Acceptance(SaJan FF) LAST PART Pg33 - Page 9

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Posted: 16 years ago
#81
superb dear its very nice pls do cont soon i will be waiting
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Posted: 16 years ago
#82

OMG OMG OMGGGGGGG


I have missed Fo much. So many Freaking Breathtakin updates.😲😲😲

OhFo
Coming Back to the updates.


OMFDZ Girl. You are So Freakin Gwddd. Simply blown away.
😎 SAMMMMMMMMMMMMMMY 😎/. I love him.
He is romantic. ☺️


His love fo Gunjan is so passionate.
Poor Gunjan. How innocent she is. 😳

Part 4 was so sad. *a lone rolls down asthu cheek*

But Gunjan Babes is Beauty with no brains. 😳😳
Hey rabba whats wrong with her 😲😲😲
If sammy is with her. Then she shouldnt fear about a git/ 🤔


Doesnt she understand the saying pyar kiya to darna kya.


&&
WOWEEEEEEEEEEEEE The kiss. HAI

*Asthu faints* So Romantic. 😍

I So love your FF.

Part 5 is so adorable. Benjii is so cute. love him.

&& his drama queen acts and poses 😆😆😆

He would be the best devarjii, gunjan madam will get 😳

ek min. Wait wait. he would be the right devar fo nupur. Both nautanki basha's 🤣
yaar benji ko bhi banado mayank ka chota bhiyaa 😉😆😆


He is my only hope to make gunjun realize that nothing is more imp
then what sammy thinks of her not what people might. He loves her fo who she is. She shouldnt fear about other.

bechara samart 🥺


Buh alls will well in the end. Kyunki picture abhi bakeeha.⭐️😆
Like SRK says 😳

Im so loving simran's rolla coaster Sajan Ride.

Love asthu
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Posted: 16 years ago
#83
omg...wow simran..its js outta' dis world...dis iz d first tym...m readin' ur ff...n' believe me...m seriously regrettin' d fact of not gettin' a hook of it b4....👏
ur sucha gr8 n' expressive writer....every word yew wrote...was simply....M.A.G.I.C.A.L....😳😳😳...
Incredible work dear...even though..m not a gr8 fan of sajan...buh...js cuz of ur ff...m changin' ma mind...
omg...how m gunna sleep now....will definately dream bout' sajan...of ur ff...😆
keep up d gr8 work get goin' dear......i wud request ya 2 make ff 4 mayur as well...😳😛
ur ausum...😃
luv
neha😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
#84
Superb. You are really good with words..and a very interesting storyline.
Loved it! 😛
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Posted: 16 years ago
#85
simran, Absolutely loved it! just read all five parts! i felt like i was reading a novel! ur an incredible writer who pays attention to many details. parts 4 and 5 were so passionate and romantic, uff!! 😍 i love how gunjan is sammy's good luck charm when he's shooting bballs! u know when sammy sees gunjan in the white salwaar kameez and thinks it matches her milky skin. the song tujhe mein rab dikhta mein was ringing in my eyes! it was like sammy was singing it at that part! this song suits sajan in real MJHT just a little at the moment, since its v intense and romantic. but its perfect for your lovely creation of SaJan! 😊 nupur is nupur to the core with her by gods and love the reply to gunjans ques of why everyone is staring at them lol! will there be a mayank for nupur in ur story too?

please continue ASAP! 😊 i am a fan.
lets see if gunjan comes to the game! and what will dia n other girls think of gunjan at the game?
Edited by mileyhumtum_fan - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#86
amazing part... but i found it small in size..... as u have updated after a long time so we were expecting a biggggggggggggggg update..... next time long update in a short time.....
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Posted: 16 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: iqbals4ever

my heart is still beating fast!!!!!!! i think i love YOUR samrat than the one on the show! he is so passionate with Gunjan! i loved reading this part even though it was painful to read i hope Gunjan and Samrat can work thru this and i love Benji! he is such a sweetheart! awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!!!

p.s. could u send me the links for your other 2 ffs plz! and plz cont this fanfic as soon as possible!

Awww you are so sweet, thank you for the kind words and yes I love Benji too, I had sent you a PM with links to my other FF's hope you like them too!

Originally posted by: Shafoo

wowowowow thts reallyy coollllllllllll i love it

Shafoo thank you for commenting, it means a lot

Originally posted by: sonali.19281

hmm...great job its getting all the more interesting....well you do know how to tickle people's fantasies for sure.....must say the chemisrtry is lighthing up my monitor right now???awesome...

also loved benji's characterization...and i am loving samrat's psyche in your ff...he is so mature and aware of his feelings..i hope the script of the serial follows your footsteps..

waiting for part 6...really exciting

He he.. thanks Sonali, I am very eager to see Sajan in love in MJHT but I know that will take a looooong time hence am also feeding my hunger with this FF. And I don't think the serial will follow my foot steps he he but that is sweet of you to say.

Originally posted by: meera2

It was so good
this part was so mindblowing
Please continue soon with the next part
And make the next part really long
Can't wait to read the rest of your fanfic



bye
meera

Nice to hear from you Meera and thank you for commenting, sorry the part was short I've just updated part 6 and it is a little bit longer.

QUOTE=tanyaaaa26]superb dear its very nice pls do cont soon i will be waiting

It's always nice to hear from you Tanya, thank you for commenting

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Posted: 16 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: pink_09

OMG OMG OMGGGGGGG


I have missed Fo much. So many Freaking Breathtakin updates.😲😲😲
Aww Thank you Asthu
OhFo
Coming Back to the updates.


OMFDZ Girl. You are So Freakin Gwddd. Simply blown away.
😎 SAMMMMMMMMMMMMMMY 😎/. I love him.
He is romantic. ☺️


His love fo Gunjan is so passionate.
Poor Gunjan. How innocent she is. 😳

I know I wish the real Sammy was like this well he is a little bit, but I love the passionate Sammy
Part 4 was so sad. *a lone rolls down asthu cheek*

But Gunjan Babes is Beauty with no brains. 😳😳
Hey rabba whats wrong with her 😲😲😲
If sammy is with her. Then she shouldnt fear about a git/ 🤔

I agree Gunjan should not fear, but she can't help it and is very insecure
Doesnt she understand the saying pyar kiya to darna kya.
He he I know right

&& WOWEEEEEEEEEEEEE The kiss. HAI

*Asthu faints* So Romantic. 😍

I So love your FF.

Part 5 is so adorable. Benjii is so cute. love him.

&& his drama queen acts and poses 😆😆😆

He would be the best devarjii, gunjan madam will get 😳

Aww Asthu you took the words out of my mouth, even in MJHT I think Benji would be the perfect Devar for out Gunjan, I am so glad everyone has liked him in my FF
ek min. Wait wait. he would be the right devar fo nupur. Both nautanki basha's 🤣
yaar benji ko bhi banado mayank ka chota bhiyaa 😉😆😆

😆
I like Benji with Sajan they need a funny guy to lighten up the mood once in a while
He is my only hope to make gunjun realize that nothing is more imp
then what sammy thinks of her not what people might. He loves her fo who she is. She shouldnt fear about other.

bechara samart 🥺


Buh alls will well in the end. Kyunki picture abhi bakeeha.⭐️😆
Like SRK says 😳

Im so loving simran's rolla coaster Sajan Ride.

Love asthu
Awwwww Thank you Asthu🤗 and it's so good to see you back, and yes picture toh abhi definitely baaki hai, so keep watching and enjoy!

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Posted: 16 years ago
#89
Hoyye!!!!

I've the first comment on Part 6 !!!!!

Ha ha....I havent read it yet....be back later to edit...after reading it and swooning over Simran's latest masterpiece : )

*Edit*

Swoon swoon swoon......thank you Simran , for brightening up my day....its been a horrible one with the terror attack and everything , but at least I forgot the attack-inspired grief and anxiety while reading *tired smile*

I loved this part too...it was so romantic and gently passionate....particularly the kiss 😊.....a special mention about a line I especially liked - " He knew the entire stadium had prayed for him to win but she was the only one who'd prayed for his wellness" ...I really really really loved that line 😳....its so meaningful ....

I'm loving Benji's role in Acceptance more day by day , he so sweet ! The "do you even know how to spell rangoli " part cracked me up , I wish he would give her a few of the choiciest insults in the show too , Dia severely needs it 😊

Thanks for such a loooooooooooooooooooooooooooong update , and Happy Thanksgiving to you too !

Love , Shreya
Edited by Shubh_Aastha - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#90

Originally posted by: *mesweet neha*

omg...wow simran..its js outta' dis world...dis iz d first tym...m readin' ur ff...n' believe me...m seriously regrettin' d fact of not gettin' a hook of it b4....👏

Welcome Neha😳 I am so glad you happened upon this FF and are enjoying
ur sucha gr8 n' expressive writer....every word yew wrote...was simply....M.A.G.I.C.A.L....😳😳😳...
Incredible work dear...even though..m not a gr8 fan of sajan...buh...js cuz of ur ff...m changin' ma mind...
Awww thank you for the sweet words and I am glad you are liking Sajan now mission accomplished😆 no no just kidding
omg...how m gunna sleep now....will definately dream bout' sajan...of ur ff...😆
😆😆Aww so sweet but I can't blame you...sweet dreams😳😉
keep up d gr8 work get goin' dear......i wud request ya 2 make ff 4 mayur as well...😳😛
You know after reading everyone's comments re: Mayur I think I will have to write a FF on them, it will be a serious one though, I am bad with comedy so it's be a passionate one like this one, but I am sorry it will be after I finish this one😳
ur ausum...😃
Thank you😳
luv
neha😳

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