**A Lone Star** (AR) Part 2 12/6

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prerna

@prernawaghray

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Posted: 16 years ago

#61

hey nij
gr8 story yaar
brillliant concept
ive read two parts at a go n i just enjoyed it
oh so apna hero entered hun???
wow yaar
um hungry for more plz update soon n if possible plz pm me

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kashish

@kashishk

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Posted: 16 years ago

#62

Fabulous part, I just loved, finally ammi's entry to good. Awesome.
Continue soon.

Kashish

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Jia

@jia..

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Posted: 16 years ago

#63

Hey Nij,

that amazingly brilliant!! I absolutel adore Ridz here, she seems so real, down to earth and completely natural, amazing portrayal of her character i must say!!

Finally the hero has made an entry?? Wohooo um loving this Nij, ur takingly this fabulously, i simply love the natural touch u give this writeup!!

Great going, will be awaiting more!!

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simran1285

@simran1285

Inactive

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Posted: 16 years ago

#64

Finally I thought you had forgotten this😆

I already told you I love Pu and the chemistry she has with Ridz. Loved the RJ thing is was great, but man Ridz talks so much when she picks up the phone, the other person like has to wait 5 mins before they can say hello😆

now who is this blank caller???

I hope Ray don't get any feelings for Ridz...

Why is Ridz avoiding talking about her past???

yay!! you introduced Ammy was waiting for this!!

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lakshmi

@meow23

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Posted: 16 years ago

#65

dat was a brilliant update.. luvd it loads....

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soumya

@saridena

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Posted: 16 years ago

#66

hi missy

thks for the pm dear

mindblowing

armi is introduced yipeeeeeeeeeee

ridz is was at loss of words by armi

update sooooooooooooooooooooon

luv soumya

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sonia

@dmg_sonia

Dazzler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#67

Hey!!!

Finally AR meet gr8...poor ridz was clean bowled within min hehe this was bound to happen as armaan is the best...but i wonder is armaan too clean bowled?

I loved ridz and pu's relationship too, it was very sweet one...being strangers then too within days they came so close, that it proves they are indeed share a bond

blank calls huh that's bad...something not so good is coming right? I wonder whats that now *sign* loved the update, it was amazing, beautifully crafted by you...cont soon

sonu

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harika

@-harika-

Voyager

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Posted: 16 years ago

#68

nice part nij!! yay, armaan's entry...now plz dont stop it here like ur previous ff...cont soon n plz cont the old one also...whoz the silent caller?pu n ridz r cute.. will wait for next part, thanks for pm😊

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@spln

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Posted: 16 years ago

#69

*NOTICE NALIED IN CAPS AND BOLD*

Update needed...further delay can be injurious for the propective updater in question...consider threat seriously...

Fiercely yours forever,

nj😆