Unprecedented Ending!!(RN short ff) last part - Page 7

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

The story was just awesome!!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏I have no words!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

It made me cry throughout and also remember the things already shown in the serial!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

It was a trip down memory lane!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

This was much better than the serial but Raj still died!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 That was tragic!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Before he died he still gave Naina the proofs to catch the traitor!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏👏 👏

Naina lived on without him but with his memories!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😊 😊 😊 😊

Jo pyaar usse mila thode waqt ke liye hi sahi shayad uski yaadein kaafi thi zindagi jeene ke liye!!!!.😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Unke pyaar ki dastaan hamesha zinda rahegi kyunki prem toh amar hota hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Duniya mein kitni hain nafratein
Phir bhi dilon mein hain chaahatein
Duniya mein kitni hain nafratein
Phir bhi dilon mein hain chaahatein

Mar bhi jaaye pyaar waale
mit bhi jaaye yaar waale
Zinda rehti hain unki mohabbatein
Zinda rehti hain unki mohabbatein

Mar bhi jaaye pyaar waale
mit bhi jaaye yaar waale
Zinda rehti hain unki mohabbatein
Zinda rehti hain unki mohabbatein 😊

Really some short love stories go a long way!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Some love stories live forever!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

And theirs was one which would live forever!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Sofi dear,

I gathered courage to read the last part today'And, I am speechless!

Words fail me'

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And

Brilliant writing!

Poignant and powerful.👏

Do not have appropriate adjectives to put down my feelings.

I admire your resolve to be prepared to face reality without flinching even when it is difficult!👏👏👏

That is so evident in your fic, your responses to your readers , your wisdom in having warned us before and in sticking to your decision.👏👏👏

You did full justice to thr RN storyline---making him confess when battling to stay alive just to be able to tell her '👏😭

Her panic and pathos'😭😭

I loved so many phrases'one phrase which really spoke his mind was "nahin'bolne do!" 👏👏Summed up the story of his life ever since he realized his feelings for her!

"It would be insulting him" --- perfect.! The ideal response his best cadet (as cadet) should hold on to till she fulfills her promise, his dream'even when she cannot do it!

Her only inspiration, however bitter, to make his dream happen.😭

The last part was REALISTIC. To the core'.no melodrama, just the way it ought to have been however hurting...

Your sense of perception is just fantastic and very commendable.👏👏👏

It made one feel the anguish all over again 😭

This parting of RN in your fic did full justice to the kind of relationship they shared.👏

Well- done dear.😊👍🏼

Looking forward to more fics from you.😊

Originally posted by: nallis

Sofi dear,

I gathered courage to read the last part today'And, I am speechless! aww thanks dear...that is a huge compliment😳

Words fail me'

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👏 👏

And

😭

😭 i well abt this...i did tell u dint i?

Brilliant writing!

Poignant and powerful.👏

Do not have appropriate adjectives to put down my feelings.

Great job done.👏 thanku sooooooooo much....

I admire your resolve to be prepared to face reality without flinching even when it is difficult!👏👏👏

That is so evident in your fic, your responses to your readers , your wisdom in having warned us before and in sticking to your decision.👏👏👏 u r very kind dear...am just an ordinary one...

You did full justice to thr RN storyline---making him confess when battling to stay alive just to be able to tell her '👏😭

Her panic and pathos'😭😭

I loved so many phrases'one phrase which really spoke his mind was "nahin'bolne do!" 👏👏Summed up the story of his life ever since he realized his feelings for her! thanku for liking it...this came more like a command u know since he knew 'she' was 'his'

"It would be insulting him" --- perfect.! The ideal response his best cadet (as cadet) should hold on to till she fulfills her promise, his dream'even when she cannot do it!

Her only inspiration, however bitter, to make his dream happen.😭

The last part was REALISTIC. To the core'.no melodrama, just the way it ought to have been however hurting... well that was my initial thought to make it as realistic as possible...glad that i've succeeded atleast a bit...

Though it hurts, it is practical and logical.👏👏👏and these just shine through every line of yours.

Your sense of perception is just fantastic and very commendable.👏👏👏

Hats off to you for such a touching fic.👏 aww thanks again😃

It made one feel the anguish all over again 😭 oops sorry abt that...but as u know life is all not so well and fine all the time....

And that is a compliment in itself actually, 👏👏you made us re-live the trauma and stirred us to feel the pain, in equal measure , again...

Wish lrl had gone your way....What I mean is even if we had to deal with him being accused unfairly, atleast his end needn't have been so terribly illogical like how it was shown ultimately. well u can say this is how i imagined they could've shown his exit...provided it was inevitable😭....

This parting of RN in your fic did full justice to the kind of relationship they shared.👏

Well- done dear.😊👍🏼 thanks again😳

Looking forward to more fics from you.😊

All the best for those. 😊 aww how sweet...thakooo🤗

Originally posted by: iqbal-pallavi

i hate you .... *sob* *sob* you made me cry again 😭 all i could feel was tears rolling down my cheeks reading this .... aww now don say that...i love u😃

it had made me so nostalgic, remembering all those beautiful episodes .... but your version was the best, loved every bit of it 👏 thankoo lots of hugs coming ur way😉

i could just feel the pain that Naina and Raj must have went through .... they had confessed their love finally .... and in what situation *very upset* .... its ok we all feel the pain😭....

i am too upset to say anything right now so .... its alright...i understand...glad u read this one...thats more than enuf for me😳

take care hun

yasmin

p.s aint my fault and whatever it takes are the only two fics left to read, well that's what i think i've read this and your one of story .... i left my comment on it .... tell me if i have missed any out ... he he this is fun...yazz is on the run...lage raho👍🏼

love ya ... 😊

Originally posted by: crackpots86

Just to let nu knw Sofi...i m reading dis again n crying again wid it.....😭😭

Dhara....