**A Lone Star** (AR) Part 2 12/6

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ashu

@ashluvdmg

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Posted: 16 years ago

#31

hiya missy(i dnt no ur name,so thot of calin u missy)

hope u dnt mind...

it ws reli gud one..

boring??it ws emotional n all bt stil it ws so wel ritn...

borin no wy..it ws a gr8 start..

luking 4rwd 2 ur parts

hope u cont soon

thx a ton 4 de pm

luv u lts

ashu

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Jia

@jia..

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Posted: 16 years ago

#32

~Reserved~ will get back :)

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KaSh_4_eva

@KaSh_4_eva

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Posted: 16 years ago

#33

great update & I don't think it was boring

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swetha10

@swetha10

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Posted: 16 years ago

#34

Hey Missy nice emotional part but definitely not boring.... I enjoyed reading it.... Plzz continue asap.... 😊

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maryam

@mar-

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#35

'woooow grt part pls continue sooon

tnx for the pm

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pickytg

@pickytg

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: swetha10
WOW one more FF... the concept looks very interesting.. i'm sure it would b fun to read it.. Plzz continue asap.. n do add me onto ur PM list..😊

Originally posted by: swetha10
Hey Missy nice emotional part but definitely not boring.... I enjoyed reading it.... Plzz continue asap.... 😊

thx swetha!!glad u like d concept!! yeh i thot d 2nd part was borin..lol!!
will update soonnn!!:D
nijal

Originally posted by: KaSh_4_eva
great ff
plz continue

Originally posted by: KaSh_4_eva
great update & I don't think it was boring

thx dear!! gud u didnt find it as borin as i did...lol!
nijal

Originally posted by: samijan
sounds really gd. continue soon!

Originally posted by: samijan
gr8 pt. continue soon.

thx samija...will update vry soon ;)
nijal

Originally posted by: mar-
woow grt start pls continue sooon

Originally posted by: mar-
'woooow grt part pls continue sooon
tnx for the pm

thx mar! will doooo soonn!!
nijal

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music.doll

@music.doll

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#37

AYYYYY NJJJJJJ!!

Iam here!!! Ur regular reader oh yea hunny! Honestly its mindblowin. love every detail. waitin 4 more<33

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Anita Malik

@anitamalik

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#38

Nij! 🤗 Big Hug from me to you!

It wasn't boring at ALL! I loved it in fact...I loved seeing how Ms.Puri and Ridz bonded..I loved the way you described how in less time, they found love in each other...That was super sweet!

You described everything so beautifully and I wonder why Ridz is leaving the place...Hmmm..God Nij, your just like NJ--building up suspense for your readers..LOL...

She felt the twinge like she was being squeezed amid two heavy rocks.

I loved this line...Ouch, that must HURT!

Continue soonnnnnnnnnn!

Love ya

Anita

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simran1285

@simran1285

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Posted: 16 years ago

#39

Wow Nij how could you say boring I thought it was spectacular, I almost cried picturing Mrs. Puri crying and asking Ridz not to goo it was so sweet of her to let Ridz stay.

Ridz coming back from the flashback was a jolt, so sad I miss Mrs. Puri I could almost see her look when Ridz left and wow Ridz only 18 and on her own like that.

Great job Nij and thanks for the Pm will await the next update :-)

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Jodubai

@Jodubai

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#40

Hi Missy,

Thanks for the pm

& no the part wasn't boring, you do need a base to start the story with na, so this is good base

Felt quite sorry for Mrs Puri, poor lady her daughter away & she on her own for 6 years, glad Ridz is staying with her, the bonding between the 2 ladies is clearly seen & I like the name pu, howevre it reminds me of Kareena from Kabhi Khushi Kabhi Gham, hehehehe

do continue soon