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zizzy u nutter...u inform of the part after 3 ppl reserve?.....totally coming from u i shudnt be knocked ddown in surprise...
but the part....dam dam dam did u have to end it where u did?....gosh me was like all taken by the little subtle catches u had slipped in here n there casually yet unmistakably so....the anonymous called irked the back of my head as bad as it did for ridhima....somehow ur mention of the teenage high school girl seemed to me like she may link to our male protagonist...perhaps his siter later?...why wud he be at the door step else...that of course assuming the stranger is him?
gosh u litrally said nothing wildly secretive n yet the hints of unknowns in here left me in thought....um just like so totally wondering n hav eno clue...LIKE NONE AT ALL...of how this cu go...so say she meets him at her door step....then wats with the annymous calls...cudnt be an old lover from delhi cud he...or a past haunting in general...n if not then for a first day at work RJ who cud act such a pest who other than someone who knows her of course....gosh see me all wound up n confused....uv done it so well...
been simple n straight taken ur time in the trivialities of Pu n mr. pu porttrait the star villain roach on the wall the blue dress even ray n the MUST station staff....n yet those tiny lines here n there...they hold a catch...dam nij dont take this long for the next um waiting to see wats up next oki???
315 hun,
nj
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zizzy u nutter...u inform of the part after 3 ppl reserve?.....totally coming from u i shudnt be knocked ddown in surprise...
but the part....dam dam dam did u have to end it where u did?....gosh me was like all taken by the little subtle catches u had slipped in here n there casually yet unmistakably so....the anonymous called irked the back of my head as bad as it did for ridhima....somehow ur mention of the teenage high school girl seemed to me like she may link to our male protagonist...perhaps his siter later?...why wud he be at the door step else...that of course assuming the stranger is him?
gosh u litrally said nothing wildly secretive n yet the hints of unknowns in here left me in thought....um just like so totally wondering n hav eno clue...LIKE NONE AT ALL...of how this cu go...so say she meets him at her door step....then wats with the annymous calls...cudnt be an old lover from delhi cud he...or a past haunting in general...n if not then for a first day at work RJ who cud act such a pest who other than someone who knows her of course....gosh see me all wound up n confused....uv done it so well...
been simple n straight taken ur time in the trivialities of Pu n mr. pu porttrait the star villain roach on the wall the blue dress even ray n the MUST station staff....n yet those tiny lines here n there...they hold a catch...dam nij dont take this long for the next um waiting to see wats up next oki???
315 hun,
nj
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