Unprecedented Ending!!(RN short ff) last part

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

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Posted: 16 years ago

#11

oho new fic i will read and will comment later darling

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Prerna

@prerna1

Sparkler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#12

just too good dear

love the way u depict every emotion and every feel keep up the good work and do continue soon

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fanatic 21

@fanatic 21

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Posted: 16 years ago

#13

dis fic is amazing.....

loved d way u gave prolouge at d start n d way u progressed in d 1st part........

awesome really.......looking fwd for next updt

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watch rajeev

@watch rajeev

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#14

hiiiiiiiiiii....................d ud was gr8..........sorry 4 d late comment.....i was quite busy.......u hv managed to set d mood wid d 1st ud only.....and i hope u'll continue doing so in d future also....😊 sorry got to go..........byeeeeeeeee and ud sooon....i'll try to u a bigger comment within a day or two.........

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soumya

@saridena

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#15

thks for the pm dear

wow superb yaar

naina goes after raj

update soooooooooooon yaar

it very interesting

luv soumya

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nice pics sweety

Edited by saridena - 16 years ago

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sofia

@mystified

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Posted: 16 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Shaina_b
Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!! thanks shai...u have a major contribution this time with all those pics...it did add the mood...

Raj had been declared a traitor!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭O no!!!! well it will go acc to the original storyline...

Raj's eyes held the pain of betrayal and guilt of not realising the truth!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Matlab Raj samaj agay tha ke usse kisne betray kiya hai!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 😔 yup here he knows but b4 he could do anything he is held as a traitor...

Naina is thinking ke why is he not denying these claims and wants him to deny it!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Aalekh has figured it out ke Raj ke saath dhoka huya hai and wants to find out ke woh kaun hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Good for him!!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊 these two have always been different among his cadets...

The last time he looked at Naina that was sooo emotional!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

well thanks for appreciating...actually if u felt that way then my job is done...

Naina is uncontrollable!!!! She has lost everything!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Pooja ko sambhalne ke liye Ali hai aur Yudi ko samajne ke liye Shalini!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Magar Naina ko samajne wala naa jaane kaha chala gaya!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Kam se kam Huda realised that Naina was never his and belonged to Raj only!!!!!

Aalekh wanted Naina to come back but that is possible only if Raj came back!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Aalekh wants to find out and wants to help but how!!!!!😕 😕 😕 😕

all the cadets are in someway disturbed but yes the greatest pain is endyred by naina

Poor Naina!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭Maan he nahi paa rahi hai that he is no more and wants to go and find him!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina has also realised that he knew about the traitor!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj ne kaha tha ke ek sipahi apne akri saans tak jung ladta hai aur jab tak woh ek saans baki rehti hai umeed baki rehti hai aur jab tak umeed baki rehti hai sipahi jung nahi chhoda karte!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

well said shai...absolutely true...

Naina Aalekh ko nahi leke gayi aur kaha ke woh wapas aayegi Raj ko lekar!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Kya pyaar hai!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

pyar mazboot hai magar pata nahi kamyab ho payega ki nahi....

@ mahak
tho aap ne dhoond liya yeh fic😉...i am glad....keep reading....

@prerna
thanky very much for appreciating.....it really helps me to improve😳

@lipi
thanks dear...i am glad that u r liking i😊t...keep reading...

@watch rajeev
no problem at all....as long as u ppl are liking it i have no worries...even a single line would do...it really serves as a boost to me😊....i really appreciate each and every word written by all of u....

@soumya.
thanks for appreciating....i am glad that u r able to get the atmosphere...keep reading...

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Moodyblue

@Moodyblue

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#17

the update was really good, ur writing style is marvellous😊.

is rajveer dead for sure?? i mean they never recovered his body....................

aalekh is the only one who understands naina well..............⭐️

naina wants to fight for rajveer.............👏

update soon

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sofia

@mystified

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#18

thanks me myself for the comment but whether raj is dead or not u ll come to know in the forthcoming parts...glad u liked the bond between aalekh and naina....

well guys this is a short fic so it will be over b4 u know it....

thanks for all ur support....

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Suhana

@suhana.dixit

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#19

Hi Dear

Howcome i ddn't knew dat u r writing dis new fiction based on LRl...Nyways its not too late..Prologue was really very emotional .....😭..

These lines were brilliant

The pain of separation is too much for the living to bare….especially when we lose our loved ones. We often wish to bring them back, back from the dead, alter this law of nature, change the fact that once dead, nobody can come back, everyone has to die someday and each one has to die their own death.

Death is so cruel that it leaves a void, a pang of emptiness in the people who are left behind.

No one actually realizes that it also brings solace to the person enduring it. It removes him/ her from the worldly torture and transforms them into a different world where they r no longer mere beings but r entities….they r souls…..

Now about the first part..It was so very real...I thought dat i'm seeing dat episode once again ..It was very very emotional..Naina is not in her senses..The only person who understands her completely is Alekh..I think he knows dat Raj was betrayed by some1 whom he considers at his own..The wasy all 6 cadets r united is really gud n dat is wat Raj wanted..Naina has taken a right decision to go out n search for her Rajveer Sir ....Bcos life is not worth living without him..😭😭😭

Do inform me abt the next update 😊😊😊

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Dhara Singh

@Dhara_s

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#20

hey thnx for informing abt dis fic.....its sooooooooo painful but i completely loved it, even though i was crying wid d characters😭😭....not everything in life is goody goody n death is a part of life wic we really cant ignore...i hv comne across a few fics wic used pics in dem but none helped d fics much but for ur dis fic d case is completely different....d use of pics just increased d beauty of the fic.....👏👏

love,

dhara....