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Posted: 16 years ago
#91
wowow nice part plzz contuied soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#92
it was v.nice and funny too
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: StarryEyedGyal

Okay...I'll continue even though I am new here...

Gunjan and Samrat are walking down the corridor together
Everybody is looking at them. All the girls are stopping and really jealous of Gunjan that she is able to be the girlfriend of the hottest guy in school.


Random girl on corridor: Hey Samrat

Samrat just ignores her and girl gets jealous

Gunjan and Samrat are walking. Samrat is holding Gunjan's books and looking at her all the time..Meanwhile Gunjan is looking around

Samrat: Arrey chashmish! Zara mere taraf toh dekho na. Mujhe bhi tumhara pura chehra dekna hain. Addha chehra nahin jaise tum ek chupi chupi chor hon.
Gunjan: Hey Sam. Dekho. Main chor nahin hoon.
Samrat:Achha. Mujhe pata hain ke tum mujhe dekh kyun nahin hon. Tumhe mein accha nahin lagta na. Tum mujhse pyar nahin karti na. In a filmy style Nahiiiin! Mera sabse bada pyar mujhse ab nahin pyar nahin karta. Jaan de doonga lekin meri chashmish ko kisi aur ka nahin hoone doonga! NAHIN!!!!!
Gunjan: SAMRAT! Covers his mouth with her hand Aisa kabhi nahin bolna
Samrat: Kya? Giving that smile and look he does
Gunjan: I love you! Blushes*
Samrat: Bas. Yehin mein tumse bolana chahta ta. Babes. Bohot hi time hogaya hain jabse yeh words maine sune. Hmmm...Kitna sab mujhe bolna pada. Tab tumne mujhe bola. Yar...Kitabe itni padti hon. Zara todhe der ke liye mujhe bhi pado na aur mujhe pe ek exam do...
Gunjan: Samrat! Tum bhi na!

Samrat and Gunjan carry on walking and Samrat bangs into one of the poles

Samrat: ARGH! Chashmish. Tumko to dekna matlab marna. ...Mera sur!..Looking at Gunjan romantically Zara yaha par aona. Aur mujhe ek kiss dedo lips par. Sabh kuch teekh ho jayenga. Agar tumne mujhe ek kiss nahin di toh phir mein kisi aur ladki se maang loonga.
Gunjan: Theek hain. Main hi tumhara kam asan kar doongi. Main hi kyun ek ladki le aati.

She walks away and comes back with the ugliest and smelliest girl in the college

Gunjan: Yeh lo! Mein hi ek ladki le aayi tumhare liye. To the girl Jao aur apne Samrat ko ek kiss dedeo

The girl starts to walk towards Samrat. Samrat's eyes are wide open and as he begins to realise the horror he suddenly gets up.

Gunjan: Kyun Samrat! Wah bhai wah! Tum toh badi hi jaldi theek ho gaye. Tumhare sar mein ab dard nahin he kya? Jao jao Simran (The girls name) Jao aur Sammy ko ek lips par kiss dedo.

A really funny chase happens between Simran and Samrat around the school. Gunjan is laughing a lot. After a few rounds around the college

Gunjan: Theek hain Simran. Ab tum jao waapas library mein
Simran: Par mera kiss
Gunjan: Sorry lekin Samrat to bhaag gaya
Simran: Theek hain. Bye Gunjan
Gunjan: Bye

Samrat appears from under the table in the cafeteria. Gunjan sees him and starts laughing again. His hair is in a mess so he ruffles it up to make it looking good.

Samrat: Gunjan. Ab toh mein tumhe chodoonga nahin. Badla to hokar hi rahenga.
Gunjan: Accha. Nahin chodonge. Mein chodaongi. Bye Sam

Samrat watches her walk away with a smile on his face...

Samrat: Oi Benji. Yahan par aao. Ab tumhe meri madat karni padengi. Ab toh mein Gunjan se kiss lekar hi rahonga. Kuch bhi karna pada
Benji: Lekin woh tum kese karonge
Samrat: Socho na. Arre. Yeh bump ne toh mera dimaag hi spoil kar diya dude. Mein bhi tumher poonch raha hoon ke tum sooncho. Tumhe toh machli ya magar me bhi fark nahin pata chalta. Soch Samrat soch. Woh kiss kese pahni hain chashmish se...




Can somebody carry on please
Tell me if you liked it
Sorry my Hindi may be a bit bad because I'm English...


too good ....don worry abt hindi .....its perfectly fine ....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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I HAVE READ THIS FF!!!!

U ALL GUYS ARE FANTASTIC!!!!

SOM1 CONT SOON

TAKE UR TIME!!

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Posted: 16 years ago
#95
chalo yaar continue ......im not getting ideas so can't continue ......
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Posted: 16 years ago
#96
guys cnyinue i love this
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Posted: 16 years ago
#97
guys where r u ppl i love this ff plss cntinue
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Posted: 16 years ago
#98
heyy guys
sumone pls continue soon.
luv
komal.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#99
heyy
i like this ff a lot.
pls sumone continue.
luv
kinnari.
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey guys i decided to continue this-
last time samrat wanted a kiss from gunjan.

now-
its samrat's BD. And a sunday. no body knows that it is samrat's BD except benji and gunjan.

In the morning at 9:00 AM.

Gunjan comes to samrat's house to wish him (she comes this late because she knows that samrat's early morning is at 10:00 and no one is at home except samrat). she also invited benji to come over for lunch at 12:00.

She comes and decorates the house with flowers and other BD items and she made for him. the decorations of the house were simple yet fabulous.

She records her voice in cell(the voice is HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU)

She enters samrat's room and sees him asleep.

she turns on her recorded voice and stands by the door.

samrat thinks that it is gunjan and tries to hug her and comes empty handed. Gunjan sees this and laughs.

G goes near samrat, she kisses on forehead and wishes him HBD.

G- Samrat go take a shower.

S- (acting like a kid and sitting cross-legged on bed)- I dont want to take a shower(still sad from previous incident where he didnt catch Gunjan)

G- pls

S- (still acting like a kid)- no

G- OK if you take a shower you will get a kiss

S- (from excitement)really

G- yes. take shower and come down.

S- (from excitement and grins naughtily)- I will come down really quick (and heads for the bathroom)

Gunjan grins naughtily and goes downstairs and into kitchen and sings KYA HUA YEH(while making lunch)

samrat comes down after 1:30 Hr. He sees the decorations and a tear drops from his eyes.😭 Gunjan notices this wipes it off.

S- Thank you so much (hugs her). I love it. I can never return this back I .........

G-Shhh. this is nothing compared to what you have given me. (cutting in btwn)

S- (wrapping his arms around her waist and resting his head on her shoulder content to be with her-for a long time). So, where is my kiss.

Gunjan slighly grins(which samrat doesnt notice) and turns around

G- 1st close ur eyes

Samrat's eyes widen up and closes immediately. G grins and kisses on his cheek. samrat opens his eyes and .......

S- u said a kiss

G- yes that is what you got.

S- but I thought a kiss on lips

G- OH ! i think you misunderstood (grins and samrat notices)

S- (like a kid) - no I didnt and I am going to take a kiss from you today no matter what

G- Oh really (and runs around the home).

samrat runs behind her. he being a fast runner catches her and pushes her aganist her aganist the wall slowly.

He brings his face really close to hers while carressing her waist.

gunjan closes her eyes and then ................


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I am so sorry if there are any mistakes. This is my first writing an FF.

PLEASE REPLY THEN ONLY I WILL KNOW IF YOU LIKE IT OR NOT😃
Edited by qsc12345678 - 16 years ago

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