home. Her muscles were relaxing and she laughed at her paranoid thoughts. She could see the dim glow of a street light and was walking towards it- suddenly an icy cold hand gripped her arm and dragged her into an alleyway. "Aaah-" she barely got that out before the same hand clamped over her mouth. If she was scared earlier' she was now way beyond terrified! She caught a glimpse of the face of her kidnapper and her eyes widened as they saw familiar features drenched in anger. Tension and fear gripped her muscles and they seemed to freeze, not responding to her brain's warning alert telling them to move- to get out of there! It was' it was' Angad! But not the Angad that she knew. This one was different, loathsome from the deepest corners of his heart, the real Angad. Or so she thought. Even whilst carrying a face full of rage, he was still somewhat handsome. Devilishly handsome. The rugged jaw line displaying his overnight stubble. His hard eyes that on first glance are cold but deeper lay a fire of rage. His hard muscles that gripped her fiercely, leaving no room for escape. His lips- his lips were coming towards her. Her own automatically parted- it was like second instinct to her. But then her brain kicked in making her recoil backwards. As she took a small step backwards, he took a large one forwards, eventually there was almost no distance between them. He lightly touched her cheek and made her look up until there was nowhere to look except for his into eyes. The eyes that moments ago showed rage but now' now she could look in the depths of his warn molten eyes that looked like honey and truly say that this was the man she loved without a moment of hesitation. Love- it was a sensational feeling. There was kindness and innocence almost engraved in his eyes that was mesmerizing and gripped her stare, not letting it go. He brought his lips closer and she too in the trance unknowingly did the same. Each other's touch was enough to send sparks down Angad and Kripa's bodies but when their lips met, breaking the barrier of time that had stood for years now, their hearts had stopped beating or was exploding in their chests. The small butterflies grew, sending magic waves through their blood, just sensational. Their senses heightened till the magical explosion that sent both of them into a light headed sense of flight. Their passion for so many years had finally been given to the other in this one kiss. And Kripa could not say that she regretted a single moment of it. Until Angad deepened the kiss, first an act of passion but them he went harder' and harder- he was hurting her! She could only manage a small moan in protest but she was blowing up inside. How dare he, and that too forcefully! An arm of her's finally came to senses so that she could beat on his chest with her small fist, and instantly he let go. She was surprised to see herself panting, it was amazing how long they had been there not breathing, but what was more surprising was Angad. It was the 'real' one again. Kripa didn't even need to take one look at him and she could tell or rather feel the waves of rage radiating from him. She did not have much more time to think though as suddenly she was mauled by Angad into his car that was parked on the abandoned road near the alleyway. It was amazing or rather alarming how massive his sheer strength was to get an unwilling captive there without even a flinch. He then drove off into the night, recklessly and violently. The car's engine was growling as their fury was as well and soon after the zoom of a drive, they arrived at a peculiar place'

Pinch punch first day of the month!
Happy April fool's day guys!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hope u've been pulling some great pranks😛, plz do tell me in ur comments, i'd love to hear them!
Aishu😃😃

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Edited by aishu*7 - 16 years ago

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sameira

@AKForever

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#148

Hey great part...
Happy April fools day to all..
Continue soon..

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Harjot.

@Angel-Jot

Alumni

+ 6

Posted: 16 years ago

#149

Hey great part Aishu!! Woah Angad.....forcefull mucH? LOL

Happy April Fool's Day to u 2!!

Yea me and my friend put a fake love letter in my other friends locker.

And we wrote and signed it as the guy she hates the most and she was like going crazyyy, she was soo pissed and so disgusted until we told her at the end of the day that it was a joke.

LOL

Her reaction was sooo funni.

Plz cont soon and PM me.

Harji