Blossom Of Love(New RN fic) Part-2

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sea_nyx

@sea_nyx

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#51

hey thanx so much for the pm and i found the part amazingly well-written though i got a bit confused with some of ur word usages. i was wondering how naina figured out the house was *haunted* so quickly until i realised u meant *abandoned* and not "infested with supernatural beings" 😆 and i didn't quite get what u meant about the smell so maybe you could check that word usage as well

but you more than made up for these few bloopers with your descriptive skills which let me tell you are truly amazing 👏👏👏. i really felt that i was experiencing it all with raj and naina. and that was a spectacular cliffhanger ⭐️. can't WAIT to find out what made naina go pale...

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Shaina_b

@Shaina_b

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#52

Too good!!!Awesome!!!!

Raj is very smart!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊He knew how to open the locked back door!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Magar he is right ke Naina yeh sawal bahut poochti hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😆 😆 😆 😆

There is a smell of a dead body there!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Naina stumbled on the rug aur Raj ne usse sambhala!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊Wow!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Obviously Naina thought it was better to follow him than sit here all alone in total darkness!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

The descriptions and comparisons are great!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏

Someone lives there for sure!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

The smell is coming from the basement!!!!! I am sure dead body wahi hai!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Raj ne toh fuse bhi repair kar diya andhere mein!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊He is too good!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏

Naina ne kaha ke she will never forget this night!!!!😛 😛 😛That I am sure she never will for good reasons as well as bad!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

Poor Naina!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔She is feeling sick!!!!! Raj ne toh khana bhi dhundh liya!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Finally Raj ne apna naam Naina ko bataya!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊He is really very observant!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Naina ne akhir kya dekha ki woh chillayi??😕 😕 😕 😕 😕

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#53

I really luved the part. Now they 2 r more frndly which is of course ryt. Raj ka observation power dekh kar mere to hosh hi ur gaye. I really wonder Naian ne kya dekha hoga. BTW I must say ur description of things wer fabulous. GR8 Job.👏
WELL, other characters ka intezar hai but we of course luv RN more. So pura UD RN pe ho to der is absolutely no probs.

PLS CONTINUE SOON.

Edited by sumaiya wahid - 16 years ago

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Shree85

@Shree85

Explorer

Posted: 16 years ago

#54

First of all thanx for the PM. The part was amazing. It was full of suspense and I always like suspense material. You have ended the part at such a point where I can't wait to read the next part. So please update soon.

With Lots of love and Wishes

Shree

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Piya Roy

@Piya_2009

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: watch rajeev

very nice ud........and yipeeeeeee d man is rajveer.....i m sooo happpy....i m glad that naina became comfortable wid him and trusted him......but i m wondering whose dat dead body will be??????lets see in further updates....thanx 4 d pm....cont sooon

Thanks for ur comment.

whose dead body was that, probably you will find out in next update.

keep reading.

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#56

mindblowing update.👏👏👏

Mujhe pakka lag raha hai ab ki us ghar k owner ko maar daala gaya hai aur us ki dead body us hi jagah me us room me hai jo Raj ne bund kar diya tha.

Ho sakta hai Raj ko is case k hi investigation k liye bheja gaya ho yahan.😕😕😕

Vaise Naina bechari Raj k yahan us k saath hone se bahut relax ho gayi varna pata nahi kya hota?😕😕😕

Naina ne dekha kya hai vahan jis ko dekh kar vo dar gayi?🤢🤢🤢

update karo jaldi se.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 16 years ago

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Prerna

@prerna1

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#57

that was so nice

but Naina ne aisa kya dekha jo vo itna darr gayi

plz continue soon

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Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#58

Really very nice ud piya...!!! & thanx for the PM.

i think.... yeh ek suspence fic hai...rite...???😕😕

lekin woh dead body kis ki ho sakti hai...???😕😕

thank god ki is time par naina k sath raj hai...warna pata nahin us ki kya halat hui hoti...!!!😃😃

lekin naina daar kyoun gayi....aisa kya dekha us ne...???😕😕😕

i m desperate for the next part n plzzzz u ud it fast.😊

Edited by srojaleen - 16 years ago

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Piya Roy

@Piya_2009

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: iqbal-pallavi
did she see a dead body 😆 .... well it's possible if the odour is of a dead body right .... wo to next update me hi pata chalega.

anyways a nice update again ...

take care

yasmin...

Thanks for your comment.

I am glad that you liked it.

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Piya Roy

@Piya_2009

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: starasdf
👏👏👏relli gud update👏👏👏

Thanks for ur comment.

😊😊😊i bet itz a dead body wat if it waz naveen'z dead body😊😊😊

Naveen's deadboady?? That's not possible. He was died 5 yrs back in a bomb blast. uska dead body us house me kaha se aayeg???

dead body kiska hai wo to next ud me hi pata chal jayega.

plz. cont. soon itz relli intresring

i'll ud on saturday.

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