Blossom Of Love(New RN fic) Part-2 - Page 7

Originally posted by: ronojoy_ria

good plz cont soon

Originally posted by: sea_nyx

hey thanx so much for the pm and i found the part amazingly well-written though i got a bit confused with some of ur word usages. i was wondering how naina figured out the house was *haunted* so quickly until i realised u meant *abandoned* and not "infested with supernatural beings" 😆 and i didn't quite get what u meant about the smell so maybe you could check that word usage as well

Thanks for pointing out my mistakes.You are right.

I wanted to say abandoned house, not haunted....haunted is related to evil spirit. But i didn't mean that.

I'll be more careful in chossing words from the next ud.

but you more than made up for these few bloopers with your descriptive skills which let me tell you are truly amazing 👏👏👏. i really felt that i was experiencing it all with raj and naina. and that was a spectacular cliffhanger ⭐️. can't WAIT to find out what made naina go pale...

Thanks.

I am glad that you liked it.

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!Awesome!!!! Thanks a lot.

Raj is very smart!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊He knew how to open the locked back door!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊 ofcourse. He is a C.I.D officer.I tna to malum hoga hi na...

Magar he is right ke Naina yeh sawal bahut poochti hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😆 😆 😆 😆

There is a smell of a dead body there!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Naina stumbled on the rug aur Raj ne usse sambhala!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊Wow!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 Raj k hote huye naina gir sakti hai kya?

Obviously Naina thought it was better to follow him than sit here all alone in total darkness!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

The descriptions and comparisons are great!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏I am glad that u liked the description.

Someone lives there for sure!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

The smell is coming from the basement!!!!! I am sure dead body wahi hai!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Raj ne toh fuse bhi repair kar diya andhere mein!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊He is too good!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏

Naina ne kaha ke she will never forget this night!!!!😛 😛 😛That I am sure she never will for good reasons as well as bad!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊 right.

Poor Naina!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔She is feeling sick!!!!! Raj ne toh khana bhi dhundh liya!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Finally Raj ne apna naam Naina ko bataya!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊He is really very observant!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Naina ne akhir kya dekha ki woh chillayi??😕 😕 😕 😕 😕

naina ne kya dekha wo to next ud me hi pata chalega.

keep reading.

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

I really luved the part.

Thanks a lot.

Now they 2 r more frndly which is of course ryt. Raj ka observation power dekh kar mere to hosh hi ur gaye. hehe...he is a C.I.D officer.He must have observation power.

I really wonder Naian ne kya dekha hoga. BTW I must say ur description of things wer fabulous. GR8 Job.👏 I am glad that u liked the description.

WELL, other characters ka intezar hai but we of course luv RN more. So pura UD RN pe ho to der is absolutely no probs.

PLS CONTINUE SOON.

I'll update on saturday.

mindblowing update.👏👏👏

Mujhe pakka lag raha hai ab ki us ghar k owner ko maar daala gaya hai aur us ki dead body us hi jagah me us room me hai jo Raj ne bund kar diya tha. let's see.U'll come to know about that in next ud.

Ho sakta hai Raj ko is case k hi investigation k liye bheja gaya ho yahan.😕😕😕 Let see.

Vaise Naina bechari Raj k yahan us k saath hone se bahut relax ho gayi varna pata nahi kya hota?😕😕😕

Naina ne dekha kya hai vahan jis ko dekh kar vo dar gayi?🤢🤢🤢

update karo jaldi se. I'll ud on saturday.

Originally posted by: srojaleen

Really very nice ud piya...!!! & thanx for the PM.

Thanks a lot.

i think.... yeh ek suspence fic hai...rite...???😕😕

suspence fic banane ka yarada to hai...pad pata nehi thik se likh paungi ya nehi...

lekin woh dead body kis ki ho sakti hai...???😕😕

thank god ki is time par naina k sath raj hai...warna pata nahin us ki kya halat hui hoti...!!!😃😃

lekin naina daar kyoun gayi....aisa kya dekha us ne...???😕😕😕

u'll come to know in next update.

i m desperate for the next part n plzzzz u ud it fast.😊

veryyyyyyy touchy and emotional ud..........i wish raj aur naina ne thodi aur der baat ki hotii...see m always greedy when it cums to raj and naina......but i cant help it really as luv dem madly......wonderful ud and plzzzzzz ud sooon

hi,

liked the first and the second part of the FF. It was cool, but great. it is understandable he being a CID has to show his anger at naina coz he was meeting his jaan though he does not know, but later they came to talking terms.

Surprising no body is in the house but there is no sign of hauntedness in the house. on top of that there is also a dead body lying there.

The mystery is what naina sees out when she opens the window as the room was safocated and stinking.

Eagerly waiting to know what happens, please update soon.

please post the next part at the earliest.

bye

jyothi

Originally posted by: watch rajeev

veryyyyyyy touchy and emotional ud..........i wish raj aur naina ne thodi aur der baat ki hotii...see m always greedy when it cums to raj and naina......but i cant help it really as luv dem madly......wonderful ud and plzzzzzz ud sooon