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Posted: 20 years ago
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part 13


Kripa waked up early because today is the day that she is leaving and her flight is at 5: oo pm. usually on Sundays she wakes up at lunchtime but today is like her last day in New York. She quickly takes a shower and changes into blue tracksuit that has an addidaas logo! She goes to jogging in National Park in the New York. All streets are busy as usual but today she sees the New York in a different sight as she will miss whole environment and the atmosphere around her. She stops by a lake and thinks about her new life that she is about to began in India and on her own. The thought of being on her own in an unknown country scares her country which she never has visited before. She knew that she will make new friends but again she thinks she can't bring her old friends who she knew a lot! She stood there about half an hour observing the beautiful lake around her and watching the people around her rushing off to their job. She thought that her life is going to be like a serious now and she had to act like professional. The thought of her acting like professionals scares her because she always wants to be in the teenage. She wished that she could have stayed here or some how the show could be here in her own place.

She jogged back to her and quickly changes to denim jeans and pink sleeveless top.
She made sure that she has packed everything and also checking everything again and again. Suddenly she remembers about her diary, the diary where she has kept her all secrets. She looks out for diary and again making her room messy. Finally her eyes catches caught the glimpse of her pillow. As she picks up her pillow she finds her diary! She is like: how can I ever leave you.. She looks around the room and is like: Oh no!

It's 4pm now and she is in the car with her family and the (mystery guy). Before going she did meet up with her gang to say last good byes and promised to keep in touch. She is looking through the window taking the last glimpse of New York building and street and is like I will miss you. After half an hour they reach the air port and is like near the boarding point.

Kripa: was it that important for me to leave?
Josh who becomes all emotional to see her sister leave because he is protective and loves her sister a lot: kya Kripa, u should be happy. If I was u, I'll be the happiest person atleast no one would be there to stop me off playing games
Kripa: stop it bro, she smack him on his shoulders.
Surbhayan: stop it u two, Kripa take care of yourself, call me soon as possible as u reach there. U'll have to stay in the hotel for one week cuz I will buy u the house soon and your car ofcourse. I have arranged a driver for you, he will have a board that says your name.
Gayatri: Kripa take care of yourself..
She bids a teary good bye and turns to face the mystery guy who also have tears forming in his eyes
They hug each other tightly and at the same time they are crying. Unable to console themselves, they hug apart (lol) and looks into each other eye.. they move closer to each other:
K:I love u
Guy: I love u too, don't love sum 1 else
K: hits him,, be serious.. u too!
Guy: I love u more than u.
He kisses on her cheeks and kisses her lips. Kripa in return kisses his kiss.
Suddenly they hear the announcement calling for Miss Kripa Sharma..
She heads towards the boarding and looks back and then proceeds to go..



Meanwhile in Mumbai
Angad is usually out with his friends because he wants to avoid his mum who will burden him more with the work again. He is in the disco flirting and dancing with he girls. Suddenly he gets the call:

Caller: Hello
Angad: dadi, aap
Dadi: beta, kya tum busy to nahin ho
Angad being a sweet boy: no dadi, koi kaam tha?
Dadi: nahin beta , bas who meri friend ki flight aarahey USA say(it's not Kripa) I can't go because driver to holiday pe hai
Angad: no worries dadi, I will take you
Dadi: thnx beta
Angad: dadi aap ne bataya nahin hai ke flight kinet bjay hai
Dadi: Monday 7:00pm
Angad:dadi u worries a lot.. flight is tommo so relax
Dadi:haan haan.. I m old na isliye tumhari tarhan jaldi kaam nahin karsakti
Angad: no dadi I did not meant dat
Dadi:well I m not like u, I m organised (laughs)
Angad: Dadi I got to go
Dadi acha bye beta, don't forget to cum 2mo
Angad: take care, bye


The time flies in by quickly and here comes the big Monday morning and it's 7pm
You see Angad at the airport; Dadi could not come because she was ill so Angad decided to go airport by himself. Dadi had told the description to Angad what would she look like and moreover she gave a photo to him, He stood there with a board in his hand that says the lady name: Mrs.Kapoor in the terminal 2 in arrival point..
The flight if usa has been landed and he stood there about 20 minutes. Suddeny his cell rang:
Dadi: Angad I just got the call from mrs kapoor that she could not come because here visa has been expired
Angad: what
Dadi:sorry beta, u can come home now
Angad: it's o.k.

He disconnects the line and was quite annoyed and irritated that he has to wait a lot because he never waited that much in his life.
What does she think of herself, agar visa expired hogaya hai to jaldi se phone kardena chahiye.. oh man!
He was about to go when all of a sudden some taps him on his back
He turns around and sees a girl about his age with soft brown hair and eyes. She was wearing light pink indo and western choirdaar that has some embroidery on it with blue colour and she was none other than Kripa
Kwow India may kitne handsome drivers hote hain, but still she needed to make sure)
Kripa:excuse me, r u the driver
Kripa has spotted him from the far because he was the only one here who was holding the board but she did not c her name and realised he could be the one that papa was talking about.. Angad on the other hand has thrown the board away as he finished talking with dadi..
He is now quite irritated
Angad:what da hell do u think u r, whom do u think u r calling driver to (he said angrily)
Kripa was quite taken back by his behaviour and realises she was wrong
Kripa: sorry, I thought u were my driver, I m sorry
Angad: r u blind, u could have seen the person first rather than calling him driver
Kripa: I said sorry
Angad: sorry say kaam nahin chalta
He thought for a minute
Angad: if u realy sorry than u should do 20 sit-ups here infront of everyone
Kripa got furious and angry
Kripa: hello mister, it's ur lucky day that I said sorry to u otherwise Kripa sharma will never apologize to sum1 like
Angad: Madam, u don't know who u r talking to..
Kripa:I know, I m talking to the stupid idiot person here, who don't even have manners
Saying this she went off
Angad watches her and is like: I will teach u sumday when I c u!
He also heads back to his car
Meanwhile kripa spotted the driver and went in the car to go to the hotel!



preview: Angad spots Kripa at the mid road! 😉
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Posted: 20 years ago
#72
that was really good. Continue soon. Please 😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 20 years ago
#73
gr8 update 👏 👏 👏
plz contiune soon......
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Posted: 20 years ago
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hey give me some ideas that will create fights between A-K cuz i don't them to fall in luv that easily.
So pm me the ideas.
thank u every1 for the comments. I will try to continue this wednesday or this wknd cuz my school started 😭
Edited by *Izzy* - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago
#75
but she loves someboy else???
don't break his heart. How about Kripa thinks she is in love with Angad but actually she still loves the other guy.
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Posted: 20 years ago
#76
haye haye...mera dil...this is sooooooooooo good..plz cont soon izzy..i love this fan-fic.....plz cont before i lose my dil....................
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Posted: 20 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: shagun_luvs_?

but she loves someboy else???
don't break his heart. How about Kripa thinks she is in love with Angad but actually she still loves the other guy.

dats the point but i will get rid of mysterious guy soon but in a tragic way 😉. no worries. in a meantime just pm me the differnt ways that A-K can fight!right now my brain is malfunctioning! 😆

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Posted: 20 years ago
#78
first tell us who is the mystery guy.
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Posted: 20 years ago
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i will but later on.. hav patience.. i have made a special entry scenne for him that will make whole college stunned inc Angad!! 😉
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Posted: 20 years ago
#80
can't wait to read the next part. 😊 😊

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