Blossom Of Love(New RN fic) Part-2 - Page 5

Created

Last reply

Replies

76

Views

8.1k

Users

16

Likes

1

Frequent Posters

Piya_2009 thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago
#41
Recap:

It was a moonlit night…so they can see the path at least. After walking for few minutes they could see a house. It seemed that the house was a haunted house. No one leaves there for long times.

"I was right." He stated with a smile on his face.

But Naina was not at all happy seeing the house…how one can be happy with the idea of spending a night with an unknown person in a haunted house.

She stared at him…He indeed has an honest face…Looking at him she could tell that she can rely on, he will never let her down. She wants to trust him, and she wants to be able to rely on him.

Episode-2

They came to the front door of the house.
The door was locked. He came to the back door. It was locked from inside.

"Move away." He told Naina.

"Why?" She asked.

"Don't you get tired asking question continuously? Do as I say." He asked staring hard at her.

Naina didn't dare to ask further. She moved away.

He took a pebble and hit the glass on the top of the door and instantly it smashed and broke into pieces. He opened the lock putting his hand through the broken glass of the door.

"Come." He said opening the door fully for her.

As Naina came inside, he himself came inside and locked the door.
Naina was relieved little bit. But as she inhaled, she smelt a bad odor.

"What's smell is this?" She asked covering her nose with her hand.

As a C.I.D officer he could recognize the odor.
He had gone to morgue many times as part of duty. He knew it was an odor of dead body.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Piya_2009 thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago
#42
It was totally dark inside the house just like black coffee without milk.. There was switchboard on the wall. He switched on the light but alias!

The odor was imperceptible, Naina was having problem to inhale.

"I can't stay here." Naina said finally.

"I can understand. But there is no way left."

"Then do something."

He went to the other rooms to do something.
Their eyes had adjusted with the darkness in some times.

There was a table and some chair in the middle of the room. The owner of the house must be a rich man. The wooden floor is pale, yet full of texture. It is partially covered by a rug, which is in need of a stretching. Naina didn't notice that. It was not possible for her to notice in the darkness either. She stumbled on the rug, where it was folded and that knocked her off balance. He quickly reached out a hand to steady her, holding her arm above the elbow until she regained her balance.

"Be careful." He said releasing her hand.

"Why don't you sit here" He asked pulling a chair for her.

"It's ok. I am fine." She replied, as she would prefer to follow him in spite of sitting there all alone in total darkness.

"Ok. As you wish." He said before moving towards the window.

There are plain curtains decorating the closed windows in that room. He removed the curtain of the window. But which made him surprised is that there was no dust on the curtain. "The house doesn't seem like a haunted house at all." He thought.
The darkness of the room faded away as he removed the curtain. It was just like mixing few drops of milk in black coffee.

"Good!! There is a fridge."
Hearing his voice Naina looked around the room. He was not there. Her heartbeat fastened at this. Without wasting time she came to the next room hurriedly.

He pulled the door of the fridge and it opened easily.
Piya_2009 thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago
#43
"Strange. It is still cool inside the fridge. How is that possible?"

There were some packets inside the fridge. He closed the door and murmured to himself, "Very strange. It is getting mysterious."

"Aagar power nehi hai to fridge kaise thand rahe sakta hai?" Naina said.

"Hmm…Mujhe bhi samajh me nehi aaya…Iska matlab humlog yahaan aane se pehele current tha. Load shedding hone k bad kitni der tak fridge thand rahe sakta hai?" He asked looking at her.

"Umm.. Hardly two hours." Naina replied thinking for a moment.

"To phir current gaya kiun?" He moved around the room and his eyes searched for clues.

"Someone lives here for sure."

"Correct. Let's go to the other rooms.", said he .

"We have entered here without permission." She tried to remind him.

"We were compelled to enter here. Right?"
She nodded.
He moved towards the next room. The odor was imperceptible there.

After moving around for some more times inside the house he discovered two facts. One is good and one is bad. The good one - there is a telephone, and it has also connection. The other fact is there is staircase which goes down that means there is a underground room. The smell was coming from there. He closed the door of that room firmly not willing to enter there in total darkness.

He came near the electric meter board. Naina stood behind him.

He took out his mobile from his pocket and put on backlight of the mobile.
"Naina hold it and fell the light on this board."

He tried to examine the electric board carefully.

"I think that the fuse needs a replacement."

"But how would you replace the fuse?" Naina asked in a low voice.

"There must be a wire. See na."

How could she find the wire in the darkness? It was not possible for her though she tried a lot.
But he didn't take much time and found out a wire like a miracle. He placed the wire in appropriate place and switch on the light. The room filled with light instantly.
Piya_2009 thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago
#44
A smile of relief spread on Naina's lips.

"Thanks."

"For what?"

"For repairing the fuse."

"You are welcome."

"As if I have gotten my life back. I was so scared…I'd never forget this night." She said looking around the room.

He smiled as she talked to her freely for the first time.She was looking less scared now.

Naina switched on all the lights of the house. Even she has put on the lights of the balcony. She was feeling safe standing amidst of lots of light.


The walls were painted with aqua. Almost entire wall was hidden by nearly a dozen posters of varying sizes and content, mostly expressing political ideas, or taste in music. She adored the paintings.

Her eyes fell on the toilet. She peeped inside. It was clean n clear. She opened the tap and cool water came out of the tap.

She went inside the toilet to be freshen up while he was busy in exploring more facts in the house.

After sometimes he heard the sound of vomiting.

"Are you okay?" He asked moving towards the toilet door.

"Yeah." She replied from the toilet. She was not feeling well due that bad odor.
She was feeling better after vomiting..

She splashed water on her face… "Ahh." She was much better now.

As she came out, she found that he was taking out some packets from the fridge.

"What are you doing?" She asked curiously.

"Here is some food. There is also a gas in the kitchen.. All the foods are tin food. So we need to heat it only."

Naina was looking at him unblinkingly as she couldn't believe what he had said.

"Are you mad? How could you think about dinner in such a condition?"

"Because I am feeling hungry." He replied making her more surprised.

"But I am not." She sat down on one of the chair.

"It is 8.30 only. Thodi der bad khana kha lena."

He sat down pulling a chair opposite to her.

"You didn't tell me your name till now."

"I am Rajveer…. Rajveer Singh Shekhawat."

"So Miss Naina, what are you here for?"
Piya_2009 thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago
#45
"I was going to Matheran to meet a client on behalf of my company."

"Wipro, Right?" He asked.

"How do u know that?" She was taken aback.

"Umm…May be I am a magician."

"Ahh..Please maujak mat kijiye. Bataiye na."

"You opened your suitcase at the road to take out the soap, remember?"

"Haan."

"I saw a writing pad in your suitcase which has the logo of Wipro, printed on it. "

"Wahh. I must say you have strong observation power."

He smiled at her comment.

"Hey, why are you smiling?"

"Nothing."

"So what are you here for?" Naina asked in return.

" I am here for an investigation."

"Investigation?"

"Yeah. I am a C.I.D officer, crime branch."

"Ohh.. That's why you were moving around in the complete darkness without having any problem." She said. She was feeling better hearing that he was a C.I.D officer. After all there was so many mysterious things in the house.

Naina stood up and went towards the window. She opened the window with little effort. The blast of air from the open window dissipated the bad smell. The cool breeze was ruffling her hair.

"We should have open the window earlier." She said inhaling the fresh cool air.

"Mujhe bhi kheyal nehi aaya." He replied.

Suddenly her eyes fell on something and her face became pale.
She screamed hard covering her eyes with both of her hands.
Raj rushed to her quickly.

"What happened?" He asked getting concerned.

She was breathing heavily.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Piya_2009 thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago
#46
That's all for today.

Hope you will like this part.
These two updates was only on RN. Hope you didn't get bore.
Other charecters will be introduced in the next update.

waiting for your comments.

Plz don't forget to leave comment.
watch rajeev thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago
#47

very nice ud........and yipeeeeeee d man is rajveer.....i m sooo happpy....i m glad that naina became comfortable wid him and trusted him......but i m wondering whose dat dead body will be??????lets see in further updates....thanx 4 d pm....cont sooon

Yazzi thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 16 years ago
#48
did she see a dead body 😆 .... well it's possible if the odour is of a dead body right .... anyways a nice update again ...

take care

yasmin...
KRIZZY thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago
#49
very nice ud
actually mind blowing ud
that must be the dead body because of wich she screamed.right?
vaise superb ud
ud soon.....i'm waiting
starasdf thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago
#50
👏👏👏relli gud update👏👏👏
😊😊😊i bet itz a dead body wat if it waz naveen'z dead body😊😊😊
plz. cont. soon itz relli intresring
Star⭐️

Related Topics

Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: zajedno · 2 months ago

new morning, new day. what does the new day bring us. what will the morning be like after the storm that rages in my heart all night. What is...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: Rizz-ington · 1 years ago

A N A R H I F F ---- Iss Darr Ko Kya Naam Doon Summary: Khushi is an internet famous 27 year old fashion designer from Lucknow. She has a chirpy...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: goodkashish · 6 years ago

Kassir Extremes Intro 9pm - London Airport - Christmas Day It was a cold chilly night in the beautiful city of London. We arrive at Heathrow...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: Aleyamma47 · 15 days ago

A "What-If" Rumya Continuation Story — imagining what could’ve happened if Soumya never left Ishqbaaz and her relationship with Rudra was...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: sarveshjoshi42 · 8 years ago

Ritik Mehra : Business Tycoon and Elder brother of Raghav Shivanya Kapoor : Doctor and Elder Sister of Naina and love interest of Ritik

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".