Forced ff AK part up pg41 22/07

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi guys this is Aishu and the following ff is on Angad-Kripa from KYPH. Anyone who has been following unwritten would know that i have been meaning to start this ff for a long time and that it is partially interlinked to unwritten (my ff based on AR). I will post details on that later but for now here is the first part/intro.
part 1/ intro

A person splashes their face with water. The defined features of him seem as though they were set in stone and all that could be read from his eyes was a cold, calculated approach to life. He wears his suit, adjusts his tie and then as if they were anticipating his moves (or were told their time to come) several servants filled the once large, empty mansion as they came running to his aid. Shoes were polished and curtains opened, then his hand shot out to recieve something and a peculiarly punctual ring sounded through the huge room. He answered his phone (the thing that he recieved) with not the menacing "what?" or "hello" you would expect from a man with his nature but instead with a "Maa!" The sort of greeting that would be uttered from a young and innocent child to his loving mother, not from The Great Angad Khanna. But that was indeed how he was.
Angad Khanna- the succesful businessman with the most famous rags to riches story (even though he never started from rags- just middle-class). Ambitous, arrogant and a perfectionist are what sums him up best, not to mention the most eligible bachelor from India. He gives no interviews, no comments on his personal life and definately no smiles to the business world. His dominating presence and sheer magnetism contradict anyone who may call him shy as he was not that, not that at all. He was just ... focused. The whole of the public and even his colleages knew him as that but to his family, it was a completely different story.
Angad Khanna the brother- The most irritating thing made on earth, and can be aggressive but really a bunch of laughs and a joker when with his sister. Fights with his sister all day and normally can not be left even in the same room as her for longer than a few minutes without them bringing the house down even though he is a lot older than her and is supposed to be matur. And when I say fight, I mean FIGHT. But he would never hurt her (too much😛) and if anyone else does, they won't know what hit them- literally.
Angad Khanna the son- Very lazy at home but at the same time, is responsible enough to do what has to be done. Loves his parents a lot, especially his mom who understands his complex nature completely.
Brother and sister tell each other everything- that is when they are not fighting! He is a total family man but to the world & a special someone ... not to be messed with!

Okay guys that is it for now (this writing is much better than unwritten) and since I don't feel like writing much more... here is the link to unwritten and the first few pages may help sort any questions out:
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1075818
I will add more info to this post soon but until then:
I hope you have enjoyed it and please reply!😃

I have now decided to name the ff forced- you'll see why later😉
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index
pg1- intro
pg2-character sketch and part 1
pg4-part 2
pg5-part 3
pg7-part 4a
pg8-part 4b
pg9-part 4c
pg11-promo and part 5a
pg12-part 5b
pg14-part 6
pg15-part 7a
pg16-part 7b
pg17-part 8
pg18-promo + part 9
pg19-
part 10
pg21-special part + part 11
pg-22-part 12
pg23-part 13a
pg24-part13b

pg26-part14a
pg27-part14b
pg28-part 15
pg30-part16
pg31-part17
pg33-part18

pg 36-from this point onwards, parts have no numbers
pg 37-a part
pg 39-a part
pg 41-a part and recap of story so far

the links don't seem to be working always so just go on to pg 2 and click on the next part link when you want to read the next one or go straight to the page you want to see.

Aishu


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Posted: 16 years ago
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thank you sooo much for writing a AK ff
i love the intro
i love the way you described angad its sooo nice
its sooo good
cant wait for you tooo cont....
if you dont mind can you PM me when you post the next part?
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey....gr8 start...aww lovda da wai u desrcibed angad and how he ent arrogant....cnt wait 4 kripaz entry...cnt soon
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omg!! i love your ff..
its seems so coool, and very intriguing...
hmmmm i wonder when kripa comes into the picture
and what she does to make him seem more jollier as a business man...
btw can you please pm me when u update this ff...
been looking for ak ff's for days...not that many after ar ones...
so im taking all the ak ffs i see lol....
as always
sukhi :)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey
great start can't wait till kripa enters😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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nice intro cont soon plz!!!!!👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Gr8 intro! 😊
Continue so0n! 😊
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Originally posted by: srk ki deewani

Gr8 intro! 😊

Continue so0n! 😊


Thanks, and i will cont. tomorrow

thank you sooo much for writing a AK ff- well, i couldn't resist, they r such a cute couple

i love the intro thanks
i love the way you described angad its sooo nice nice? well he was not supposed to seem nice but thanks
its sooo good
cant wait for you tooo cont.... i will tomorrow
if you dont mind can you PM me when you post the next part? yea sure


hey great start..continue soon..


thanks, will cont tomorrow probably

hey....gr8 start...aww lovda da wai u desrcibed angad and how he ent arrogant....cnt wait 4 kripaz entry...cnt soon


thanks, her entry will be in the next part

omg!! i love your ff..

its seems so coool, and very intriguing... thanks, this one will be different
hmmmm i wonder when kripa comes into the picture next part
and what she does to make him seem more jollier as a business man... you'll see he won't be jolly for a while though
btw can you please pm me when u update this ff... yea sure
been looking for ak ff's for days...not that many after ar ones... yea i no, that is why i started this
so im taking all the ak ffs i see lol....
as always
sukhi :)


hey

great start can't wait till kripa enters😊


thanks, will be next part


sounds interesting

plz continue soon


thanks and will do.

nice intro cont soon plz!!!!!👏

thanks, continuing tomorrow

hey guys, i want you lot to decide what i should name this ff. Also, here is AK's character sketch that i posted in unwritten:
(Angad)- Is 26 and a clever and succesful businessman who has very high hopes for the future. He fights madly and unneccesarily with his sister and he can be very annoying. He is funny for those who know him like family but those who don't know him as a tough guy who keeps to himself. Does not believe in love at all but is surprisingly religous. He is going through a lot and two people only can get the worst out of him and that is the girl who will love him and his sister. He fights a lot with sister but when she is in trouble, there is no1 as loving and kind as him.
(Kripa)- She is like the 'it' girl as everyone wants to be her. She looks and acts kindly but is still very popular. Nobody knows her that well except for her cousin and even he does not know her dark secret. She is very popular, fashionable and charming to all except one who is Angad. She hates him but it is not clear why.
plz read unwritten, it will clear sum confusion

Aishu😊


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Posted: 16 years ago
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nice intro....
now me waiting 4 Kripa...
continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanks for the support guys, here is the first part.
Part 1a:
Her pale face showed the turmoil inside of her why oh why did he have to force me to do this? Kripa knew that if there was anything else the person inside the tall office block she was standing outside of hates more than her- that person would be dead by now. And she could understand why as the feeling was mutual. They were like two sides of a coin- totally opposite and they never came face to face. She loved parties- he hated them. She was always charming- he was arrogant. It was not that she seeked attention but she certainly had a lot of it and well she liked it- he had the same attention but he hid from it. She smiles- he frowns. Even their bodies contrasted. He was tall, well-built and muscular while she was short, thin and petite overall. It was all of those things that she hated about Angad Khanna and ... the incident did not help with anything either.
Passers-by looked at the damsel in distress with utter amazement and confusion. And they were right to as Kripa had never set foot in the gates locking the building belonging to the great Angad Khanna before and she never planned on doing so again. Just do it she goaded herself. She had been standing outside the building for almost half an hour and a crowd had begun to gather around her. But this was not the result of her magnetic personality but just the shock of something so out of the ordinary happening there. One little child came up to her and asked "Aunty, kya aap sach mein yahan hai? Aap baadal ko kyu dekh rahi ho?" Her mother had come and snatched the child away to where they were originally going after muttering some apologies and excuses. She mentally kicked herself for looking like an idiot and thanked god that in the midst of New York, there were not many people around that speak hindi as otherwise this would certainly have
been on the tabloids the following day. She enjoyed the attention but at times like this when they tend to watch her every move, she felt as though she had to be perfect. She set foot inside the building with her eyes closed, hoping for the best. She walked over to the reception and said "Can I meet Mr. Khanna please?" The receptionist directed her attention towards her and looked at me disbelievingly "You do have an appointment- right?"
"Well, I don't but I was not supposed to come here- Armaan Mallik was. I am here to give Angad... Mr.Khanna an important file as Armaan couldn't make it. He doesn't need an appointment- am i correct?"
"Well yes but since you are not Armaan, we need proof or we cannot let you in. Mr.Khanna is a very busy man and he will see you when he has the time. As you are here due to Mr.Mallik, we can let you sit in the lounge for now." Krips couldn't believe what she was hearing. She was here to run an errand for Armaan and now she couldn't go in even though she certainly didn't want to but instead had to wait in a visitor's lounge! She pasted a fake smile on her face and muttered a mere thanks before going to sit down.
An hour passed. Then two. Kripa looked up at the elegant clock that said that the time was three- fortyfive. Three-fortyfive! She had to be at a meeting to organise her own charity's upcoming party at four!!! She was fuming inside but nobody could have guessed from her calm exterior that she was the slightest bit angry. After all, this was the only thing that Angad and Kripa had in common- the ability to conceal their feelings. She decided that it was too much though and marched over to the receptionist. "What does your boss think of himself? I am here against my wishes to help him and because of it, I will be late for my own work. Mr. Angad Khanna can not be so busy as to not do his own work. I-" she was just about to announce that she is leaving when she had heard footsteps on the squeaky-clean marble floor and the receptionist did not seem to be looking at her but instead- behind her. She was desperately hoping it was not who she thought it was but when she turned around- she saw none other than the devil Angad standing right behind her!

This was only going to be part a but since i lost half of this part due to my stupidness and had to write it out again- this is going to be the whole part. Enjoy!
Edited by aishu*7 - 16 years ago

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