**A Lone Star** (AR) Part 2 12/6 - Page 2

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Posted: 16 years ago
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WOW one more FF... the concept looks very interesting.. i'm sure it would b fun to read it.. Plzz continue asap.. n do add me onto ur PM list..😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Nij!

Man, you have a thing going on with this! I LOVE it! The details were wonderful...Like seriously, im in awe with the way you described everything!

I'm so looking forward to this FF and wanting to know why Ridz is leaving and all...

Loving it Nij! I told you that you have a way with words! = D

-Anita

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Posted: 16 years ago
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heya very nice concept plz cont soon cos i wud luv to read the next part luv sonia
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Posted: 16 years ago
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plz pm aswell
thanks luv sonia
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Posted: 16 years ago
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OMG OMG OMG...um so tempted to ping u now n tell u wat i think of the concept, but ur readin g my never ending update, n claimed if i ping u ul stop or read it out of order, so completely from a selfish motive i wont ping u nij.....

u know um thinking alot n very fast, i was with every line and every word in it....u can guess where all my thots may have wandered after our long convo...sat night was it or friday???
friday i think....yeh well....um just glad ur doing this...like really glad, i had to see one such from u, n nij hun please, dont evade updates to this one, i wish to read it with the similar idea in my head as with which i read hinu's pardes....not coz i think they have the obvious similarity u know i mite think, no....i want to read this one to the end with every line, jumping nothing unlike u jerk hahaha....coz i know il discover alot here....oh well...not discover really i think i know enuf....but lets say its will testify!!!


oki oki..too much mindless anter, nad that on a mere intro....wat will haoppen when i get the part, u shall know only when u post sweets....update soon....not like u cant guess there will be essays wat else from me, but wat essays only after u!!!

315 for u as well now N3!

nj
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Ahem Ahem....... Ever thought of informing me bout ur STORIES???????????? HUH ??HUH???? u have some nerve.... i saw this and im like..... oooh new story.. and then i see its BY YOU !!!! and u didnt even tell me !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

first thing i had to do.... demand an explanation...

second..... read... will comment in 5 mins !!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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this is seeming osm....................lkg fwd to reading more..........
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi Missy,
Nice intro.....very well penned down, Ridz's ordeal to get out of the place, she called home for 4 years....do continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey
nice part yaar
update sooooooooooooon
if u can pm me plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
luv soumya
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Wohaaaa missy, this was some wonderful start!!! Uff u given me complex yaar :).

Fabulous Nij, i simply loved the simply, subtle nature in which u painted this picture, introducing Ridz, her ordeal getting out of the place, Mrs Puri's character was one brilliantly sketched. Way to go. Looking forward to more!!

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