Acceptance(SaJan FF) LAST PART Pg33

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simran1285

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Posted: 16 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: debby
Superb. You are really good with words..and a very interesting storyline.
Loved it! 😛

Thank you am so glad you liked it😳

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simran1285

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Posted: 16 years ago

#92

Originally posted by: mileyhumtum_fan
simran, Absolutely loved it! just read all five parts! i felt like i was reading a novel! ur an incredible writer who pays attention to many details. parts 4 and 5 were so passionate and romantic, uff!! 😍 i love how gunjan is sammy's good luck charm when he's shooting bballs! u know when sammy sees gunjan in the white salwaar kameez and thinks it matches her milky skin. the song tujhe mein rab dikhta mein was ringing in my eyes! it was like sammy was singing it at that part! this song suits sajan in real MJHT just a little at the moment, since its v intense and romantic. but its perfect for your lovely creation of SaJan! 😊 nupur is nupur to the core with her by gods and love the reply to gunjans ques of why everyone is staring at them lol! will there be a mayank for nupur in ur story too?

please continue ASAP! 😊 i am a fan.
lets see if gunjan comes to the game! and what will dia n other girls think of gunjan at the game?

Thank you for commenting it was a delight to read your comment. I am glad no one is getting bored of my details😆, I was a bit apprehensive😳 and yes the good luck charm thing is a personal experience😉 and you know I have been listening to the Tujhme Rab Dikhta song for a few days now and am loving it and you right it really does suit Sajan especially of this FF since Sammy is like worshipping Gunjan😉

Everyone is asking for Mayur scenes, I will add them in my future updates. Some have even asked me to write a Mayur FF; which I am not promising but I might in the future, after I complete this one.

Part 6 is up I hope you like it😳

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simran1285

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Posted: 16 years ago

#93

Originally posted by: sejusej
amazing part... but i found it small in size..... as u have updated after a long time so we were expecting a biggggggggggggggg update..... next time long update in a short time.....

Thank you for commenting and am sorry the part was short, I am writing 3 FF's at one time and it's really making me lag behind😳, but I promise to update this at least twice a week and make the parts a bit longer😃

Originally posted by: lrl_01
it was v.nice

Thank you part 6 is up hope you enjoy it!

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simran1285

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Posted: 16 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: Shubh_Aastha
Hoyye!!!!

I've the first comment on Part 6 !!!!!

Ha ha....I havent read it yet....be back later to edit...after reading it and swooning over Simran's latest masterpiece : )

HOYE HOYE!! so nice to hear from you and yes you are first!😛 will wait for your comments dear hope you like it

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shafia Akhtar

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Posted: 16 years ago

#95

I LOVE IT SOO MUCHH PLZZ CONTUIED SOON

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Shagufta

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Posted: 16 years ago

#96

awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!!!👏

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MohitSanayaFan

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Posted: 16 years ago

#97

thanks for posting part 6!
benji was funny in this part! he called gunjan bhabhi and then the bhabz which sounds like babes comment! 😆😆 liked his sarcasm towards dia too -- can u even spell rangoli 😆😆
waiting for part 7 😊 cant wait for the diwali parts!