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kavya

@kavya.b

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Posted: 16 years ago

#81

nice part neeraja

i came here aftr a long time

happy that i'v eread a nice part

but presently my mind is not working well , so i can t continue

plzz someone continue

Edited by kavya.b - 16 years ago

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debby

@debby

Dazzler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#82

Loved the Mayur class part.. "tumhari class main hu? " Lol.
Good one!! :)

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devilofkindness

@devilofkindness

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Posted: 16 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: kavya.b

nice part neeraja

i came here aftr a long time

happy that i'v eread a nice part

but presently my mind is not working well , so i can t continue

plzz someone continue

yup i can see that ....ur not ur own this time ....theek hai its fine ...koi aur continue karega

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devilofkindness

@devilofkindness

Rocker

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Posted: 16 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: lrl_01
its v.nice

hey y don't u continue ...?

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devilofkindness

@devilofkindness

Rocker

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Posted: 16 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: debby
Loved the Mayur class part.. "tumhari class main hu? " Lol.
Good one!! :)

thanks debby _sorry dunno ur name ....well debby's a nice username ...😊

neeraja

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Simran Kaur

@sim.07

Dazzler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: devilofkindness

hey y don't u continue ...?

I'll continue after my exams apna saara dimaag abhi studies par lagaa hua hai to ff par sochne mein time lag raha hai

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CookMySock

@CookMySock

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#87

Okay...I'll continue even though I am new here...

Gunjan and Samrat are walking down the corridor together
Everybody is looking at them. All the girls are stopping and really jealous of Gunjan that she is able to be the girlfriend of the hottest guy in school.

Random girl on corridor: Hey Samrat

Samrat just ignores her and girl gets jealous

Gunjan and Samrat are walking. Samrat is holding Gunjan's books and looking at her all the time..Meanwhile Gunjan is looking around
Samrat: Arrey chashmish! Zara mere taraf toh dekho na. Mujhe bhi tumhara pura chehra dekna hain. Addha chehra nahin jaise tum ek chupi chupi chor hon.
Gunjan: Hey Sam. Dekho. Main chor nahin hoon.
Samrat:Achha. Mujhe pata hain ke tum mujhe dekh kyun nahin hon. Tumhe mein accha nahin lagta na. Tum mujhse pyar nahin karti na. In a filmy style Nahiiiin! Mera sabse bada pyar mujhse ab nahin pyar nahin karta. Jaan de doonga lekin meri chashmish ko kisi aur ka nahin hoone doonga! NAHIN!!!!!
Gunjan: SAMRAT! Covers his mouth with her hand Aisa kabhi nahin bolna
Samrat: Kya? Giving that smile and look he does
Gunjan: I love you! Blushes*
Samrat: Bas. Yehin mein tumse bolana chahta ta. Babes. Bohot hi time hogaya hain jabse yeh words maine sune. Hmmm...Kitna sab mujhe bolna pada. Tab tumne mujhe bola. Yar...Kitabe itni padti hon. Zara todhe der ke liye mujhe bhi pado na aur mujhe pe ek exam do...
Gunjan: Samrat! Tum bhi na!

Samrat and Gunjan carry on walking and Samrat bangs into one of the poles

Samrat: ARGH! Chashmish. Tumko to dekna matlab marna. ...Mera sur!..Looking at Gunjan romantically Zara yaha par aona. Aur mujhe ek kiss dedo lips par. Sabh kuch teekh ho jayenga. Agar tumne mujhe ek kiss nahin di toh phir mein kisi aur ladki se maang loonga.
Gunjan: Theek hain. Main hi tumhara kam asan kar doongi. Main hi kyun ek ladki le aati.

She walks away and comes back with the ugliest and smelliest girl in the college

Gunjan: Yeh lo! Mein hi ek ladki le aayi tumhare liye. To the girl Jao aur apne Samrat ko ek kiss dedeo

The girl starts to walk towards Samrat. Samrat's eyes are wide open and as he begins to realise the horror he suddenly gets up.

Gunjan: Kyun Samrat! Wah bhai wah! Tum toh badi hi jaldi theek ho gaye. Tumhare sar mein ab dard nahin he kya? Jao jao Simran (The girls name) Jao aur Sammy ko ek lips par kiss dedo.

A really funny chase happens between Simran and Samrat around the school. Gunjan is laughing a lot. After a few rounds around the college

Gunjan: Theek hain Simran. Ab tum jao waapas library mein
Simran: Par mera kiss
Gunjan: Sorry lekin Samrat to bhaag gaya
Simran: Theek hain. Bye Gunjan
Gunjan: Bye

Samrat appears from under the table in the cafeteria. Gunjan sees him and starts laughing again. His hair is in a mess so he ruffles it up to make it looking good.

Samrat: Gunjan. Ab toh mein tumhe chodoonga nahin. Badla to hokar hi rahenga.
Gunjan: Accha. Nahin chodonge. Mein chodaongi. Bye Sam

Samrat watches her walk away with a smile on his face...

Samrat: Oi Benji. Yahan par aao. Ab tumhe meri madat karni padengi. Ab toh mein Gunjan se kiss lekar hi rahonga. Kuch bhi karna pada
Benji: Lekin woh tum kese karonge
Samrat: Socho na. Arre. Yeh bump ne toh mera dimaag hi spoil kar diya dude. Mein bhi tumher poonch raha hoon ke tum sooncho. Tumhe toh machli ya magar me bhi fark nahin pata chalta. Soch Samrat soch. Woh kiss kese pahni hain chashmish se...

Can somebody carry on please
Tell me if you liked it
Sorry my Hindi may be a bit bad because I'm English...

Edited by StarryEyedGyal - 16 years ago

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shafia Akhtar

@IISHAFS

Rocker

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Posted: 16 years ago

#88

tht was amzingggggggg plzz contuied soon

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karishma

@kasu4dmg

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#89

amazing ff yaar..its too good

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TrueMuskaan

@TrueMuskaan

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#90

hi, il con. am sori bt my hindi isnt very good so it'l b mostly english

the next day in college

gunjan arrives and looks around, trying to find sammy, but he is no where to be seen.

gunjan (thinking) maybe he's inside

gunjan walks inside lost in her thoughts about sammy. suddenly she feels sum1's hands around her waist and pulls her inside an empty classroom.
gunjan screams and then feels a hand over her mouth, and hears the door shut. the classroom is dark, she cant c a thing. then that person pushes her against the wall and holds her hands tight and whispers in her ear...'darr gaye kya?'

gunjan is shocked....'samrat..tum?'
samrat takes out his lighter and puts it on. sajan have an eyelock moment....using his other hand, samrat pushes a strand of gunjan's hair behind her ear and then slides his hand behind her neck...sajan r still staring at eachother...samrat brings his face closer 2 gunjan's....gunjan closes her eyes...their lips r only inches away...BANG!!!!!....sajan both hear this loud sound, n gunjan realises where she is.

gunjan...samrat, mujhe jaane do plz....

gunjan tries to push samrat of her bt is unable to

samrat just stares at her

gunjan...samrat...samrat plz mujhe jaane do...koy dekhle ga...plz samrat

gunjan tries to push samrat away

samrat...i will...bt 1st

samrat suddenly brings his face closer 2 gunjan's...they are about 2 kiss...suddenly gunjan pushes

samrat away and runs but samrat holds her hand...he pulls her 2wards him and holds her around her wasit and gunjan's hands are on his chest....sajan have a eyelock moment lasting 5 mins...they hear another bang.

benjii...samrat yaar

suddenly sajan let go of eachother

samrat...are yaar...ye benjii bhi na

gunjan giggles.

samrat...ji benjiii..kya hai

benjii...are samrat...kiss karne liye kitna time lagta hai

gunjan laughs and walks out of the room waving bye 2 sammy

samrat comes out and shouts at benjii

samrat...benjii yaar, teri timing boht karaab hai

gunjan shouts 2 sammy and benjii....par mere liye boht perfect timing hai

sammy winks at her and she smiles.

hope u guys like it, am sori if my hindi isnt very good